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Anmolpreet Kaur

Sat 4th Jul 2020 14:53

Hey Abdul I would like if you could pay a visit to "First Impression "
Will be waiting for your answer

Ak

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d.knape

Sat 4th Jul 2020 03:12

very clever response MC.
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Fri 3rd Jul 2020 16:32

I need to read your poems. They are marvelous. Your sample poems are just amazing.

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Rae Sampson

Fri 3rd Jul 2020 13:25

KRVS is a radio station and broadcasting at a worldwide level to people. Old men who heard this station daily all have https://essaysoriginreview.com/essaypro-com-review/ on news on every topic of life like sports, news, and country situation.

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Anna

Fri 3rd Jul 2020 05:00

Rhyming Hugh
Is that you?
Thank you!

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Anna

Thu 2nd Jul 2020 17:47

Thank you for the like!

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Anna

Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:29

Thank you Martin! I appreciate your comments and your interest in my work.

Much gratitude,
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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 1st Jul 2020 12:35

Hi, Ash. Welcome to WOL. You'll like us here.

Write something cheerful. About anything. Short or long. How about 'Breathing'?

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Wed 1st Jul 2020 12:13

Thank you Cynthia!

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keith jeffries

Wed 1st Jul 2020 11:51

Clive,

A big welcome.

Keith

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 1st Jul 2020 11:50

Dean, check the final paragraph of your bio. I think you intend 'meant to be'. But maybe not. Perhaps, it's a jazzy little 'trap'.

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d.knape

Wed 1st Jul 2020 03:12

that's a cute saying
Is it British?
or Bulgarian?

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jennifer Malden

Tue 30th Jun 2020 16:34

Hi Hugh! Loved 'First Class Move' . The funniest things happen when flying. I was going out to board a plane once, and it looked really shabby and old, so much so that one did wonder........... There was a little Japanese businessman in front of me, who stopped in his tracks with dismay.The pilot, a lovely Irishman with a shock of red curls, stopped, patted him consolingly on the shoulder, and said, 'don't worry sir, all the big pieces are there'! Then we took ages over time to land, going round and round, so again I wondered if the landing carriage was blocked or worse. Then, there was only a curtain screening the cockpit, and as I was near the front I could see in when the hostess went up. The same pilot was sitting with his feet on the console, hat tipped forward, a drink in one hand and the other arm round the hostess. So I relaxed!!!!!Keep up the good work!
Jennifer

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Anna

Mon 29th Jun 2020 15:24

I thank you Shifa for reading and leaving a comment!

Your work looks like how art should look. Welcoming and yet mysteriously presented where you want to look for more.

A

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Sun 28th Jun 2020 23:06

Shifa thanks so much for your comment on my battle with cancer, I met a new friend tonight, I've battled covid now the cancer love to you dear one x

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John Coopey

Sun 28th Jun 2020 19:28

Thanks for your thoughts on Al Jolson, MC. It would make a great quiz question in a picture round to identify AJ not blacked up. Personally, I have no problems with him black facing in the 1920's. I myself have done it in the past for a James Bond fancy dress night. I'm sure he'd have second thoughts now. Just as I would.

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Anna

Sun 28th Jun 2020 13:41

Thank you for the like!

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keith jeffries

Sun 28th Jun 2020 08:05

Martin,

Thank you for your recent comments on my poems. As always I both appreciate and value all you have to say.

Thank you
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 27th Jun 2020 18:57

Hi JC - as a matter of interest, in the YouTube video of Jolson singing
"Toot, toot, Tootsie", he does not wear "black face". He was a real
powerhouse of an entertainer and it's easy to see how the songs
he chose made him so popular from the 20s onwards. A footnote:
The song "Sonny Boy" was apparently written as a joke by its
writers when Jolson pressed them for material. He loved it! And
made it one of his biggest-ever hits among many.

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Sat 27th Jun 2020 18:50

Thanks for liking my poetry x

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d.knape

Sat 27th Jun 2020 11:52

Milksop:
a weak or cowardly man
First Known Use of milksop

14th century, in the meaning defined above
History and Etymology for milksop

Middle English, literally, bread soaked in milk

(i had to look it up.)

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Fri 26th Jun 2020 17:50

Thank you Adam
Ak

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Adam Whitworth

Fri 26th Jun 2020 10:12

I like your poem "A Phase Of Life", especially the third verse.

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Philipos

Thu 25th Jun 2020 17:23

You got there just before I twigged the error and amended it of my own volition - good to see you were on the ball though just in case. I blame the hot weather. Keep well. P.

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Thu 25th Jun 2020 17:18

Your most welcome.
No it's not my pet sheep although i would love to have one this cute.
Ak

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Thu 25th Jun 2020 14:07

Colin is someone who stalks, especially first girlfriends at uni, Cynthia, a truly unforgettable experience I'm wiping the blood away now.......

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Thu 25th Jun 2020 14:05

Julian, long time, no see, I miss our chats, remember them in the old days, Ie just been reminiscing about John Gilroy with a friend peace and blessings xxx

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Thu 25th Jun 2020 12:41

May God give you sense...
Common sense. ?

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d.knape

Thu 25th Jun 2020 11:54

thank you for your comments on "She Dreams".

is that your pet sheep?
cute!

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Thu 25th Jun 2020 10:08

Abdul, your poetry has lifted me again this morning, you feed my spirit, Po as for the mad hatter tea party, all the best people are mad, dont you know xxx spike milligan lived into his nineties.......

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Thu 25th Jun 2020 06:54

Hey shifa i just updated my blog. I hope you like it and will be waiting for your reply
Ak

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Anna

Thu 25th Jun 2020 06:50

Thank you my beauty ?. I will follow your words of wisdom. Hopefully I will learn to appreciate art one day and leave meaningful and insightful comments on your work!

A

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Wendy Higson

Wed 24th Jun 2020 19:15

Thankyou for all your comments I keep saying I’m not going to write any more but I can’t help myself my mind is a whirlwind cannot help myself never had anything published don’t really know how to use my iPad There are lots of fascinating writers and love reading them Thank you love Wendy X

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 12:51

Hey Adam sorry to disappoint you but i would like if you could review my other work as well.
And i will admire if you judge truly just like you did with a mighty word.
Ak

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Anna

Tue 23rd Jun 2020 12:16

Thank you for your words of welcome Cynthia. I'm eager to prove my mettle among a group of people who write such beautiful thoughts. I like what you think. I like how you think. There's a positivism and lack of cynicism that I see which is very refreshing. Otherwise poets are all doom and woe.

Anya

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Mon 22nd Jun 2020 23:41

Wow x

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sun

Mon 22nd Jun 2020 20:22

thank you for the comment! I didn't expect anyone to read that but it feels very nice ? so thank you very much.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 22nd Jun 2020 16:54

Bless you, Liam!

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Mon 22nd Jun 2020 12:22

No need to thank me Anna. Your work deserve praise and i will be looking forward for more...

Ak

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Anna

Mon 22nd Jun 2020 11:35

Thank you!

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Mon 22nd Jun 2020 05:03

I'm still here, just, haven't slept well

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d.knape

Mon 22nd Jun 2020 03:46

sorry you had a bad childhood.
I feel sorry for kids who have no father
but also the ones who have horrible ones.
Be the best Father
you can be!

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d.knape

Mon 22nd Jun 2020 03:43

ha. no wonder your husband is hiding
behind the Hydrangas.
He looks leery of what may be around the corner!
haha

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jennifer Malden

Sun 21st Jun 2020 10:55

Hi DK! the person behind the hydrangeas is my lucky husband, and I'm waiting with a rolling-pin the other side of the plants!!!

Jennifer

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Sun 21st Jun 2020 06:18

Hello thanks for liking my work mute by choice. I hope you like my other works too

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d.knape

Sat 20th Jun 2020 23:59

when you bite your tongue, it hurts!

(I see you have moved indoors. good!
much better than a tent on the beach.
you get those nasty sand fleas!)

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 20th Jun 2020 23:50

Hi Tom - thanks for the reasoned response to my message about
statues, plus The Guardian's slavery connection..
I see your point about the statues - but maybe that should apply to all
personal memorials when taking offence is such a fashionable indulgence these days.
Historically, there are many countries with empires in their
centuries of existence but no one (except the barbarians of Daish)
would sanction the destruction of the edifices that survive. Indeed, what would we be able to make of the past had that been the case.
No Rome/Italy as we know it; ditto no Athens/Greece and so much
else across the lands once held by the various empires of recorded history.
Once started, where to stop?
Cheers,
MC

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Sat 20th Jun 2020 21:27

It's lovely x

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Tom

Sat 20th Jun 2020 18:28

Hi MC, thanks for your perspective. Here's mine: I am not one for erasing the past, censoring and DVD-collection burning etc. In a country with as much history as ours, most long-lived institutions are going have histories that might make some modern heckles raise. However, do I think statues are a special case.

The people we choose to quite literally put (and keep) on a pedestal in our streets and cities for all to look up at are not always appropriate for the time.

It might sound flippant but if I had to pass a statue on my daily commute celebrating a historical figure who rounded up poets with ginger beards and slaughtered them or enslaved them - I'd probably feel quite unnecessarily awkward on a daily basis.

I do not think statues should be thrown into the sea either. Put them in a museum (it keeps them clean, safe, maintained, polished) and provide people interested in the history some context; the figure's pros and cons. And then let's have some modern, representational statues in their place; not just objectionable dead men. Maybe in 100 years, the new statues will need to be put in a museum and replaced too - so be it!

I'm not qualified to speak on what is and isn't offensive to minority groups in the UK, so it's important we listen to their voices and perspectives. We should be ready to act if the consensus is that dumb traditions (i.e. statues) need be challenged.

I love the range of views on WoL and the lively debate. I might see if I can write a poem about that... ? Cheers, Tom

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 20th Jun 2020 16:04

Hello Tom - when there seems to be "understanding" and even
sympathy for the assaults on statues with a perceived connection
with slavery here in the UK, it is salutary to be told that that bastion
of the liberal position in this life - The Guardian (formerly The
Manchester Guardian) was, according to a reliable source of knowledge, founded by cotton trader John Taylor and gave unqualified support to the Confederacy in America's Civil War,
reprinting its propaganda and attacking slave liberator Abe Lincoln.. Here's an example:
"It was an evil day both for America and the world when he (Lincoln)
was chosen President of the United States" - 10 October 1862.
Would there be understanding and sympathy if the BLM made an
assault on the offices of that newspaper citing its links to slavery?
Would it be seen as a "good day"?
History always has something to teach us - and not always "of the
moment".
MC.




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