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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 28th Sep 2019 12:12

I love the work of assistance dogs in schools, I really do believe it is the way forward. I used to read to my own black Labrador when I was a kid, and he always managed to look at me as if he was interested, it was encouraging. Whatever your age dogs can teach you a lot.

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d.knape

Sat 28th Sep 2019 11:54


your comments are always
better than my poems.

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d.knape

Sat 28th Sep 2019 11:51

thanks Don
for commenting on
"Hearts As Good As Hers"
a sad story
but true
a gentle heart afflicted.

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Don Matthews

Sat 28th Sep 2019 11:29

Ah yes, the big Magic is the important one.

Thalia is important uppercase Muse Thalia not the ordinary lowercase common garden variety muse. She insisted (actually kicked up a bit of a fuss. Give me my proper status she said. I obliged. Gotta keep the woman happy). Yep, she's pure Magic......

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Dominic James

Sat 28th Sep 2019 11:04

Numbers still rising on the petition, Take the link above, Great work by Arji and the community at large.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 28th Sep 2019 10:57

Thanks for reading Don, I appreciate your comments. Well, there is small magic and big Magic, it's just about putting the emphasis on it.

Now, is your Muse the one who resides in your mind, Thalia for instance? whilst other forms of muse arrive from external stimuli?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 28th Sep 2019 10:53

Thank You for your kind comments Fred, I do appreciate it. That is a really interesting point about how a different accent can potentially change the flow of poem!

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John Coopey

Sat 28th Sep 2019 09:10

Thanks for the comments, fellas.
Dead right, Brian. Actually it was The Grateful Dead, Don. And you are quite right, Kev; it should be a no-score draw.

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keith jeffries

Sat 28th Sep 2019 08:45

Don,

A good poem. I share the addiction as it is a source of creativity.
Thnaks for this.

Keith

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kJ Walker

Sat 28th Sep 2019 08:06

Just one (possible) correction, if I may be so bold. Surely as both you and your intended victim are both still standing that makes it a no-score draw.

Never heard the phrase get-go, but you can bet I'll start using it from now on.

Cheers Kevin

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Don Matthews

Sat 28th Sep 2019 08:05

Sheesh Randy this is real heavy stuff
It's doin' my poor old head in
Starin' at roots sends me silly?
I'll try it, you say mescalin?.....


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kJ Walker

Sat 28th Sep 2019 07:49

Keep letting your mind wander, there are far worse things to be addicted to.

Cheers Kevin

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Don Matthews

Sat 28th Sep 2019 07:46

Thankyou all for your comments and likes. You'll be pleased I don't carry my phone when dancing. Can't hear it ring above the band....?

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kJ Walker

Sat 28th Sep 2019 07:44

Thanks for that Branwell. A brilliant lesson well presented. Really enjoyed the humour.
Cheers Kevin

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Don Matthews

Sat 28th Sep 2019 05:43

I thankyou dear Bran for this lesson
Zoology I flunked bottom class
I thought bisons evolved from them oysters
I failed, and can't fathom why no pass?

Maybe you shoulda taught me Bran.....

Oh? .. It was rams that evolved from oysters?...

Well bugga me....?

(Book me in for lesson 2)

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 28th Sep 2019 05:37

Love that!!?

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 28th Sep 2019 05:36

Ha ha, no they haven't done that it's true. ?

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Don Matthews

Sat 28th Sep 2019 00:21

MC's comment is particularly important

Let us be free to disagree
Let us be brave enough to say so,

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 23:59

A choice piece Ruth. The rhyming and rhythm was excellent. I'm assuming you did the lower/uppercase magic on purpose similar to muse/Muse..?...

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Hugh

Fri 27th Sep 2019 23:54

Breaking news

"Prime Minister to be referred to police watchdog,"
Breaking news on the front page of The Guardian blog.
Tied up with a relationship at his time as the London mayor.
To be fair Boris did many good things while he was there.
Is this a politically motivated attack,
Now that in Parliament he is back?
Antagonism is sat next to many M.P.s,
Boris will certainly not feel at ease.
Methinks another referendum will end up remain,
Back in the European Union after a three year strain.

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 23:49

Damn aliens at work again Jason. Ask Ruth. At least they haven't pinched your like button.....?

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 23:45

Clever Brian.....

I assume pic shows road crew going to HOP Stadium for latest concert. Could it be the Dying Breed?......

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Fri 27th Sep 2019 23:21

John - with no music I'm struggling to tie this one to a well known pop song.

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 27th Sep 2019 22:58

Thanks Ruth, sorry it's taken so long to get back to you, for some reason my notifications seem to have been turned off, or there's a technical fault, whatever it is I don't seem to receive any notifications from WOL anymore, my inbox remains empty?
Not sure. Anyway thank you so much for the kind comments.

J. x

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Hugh

Fri 27th Sep 2019 21:33

"Boris Johnson's rhetoric could incite violence," says Amber Rudd
Ex Conservative Home Secretary passionate to flower a remain bud.

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Fred Nicholson

Fri 27th Sep 2019 21:10

Love the melodic flow and message created by your words.
I had to chuckle, after I read the second stanza twice.
Americans and British folk pronounce 'again' different.
You folks pronounce the hard A.
Americans generally do not.
I was married to a Brit.





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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 27th Sep 2019 18:32

Well said Keith, Freedom to be yourself seems in short supply sometimes. Good poem reminding us to Dare Greatly!

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Tom

Fri 27th Sep 2019 18:30

Beautiful and sad.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 27th Sep 2019 18:30

Really enjoyed this Jason, I love empowering poetry. The rhythm really builds you up into feeling you can overcome all the obstacles and negativity. I liked the line
' Their disturbances, the chatter of stereotypical doubt,' .

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Candice Reineke

Fri 27th Sep 2019 18:21

Wonderfully descriptive! I fully appreciate the intricate details in this. Spider webs have always been so fascinating to me. Masterful craftsmanship goes into creating them, and yet, humans notice them most when accidentally walking into them or clearing them out of the way. Your spiders-to-poets comparison is beautiful!

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 27th Sep 2019 17:38

Thanks Don and thanks Rose, I do like to hit a positive note every now and then ?

J. x

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 27th Sep 2019 17:03

And -
Let us be free to disagree
Let us be brave enough to say so, ?

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Hugh

Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:44

I think you need to take charge of our country before it sinks,
Plenty of constructive advice in this verse for Boris methinks.
Hopefully he will read this and widen his views,
Before becoming a dictator and dominating the news.

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Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:44

thanks to people like you Jason we come to happily find that the age of positivity is not dead.


enjoyed the read with a ? and a ?!





Rose ?

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Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:30

and let there always be people like you Keith who think of others instead of themselves.

Lovely piece of, live, and let live.





Rose ?

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:26

I'm looking at my Facebook
Friend, what do I see?
I'm certain she was frumpish
Now curvy she looks, see?

Photoshopped

Wot's that?....?

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Nigel Astell

Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:25

Loose threads of love
seem to be hanging on
a thumb print leads
to needle in haystack.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:14

A hidden secret
of sorrow
waits to be found
finding out
is the key.

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:07

Senroo, my first crack
You can't even spell Aussie
Don't be an arsehole

Gotta start somewhere.......?

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 16:01

Truly spoken.....And some nice rhyming there as well.....

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 15:43

A beautiful and sad one dk. No-one can imagine pain unless they have been through it themselves......

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Emilia Callahan

Fri 27th Sep 2019 13:34

I like the juxtaposition of writing about something so serious, but doing so in a rhyming pattern. Most of this poem actually read to me like a Dr. Seuss book, so it felt playful, even though the subject matter was not. In that sense, it was almost like a song you'd sing to children as a warning to children about Charlie. Great work!

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Emilia Callahan

Fri 27th Sep 2019 13:28

This is such a great poem. It's a sad world we live in. Thank you for sharing!

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keith jeffries

Fri 27th Sep 2019 12:17

d.k.,

A beautifully written poem about bravery, love and concern.
Thank you for this
Keith

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John Marks

Fri 27th Sep 2019 12:12

"Brevity is the soul of wit."

Shakespeare, 'Hamlet'.

Pithy Erin, very pithy! John

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 27th Sep 2019 11:28

The trouble is we don't know where the bus stop is and it's impossible to get a bus pass to board the bus. Well highlighted though Hugh

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 27th Sep 2019 11:12

Keep your phone there
In your hand
While you do
The twist
Write out loud
Another rhyme
But Please Don
Mind your
Wrist ?

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 10:26

I tend to ramble round
(Or is it ramble on?)
Thalia, psycho-logist here
It's just you're mixed up, Don

Phew! was getting worried.....?

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Don Matthews

Fri 27th Sep 2019 08:45

I also don't like stabbing
(In the back I mean)
Like Jason I'm unstable
If poetry be seen.......?

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