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Sat 4th Dec 2010 12:57
Hi Isobel, thanks for comment on December. I was a bit worried the last two lines would make people feel guilty which wasn't my intention.xx
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Thanks for your comments, Isobel. There is loads to like about WOL, as you know, but there is all too much of it and I feel so guilty if someone comments on my poems and I never get round to theirs. I'm taking a month out and then I'll see. Best Wishes, Ray
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Thanks for kind comments on my gahazal, and good luck with your journeyings this weekend. All thawed out here - for now anyway! xx
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Hey Isobel,
I said what I said about that poem because of the poem..nowt else. It IS a fantastic poem...simple as!
I would have said exactly the same to a stranger....I guess that affords a certain integrity.
Please only comment on the odd poem of mine that you are really into...no need for us to do mutual pats on backs Hehe.
Good writing...
Chris
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I did mean it about Cynthia; your poem was salutary, necessary and original as the anniversary wave washes over us. A wake-up call; a shock of cold water. But of course it may been rather off-message as far as the judges were concerned. Who knows? If he'd stayed with Cynthia perhaps he would have continued to write more great songs. I always resented Yoko for apparently breaking up the band. But on the other hand she made him happy. I'm just obsessed with Lennon, and the contradictions involving art and life that he represents, and, of course, the Sixties and the associations and memories his music evokes; his 'cheek' that was really anger; always have been, always will be.
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Wow that was quick! :D Ahhh, well it wasn't quite the poetry alone that made me love myself, but it was all tied up with words, and language, and creating my own self. The poems DO lay waste to that inner chaos though...can't begin to tell you the relief I feel from writing it all out. Makes so much sense to do it, feels so RIGHT. Thanks :) Feels good, don't it :D
Hope to meet you at the xmas wol 'do'! xx
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Eh up - yes, it could change the world I believe if we were all given that clean slate, if all of us damaged ones could break the cycle. Unfortunately it doesn't often work out that way, but I was damned sure that my lass would not suffer the same way I did...that she would know herself to be loved, and would be treated with dignity and respect, as should all humans.
Thanks for your comment :)
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Mon 29th Nov 2010 20:26
HaHa - I can't even blame the wacky backy - that ran out quite a while ago :(
(bigfoot)
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Thanks for your thoughful comments on 'Lost'. The irony of it being lost is not lost on me. :)
It was a callow effort from some years ago...long before I joined WOL. I dug it out because I admired some other Ghazals that were being posted...far better than mine.
Being lost can be fun, frightening and...bliss.
Jx
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Appreciated the feedback on the Memory poem Isobel...thx
Chris
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Hi, dear Isobel! Thank you so much for your support. I mean Alain English's "I Like Strong Women But I Can't Stand Bitches video.lol With warmest wishes and hugs, Larisa
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Sat 27th Nov 2010 16:18
Hi - "I love" - (sorry, been away) - the horrid finger picture - so, you've never seen The Piano? -you've missed out on a first-rate sniffle-movie. Her husband chops off her finger (cos she's a-shaggin someone else = fair enough?) - anyway, at the end her real love has her made up this silver finger, cos playing the piano with one digit missing's not quite the same: Chopsticks, maybe, but Flight of the Bumblebee...
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Hi Isobel, like you I tend to skim through them till something catches my eye. Thats because there are some poets who dont give leeway and continue to put up too many blogs at once. I was like that for some time till I became more thoughtful of my own verse and of course, other people. Nevertheless, you are one of the poets I do take time to read as I like your work, and also, you have been here for time proving that you do have a genuine interest in poetry, and this site is not a site you abuse just to get something off your chest. I really do like this site, and in the main I enjoy the rich and varied work. And as said before, I like your work too. Thank you for posting a comment on 'Comes and Goes a Day.' I guess you know what the poem is about, but in case you don't, my wife and I recently lost our second baby to miscarriage. Anyway darling, keep working and posting your poetry. It works! Further, just when i thought nobody was interested in my work, you have come and saved the day. Thank you.
much love and respect to you.
Michael
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Bloody ell - they're 15 and the parents are only NOW letting them on feelthy public transport? Haha! Christ, they're gonna have a shock in a years time when they roll in pissed eh? ;) Ach, some people - no bloody idea, or just don't wanna know - which is worse.
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Rachel Bond
Thu 25th Nov 2010 09:04
wow...what an amazing pic...how did i miss that event?...god is a bitch x
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Hi Isobel;
thanks for the comment over 'The Other Side'... It's one of those pieces really that wrote themselves if you know what I mean, but defo for me you could tell it's a Winter Poem and also wishing in hindsight perhaps there are things where you wish you could break through...
thanks again - hope you are good xx
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Then if you've experience of the one-visit-to-the-salad-bar you'll fully understand the concept of using the cucumber as greedy boards.
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Glad you liked Chinese Buffet. I honestly don't think you're qualified on matters of gourmand greed if your experience only runs to salad items like tomatoes, though.
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Mornin Isobel! Ta for comments on my little experiment. Re the guide to puberty book, personally I would MUCH prefer my daughter to be able to have the knowledge of, and access to masturbation/vibrators. That's by the by now cos she's 19 - but wouldn't YOU have loved your own vibe at 15? Damn sure I would. If you can satisfy yourself sexually, there may be much less of an urge to get someone else to do it for you, or at the very least, sate the urge to do it RIGHT NOW without protection. And shouldn't girls learn to love their own bodies, and know what they are capable of? That's a precious gift - not something to be muddied with other people's 'morality', don't you think?
Anyhow, food for thought :)
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Thanks for your comments on Colours, Isobel. It does feel like a lifetime, but I'd like to think we have one more colour change in us to come!
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Sun 21st Nov 2010 13:01
Thanks for commenting on 'Madness.'
I'm particularly glad you think it raises questions. I'm attempting to allow readers their own thoughts and reach some kind of conclusions for themselves and with an open mind :-)
xx
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darren thomas
Sun 21st Nov 2010 10:58
I appreciate your comments on my recent poetry Isobel. Thank you. Contrary to popular urban myths - I do enjoy them!
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Isobel,
Thank you so much for your comment and i'm so pleased I have helped bring a wee smile to your very pretty kisser.
I 'll tell you how I do it?? next time at an open mike...if you save me a 'Space'
Thanks again
Gusxx
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i have thought .. develop your own blog and post a link here each time you create something you want reading , critiquing ( is that a word )
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i really like your new poem made of love . But with regards to less being more , i think you should consider writing short stories , you have much to say . Sometimes poems aren't the best expression
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Thu 18th Nov 2010 17:08
Hi Isobel
Thanks for your comment. As you know I love having a go but often the ideas and inspiration are hard to come by. I am on a bit of a roll at the moment.
Love Yolande
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Hi Isobel,
Thank-you ever so much for reading and commenting on 'Empty Space' - much appreciated.
I have decided to leave it as it is - unpuctuated, partially for the reasons you said. :)
Cx
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Isobel - spot on! Many thanks for your thoughful and bang on comments on "Post Past"!
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Re: your comments on my comments (!) on your poem "Beloved" - I feel the same. Love for a child is something else altogether.
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Sat 13th Nov 2010 15:25
Re: Dave's poem
Isobel-love your comment-you really know how to kick a man when he's down... Go Girl !!!
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Hi Isobel, Thankyou for leaving a comment on TO THE MEMORY OF THE MEN. Much appreciated. I have replied in detail on the blog itself. Win x
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Isobel, I meant the style of writing, the choice of expressions. Your thoughts and words are lovely in Beloved. I find them 'romantic' but always enduring. I couldn't begin to write anything like those last three lines because I don't think that way. I would feel like an idiot, using 'uncertain skies', 'immortalise' or 'eternal in my words of love'. At worst, I might make a jest of them, which in respect for other people, I just won't do.
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Ahhh Iso... not that wrong... I would love to throw you my balls ....as long as you brought them back......sit!
Gus xx
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I don't know if I could ever follow your poetical lead as shown in Beloved. I am so pragmatic I find that type of expression eludes me. Romanticism was never my strong point; I enjoy reading about other poets' experiences, but I've never been there. If I copied emotions they would sound false as hell. BTW, some time back I changed The Last Kiss to Beloved, but it is still 'in your face' poetry.
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Thu 11th Nov 2010 07:59
Hi - agreed totally with all of it. the reason I post some that are daft or "really not that great" is that I've had a few published & almost without exception, it's the duff one I've included to "make up the numbers" that gets chosen over the ones that I think of as good & the exact same thing happens on WOL - no accounting for taste. xx
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Thank you so much Isobel for your comments particular with regard to the subject matter.
To the many of us who are or who have been pet owners the death of an old family pet is more heartbreaking than we could ever have imagined the loss irreplaceable.
In remembrance special moments are poignant such as a family gathering in the garden late at night the air giddy with sausage and burger and where the moon and stars were just a jump away.
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Wed 10th Nov 2010 17:24
HaHa - you could always do your own website & tell me where to go ?? seriously - what moves one may not move another (however clever or soulful) - I can watch starving millions in Africa with a dry eye, but I Did once cry at Caspar the Friendly Ghost. Even I don't get it ! some poems - like Beloved - are just great, but I can't really say why. XX
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Wed 10th Nov 2010 17:15
Thanks for comment on 'Ambiguity'
much appreciated.x :-)
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Wed 10th Nov 2010 14:32
Hi - hydrate - yes, that's what I meant & I agree totally - that spoken (or in your head) "hydrate" seems just fine, but the written word looks a little incongruous - but as you're perfoming, it's not an issue.
I did very nearly ask you once if I could include one of yours on my website (under favourites), but the only reason I didn't was that I'd just added one of Kealan Cody's, one of Ann Foxglove's & one of Anthony Emmerson's - so it was starting to read like a who's who of WOL :) xx
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That's a great profile pic, Isobel: bathed in a glow under a picture of the cheeky moptop Scouser. I wonder if Carol Ann Duffy will produce a poem to mark the 30th anniversary? She must do, it's her duty
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thanks for your comments on death mask,your eptiaph inspired it .. it is about more than the mask of course , and i wonder that maybe everyone does lose their identity , isnt that what death is ?
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Sun 7th Nov 2010 12:25
Wow Isobel! I'm so sorry you didn't get a placing in the slam. If you need some moral support you know where i am.
Most importantly...did you enjoy the experience? :-)
love Janet.xx
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Sat 6th Nov 2010 09:17
Good Luck Tonight! Have the most fab SLAM ever!Sorry I won't be there to cheer you on but I'll be rooting for you from a distance and the vibes should carry. Go, Isobel, Go! Love Moxy xxx
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I also meant to say, good luck to you and Rachel in the Lennon slam tomorrow. Wish I could be there. I look forward to seeing the odd Lennon poem on the site next week, maybe.
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Hi Isobel, glad you liked Currawong, the product of a three-week trip to Oz, mostly staying with friends, two years ago. Interesting what you say about the isolation: I was struck by what an Australian tourist said to me up in northern Queensland, how she envied us being able to pop over to Madrid or Rome on easyJet when for them it's an eight-hour flight to Indonesia. As a consequence she'd never been outside Australia. PS Good on yer for spotting "desert". It was meant, inasmuch as any of the words in my poems are meant!
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Thu 4th Nov 2010 18:40
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5dpwJS1-uYM&feature=related
Just take this longing from my tongue
all the lonely things my hands have done.
Let me see your beauty broken down
like you would do for one you love.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dlRanftUqO4
The idea for the book was inspired by this Jeffrey Lewis song. Each poem is inspired by a Leonard Cohen song. Unstained copies are available.
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Thanks for comment on Freedom poem. I got in trouble for it as I stupidly omitted the acknowledgements first time round. Hope it's all sorted now though and I have learned from it.
Dave
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Hi Isobel, thanks for commenting on Ghazal. It has given me a boost and better still hopefully a leg up for the ghazal too, Win xx
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Hi Isobel, Good luck with the Lennon slam on Saturday - Soz I can't get along as I'm working but I'll be thinking of you, Go get 'em girl!I hope to get along to Wigan next Thursday so you can tell me all about it then (and buy me a drink of course if you win!)Take care, Stevexxxxx
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Francine
Mon 6th Dec 2010 21:38
I love your new profile photo, Isobel!
You look so happy, vibrant, AND totally approachable!
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