Hey Phillip love the poems x

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Hey Phillip!
Thanks for your comment on my poem "A rhyming idea." I 'm not the biggest fan of rhyme, probably because it's hard to do it and do it well! But the few times that I manage to write in good rhyme I really enjoy it and indeed I did with my "rhyming idea". It looks like you have a gift for rhyming though! Kudos! Write on!

Mae

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I love your poetry, it is so beautiful! Look forward to reading more of your work.

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Thanks for your feedback on "Naked" Phillip. There is quite a back story with this one and it came straight from the heart. I look forward to discovering your work now too.?

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I love your stuff. I usually just free-write whatever comes out of my head and then clean it up afterward. I never know what style I will use - sometimes have too many to choose from and have to try on a few. Ha, I write as tho I know something! I just know that I used to do what you do and only within the past month or started doing it this way and it is much easier than trying to construct the poem as you write.

I especially love Breakdown..

Thank you for your kind comments. They are appreciated more than you can know!

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Hello Phillip,


I wanted to say thank you so much for the nice comment on my blog it's much appreciated and so far from what I'm reading from your post and poetry his outstanding and I really enjoyed reading it and I'm going to read some more but thank you for so much for the nice comments on my blog and I really liked BREAK-DOWN a BREAK-UP. Beautifully written!


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Hi Phillip
Just came across your poem "Fishing For Fella's" which caught my eye because the title's very similar to one of mine called "Fishing for Poets".
My poem is autobiographical and I was the victim but I like your poem because you show the situation from another angle.
Thankyou for posting it up, it was good to read.

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Hi Phillip Thankyou for you kind comments my poems are real life stories I have never read a book in my life never used other people's work or used their ideas my life has been very complicated so their is much more to come out in my poems keep smiling you have a lovely smile must be all those children love Wendy.

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Hi Phillip, thank you for stopping by and commenting on my poems. I'm glad you enjoyed them and I am grateful to receive your feedback. Emer?

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goodnight Phillip,and thanks again.



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Thank you for commenting and also for your advice. That is just the most recent one i have written but i have a folder full that i have gathered over the years! Abit nervous to put them on here though lol... :)

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Hi Phillip, thanks for commenting on Who Would? I love it when people relate to what I write, and am really pleased that it inspired you x

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Thanks Phillip, for taking the time to read my stuff and for your kind comments. I really enjoyed reading the two poems above - they sound fabulous read aloud and 'Fishing for fellas' brought a smile to my face...looking forward to having a read of some more :)

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There are no neat guidelines to this kind of 'prosetry' except identifying a condensed moment, first by seeing the whole and then its parts. It follows the exact 'formula' for short story development: plot; place setting; sequencing; character development; imagery; interesting ending, using all the normal methods but in minimum words. So the crux is vocabulary at your finger tips, and the poetry skills that come into play with the writing of good poetry in any genre. Rhythm is vital.


This 'style' requires great discipline to put the maximum effect possible into a nutshell of content.

IMO, a sense of humour is a requisite.

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Hi Phillip many thanx for your comments much appreciated and having read your profile I feel it is praise indeed ty I love your poems too I sometimes find it difficult finding my way around here so please excuse my not getting back to you on the right thread :)

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Thank you for reading and commenting so well on my poem, Philip. Good punning/double meanings in Fishing for Fellas - made me smile!

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Hi Phillip, thanks for the time you took to look at my poems.
Hazel

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Hi Phillip

thanks for your comment - yes you are right its about the beginning of a love affair, just as its starting, with the anticipation and wariness of the path it is going to take...

Kate

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Hello Phillip. Thanks for the comments on As It Is. Much appreciated. It's really just an ironic commentary on a religious text.Is that a Wigan kit you're wearing? Can we have your manager?
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Hi Philip, welcome to WOL and thank you so much for your kind comments on Impossibility. I think it is always interesting for a writer to hear others' thoughts and interpretations on their poems, so thanks again.
I just read your profile and poems, and am much impressed, I like "Fishing for Fellas". Keep writing and posting!

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Hi Philip, many thanks for the time taken to comment, lots of detail and really appreciated. It's good to see another perspective. Interesting to hear your thoughts on the third verse - to me my key line is to see a return in a leaving.

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Hi Phillip, really enjoyed reading your profile and sample poems. I especially like the first poem, the way it flows and the truth about it. Look forward to reading more.

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Hi Phillip - a warm welcome to WOL. Glad you are taking part in the site. I agree with Yvonne about having a bit of a gap between poems on the blogs though, as the newest poem you put on there will seem to hide the previous one. Good luck with all your projects - you sound a busy bee :)

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I look forward to your next poem but wait a couple of days or more before putting your next one up as this gives more members time to look at the current one. And as I mentioned earlier commenting on other's poems means they may look at yours and respond.

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thanks.....i did actually have it down in journal as that.....just written it out wrong on here......

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Hi Phillip you have an interesting format here. It actually sounds good read aloud althought the metre jumps around.I'd prefer line 4 to scan as : 'Explain it's not him' as for me this places the emphasis on the word not in an easier flow especially as the next line places the stress on 'You'

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