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Martin Peacock

Tue 26th Nov 2024 11:21

Thanks to everyone who read my poem. I hope you liked it.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 26th Nov 2024 09:51

Thank you so much for liking my poem, dear friends!

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David RL Moore

Tue 26th Nov 2024 09:49

Thanks for your reading and comment uilleam.

I suspect the new King and Arch Bishop will continue to preach to the proles, whilst failing to apply christ like guidance to their own particular cults. Whenever it suits.

David

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TobaniNataiella

Tue 26th Nov 2024 04:54

Thank you Yanma for the like.

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John Marks

Mon 25th Nov 2024 22:25

Thanks everyone and especial thanks to Auracle and Stephen.

“You can cut all the flowers but you cannot keep Spring from coming.”
― Pablo Neruda

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 25th Nov 2024 21:47

Thank you, Graham. You mention some legends there. And thanks to Greg and Ray - there are already many countries where it is dangerous to be a proper journalist and who knows what will happen in the US once Trump's crowd get into office?

I wrote this because I am more and more convinced of the need for real, fact-based journalism, as distinct from the fact-free opinion and puff which is now everywhere. 'I get all my news from Facebook,' Oh yeah, what news exactly?
Attacks on journalists are attacks on our freedoms.

And thanks to everyone who read and liked this poem. I really appreciate it.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 25th Nov 2024 21:15

Also MC, do those “well-paid union members” of which you speak include the 130,000 members of the Police Federation of England and Wales, and if so, will you be objecting to their future pay-rises?

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R A Porter

Mon 25th Nov 2024 20:58

A beautiful, elegiac piece. The candles and glimpse of the ocean through the window guided you somewhere intriguing. It has the feel of a Hopper painting.

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R A Porter

Mon 25th Nov 2024 20:33

Thank you M.C. & Ray - The Burning of the Leaves is a poem I remember being moved by at school and it is in an anthology I have had since then, although I don't know any other work by Laurence Binyon. I have re-read it since writing this and it was a big influence. I now need to read more Binyon.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 25th Nov 2024 18:30

Thanks David.
now in their palaces and churches,
they absolve him of his wrongs.

I'm turning over a new leaf in the New year: I'll be going to church to hear them preach the commandments "Thou shalt not kill", and "Thou shalt not steal".
I wonder what our newly-crowned Fidei Defensor ( Defender of Faith/s ) will have to say about those two!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 25th Nov 2024 18:22

Thanks RBK, true love will conquer all.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 25th Nov 2024 18:17

I've much to be grateful for Aisha.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 25th Nov 2024 18:14

Thanks Tom, especially for the lovely last verse.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 25th Nov 2024 18:10

MC, speaking of things ‘despicable’, the Tories, during their tenure, had neither A, the desire to ‘Stop the Boats’, B, to mend the asylum vetting system, or C, to provide safe routes.

It was in their interests, desperate as they were, to keep the xenophobic vote going.

Furthermore, the endless repetition of the accusatory term ‘illegal’, by the Thirty-Pee Lees of this world, and the motley assortment of muck-raking conspiracy theorists does not change the fact that asylum seekers are NOT ‘illegal’: I suggest you read up on the law as it applies to Asylum-seekers / Refugees.

And if, as you say, essential services, including the NHS, are at breaking point, that's disaster capitalism at its finest; the Tories had 14 years to redress the situation.

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TobaniNataiella

Mon 25th Nov 2024 16:49

Thank you Aisha for the like

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Ray Miller

Mon 25th Nov 2024 16:01

Enjoyed the poem very much.
behind the thin pane window -
window pane would be more usual, I'm curious about little details like that.

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David RL Moore

Mon 25th Nov 2024 15:36

Lovely Tom.

Art inspiring art is the artists greatest achievment and compliment.

David

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David RL Moore

Mon 25th Nov 2024 15:31

Thanks for your comment Ray and thanks also to Aisha and tobani for the likes.

Ray, it's a good question you ask regarding who this might be referencing. As you say, there are many candidates and I did have some specific ones in mind. However I decided to keep it open to interpretation so the reader can choose their own transgressor.

David

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Auracle

Mon 25th Nov 2024 14:25

Because poets can live from the wind&rain.

And somehow funny, that depression is not about money.

That love is not worth a dare, without the ability to share...

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Steve White

Mon 25th Nov 2024 14:01

Edited to change 'investors' to 'fat cats' - thank you Ray.

Complicated indeed, Uilleam. To mix metaphors horribly, there's quite a rabbit hole to explore where commentators argue whether it's a play within a play, within a play.

And thanks everyone else for your likes.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 25th Nov 2024 13:36

There is so much in this poem to like. I began to pick out pieces and had to stop, there were so many.
I’ll just cite the last two lines! Perfect

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2024 13:24

My late eldest sister married an American WW2 army man and
spent her adult life thereafter in the USA. I recall her grief when her beloved son Mark - having survived service in
Vietnam - died in an industrial accident on his return home to
Louisiana, when vets. from that war were so poorly treated
in their own country. Truly, little changes for the soldiers
in our lives and that only exacerbates the grief and alienation
experienced by family and friends when they need support and
sympathy. Kipling knew his stuff.
"It's Tommy this and Tommy that - and Tommy go away,
But it's thank you Mr Atkins when the band begins to play!"

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Tom

Mon 25th Nov 2024 13:21

I saw the attached painting and thought it might inspire a poem. It did.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2024 13:10

One of the more distasteful aspects is how the media jump aboard the "wealthy pensioners" bandwagon to defend this
greedy takeaway by a political mindset that is only too ready
to put money into the pockets of its already well paid union
members and offer increased hotel accommodation to be paid for
by the ignored British/English taxpayer here in England on behalf
of illegal incursions into an already overpopulated land with
essential services at breaking point. Did I say distasteful? Upgrade that to "despicable"!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2024 12:56

A modern reminder of the time of year - a fitting successor to
the fine Laurence Binyon poem "The Burning of the Leaves".

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 25th Nov 2024 12:12

Nice one, Steve,
Both Shakespeare and Agatha Christie are famous for their advocacy of such devices; To this very day, Christie’s version is by far the most successful in London’s West End, indeed in the whole world. As for Shakespeare's, well that's a bit complicated...a play within a play...😉

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Ray Miller

Mon 25th Nov 2024 12:02

Very good and very seasonal.
Men with grey faces and eyes set deep

Lie amongst leaves, longing for sleep

Haven't they already found sleep?

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Ray Miller

Mon 25th Nov 2024 11:57

There must be many candidates, I wondered if the poem referred to anyone in particular. Last stanza is especially good.

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TobaniNataiella

Mon 25th Nov 2024 09:41

Thank you Stephen, Manish and Pragya for the likes

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Sourajit Nandi

Mon 25th Nov 2024 08:35

Thanks And Welcome.

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TobaniNataiella

Mon 25th Nov 2024 02:19

Thank you Marla for the comment

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 25th Nov 2024 00:46

Thanks Ray (Miller) 🌷😃

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Rick Varden

Sun 24th Nov 2024 20:41

Yea exactly! Thank you

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Marla Joy

Sun 24th Nov 2024 19:54

Sourajet, This is heartfelt and beautifully written

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Marla Joy

Sun 24th Nov 2024 19:51

Loved the truth telling, ( however, I am also a big fan of Christmas)

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Greg Freeman

Sun 24th Nov 2024 18:48

Yes, and in other countries - Putin's Russia springs to mind - you're liable to be killed.

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Nov 2024 18:04

Thankyou, Stephen. A mature observation.

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Steve White

Sun 24th Nov 2024 17:45

Cheers Ray! The poem might work even better if I replace 'investors' with 'fat cats'.

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Ray Miller

Sun 24th Nov 2024 17:31

Yeah, dangerous business. I suppose in this country you're only likely to have phones and computers confiscated and spend a short time behind bars.

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Ray Miller

Sun 24th Nov 2024 17:24

So play it again, Sam, don’t refrain,
Let the music erase the pain.

Nice lines

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Ray Miller

Sun 24th Nov 2024 17:02

I was expecting fat cats to turn up at the end, but then I've always been baffled by economics. Enjoyed the read.

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Ray Miller

Sun 24th Nov 2024 16:43

Thanks, David, Stephen.

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TobaniNataiella

Sun 24th Nov 2024 16:13

Thank you Tom M for the lovely comment

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Tom

Sun 24th Nov 2024 15:57

Enjoyed this one a lot, Mike. Have messaged your inbox about it.

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raypool

Sun 24th Nov 2024 15:29

Thanks for your point Ray. Thinking on it now the words just came to me, the idea to flee seems a suitable metaphor for the constant speed the idea of an escape more so than the insect itself which would be admittedly a bit farcical!

Yes Stephen, there is a lot to be said about the delivery culture as it spreads out and leaves behind the glory of footfall in malls.

Thanks all for your likes too: Tom, Hugh, Kevin, Larisa, David and Yanma.

Ray

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 24th Nov 2024 12:27

Well done Rick!! The Fantasy Football was at Man C yesterday!!

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TOM MERTON

Sun 24th Nov 2024 11:59

Thank you so much for your hard work in composing what I find to be the the typical story of how many families deal with what should be a joyous time and as you rightly say in some cases can also be anything but.

Thanks so much Tobani. Look forward to your next posting

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 24th Nov 2024 11:02

I vividly remember John Pilger as one of the first (I think) really in-depth reporters! Some have lasted the test of time, Kate Adie springs to mind!

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Auracle

Sun 24th Nov 2024 09:47

I think I'd give a like and a comment.

No even more than a like and a comment.

Just to read this poem.

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 24th Nov 2024 09:24

Thanks David (RL Moore) so glad as always to have feedback come my way. Writing is fine enough but the reception part can get tricky and seems to always be the case. You are much appreciated. 😀🌷👍rbk

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