Thanks for your comment on my latest Andy. Hope you are well. xx

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Andy, would love to read that rude limerick of yours sometime. And who was the famous co-author? Thanks for commenting on our haiku! x

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Thanks again Andy! How ya feeling now? x

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hiya, ta for commenting, glad it made ya smile. Get well soon x

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Hi Andy
Within this poem, ‘World’s Turn’ I am trying visualising the mystery and ever changing beauty of femininity comparing it to the daily splendour of sunset utilising her clothing in metaphor.

Thank you for taking the time to read my work and comment

Thanks again

Gus xx

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thanks A

Sx

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Hi Andy,
Thank you for your lovely comments on 'All that you want...'
The last line was included for the effect that I wanted to give it ; )

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thanks for your comments on to the queen of carrot flowers. I can see the lyrical / musical possibilities but am musically inept! lol. maybe you could fashion something! Win :-)

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Aw thanks Andy :D x

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Hi Andy

I enjoyed your poem and your bio. I spent a few years in Manchester as a little girl as my Dad was from there.

If you're sometimes down in London I help out at two venues called Camden and Lumen where they have regular open mics. You can find them on Facebook.

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Hi Andy, thanks for comment on 'for the good times' :-)

as for performing it? well...maybe one day.x

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Cheers Andy, it was daunting but I was definitely on cloud 27 all day Friday ;) x

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Hi Andy & thanks for your comments on my untitled piece. I made it to the Tudor last night & read, great experience though my bones were rattling!
Met Jefferama & will try to get across to Bolton sometime :) x

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Hi Andy,

You're a seriously good bloke, good thoughtful feedback and yes I did indeed perform that poem in Bolton at the wol event.

P.S

Please let me know when you have music gigs and I will try to get along. Distance an all that, but would hope to make one or two.

My Best- mate

Chris

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thanks Andy :-)

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Thanks for commenting, as ever, Andy. Hope to see you soon.

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Hi Andy, Also we both seem to have posted a blog with curtains in the title! Win ;-)

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Hi There, To read 'Jesus Unplugged, An explanation' please visit the blog entry. Thx. Win x

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yello!
And thank you once more for your comments on 'i disappear'.
I'm glad i finally managed to nail that ever elusive perfect ending for you, i feel you're a bit of a stickler for them lol

RE magazines, i really wouldn't know who or how lol plus i'm not sure i'm ready for open rejection ha ha xx

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Hi Andy, Thx for looking and commenting on Behind Glass Curtains. You mention the line 'Her reflection was more beautiful than her truth could confess' Not sure what it means exactly, but I thought it was quite smooth, Something to do with her etherial qualities I think. Win x

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HI Andy thanks for the feedback. Yes, I seem to be doing some different things at the moment, about time maybe!

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thank you Andy x

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Thank you so much Andy for your lovely comments on
'Languid running wild'... very much appreciated.

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Cheers Andy, I see what you mean about the first two stanzas, they could work switched - interesting :) x

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Hi Andy, thankyou for your comments. x

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Thanks for your generous comments on The Fairies, Andy.

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Thanks for your comment Andy (on Pit Pony). As you know I'm a weak and sickly person old before my time due to my hard life up chimneys and down pits so any kindness is always welcome.

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Andy . More on your recent ghazal comments. They made me think and I have started a related discussion thread -

http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/newsgroupview.php?NewsThreadsID=1150

Win

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Hi there,

As always, thank you for reading and commenting. Re the songwriting, not likely lol x

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Hi andy, than ks for reading my Ghazals... 'the north sea rolls'I think this is the best bit too, (if it has a best bit) and yet they are all really simple words in that line (maybe that tells us something eh. Also like long words too .lol ,Win X

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Hi Andy, thanks for your comments on "Empty" the repeated no could be seen as a refusal of the fact as well as the fact...

Didn't make it to Wigan, some upset occurred which needed sorting - things don't happen when there's nothing planned! Ah well, Bolton isn't too far, used to live in Farnworth a moon or two ago, I'll check out the details, thanks x

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'mornin Andy

Thank you so much for your wonderful and well thought through comments’;

‘Wave over Wave’ is very simply about a man who’s long life and eventual death was always within a kiss and a wish of the sea.

Once again I thank you for reading and taking the time to comment on my work.

Yes I hope to see you soon, perhaps Butterflies on Sunday ?

Gus xx

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I'm glad Below the Belt raised a smile Andy and appreciate your taking time out to let me know

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Hi Andy, dropping pins eh?!
Sounds eerie and awesome at the same time. I'd like to perform some of my poetry but I'm not ready yet. Plan on going to the Tudor House tomorrow to listen, which will be my first time at a reading...

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Hi Andy and thanks for commenting on "Second Skin" incidentally, did you think it from a female perspective in spite of my comment to the contrary or before it? xXx

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So good you commented twice :-)
(just joking) thanks for comment on my childhood poem. No chance of ever winning a comp but it's worth a shot just for the exercise ;-)

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Cheers for your comments on East Budleigh, Andy. I hope the tone isn't just sad, but is also about how we view the past, and yearn to preserve it in a certain way. I was interested that you linked it to the wartime death of your uncle in Burma. My father survived - lucky for me - after three years as a prisoner of the Japanese in Thailand. Greg

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Your comments on Sargasso Remembered much appreciated Andy and thank you for taking time to say so

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Andy it is so good to hear from you again and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work.

Yes I too love the paintings of Gus Jonsson, who I understand is exhibiting his work later this year. He says he wants to paint me in the nude but I have insisted that he keeps his clothes on.... what ever next.

Many thanks once again.

Augusta xx

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Thanks Andy - nice when something written creates a physical response, let's me know I'm on the right track ;) x

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Hi There, thanks for commenting on the Offal poem. It has undergone major surgery! (see blog entry)

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Thx for the feedback Andy- appreciated.

The lip service comment...yea it is one of those where you can open your mouth and heart simultaneously and wish you had done neither.

Chris

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Hi Andy,

Thank you for reading and commenting - yet again!
I seem to have been unable to write anything for a looong time, i think maybe this was a one off!!

:-)

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hi andy, just wanted to thank you for the title suggestion. to be honest i rarely give any thought to titles, i just tend to write whatever comes into my head and if it comes with a title then ....
i am flattered, and a little surprised that anyone would bother to read my stuff in the first instance , never mind re - read!
kath x

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hiya Andy
thanks for your comments and suggestions on 'perfect Line'
Happy 2011 X

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Hi Andy
Thanks for your comment about my poem "Autumn Comes" funnily enough when we had a frost prior to the snowfall I began a piece about Winter... so watch this space perhaps! ;) xXx

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Thank you for your encouragement with 'The Truce' - not sure I could cope with a menage a troise as Anton suggests too dodgy by half

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Thank you for commenting on 'feeding the Birds' Andy - much appreciated

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Hi Andy, Re Hulme idea. ok thats great. A good subject worthy of a retrospective project, I will cogitate and see what happens. Keep me posted. Win X

yes that is my current email address (winstonplowes@googlemail.com)

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Hi Andy, Rachel has been asking if I am part of your Hulme project? Well obviously not as I didn't know about it but if you want me to TRY and write something then I will. If not also fine. I reckon John Darwin could deliver on this too, Win X

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