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Rick Varden

Mon 18th Nov 2024 22:18

Thank you Ray

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Tom Doolan

Mon 18th Nov 2024 20:45

Thanks Ray for your constructive feedback. Respect 🇯🇲
Thanks for likes: Yanma Hidayah & Aisha 👍

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 18th Nov 2024 17:53

Thank you so much!

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John Gilbert Ellis

Mon 18th Nov 2024 17:48

You can't beat a good football poem!

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John Gilbert Ellis

Mon 18th Nov 2024 17:30

Thanks for all the likes and the kind comments Uilleam. Hope you can make walking an affirmation of your daily life and the coming months won't be too dark.

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Steve White

Mon 18th Nov 2024 16:28

Thanks Uilleam, I saw that but she doesn't say when he said it or to whom. This blogger went looking and attributes it to someone completely different in 1971: https://shkspr.mobi/blog/2021/06/whats-the-origin-of-the-phrase-we-shouldnt-just-be-pulling-people-out-of-the-river-we-should-be-going-upstream-to-find-out-whos-pushing-them-in/

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David RL Moore

Mon 18th Nov 2024 16:01

Have put this to bed now but added an audio and video.

Thanks for your reading and taking time to comment Uilleam.

David.

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David RL Moore

Mon 18th Nov 2024 15:58

Nice one Ray,

Leonard Rossiter was a comic genius who held a mirror up to us all with Rigsby. He was also an acclaimed actor outside of comedy, with appearances in 2001: A Space Odyssey and Barry Lyndon. I think he would have gone on to be a huge success.

Apparently he wasn't a nice chap, but who knows? certainly not me.

I loved Rigsby, his failures were magnificent.

Nice little poem for those who remember and have met Rigsby's on our travels in bedsitland.

Cheers Ray.

David

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Telboy

Mon 18th Nov 2024 15:44

When dog owners say "Oooh he's never done that before!"

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 18th Nov 2024 13:12

I don't think it's you, Ray. Falling-outs between artists of different genres are many and varied.
Witness the vitriol heaped on the heads of various painters, the French for example, whose success threatened the reputations of more "conventional" artists. What we now consider to be the beautiful works of the Pre-Raphaelites were ridiculed, by artists of the time.
I can't say much as regards poetry, but what I think RBK's trying to say is that in poetry our creativity grows as we try to find different ways of "connecting"....don't know if that made sense.😏

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Ray Miller

Mon 18th Nov 2024 13:01

Haven't watched a soap for several decades but enjoyed the poem, especially the
"If you’ve been affected” line.

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Ray Miller

Mon 18th Nov 2024 12:53

Enjoyed the read, maybe there should be more about Saturday night. But you gotta love a poem about reggae and ska.
Monday comes around too soon
The week is gonna fly until - wouldn't the week drag, rather than fly/?

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Ray Miller

Mon 18th Nov 2024 12:23

Nothing wrong with idealism, I suppose, but having met many poets online and in the flesh, I'd wager that we're just as likely to fall out with each other as your average Joes. Or maybe it's me!

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Martin Peacock

Mon 18th Nov 2024 10:03

Hear, hear, M.C. -
we must find our little comforts where we can. Anything to balance out the horrors we've proved all-too capable at!

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Auracle

Mon 18th Nov 2024 09:41

Our church had an exchange with Oman.

She was brave to go there.

And share 🌷

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 18th Nov 2024 09:41

As 2025 approaches my sense of foreboding increases with regard to this war. I applaud your words as usual Stephen but I wish you didn’t need to write them

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Ray Miller

Mon 18th Nov 2024 09:31

Hello Greg. Yeah, Villa are doing fine. Chelsea are....well, I'm not sure the words have been invented that would do justice to Chelsea these days. Something beginning with "multi-" obviously.

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Steve White

Mon 18th Nov 2024 09:07

Cheers Stephen! The Peasants' Revolt is thought to have started just down the road from Basildon, in Fobbing.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 18th Nov 2024 09:04

Another winner, Ian. I remember Eccles in the Goon Show saying that liquorish gives you a good run for your money! Versatile indeed.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 18th Nov 2024 08:55

A splendid poem, Steve. I notice that there's a Wat Tyler Country Park near Basildon. I suppose heritage will get us all in the end.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 18th Nov 2024 08:47

The days roll by and nobody will learn.

Thank you Stephen for your tireless efforts on behalf of those who have no voice.
What's so frustrating is that some of our UK politicians (currently engaged in whipping up racial hatred here by various means), have financial links with those inflicting the horrors of which you speak....NOT IN MY NAME!

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 18th Nov 2024 08:33

Yes, a poem tinged with sadness but at peace with itself. Good work, Manish.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 18th Nov 2024 08:32

Hi Steve. I found the following quote, typed it in to search, and found an article reflecting on the life of Tutu, in which the Revd Sonia Hicks, President of the Methodist Conference, attributes the quote to him.
“There comes a point where we need to stop just pulling people out of the river.
We need to go upstream and find out why they’re falling in.”

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 18th Nov 2024 08:19

I think it certainly will, Graham. 'L'année de tous les dangers', I think. Thank you Uilleam. Yes 'disruption' will only get you so far, we hope.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 18th Nov 2024 06:16

This is a very gently placed piece Manish. The heart-felt sentiments shine through it

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Rick Varden

Sun 17th Nov 2024 19:53

Yes Uileam! Very SHARP witted of you!

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Greg Freeman

Sun 17th Nov 2024 19:37

"The 20 year accretion of piss and semen" has a strange musicality. "The sense of something melting" is a wonderful conclusion. Ah, I know who you are, Penguin. Good to see you back! And Villa doing better these days ...

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Marla Joy

Sun 17th Nov 2024 17:37

Helen,
Your poetry and paint is honest, simple and wonderful.
Marla

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Faith Greenwood

Sun 17th Nov 2024 16:39

love this concept

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 17th Nov 2024 15:56

Brilliant Ian, a song with a seasonal flavour...What with rhubarb an all that, an eclectic cultural mix!😋

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John Coopey

Sun 17th Nov 2024 15:12

Thanks for your thoughts, MC. Not just Tamsulosin but Finesteride too. The short answer is, I don’t know if they’re working. I can’t both take them and not take them at the same time for comparison.

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 17th Nov 2024 14:56

thanks for the likes and your supportive comments Stephen - glad you liked it

Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 17th Nov 2024 14:56

thanks for the likes and supportive comments people - I appreciate it
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 17th Nov 2024 14:55

thanks for the likes and your kind comments Larisa - glad you liked it
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 17th Nov 2024 14:54

thanks to everyone for the likes and encouraging comments.

Not any easy song to sing live - a lot of emotion to hold in and deliver it without a waver in my voice.

I'm glad you liked it - just wish my parents had been able to hear it 😞

Thanks again

Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 17th Nov 2024 14:53

thanks for the likes and the comments you lovely poetry people 😃

Glad it brought back some sweet tasting memories for you 😃

not sure about the Christmas number 1 Stephen - that alwaays seems to be taken by that other festive foodstuff - the sausage roll 😲

I've just posted a new song - which hopefully will remind you all of another childhood favourite 😉

Thanks again for the encouragement

Ian

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 17th Nov 2024 14:14

I get the point!

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Rick Varden

Sun 17th Nov 2024 14:01

Ha ha yea, exactly!

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Steve White

Sun 17th Nov 2024 13:38

Oh, and I'll check out Southey's play, Uilleam, thanks. I guess once you're Poet Laureate you're inside the tent...

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Steve White

Sun 17th Nov 2024 13:33

Thanks Ray. It's based on a quote widely attributed to Archbishop Desmond Tutu, although I can't find any source material to indicate that he actually said, or wrote, it.

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Steve White

Sun 17th Nov 2024 13:31

He was indeed, M.C.. Sir William Walworth, merchant, money-lender, brothel-keeper and Lord Mayor of London.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 17th Nov 2024 13:09

Doom and gloom...doom and gloom
Make way, I pray, and give comfort room! 😇

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Robert C Gaulke

Sun 17th Nov 2024 13:05

Cheers!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 17th Nov 2024 13:03

Even Oliver Cromwell suffered that insult in death. Power was
the name of the game and deterrence against threat the hope
behind the deed. Was Tyler subjected to his fate with the help
of the London mayor of the day? Opportunists currying favour
find their chance in every age, it seems.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 17th Nov 2024 12:46

"If only you could see yourself through my eyes,
you’d lose your heart in a single breath."
That's rather beautiful.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 17th Nov 2024 12:44

💗

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 17th Nov 2024 12:41

Sorry I missed this John.
I desperately need to make walking an affirmation of my daily life, although it's going to be difficult in the coming dark months.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 17th Nov 2024 12:37

Isn't the Tamsulosin still working JC? I've been doing my own
trials and was fascinated by how it serves to affect the flow, whilst somewhat perturbed by the extensive list of possible side effects....some of which seem positively daunting. But then Big
Pharma always covers its backs, if not its tracks! I treated myself
to appointments with a urology "consultant" here in the heart of
London's medical expertise and it was/is worth the cost of a
holiday anywhere you care to mention.
Hey - you should see the video of the
laser treatment now available to
burn off surplus gland!! Eye-watering
stuff - but fascinating!

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Martin Peacock

Sun 17th Nov 2024 12:34

We do beggar belief with some if the things - well no, most - that we do. We prove the impossibility of a kind and wise God, because what kind of incompetent moron would call us fit for purpose? Nobody made us but ourselves. Noster maxima culpa.

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Ray Miller

Sun 17th Nov 2024 11:53

Enjoyed the poem.
Refereed by consensus. Corners,

free kicks, won by loudest shout.

I play walking football and that's still the rule.

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