Rowing Across Herring Gut in a Purple Boat
wrapped in the mantle of scarlet sun my skiff
and I drifted through the crayola buoys
bobbing in the dusky harbour
a strange lavender lily
with a thinking pistil
watching the lobster boats thrum slowly up the
golden-throated river
single file
like purring birds their bellies full of greeny
briny bonded claws and
cannibal eyes
chugging
back to the grey plank docks cooling their legs
in the black salt shadows
back to the grey shingle houses where the
deft-handed bait packer
has left her reticule of herring to make
a party
of steak and beer
for the fisherpeople
Cynthia Buell Thomas
pauline sewards
Sat 14th May 2011 11:03
love this 'their bodies full of greeny briny bonded claws and cannibal eyes' and the whole poem is brilliantly evocative,
Picking up on the comment of Winston I always feel it is better to cut down on the non essential adjectives so the others stand out, but on the other hand I like the complete picture this builds up
In general I love the 'painterly' effect of the poems of yours I've read. it's a delight to come across these and I shall be folowiing your work
pauline x