The Fountain House
I wrote this after visiting the Concrete Menagerie in Branxton, Northumberland. I also made a filmpoem of this for the Read our Lips Filmpoem competiton 2014. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iKF0BH4b64g
My fingers trace the indentations pressed
By previous hands; the clefts and dents
Formed in cement by an ageing man
For (as some would think him) an imperfect son
For whom, they...
Monday 17th March 2014 5:01 pm
North Shields
Dirty waves filter
Through undulant flotsam -
Sticks, half full plastic bottles,
Yellowed polystyrene nestling
In the grip of blue rubber glove;
Dissolving toilet roll garnish.
Refuse sack in a slick of wind
Takes leap of faith from
Inside council dustbin.
Ends its brief rebellion in the
Wheel arch of a passing bus.
February 2014
Monday 17th March 2014 8:27 am
Lovebird
Fly, little blackbird: deny the smallness
Of your trap while you can.
I will miss the eloquent waving
Of those spindle wrists, the
Evensong played on flighty fingers.
While you are gone I will dabble down,
Dredge for baited crumbs with which
I hope to swell your hollow craw.
It cannot be so simple as to
Wish for you the bluest skies –
Instead, skirt swift the iso...
Monday 17th March 2014 8:25 am
Small Stones March 2014
These small stones were a Mindful Writing Challenge set in Januaryby https://www.facebook.com/writingourwayhome - the task was to write a small something every day - something you saw, something you read, heard, felt....It takes some discipline to put something down everysingle day, but as you get used to it you find yourself taking more notice of everything, and thinking oh! Small stone! I found ...
Monday 17th March 2014 8:24 am
February Small Stones
These small stones were a Mindful Writing Challenge set in Januaryby https://www.facebook.com/writingourwayhome - the task was to write a small something every day - something you saw, something you read, heard, felt....It takes some discipline to put something down everysingle day, but as you get used to it you find yourself taking more notice of everything, and thinking oh! Small stone! I found ...
Monday 17th March 2014 8:21 am
Biscuit Baby
This is another of my illustrated story poems. It is a sweet story of a little biscuit that comes to life. We have a few daytrips that always seem to place the little fellow in peril, so in the end he has to leave. Sad and sweet at the same time. All work copyrighted Jane Burn.
Tuesday 21st January 2014 2:09 pm
Review of Dominic Berry - Writing for Children and Family Audiences Workshop
Sunday 19th January, 2014, Commercial Union House, Pilgrim Street, Newcastle Upon Tyne. What a brilliant way to spend a morning!
Dominic Berry’s Writing for Children and Family Audiences workshop was amazing. Dominic is engagingly enthusiastic and led a series of timed ‘stream of consciousness’ writing exercises followed by a thirty second reading of the first lines of the work we had managed t...
Tuesday 21st January 2014 1:55 pm
Clever Fox
This is a book I have written and illustrated that both children and adults can enjoy. It is a homage to my childhood love, Dr Seus and is a celebration of rhyme. The central character helps us understand how wonderful it is to have even one friend that understands and accepts us - that there can be light in the loneliness. I will post a few excerpts. All work copyrighted Jane Burn.
Tuesday 21st January 2014 1:40 pm
There’s a Dog Loose in the Woods
There’s a Dog Loose in the Woods
Foxhound splinters from the baying mass of legs,
Escapes quick beneath the mist of exhaled dregs –
Down the plough, through copse, he runs about a mile,
Heading straight up the track with a dewlap smile.
Happy little fellow you don’t know your place
And I’m sad at the gaiety in your face.
Thick mud smothers your black and tan belly
Lea...
Friday 17th January 2014 8:29 am
January Mindful Writing Challenge - Small Stones
These small stones were a Mindful Writing Challenge set in Januaryby https://www.facebook.com/writingourwayhome - the task was to write a small something every day - something you saw, something you read, heard, felt....It takes some discipline to put something down everysingle day, but as you get used to it you find yourself taking more notice of everything, and thinking oh! Small stone! Here are...
Wednesday 8th January 2014 8:40 pm
Blackpool, October
Blackpool, October
Horizontal icy rain
Driving into my face like
Spiked, javelin needles
Forcing me to close my eyes;
Icy rigor mortis cheeks.
Silvered ring of carriage horse,
Steel edged feet on sea-front road
Cut through the cacophony -
Jumbled electrical din
Of slot machine Alcatraz.
Noisome smells of overused,
Unclean burger fat deposits -
...
Monday 6th January 2014 3:49 pm
Baby’s Breath
Baby’s Breath
Arrive, slithering -
Bloodied moisture, screaming,
Chord still unbroken.
Skin on skin, red stains.
Silent promises, heartbeats -
Indigo eyes open.
Monday 6th January 2014 3:47 pm
Beloved Child
Beloved Child
Beloved child I watch you sleep
As you chase dreams with every breath.
Flickering eyelids, slumber deep -
Beloved child I watch you sleep.
I see a flit of worry creep
Across your brow; the briefest sweep.
Beloved child I watch you sleep
As you chase dreams with every breath.
Monday 6th January 2014 3:43 pm
Cambois Beach
Cambois Beach
He walks ten yards ahead,
Orbiting at a safe distance;
Ash coloured gravel pings
Under our boots on cliff top path.
My little boy, scoring
Lines in sand with scraps of driftwood -
He runs, bare feet skim
Beige expanse of flat as he speeds.
Steeply inclined walkway
Leading down to the beach is scuffed
With traipsed up, dried out sand;
Sal...
Monday 6th January 2014 3:42 pm
Clam Cyclops
Clam Cyclops
Elusive quahog I -
Willowy seaweed nestling;
Salt stained ocean truffle.
Empty, beach strewn
Twice shelled ghost,
Smashed beneath the
Blade beaked, gutter
Artillery of mercurial,
Screechy, leather- footed
Seagull rodomontade.
I will abscond
This abalone bed;
Curl my ego instead
In the palm of
A moon tide angel.
Remain upwind of
T...
Monday 6th January 2014 3:13 pm
After the Rain
After the Rain
Jewelled spheres of tiny plumpness
Dangle transparently on a
Cotton thread delicate framework.
Bulbous reflections throb and pulse
On convex skins, as trembling wind
Disrupts their precarious cling
Onto flimsy, gossamer grass.
Swimming dewy grapes, at the mercy
Of speedily nibbling sheep;
Beware of careless hikers boot!
Monday 6th January 2014 3:07 pm
Dearly Beloved
Dearly Beloved
Beaten, rough edged ingot;
Golden handcuff, yellow snare,
Hammered, polished, altar’ed
Carat circle, bright to wear.
Antidote to singledom,
Eternal tawny band.
Shield from infidelity shines
From finger four, left hand.
Glowing, hallmarked woman,
Displays hand on satin lap –
Spinster friends admiring
Precious Chinese finger trap.
Tarnished trace of decades
Whic...
Sunday 5th January 2014 6:45 pm
Deepsea
Deepsea
Angler
Ugly, slack jawed
It navigates the black
Inspires snag tooth benthic horror
Mantrap
Sunday 5th January 2014 6:44 pm
Downward Spiral
Downward Spiral
A lonesome circling bird
Pitched against thermals; straining, lifting.
Wing tips - jagged outlines
Conjuring air, magician’s fingers.
Down, spiralling in its
Decreasing predatory circle
Glass bead eye seeks movement -
Perceptible, smothered deep within
Snagged undergrowth tangles.
Swansdown mouse freezes, still
As death; betrayed by trembling w...
Sunday 5th January 2014 6:05 pm
Driving on a Hot Day
Driving on a Hot Day
Liquid mercury heat sheen licks
Over sizzling, crested road humps.
Driving, squint-eyed against the sun,
Surprised how shimmering mirage
Fosters forgotten memories
Of extra value days dealt out
In August daylight double length.
A teasing dare would cause me to
Kick off my cheap seaside flip-flops;
Walk barefoot on scalding tarmac,
Wincing ...
Sunday 5th January 2014 6:02 pm
Thirty Days
Thirty Days
Thirty days hath September
Thirty in April and June;
Thirty days (slightly under)
For the orbit of the moon.
Thirty Days is the title
Of a Star Trek episode;
Thirty days of Sudoku
For those good at cracking codes.
Thirty days is the shelf life
Of plastic microwave meals
Thirty days or your money
Back on most consumer deals
Thir...
Sunday 5th January 2014 6:00 pm
Apathy
Apathy
I
Am a
Five-toed sloth
Contemplating
Cobalt sky above.
Deadfall jungle floor spreads
In reverse pamoramic
Beneath my great hairy backside.
Procrastinating dirt collects in
Cracks on the surface of this sleeping skin;
As ivory talons take root, thrust
Deep into petrifying branch.
Kangaroo pouch life.
Safe.
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:57 pm
Lighting Up
Lighting Up
Well hello, old friend! I see you peeping
There among the rummaged handbag debris
Of a fellow addicts life. One moment
Till a practised hand caresses your length,
Inflaming a red tipped longing for
Pleasures passed over, dearly remembered.
I hungrily observe your smoking trail
As you casually travel upward -
A rendezvous of ready puckered mouth
And white, chalk- s...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:53 pm
Old Lady Jumpers
Old Lady Jumpers
Elderly neighbour
Shuffles by, on the arm of her daughter.
Lovely day, she says.
Can’t complain, I reply – I could of course,
But I don’t because
This simple platitude crinkles up her
Beatific smile.
Husband died last year; nice man –thick glasses.
Always said hello,
Arms folded on garden gate, tea in hand.
She goes on. Despite
Severed bra...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:48 pm
Embracing Someone Unexpected
Embracing Someone Unexpected
I thought of you as cold - a flint-eyed
Statue;
Marble, securely tied up, buttoned
Down tight.
Yet you came at me, bolt from the black,
Arms out;
Pink circles formed on alabaster
Cheeks, wide
Pupils sparked with overhead lights – dim
Amber.
My head fitted in the gap beneath
Your ear;
Slotted positive and negative
Spaces
...Sunday 5th January 2014 5:47 pm
Granddad was a Bastard
Granddad was a Bastard
I never had a granddad
As he died when I was four –
Leftover uniform shows
He did fight in but didn’t
Die in the Second World War.
I only saw one photo -
Old, grey man, extremely thin -
Sharp cheekbones, scaffold beneath
Black Bakelite spectacles;
Brylcreemed hair, tightly stretched skin.
Veiny claws clutch a grandchild –
My...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:43 pm
Grey Horse's Back
Grey Horse's Back
Glassy smooth, granite mercury landscape;
Outlined muscle shaded under slate skin.
Silver, silken tail hair threading through the
Smoking, clouded winds. Fragile, cinereal
Spine outlined against a gunmetal sky.
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:41 pm
Hook a Duck Prize
Hook a Duck Prize
Fairground goldfish dead
Belly up in plastic tank.
I must have failed to
Effectively proffer your
Neon spun candy floss diet
Reflections baste your
Stagnant cellophane prison.
Asphyxiating
Suspended in dead water
I picked you out of pity.
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:38 pm
How Nice to See the Sun!
How Nice to See the Sun!
Welcome, solar stranger,
Lesser spotted unsung hero.
Shy, retiring, grass dappler;
Bone warming, mood lifting
Windscreen blinder.
Inspirer of mid-morning
Inpromtu lawnmowing
(Leading to inevitable
Barbecue aspirations).
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:37 pm
Heels
Heels
I used to dance in high heels
And dangle them from barstools -
One toe angled downwards , sole
Hooked on slippery footrest;
The other pivoting round
My satin ankle, rubbing
Discreetly - a slight signal.
Walking slowly, I relished
Each pavement rap of spiked heel
That punctuated my speech
With premeditated clicks.
I even wore them to bed
Just once, ...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:35 pm
I Will Remember
I Will Remember
White neck, strong;
Silken strands falling
Between intelligent ears.
Eye flecked with gold
Reflecting the depth
Of your soul, of your heart
Encased in sturdy chest.
Light feathered legs
That carried you faithfully
By my side through the years.
You are snow,
You are springtime rain;
You are morning light
And evenings fall.
I am you, ...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:34 pm
Inclement Weather
Inclement Weather
Hail.
Ice pellet
Marbles crash;
Glassy gunshots
Vehemently crack.
Staccato ricochet -
Freak spring squall catches
Housewife’s laundry unawares.
Angry pellets spew,
Leave timid blossom bruised, petals smashed;
Half melted evidence of flash attack.
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:32 pm
Junction Guardians
Junction Guardians
Two wintry trees, bleak sentinels -
Sharp and upward poking.
Scratchy, knuckled digits
Forming thorny, crosshatch arch
Above a pot-holed road.
Leafless pennants unfurl
Against a frozen, silver sky
As disruptive winds encourage
An agitated click of twig on twig.
Stooping, twisted spines
Creak beneath scaly skins.
White lined ribbon se...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:30 pm
Merboy in Red Swim Shorts
Merboy in Red Swim Shorts
Hair, wafting light as sea lichen
Frames your ceiling bound gaze.
Surface tension strives to reunite
Waters broken by your smiling,
Half submerged, moon reflection face.
Gently I float you, cradling my hands
Under the delicate skin of your back
For as long as you will let me.
A passing swimmers careless wave
Floods your nose, so you kick...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:28 pm
Notes to a Potential Lover
Notes to a Potential Lover
You might seek my perfume;
Trail your nostrils, breath hot,
Up the skin of my arm -
You crave my softer scents,
But smell just hollow bone.
I am a well-thumbed book-
Much borrowed, much returned;
Desire to embrace my
Solidity, but grasp
Only a vanished form.
You cannot claim my heart,
Savaged, removed, dripping;
Cold ...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:25 pm
Not Quite Spring
Not Quite Spring
Muddied country lane etched with
Criss-cross wagon tyre prints –
Horses stamp alongside fence,
Steam, hot from fluted nostrils.
Strands of windblown hay, straggled
Hair cast from a balding blonde
Blend crisply with my footfalls.
Nosy peek into a cottage window
Reveals smart row of china ladies.
Corrugated iron collapsed in rusty
Hedgerow lair ...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:23 pm
Oh, Deer
Oh, Deer
Two policemen with cars, lights still flashing -
More used to tending human disaster
Stand non-plussed, observing scene of torment.
A bulging Four by Four, frozen mid-skid;
Still warm, abandoned guiltily askew
Partially conceals the horrified shame
Of two forty-something blondes, smartly dressed.
One crosses her arms over thumping chest,
The other bark...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:22 pm
Miles
Miles
Shine,
Steel lines -
Electric
Miles, passport to
The beating heart of
A city - to the veins,
The tributaries. Connect
With our places, past and present.
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:15 pm
Travel On
Travel On
Inhale and close eyes for tunnels
Open up wide, into the light.
Rumbling metronome intoning,
Journey measured by turning steel.
Face, reflection bleeding into
Whisked scenery snatches – I am
Unsure of my destination
But I travel on regardless.
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:13 pm
Potato Pickers
Potato Pickers
Rattling wagon,
Glutted with earthy potatoes -
Overspill rolls,
Elliptically in gutter.
Freshly plucked, damp,
Dirtily bouncing and jumbled,
Scenting the air
With warm, muddily fragranced notes.
Rose tinted, I drift
Into childhood retrospection.
My brother and me,
Early, waiting at the roads end –
Outfit of old clothes,
Boots; sandwiche...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:11 pm
Random Bursts
Random Bursts
Eyeball assaulting yellow, lurid miles
Of neon oilseed rape, its nostril rich,
Thick layered, honey mead smell cloys my throat,
Overwhelms the bird filled hedgerows dozing
And bee-rich beneath this scented blanket.
Summer trees, plump with leafy lusciousness
Offer up their random bursts of blossom;
Tooth-brush flicked white paint dots,
Daintily spatter...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:10 pm
Emily Loved Him
Emily Loved Him
Every time that bloody child finds
Some bit of old crap on the street,
It’s “Bagpuss! Big Fat Hairy Catpuss!”
As if I’m some giant pink oracle –
Who the hell told her that I have
The answer to everything anyway?
I’m perfectly happy dozing in my
Sepia toned world, but she keeps
Thrusting me into colour.
Wake up! Wake up! For pity’s sake,
Wouldn’...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:03 pm
River at Wylam
River at Wylam
Paused amid trail of cars on bridge,
Engine tamely thrums in neutral;
Atmosphere drained, heavy with threat
After torrential mornings rain.
Swollen, bulging mocha water
Gnashes with vicious abandon
At stone piers, trapped by foaming murk.
Shuddering, I count the seconds
Till I am planted back on less
Gravity defying surface.
Footpath drowns as g...
Sunday 5th January 2014 5:01 pm
Septuagenarian Cyclists
Septuagenarian Cyclists
Surfing the undulating B roads;
Tyres slicing surface dust
Like a skaters blade through frosted ice,
A trio of old men -
Septuagenarian cyclists
Pump determinedly on.
Fleshless bottoms struggle to fill the
Still baggy lycra shorts
That on younger men would be bulging.
Chewy, tightly balled calves
Encased beneath turkey skin flex with
...Sunday 5th January 2014 4:59 pm
Seasonal Hinterland
Seasonal Hinterland
Diamond drops of light
Fallen from leftover orange sunrise
Glitter the petals
Of doodled flower on red car bonnet;
Where childish finger
Traced rivulets in chilly, condensed dew
That will dry later,
Loopy petals fading out to nothing.
Sun, mounted half mast,
Squatting at pupil shrivelling level
Mourns the passing of
Bright earl...
Sunday 5th January 2014 4:56 pm
Swan Flies Over Roundabout
Swan Flies Over Roundabout
Early drag to work unsettled by
Sudden appearance of huge swan.
White battleship, flying, cumbersome;
Milky arrow neck outstretched
With single-minded aim, causing
Momentary pause in traffic.
Golden beak tip purposefully parts
Eight A.M. exhaust fume fug
As drivers stare nonplussedly at
This random feathered phantom.
Brief ...
Sunday 5th January 2014 9:13 am
We are a Circle
We are a Circle
We are a circle
Unbroken
A ring of laughter
Chiming loud
Above warm teacups
No sugar
For some, others need
Sweetening
Heads close discussing
Failed romance
Dissecting last night
A shit day
The problem with kids
We can say
We are having a
Period
Without anyone
Walking out
Trying to burn us
As a witch
A barely raised...
Sunday 5th January 2014 9:12 am
Roadkill Bingo
Road-kill Bingo
Grey squirrel flattened mid-flight, a
Moth-eaten grandmas stole
Pressed to the ground: a pavement pie.
Rabbit – gaudy, crimson
Fly feast entrails winding round; a
Luau garland garnish.
Badger corpse, drunk in the gutter
Grey belly uppermost,
Paws hooked over; gurning
Mask smiling in expectation
Of a tummy tickle.
Stuffed wood pigeon, too fat...
Sunday 5th January 2014 9:11 am
Weirdly Localised Patch of Fog
Weirdly Localised Patch of Fog
Blistering temperatures fall
Under evenings chill spell -
Causing cardigan shouldering
Shivers; brisk arm rubbing.
I am disconcerted by a
Small but sure beginning;
This grim, weirdly localised patch
Of fog has settled in
A dusky valley, dipped between
The grassy meeting of
Two lovingly adjoining fields.
Imperceptibly, its
S...
Sunday 5th January 2014 9:09 am
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