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Tommy Carroll

Wed 24th Apr 2013 02:17

Mr Cooke- ''unfortunately the one I refer to isn't to be found anywhere so I couldn't post it.'' this is just not good enough. Tommy

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Neil Fawcett

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 22:22

As proud as Lucifer

you breathed your devil's breath

O accursed angel of hell

spurned from heaven to prey on death.



Subject us no more to your closed doors

O vicious Iron Maiden,

return to purge the evil dead

leave the living to find a haven.



Bluebeard soul reincarnate

your bloody hands harassed the meek

persecuted the elderly

and destroyed the weak.



So go back. Go! With your blue devil disciples

return no more with that apron of blue.

May just fires rise to melt your iron

till liquid, it runs from view.

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David Cooke

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 21:54

Hi Tommy I suppose I could have tried my photographer poem less enigmatic! It's Willi Ronis - although Cartier-Bresson was pretty close. There's a lot of his photos online, but unfortunately the one I refer to isn't to be found anywhere so I couldn't post it.

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 20:25

ER, you Harry?

Nice one Cathy. A neat universal-in-the-particular here; the particular being your mum's gender agenda.

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John Coopey

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 20:18

I completely concur with Shirley.
In Berne's model of transactional analysis he suggests each of us combines elements of Parent, Adult and Child. So may people these days seem not to be able to throw off the Child - seeing misfortune as something others have done to them, hoping some other authority will provide for them.
We may not sit on the same end of the political spectrum, MC, but you have my respect and support to post whatever you wish.

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 20:17

I agree so much with Tommy on this. if it has taken so long to prosecute the racist thugs, how long is ti going ot take to prosecute both the guilty, and the inadequate police officers? In many ways this is perhaps more important than the Thatcher stuff.
Well done Mark, for your well-judged poem, and for the reminder.

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Tom Harding

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 17:26

john, thanks for your comment and sentiment on my recent poem. much appreciated.

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Tom Harding

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 17:25

isobel, thanks for your comment on my recent poem. very kind.

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Tom Harding

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 17:24

thanks harry for your comment on 'as she lay dying'
sometimes i get frustrated by my ability to write effectively about those things that most effect me most. the poem came as a result of that frustration.

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Tom Harding

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 16:19

thanks all, much appreciated.

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Shirley Smothers

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 16:10

You poems are beautiful and powerful. I found your profile through Julian.

Welcome to a great site.

Shirley

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Shirley Smothers

Tue 23rd Apr 2013 16:06

Wow! A powerful piece.
I can't help with any
improvement, but it's
very good.

Shirley

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