It is a sensual piece, isn't it? Nature red-raw in bed and garden?
Not a superfluous word in it, all add to the whole. It is quite tactile, hard almost in places.
And the directness of this phrase: The word that cleans her like water. Superb.
Thank you.
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Sun 17th Jun 2007 14:23
I meant 'arial' -- I believe the other is a washing powder, also available in liquid form. Or is it the tusks/antlers whereon the television signal is impaled? Or is it simply a typo? Blood group typo?
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Sun 17th Jun 2007 12:15
Oh you do, do you? Well, as it happens, there's a consequence to Times 12 point cloud seeding procedures. 12 point makes for the larger kind of raindrop -- the terrifying DOGSPOT. Do you really want DOGSPOTS?
Mary Quantum's friend, Norris Neutrino, suggests you try the new ghost particle/quark epilator. It dispenses with the need for barbers and shaolin foam.
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Malcolm Saunders
Sun 17th Jun 2007 11:37
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Sun 17th Jun 2007 11:10
I bring but gentle head-butting pandas and parrots to nudge your tucker bag into the billabong. No martial arts make-up artistes, or postal fleas -- my adhesive letters have been sent into a cloud around which water droplets will condense so you will have a falling, cacophanous alphabet in ariel 8 point whilst other mortals have pitter patter raindrops, little grasshopper.
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Fri 15th Jun 2007 23:37
Thank you for writing this poem. It's freshness balances the heady perfume of it's sensuality. The play of gender, nature, culture, the snatches of scene, bed and garden have just woven a welcome thread of serendipity into my evening. At a very hard time in my life I am gracious for receiving such treasures!
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Mon 4th Jun 2007 17:48
Oh yis, this is the bis. Love the wit and the wily rhymes. May you go on and on!
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<Deleted User> (7790)
Sun 3rd Jun 2007 10:12
Your poems, your word play, your ideas.... are brilliant and so very funny. Thank you.
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Malcolm Saunders
Sun 17th Jun 2007 20:40
I want a dogspot
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