Force Seven
Force Seven
In the lusty wind the cables whine
From pole to pole bending the matchwood
Wands by the throat fiercely.
Riding at high mast the grim-eyed beetles
Clamp their spiked boots deeper and check
The safety lock on their leather girdles.
With unnatural fingers they fumble for the
Lurching wires that clash spitting sparks
And lunge apart merrily hissing.
Rude logic measures the steel, the wind, the wand,
And knows one fateful gust will undo mathematics;
One dancing wire with threaded jowls
Could tear a man’s head from his fearful shoulders
And send it flying into the gale
Like a funny ball,
Into the maws of the thrashing trees spewing
Great cracking branches
As dandelion hair.
Frantically we bang the shutters together
And throw the lawn furniture into the shed
Higgledy-piggledy;
Push the picnic table against the side door
And try to grab the jumping clay pot that
Leaps out of its macramé net upsetting the
Surprised ivy on to the porch steps.
Leave it! Get in! Get in!
Cowering in the heart of its snapping bush
One gorgeous red hibiscus not yet shredded
Bleeds on my eye.
Blindly I dash to its rescue, and pluck it free,
Cupping it in my small hands, gently.
And back through the gale I jack-knife crazily,
Cradling its unblemished beauty.
I put it in a glass of water and set it in the window
To shine
For the men on the lines.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Steve Regan
Wed 13th Jan 2010 12:58
You've captured the drama and the power of nature here, and man's vulnerability within nature's big tantrums. Theb poem positively fizzesd and cackles with energy.
I like the prayer-like ending and I like these lines from the body of the poem...
"by the throat fiercely". This has the same rythmn as "through a glass darkly" which is probably my favourite phrase in the world.
and also liked
"one fateful gust will undo mathematics;"
Best wishes, Cynth, wherever you are, and God bless the people of Haiti, who might be not that far from you.