Hi there, Thx for the comments on my poem '1971' There is a more detailed reply on the blog entry page. Much appreciated. Win x

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Heather,thanks for your input. I don't respond to all comments only because they take so much time, and tend to make any given poem look like it has a lot 'reader feedback' when it doesn't. In "Midnight Gardens" I used 'assignation' to define the type of man; I knew 'affair' was a better 'fit', but it didn't suit him; so I went with 'character clue'.

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Heather. Thanks for your very kind words. You've enough writing ability already to be aspiring to higher things than my talent! Try Simon Armitage.

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Heather, I've been away for several days and am only just getting back into the loop. I enjoyed your comments on my last two pieces, especially 'the little leaf'. Perhaps this poem is too close to the metaphysical, like fairy tales, fables and myths whose real value lie in their undercurrent of life teachings. That 'little leaf' was an instant idea and a great effort to capture. Your bio sure shows a lot in common with my background. Save ALL your stuff in hard copy too; paper might yet outlive electricity. Runes in stone are a bit over the top. :)

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A very good evening to you Heather.To say you have made my day with your comments on 'The Widower' would be a great understatement! thank you ever so so much-with kindest regards-Stefan-x

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Hi Heather, many thanks for your kind appraisal of 'A Certain Lady', much appreciated :)
Best wishes, Dave

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Thank you Heather...I think you have made me think...:')

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Hello. Andrew Motion was Poet Laureate before Carol Ann Duffy. Rubbish, though!
As for "my thoughts are less angrier" if you say angrier as if it rhymed with sangria that stretches the metre a bit. But it's just a long joke really! Ta for your comments.

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Hello Heather - welcome to the gang :)
Thanks for your kind remarks about 'Those Days' - glad you enjoyed it.
Best wishes, Dave

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Good afternoon Heather-thank you so much for your skillful advice on my poem 'Naivety'-very helpful indeed-repair job being undertaken-many many thanks for those comments-Stef-xx

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Thanks you ladies... I wouldn't dare do a follow up...but I know a a poet who may??

Perhaps it may be offered as a lemon drizzle prize subject..


LADIES OF A CERTAIN AGE

I'm sure Isobel and Francine could arrange that... I'll send the cake overseas if it comes to it... Whatya think ???

Gusxx

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Heather. Thanks for your comments on Stroke.Glad you liked it.

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yes, more blogs pleas heather :-) Win

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Hi Heather! Welcome to WOL! Thanks for your comment on 'And finally...' I've had a read of your stuff and it's good work! Perhaps those people at the other site weren't just trying to curry favour? I know from experience that it's hard to take praise as genuine but in your case, I think it happens to be true! I particularly like Finger in the Dust; keep them coming! I for one would like to read more of your work! :-)

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hi Heather... sorry for the delay. Your poets profile is now up and running. Welcome to Write out loud, happy blogging! Win

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