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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Nov 2024 16:49

A comic masterpiece, John. Makes your eyes water as well!

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Steve White

Wed 13th Nov 2024 15:28

Thanks Martin, Stephen and John.

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Auracle

Wed 13th Nov 2024 15:09

😋

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TobaniNataiella

Wed 13th Nov 2024 13:48

Thank you Tom M for the like

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Red Brick Keshner

Wed 13th Nov 2024 12:36

Thanks kindly Uilleam O’ Ceallaigh 😊and Tom Merton 😊
🌷🌷

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 13th Nov 2024 10:15

Thanks RBK.
I remember my dad buying fertilizer for our front garden. It was composed of blood and bone. Having walked through a landscape such as you describe makes me ever more mindful of the grim reality of warfare.

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TOM MERTON

Wed 13th Nov 2024 10:07

Such a wonderful heart-warming poem Mr. K and so many beautiful lines.

It takes me back to when I read about the I Irish potato famine
-horrendous!

Kind regards

Tom

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 13th Nov 2024 09:59

I did mean that as a complement Stephen!

Like many of us, I've shed tears over the news of various tragedies, and I don't take kindly to being lectured at by attention-seeking pompous pricks of politicians / celebrities about my not being "silent" and "respectful" enough.

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Mike Bartram

Wed 13th Nov 2024 09:32

Thank you very much for your kind comments, they are really appreciated, My Mum's name was Elizabeth but she was affectionately know as Lil or Lilly (from Lillian her second name)

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John Coopey

Wed 13th Nov 2024 08:06

Marvellous poem, Steve. One of the best I’ve ever read on here. But it begs the question “Would the world have been a better place if Edward VIII with his Nazi sympathies had been on the throne and Chamberlain Prime Minister And War with Germany avoided?”. So should we have just sent Hitler a stern “memo”? As Stephen says, “thought provoking” indeed.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 12th Nov 2024 22:45

😂 A nasaly tour de force J.C! Not to be sniffed at. 👏

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 12th Nov 2024 22:37

Brilliant, as usual, Stephen! There's no getting rid of Trump now, regardless of what the people may, one day, come to realise.
The ego has landed!

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 12th Nov 2024 22:28

I echo Graham's sentiments, but a fantastic thought-provoking poem it is. 👏

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 12th Nov 2024 22:23

Sorry about that, Uilleam! I'll do a happy one next time!
And thanks for the likes everyone 🌷

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Martin Peacock

Tue 12th Nov 2024 19:40

Excellent. Well structured, and the repetition really drives the pathos home.

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Steve White

Tue 12th Nov 2024 18:22

Thanks Greg!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 12th Nov 2024 17:33

Thank you for the comments Rolph, Graham and John, and thanks to everyone who liked this poem.

I think that Biden's instincts are to do things properly (as Obama did before him) and to rise above all Trump's election denial of 2020. If only for his innate decency (but in fact for much more), I believe that Joe Biden will come to be regarded as a great President.

The temptation must have been there, Rolph, but in time the current President's correct behaviour will make Trump look like the oafish fool he is.

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TobaniNataiella

Tue 12th Nov 2024 17:00

Thank you Manish for the like.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 12th Nov 2024 14:50

Beautifully crafted poem, Steve, in the voice of a first world war veteran, it seems to me. I can imagine Sassoon applauding.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 12th Nov 2024 12:27

Many thanks, Antony, for this interview. I was at a Remembrance event on Sunday night involving local poets and a local ceilidh orchestra, and heard a heartfelt poem from a forces veteran who had seen a Liverpudlian comrade killed by 'insurgents' in Aden [now Yemen] in the early 1960s. Just one of the many colonial jobs that British soldiers were called upon to do, dangerous tasks that are now virtually forgotten. British forces left Aden in 1967.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 12th Nov 2024 11:36

Down with virtue-signalling, that's what I say! 😡

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TobaniNataiella

Tue 12th Nov 2024 10:08

Thank you New Shoes and Aisha for the likes

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 12th Nov 2024 08:53

Don't forget the custard!😋

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 12th Nov 2024 08:34

Excellent Ian.
Ah, yes the rhubarb triangle; is that anywhere near Bermuda, where the cheese spread comes from?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 12th Nov 2024 08:29

It's barely eight-thirty am, and I've got tears in my eyes.

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Rolph David

Mon 11th Nov 2024 18:46

Hello Stephen,
Thank you for your renewed compliment on my lines. I also hope that the 74,675,378 people who voted for Trump are in for a rude awakening. They should regret and rue the second they put the wrong cross in the box for a very long time - knowing full well who they were getting involved with.
Have a nice evening,
best regards
Rolph

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Reggie's Ghost

Mon 11th Nov 2024 18:18

Yes Graham, as valid as Steve's poem is it is not for today IMHO.

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John Coopey

Mon 11th Nov 2024 17:16

Echoes of the Obama-Trump transition and comparison of 2017.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 11th Nov 2024 14:13

Just so spot on Stephen!

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Rolph David

Mon 11th Nov 2024 13:01

Wow Stephen,
What an awesome poem about that monster man Trump! Your words are so spot on...he shows with decency, dignity, manners, good behaviour and statesmanship how it can be done in this world, too. I wouldn't have invited him to the White House on Wednesday if I were him. I would have paid him back in kind. And I wouldn't go to his swearing-in either - or at most in disguise.
👍

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 11th Nov 2024 12:52

As Stephen has noted a very well written piece. However my thoughts lie only with those that served and fell who gave us the liberty to criticize and comment as we all do! Let’s remember that.

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R A Porter

Mon 11th Nov 2024 12:32

They were a remarkable generation to whom we owe everything. I live in a little (population around 500) Cheshire village who lost 21 men in WW1 - aged 19-32. Amongst them were two 19 & 21 yr old brothers who were infantry Privates in the local Regiment, killed at The Somme and one (19 yr old) Captain, who died after 6 months’ service.

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Auracle

Mon 11th Nov 2024 11:55

💘Low Lands Live Love, Laugh Love, Love Love, Lead Love, Led Love.

It's Called Liefde! 💘

LoVe Y💘U AlL

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Steve White

Mon 11th Nov 2024 11:11

Cheers Uilleam! The old lie, indeed.

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 11th Nov 2024 11:06

Thanks Graham (Sherwood) §will do§ and thank you Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh § there is too much noise out there, and inside as well, that do not belong. §

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 11th Nov 2024 10:20

100% spot on Steve.
Many of the UK's so-called "Great" and so-called "Good" are currently cheerleaders for genocide. I'll have no more part in allowing myself to be gaslit by such hypocrisy.

To quote Wilfred Owen:

“My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
Pro patria mori.”

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Steve White

Mon 11th Nov 2024 09:55

Thanks Stephen! Watching the service from the Cenotaph on a TV in a Wetherspoons (long story) definitely gave me food for thought.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Nov 2024 09:35

First of all, Steve, this is superby written and rhymed. Care has clearly gone into it. And it tells a deep, inconvenient, truth and just shows what impact a good poem can have: it's ordinary folk who pay the price for war, not the dignitaries who lead the ceremonies.
But you have said that far better than I can.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Nov 2024 09:24

Thanks again for a splendid poem on this (pressing!) issue, Rolph.
One can only hope that disillusion will set in quickly among some of the new Trump voters. But the Democrats have to offer something better.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Nov 2024 08:58

A fantastic read! Thanks a lot, Kevin.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 11th Nov 2024 08:49

This would be a great addition to your profile RBK

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Nov 2024 08:44

A very moving poem for this time of year, JD.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 11th Nov 2024 08:39

Is that the old Man in the Moon up to his tricks again!

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David RL Moore

Mon 11th Nov 2024 08:34

Thanks for all the recent likes to those who sent.

David

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Nov 2024 08:12

I hope not too, John. Thanks for your kind comment.

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David RL Moore

Mon 11th Nov 2024 07:41

Thanks for your reading and comment Stephen, much appreciated.

David

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Tom Doolan

Mon 11th Nov 2024 07:32

Thanks for likes: Red Brick Keshner, New Shoes, Uilleam , Stephen W,David RL Moore &TOM T 👍

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Rolph David

Mon 11th Nov 2024 07:14

Good morning Uilleam,
I am convinced that being democratic, empathetic, trusting and confident is no longer enough to stand up to the evil forces of our world. There are simply too many of them, spread across the entire globe, and we are no longer even a minority. Many people have a penchant for right-wing slogans and posturing. This is shocking and cannot be justified or explained by anything.
Have a good week,
Rolph

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 11th Nov 2024 07:13

Thanks RBK.
"discard the noise that doesn’t speak."
Good advice.

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TobaniNataiella

Mon 11th Nov 2024 02:42

Thank you Auracle for the like.

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