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Stephen Gospage

Tue 25th Oct 2022 16:15

A superbly judged poem, Russell.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 25th Oct 2022 16:14

That's right, Ray. There's no death in a cloud. Perhaps that's what makes them so fascinating (and reassuring) to look at.

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Pete (edbreathe)

Mon 24th Oct 2022 23:11

Thanks
I’m glad you like it

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raypool

Mon 24th Oct 2022 17:29

Thanks for the like Frederick - somebody loves me...

Ray

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Russell Jacklin

Mon 24th Oct 2022 16:19

😙👍

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Reggie's Ghost

Mon 24th Oct 2022 16:00

I can picture them.

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Tom

Mon 24th Oct 2022 15:56

Brilliant, I love this one Stephen.

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Oct 2022 11:56

Simple and effective, Stephen. Who would have thought when this began last Spring that the might of Russia’s military muscle would be bogged down in this upcoming Winter?

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Oct 2022 11:50

Marvellous Imagery on different levels, Stephen. And technically tight too.

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Oct 2022 08:19

Possibly, MC.
Personally, on one level I am sad to see her go. I liked the way her titties jiggled when she walked on stage. I shall miss that.

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John Botterill

Mon 24th Oct 2022 05:17

I will definitely be buying this book Stephen 😀

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kanini Beatrice

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 22:06

I am so glad you understood it so well, corruption is killing most of our countries. It is sad that nothing gets done, it has been a problem, it is a problem, and it will continue being a problem.
Thank you for kind words

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John Botterill

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 18:35

Thanks so much Stephen for your comment and Flyntland, Frederick, Helen, Bethany and K. Lynn for your likes. 😀

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John Botterill

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 18:32

Lovely poem. Life affirming with a splendid denouement.

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Russell Jacklin

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 18:02

The theme is sorrowful but thoroughly recognizable, many places in the world suffer this kind of political apathy many have this kind of corruption, and politicians who care less about those who elected them, veterans who have sacrificed most, are overlooked.
Fraternity or as it is known, the old boys' network is wrong, it has been the way for hundreds of years and there seems no way to stop it.
Great words, loved it

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John Marks

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:26

Thanks Stephen, sometimes reminiscence hurts.

You must have seen great changes since you were a young man," said Winston tentatively. The old man's pale blue eyes moved from the darts board to the bar, and from the bar to the door of the Gents ... "The beer was better," he said finally. "And cheaper! When I was a young man, mild beer - wallop we used to call it - was fourpence a pint. That was before the war, of course." "Which war was that?" said Winston. "It's all wars," said the old man vaguely. He took up his glass, and his shoulders straightened again. "'Ere's wishing you the very best of 'ealth!

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John Marks

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:21

Yes. Sleep rests and resolves.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:20

You're on a roll, John. I wonder what happened to Glenfiddich? I remember drinking some in 1984 (made a change from Victory Gin).

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John Marks

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:18

Sometimes we have to fight - to stop bullying, abuse.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:17

A lovely poem, Helène.

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John Marks

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:17

Colors can both reflect mood and influence mood.

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John Marks

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:15

Sleep is a sort of solace.

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John Marks

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:14

Letting go is never easy.

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John Marks

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:12

an invitation from eternity it certainly is. You write so well!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 17:00

I love the way this points up the horror and futility of war in such a heroic style.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 16:54

Great poem, John. It took me a while to understand the cult of Bowie; I think 'The Man who fell to Earth' did it. An unforgettable film.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 16:50

A lovely description of a happy moment, John.

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raypool

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 16:02

Thanks for the likes Frederick and Holden as always.

Stephen, I think you're right there. He has displayed a human side throughout!

I fear that Milligan was far too leftwing to have ascended the traditional throne, more likely the outside toilet variety. I met him once at a function; he came to the stage during my dinner set and said: "do you know how insensitive you are?" A brief and ambiguous moment.

Ray

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Tom

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 14:39

Thank you Stephen and Flyntland, very kind of you.

And thanks to Frederick, Stephen, K Lynn and Holden for reading this one and the 'likes'. Much appreciated.

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<Deleted User> (33540)

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 13:22

Thank you for liking * Grandma's golden hours*

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Sun 23rd Oct 2022 13:20

Thank you for liking * Grandma's golden hours*

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Sun 23rd Oct 2022 13:15

Thank you so much for liking *Age of dilapidation*

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Flyntland

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 09:20

This is a disturbing poem and reminds me of the trains packed with young men being swept off to 'The Front'.
The rhythm backs up the image.

The last two lines are so chilling, 'they' also wanted the right to live.


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julie callaghan

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 07:21

Thanks for the likes and kind comments.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 01:22

A Royal who was a fan of The Goons and could stand being
referred to as a "snivelling bastard" by the creator of that radio
lunacy is quite likely to display a rueful smile at this gentle
referral to a well-known personal feature. But don't bank on
a knighthood!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 01:12

The words are sharp and right to the point - like that of a
bayonet! An excellent prelude to the coming November
when Remembrance Day will also have added resonance
for the absence of our late Queen, its guardian over so many
occasions at the Cenotaph.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 00:54

Words worth anyone's time. We owe our fellow inhabitants
the care that allows a life as free from pain as possible - and an exit to match, whether human or otherwise. .

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Oct 2022 00:48

Shucks, Miss Bethany - your pa displays all the discernment of a
refined gentleman! 😌

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John Marks

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 22:56

If you feel safe in the area you’re working in, you’re not working in the right area. Bowie

Ah, but a man's reach should exceed his grasp, Or what's a heaven for?” ― Robert Browning, Men and Women

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Sat 22nd Oct 2022 20:57

To quote my invisible Stetson and gun wearing/slinging * Paw*...
tham thar the mighty finest 'thang since sliced bread Ma'am! (me)

it's a wonder we aren't missing quite a few rooftiles with all the six-guns going off on telly day in day out! 😅

his fave cowboy film black bart type character-Jack Palance
his fave cowboy film goodie' ( sorry Mr Wayne ) Clint Eastwood

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Sat 22nd Oct 2022 20:30

The * Thin white Duke * took some beating, that's for sure John

cool poem!

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 17:15

Just got my copy. As well as being a great read, it's for a worthy cause.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 17:13

He may not, Ray. I was going to say that it was a sideways look at the new monarch, but you can't see them so well from there.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 17:09

My thanks to Frederick, Steve, Stephen, Holden, Julie, Flyntland and Helène for liking this one. I have always been fascinated by remote communities and how their attitudes develop.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 15:55

"Victim syndrome" eh? Just because we think they're out to get
us doesn't mean they're not! 😐

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Flyntland

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 12:38

My grateful thanks to Fred,Stephan A. and K Lynn for reading and for your likes.
Also to Tom, Stephan G. and Holden for you much appreciated and encouraging comments.

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Steve Higgins

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 11:12

Thanks Stephen, much appreciated
Steve

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ANMOL KANG

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 11:05

😀

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Flyntland

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 09:41

gentle, sensitive and loving - what a beautiful poem.

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Clare

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 08:09

Stephen Gospage, John Botterill, Thankyou for your kind comments, they much appreciated. Thanks to everyone for reading and liking.

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