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Ray Miller

Thu 21st Nov 2024 12:44

Thanks both. You probably mean Longbridge, not Northfield, RG. I'd be astonished if "the Company" were acting altruistically.

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Red Brick Keshner

Thu 21st Nov 2024 12:29

Thanks Ray 👍 encrusted habits do keep us where we’re at. Totally get that!

Uilleam! Thanks mate. That’s a lifelong pressure to live with. What I usually do is stop my ears and go la-la-la-la quite loudly…or at least that’s the kind of inner response I attempt even if it may fail. 👍

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Reggie's Ghost

Thu 21st Nov 2024 11:49

I remember going into Northfield in the 90's and became aware of a large number of people whose jobs had been made redundant but they had been kept on for special projects etc, or just to twiddle their thumbs. I remember thinking 'that's good of the Company...but it's gonna cost them'

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 11:48

Well John, there's only one solution to that---if indeed you object to it---?
Use it or lose it..the church, that is!

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John Coopey

Thu 21st Nov 2024 11:44

Not the finest endorsement of the democratic will, Uilleam. And thanks for the Likes, Tobani and Red Brick.

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John Marks

Thu 21st Nov 2024 11:27

More likely to hear a muezzin with the call tp prayer (the adhan) in many northern cities.

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TobaniNataiella

Thu 21st Nov 2024 11:16

Thank you Pragya for the like

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Rick Varden

Thu 21st Nov 2024 11:14

Ha ha yea, so many memories, Thank you for your comments.

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raypool

Thu 21st Nov 2024 11:00

Thanks one and all: Red Brick, Hugh, Aisha, John, Tom, Trevor and Uilleam for your support in reading.

Glad this appealed David ! I thought he was a candidate for support in his hours of need and of course for his massive skill set and obvious sensitivity to outside influences. None of which are apparent in the average dead from the neck up politician. I know it's irony . I enjoyed Rossiter in Le Petomaine, a real classic vignette of the French performer. I'm sure he was edgy and not an easy person . But Sellers was the same. We will watch him recede into the nylon world of B and Bs. Keep well!

Thanks Uilleam for that observation, one I agree with.

Thanks Stephen - Very much a character of his time in Reggie Perrin, full of angst!

Ray

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 10:51

You keep coming out with that one, John.😏
I'm afraid that at my age, I have neither the energy nor the resources with which to stand.
I would certainly be incapable of fighting the vile smears and lies perpetrated in recent years, by politicians and their client media on behalf of a fascist genocial regime; lies which deprived the UK citizens of a just socialist government.
There are however, people waiting patiently in the wings, and our time will come.💗

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Ray Miller

Thu 21st Nov 2024 10:35

Enjoyed this, the rhyme and rhythm don't disappoint.

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Ray Miller

Thu 21st Nov 2024 10:30

Enjoyed the poem, nice sentiments. Perhaps you don't need "grand" at the end of line 5?

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Ray Miller

Thu 21st Nov 2024 10:25

Ah yes, very nice indeed.

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Ray Miller

Thu 21st Nov 2024 10:11

Two sonnets in one, I suppose. I'm exactly the kind of man this is about, but old habits...

In trusted friends or a professional's care,
Healing starts when you begin to share.

You might consider reversing those lines.

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Ray Miller

Thu 21st Nov 2024 09:55

Enjoyed the read. Mostly it has a nice rhythm, but towards the end some lines are very much longer han others - like this one
This is a woman I have never hurt or disrespected in any way.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 09:54

Wow that's great Ray.
What a picture you paint, so many aspects of a life different from my own, yet familiar in other ways.

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John Coopey

Thu 21st Nov 2024 09:48

The solution is obvious, Uilleam. You should stand yourself. All you need are another 20,000 people to agree with you.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 09:41

Ah the penny mix bag, or whatever it was called.
Sweet memories, Rick...and the waggon wheels were twice as big as they are now...weren't they?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 09:31

Not like that- like that!😁

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 09:28

Thank you, Andy.
At my age, all I can offer by way of advice is generous dollops of good-humour and Fiery Jack, well-massaged in with the odd dose of Uisce Beatha, preferably Irish!😁

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 09:13

Thanks RBK.
I continually struggle with an all-pervading sense of "failure", of not having lived up to the expectations set for me in my early teens by my parents, relatives, and teachers etc.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 08:59

Is it "verboten" John?
We used to hear them practising even during the week, up the road from here.

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TobaniNataiella

Thu 21st Nov 2024 08:57

Thank you John , Hugh, Trevor, Larisa, Stephen, Aisha, Manish for the likes.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 08:53

Thank you Tom.
Much as I object to the militarisation of Christianity, I have to admit the Sally Army do a great job....which wouldn't be necessary if our government did theirs.
💗

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 08:48

Thanks John.
No, we didn't defeat the Tories. The other cheek ( which I didn't vote for) is still in power.
Let each contribute according to their means; the only way to a just and peaceful society.
That's Socialism in my book.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 08:38

Thank you.
Mental illness, is at times an invisible illness, and sadly neglected by a society obsessed with outward, superficial appearances..

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 21st Nov 2024 08:29

"cometh the hour, cometh the man."

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David RL Moore

Thu 21st Nov 2024 06:27

Thanks for the likes to RBK, Aisha, RA Porter and Auracle.

Also to RA Porter and Auracle for their generous comments , much appreciated.

David RL Moore

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Sourajit Nandi

Thu 21st Nov 2024 05:18

Thanks a lot.
Removed the comma.😁

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Auracle

Wed 20th Nov 2024 21:26

I think what you're doing is really relevant and important. I just can't prove it...

🌷The meter or rhythm is incredibly flowing. That is quite extraordinary, to keep that intact.

It captivates me, to further analyse your poem. Perhaps it's the video, with recitation and explanation included.🌷

I think what you're doing is really relevant and important. I just can't prove it...

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Auracle

Wed 20th Nov 2024 21:13

Gave me more than a smile, Reggie's Ghost.

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Auracle

Wed 20th Nov 2024 21:11

Very brave. 💪

I hope this production will bring you more than immense joy.

From me, I can truly say that I appreciate this production, with the recitation at its apex.

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TOM MERTON

Wed 20th Nov 2024 20:04

the ultimate itch hiker-
they get on my bloody blood sucked nerves
and how they really tick me off!

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John Coopey

Wed 20th Nov 2024 19:58

Many thanks for the Likes, Redbrick, Greg, Tom, Branwell, Aisha, Stephen and John.

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TOM MERTON

Wed 20th Nov 2024 19:34

Rick how dare you not mention Uncle Joes mint balls-tins of broken biscuits-sawdust on the shop floor-the hovis boy on his cobbled-street uphill struggling delivery bike

I could say BAH! HUMBUG!
but I'll just say humbug cos I love em! 😜

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TOM MERTON

Wed 20th Nov 2024 19:23

love this poem-just like that! 😁

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TOM MERTON

Wed 20th Nov 2024 19:21

Great poem John. Yep its going to prove to be a difficult thing to do from now on but lets bite the bullet and ENJOY!

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TOM MERTON

Wed 20th Nov 2024 18:48

Thanks Uilleam and I'll leave you to do the news watching etc now the general situation is getting more grim by the day across the country-god help us

And thank you folks as in Hugh Stephen and Aisha

best of regards all

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R A Porter

Wed 20th Nov 2024 18:24

I love this, such beautiful, lyrical imagery and linking the inevitability of the seasons to the inevitability of war is both poignant and timely.

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Tom Doolan

Wed 20th Nov 2024 16:46

Thanks for likes: Manish, Red Brick Keshner and hugh. 🇯🇲 👍

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Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 20th Nov 2024 13:46

Superb stuff, Graham. I like the part where you stop blinking and stare intently to see the colour change, "switch, swap, change
copper grey, grey copper."

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 20th Nov 2024 11:36

Thanks for the likes
Red Brick Keshner
Hélène

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Red Brick Keshner

Wed 20th Nov 2024 09:38

Yes, Uilleam, that’s the most recognisable image of Chatterton. My problem with men’s health is that it is a bit of a joke to many, we are hardwired not to cry, to be strong, and to soldier on. And when our capacity to be these things wanes that’s when everything unravels. It’s particularly notable in ageing and retired males. And the longer the life expectancy the surer are we to go through those waters in time! Thanks kindly for entertaining my poetic ratings. 👍🌷

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Ray Miller

Wed 20th Nov 2024 09:15

Thanks both. I only wish there were a planet B, where we could send Elon Musk and his ilk with a one-way ticket.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 20th Nov 2024 08:49

But how many planets shall we require
at some future date?

There is no plan-et B😕

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 20th Nov 2024 08:45

Did they send you away with a flea in your ear?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 20th Nov 2024 08:43

Thanks Hélène. A friend who liked writing poetry advised me with this acronym: KISS, “keep it simple, stupid!”

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 20th Nov 2024 08:36

Very touching, John.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 20th Nov 2024 08:22

Thanks, RBK. What a tragedy, at merely 17 years old! But perhaps his poet’s voice is not after-all, lost, and that we even now, learn lessons from him?

Thanks for raising the subject of mental health, and of mens’ in particular. I have often wondered (having been raised a Catholic) whether or not the role of Christianity and of religion in general, was a help or a hindrance to good mental health; and is the secularisation of today’s society a factor in good / bad mental health?

The name Chatterton rang a bell, and sure enough, Wikipedia tells me:”The Death of Chatterton is an oil painting on canvas, by the English Pre-Raphaelite painter Henry Wallis (1830–1916)”. However, I’m assured by she who must be obeyed, that Wallis was NOT a Pre-Raphaelite....!



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Hélène

Wed 20th Nov 2024 01:28

This poem makes me want to continue writing and reading poetry. Lovely!

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