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Botany

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Please don’t trample on my heart,

step carefully where bluebells grow.

Admire the violets of my eyes,

the roses, as my lips I show.

 

Don’t steal the blossoms from my breast

or snip the blooms with your sharp blade

to press my petals in a book,

and rob the garden I have made.

 

In secret place I bloomed alone,

you found me in this valley deep.

With compass, map and microscope,

identified me in my sleep.

 

And I awoke, and bloomed for you

and you admired me for a time.

But petals drop and flowers fade.

Will you forget your columbine?

 

Some blooms are rare, they hide away

in secret in some misty glade.

Don’t steal the flowers that I show

and rob the garden I have made.

 

 

 

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Sue Hall

Sun 7th Feb 2010 23:15

Beautiful, I love how raw and open it is.

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 3rd Feb 2010 18:14

I like this .... I like it enough to suggest that you replace the word micrscope....it's an ugly word clangs rather than rings... just my opinion a delightful poem nonetheless

Gus xx

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Rachel McGladdery

Tue 2nd Feb 2010 20:47

Awww,lovely...bring on the spring!
Rach
xxx

Deborah Jordan Bailey

Tue 2nd Feb 2010 14:16

"he that dares not grasp the thorn
Should never crave the rose."
Anne Bronte
I love this one Anne. I send you a briar hedge to stop such people stealing your precious wildflowers.Some can charm the blossom from the trees and then just crush it underfoot.Some just never see the lovely columbines in the shade.Hope you get happy bees and warm sunshine in your rare garden once the sun returns.Debz x

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Tue 2nd Feb 2010 13:58

I've read this over and over again and each time i read, i see more.
Love the visuals, colours and scents in this one. It reminds me a little of 'The Secret Garden.'

Janet.x

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neil gardiner

Tue 2nd Feb 2010 12:05

HI Ann, hope you are well.
I love "Botany". It has a really Victorian romantic feel whilst at the same time feeling fresh and modern.
It is a metaphore, I feel, for a love affair and the angst it can bring. Hope you recite it some time and post it.
Regards Nells.

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kath hewitt

Tue 2nd Feb 2010 06:29

Ann, i really like this one, i was only thinking of bluebell fields the other day and how beautiful they are, this reminded me of that x

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