Hi Lynn.

You've convinced me now
that Bankers are an incarnation of something unspeakable. I wonder do they lend their Wives
the housekeeping.

Thanks for your comment.

Ken

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Fleeced. Hi Lynne. nice observation.

lending generates bonus. this percuniary mess
was caused in part by bonus mad bank employees
not checking clients falsified ability to pay back loans. these very same clients are now
screaming for the bankers heads.for their lax and cavalier attitude. Or was it, with hindsight a sympathetic gesture by the bankers
to help realise borrowers dreams.

It's impossible to pin down the villain

It's good subject matter for endless speculation. And in time will no doubt generate a host of baseless conspiracy theories

Nice one keep probing

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Hiya lynn, Thanks for the comment on 'if you can hear this' i get hesitant when it comes to that poem so your comment means a lot :)

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Thanks for your comment on World Leaders. I am not very fond of the people who we pay to take care of us. Take care, Tony.

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Thanks for reading lynn.
I really enjoyed having a nosey through your blog entries. Especially 'crescent moon'.
Thanks
Jade

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Lynn - thank you for commenting so positively about my last post. The power of the human tragedy told by the words on the headstone stayed with me - and the poem was the result.

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Thanks for your comments on my poems Lynn. Take care, Tony.

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Hi Lynn
thanks for your comments on 'the wrong sort of train'. I hope your other half was not insulted by it!

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An extra TA for your comments Lynn.
Have a good day chuck.xx

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Hi Lynn
Pleased you enjoyed Grammar Blues
It started out as a piece about a first year Grammar student that I saw a week or two ago outside my local Grammar
His Mum and Dad were pretty much acting as I describe in the poem, and I thought it toe-curling. I think that I would have run away if I had been shown up like this lad was

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Hi Lynn, thanks for your kinds words on Pictures. Greg

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Thanks for your comment on my poem Lynn - I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm swapping the pen for a paintbrush at the moment - but alas, not the artistic kind - am too tight to stump up for a decorator! Hope you are well. x

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Lynn-thank you for your feedback on 'An Old Git's Lament'. Much appreciated :-)

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Impossibility and Teardrops in My Coffee = very emotive. Beautifully written.

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Glad you enjoyed "Let Me Pee", Lynn. And my olderpost "My Least Favourite Things".
Thanks for taking an interest and commenting.

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Hi Lynn, thank you for your comments on Nice is not Enough. Definitely giving thought to how I use change of pace and whether perhaps I'd be better leaving things dangling and unconcluded rather than mix the style. All good things to think about!

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Thanks for the kind comment about "Talkin' The Walk". It's always a pleasure to give pleasure!

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Lynn I would add- at ANY time- :o) thanks for your comment-

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Apologies for my delay in responding to your comments on Research. I have been on holiwags for 4 weeks caravanning and internet opportunities were very limited.
Glad you liked it.

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Teardrops in my coffee--original title a poem full of flavour and delight

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Re the Oscars..
according to the amount we think
you deserve-
you better order a bigger mantlepiece!!

And Oscars from the Wildes aplenty to come-
doubtlessly!

Rock on girly.xx

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Holy moley Lynn!
you really have excelled yourself
with so much kindness,time and patience
by reading and commenting on so many
of our poems.

I don't know about competitions
on this site,but there should be
an equivalent of the Oscars
for its most commenting member

If there were
your mantlepiece would be overcrowded!

Your inspiration is now
and always will be highly valued
and sincerely appreciated.

Stand by in the not too distant future
for another poem of dedication-
for services rendered-can you wait?

HAHA! all our love and many thanks.

Patricia and Stef.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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hiya Lynn :) thanks for liking my snake poem have not been writing much of late :( then this arrived!!

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Glad you liked Thrashing, Lynn. Hope the giggles have stopped.

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Hi Lynn - thanks for the kind comment about "So Broken Hearted" (demo version). I admire the singer Marcie Summers (from Bristol) immensely and she can be found singing on my latest post "When You Walked Into My Life". Back to SBH for a moment: the commercially released recording has just spent 8 weeks ina country DJs' list/chart across Europe and Australia. One day I may even be big in Albania!! :-)
Finally, I totally agree with the comments applauding "Teardrops In My Coffee". A great song-title
and a lyric that is worth someone's tune!

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Hello lynn. Glad you liked 'you won't batter anymore'. A classic by bluddy helly!

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Lynn,
Thank you so much for your comment on "Surreal". It is, in fact, very true. The reason why it is more of a rant than anything else was because I needed to get my thoughts on the event penned down or typed up.
Thank you

- Josh

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Thank you Lynn for your comment on Bird in a Cage.
Hazel

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Oh Lynn
I do like "Teardrops in your Coffee" it's such a vivid picture of total despair and loss : the fragility and preciousness of love, so beautiful but so easily broken(China cup), the pain a sharp cutting knife, the emptiness and loss of identity (the plastic rose), being unwanted even by the waitress.
Your use of colour is clever and effective: her existence mirrored into the grey rainy, nothing outside the window an uncoloured world of misery in sharp opposition to the "cheerful " gingham tablecloth inside evocative of picnics and happy times but even then this becomes emotionally dark-coloured blue the colour that broke her heart.
Brilliant

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and then the final line is very effective......

""This impossibility of me and you.""

as u built up the entire poem wiv interrogatives....exploring .....searching for the possibility of union of love ......wiv hope......the questioning creates sense of she is just overthinking .....and that she trying to argue herself out......and almost......confirm/accept to herself that she can love this person..

but then


it ends so bluntly and wiv assurance of the impossibilty........

which ends the besotted style abruptly and comes crashing down to earth

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i love the poem IMPOSSIBILTY.........it was great to read........and it is similar to many of my poems....that i not yet uploaded but are in writers journal..........the ABAB rhyme sheme creates effective rhythm and flow to create that besotted lovey dovey emotive atmosphere......the large amount of interrogatives creates sense of unknown......of mystery........and what ifs.....interestingly.......she could either be questioing her own feelings ........for her lover.............or could be questioning her lover directly ( in which case i would seriously consider writing a response poem from perspective of her love !!!!! )

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Thanks for the comment on Anna Dacie. I thought I would keep the lines short and to the point.

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Thank you Lynn- your comment is most appreciated. :o)on 'A Lady's dismissal'

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Ta la :o)

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Hi Lynn, just wanted to say thx for reading and commenting upon my poem. Glad you like.

My Best

Chris

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cheers Lynn
for the wellycome back-xx

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thanks for your comment on 'Whisker', Lynn. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a whisker from my little black furball of mischief which inspired it. XX

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OK Lynn - I shall dismount from my trusty steed
and park it against my WOL wall! But please do
understand that I totally agree with your views
about errant bike-riders...I see too many of them when I go out and about and there really is NO excuse for some of their antics. I have
described them as "pedestrians on wheels" as
proper cyclists behave properly!
Safe moorings!!

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Hello Lynn,
thank's so much for your positive feedback on my poem! I really love "teardrops in my coffee" and have felt the same, occasionally but could never describe it as perfectly and poignantly as you. Thank you :)

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Many thanks for the kind comments on my poems recently. Sorry I can’t offer a more personal thankyou but I’ve got gremlins in my machine which makes typing a comment over the internet take an eternity. Hence this rather impersonal catch-all done in Word and pasted on-line.
Notwithstanding, many thanks.

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Hello Lynn - thanks for taking the trouble to
reply to my "pop up" query. Even Julian seems
foxed by its appearance. It's not "regular" so
at least I'm spared that much! But its origins
and reasons seem obscure and without any obvious meaning for this user. The wonderful
world of cyberspace is providing a rogue comet!!!

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hi lynn, many thanks for the kind comments on my poem.

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re D.Date. I'm not really sad, in that sense, but sometimes an idea whips across the mind and has to be netted. Ta muchly, Nick.

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Hi Lynn Thanks for the kind comment on my poem! Yes, he's a handsome fella!

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Thank you Lynn for recent comments you have made on my verse. I think you're about one of the few who still takes time out to read the work i have done. It makes me kinda despondent but the few that take the time out keeps me going. I really appreciate that lynn. I know my work is often preachy but as you said in the last comment, there is a lot of truth in the words i write. Maybe that's why many do not post feedback. Because as they say, the truth hurts and many people just turn their back on that.

I really appreciate you taking the time out Lynn. You yourself have great courage in the works that you write and you have written quite some impressive works. Keep posting your work Lynn, it is valid and needed, most don't seem to understand that, lending themselves instead to rub each others back for comment threads to boost their ego's. You though lynn have an honesty and uniqueness to your work that touches all.

Keep posting and much love lynn.

x

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Tarabumdeehey till later chickamungus.P&S.xxx

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Thanks for your comments on The River, Lynn. All the best, Greg

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Thanks for kind comments on Nova Scotia song Lynn - hope you are well :)

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jhuuuubbb%$£

That's Fnurk for seeya ltr dude!xx

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Glad you liked "Dear Marge", Lynn.

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