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<Deleted User> (6315)

Sun 24th Jul 2011 23:52

Hiya Jeff thanks for the comment left on my write Sandcastles..much appreciated...gonna try to get further afield to some other venues :)

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Amy Houston

Sat 23rd Jul 2011 11:49

Hi Jeff. Thank you for your comments mate. x

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Wed 29th Jun 2011 20:26

Hi sexy - love your just another dream.. hope you are been good with my andy xxx

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Andy N

Thu 9th Jun 2011 22:43

thanks for the comments over 'escape' and 'dark shadows', jeff... the least said about your comment on fb about 'summer is here' however the better - lol..

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Sun 5th Jun 2011 16:39

hi jeff ive just signed up on recommendation of a very good friend of yours - guess who - profile up soonxxxx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 16th Apr 2011 20:52

Hello, Jeff!
My English is not better than yours and can't be. There are some things in the language that I know for sure, but... I still make a lot of grammar mistakes. My oral speech is just horrible because I have no practice. My written speech is a little bit better as I have more time to think. But..., anyway... Could you do me a favor and have a look at my site?
http://www.learninglanguagesl.jimdo.com
It sometimes seems to me that I am like a computer - translate from Russian into English, but...at the same time my poems I write in English when I think in English.
With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Sun 27th Mar 2011 12:49

Hi Jeff, thanks for your comments on 'No Job For A Man' - something had to come out of watching the entire re-run of 'When The Boat Comes In', hehe.

Best wishes, Dave

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Rachael Dunn

Tue 22nd Mar 2011 19:40

hey Jeff :)
thanks for your comment on 'vintage Heart'
yes would love to join you at one of your nights soon :) x x x

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Thu 17th Mar 2011 08:51

Hello Jeff, thanks for your comments on "Gallery"

With regard to why we want to touch I think it is basically because we are sensual creatures, personally for me, the more senses I can get involved in an experience the better I like it.

Certainly in education if you hear, see & do something you remember more of it, rather than just read about something or if you're told something.

Anyway, that's my theory on why we want to touch :) x

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Sat 12th Feb 2011 08:27

Cheers Jeff & thanks for coming over to introduce yourself, there'll be a few more friendly faces to focus on next time I'm on that big stage ;) I was on cloud 27 all day Friday, kept grinning & feeling proud of myself, overall a great experience, good to hear other people too and meet people I'd read & enjoyed on here.
Have a fantastic weekend, see you soon,
Petrova.
xXx

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Greg Freeman

Sat 12th Feb 2011 07:41

Hi Jeff. Can't believe you were at that Bolton v Chelsea match - surely you were too young?! I'm talking about the 1976-77 season when both teams were pushing for promotion. I do remember it being fairly lively at the ground - those were the days! I was living in York at the time and I recall even more clearly driving across on the M62, and how beautiful the snow on the tops looked in the January sunshine

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Dave Bradley

Mon 17th Jan 2011 08:50

What a good evening at Bolton yesterday. Well done and thanks, Jeff.

PS. Can't make the next one - darn!

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Andy N

Tue 11th Jan 2011 08:13

glad you like 'Percy'... Its one of those pieces which I was a little nervous about sharing it originally as I thought would think it was too slushy or something.. clearly not and that means a lot tome..

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Andy N

Wed 8th Dec 2010 08:19

cheers for the comment over the other side, jeff.. means a lot as always and i look forward to hearing you strum something out for this..

on your winter poem of course, it is only a suggestion but i am going to print this out in a bit - see if the poem could be split between the pair of us on friday!

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Chris Co

Mon 6th Dec 2010 12:29

Thx for the feedback on the England poem Jeff- appreciated.

Chris

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Rachael Dunn

Sun 5th Dec 2010 16:44

Hiya Jeff,
thank you kindly for your lovely comments on my poems :) much appreciated, will have to try and get to one of your guitar and verse nights, bring my acoustic guitar, and my poems and my voice

Rach x

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Laura Taylor

Fri 5th Nov 2010 10:30

Alright Jeff

What a great night last night! I totally enjoyed it, and was buzzing like mad afterwards :D Everyone's pieces were just dandy, and I would love to come along to the next one and do another bit if you'll have me :)

Catchya soon chuck, Laura x

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Elaine Booth

Sun 26th Sep 2010 22:53

Hi Jeff, Many thanks for your comments on my poems. And many more thanks for all your help and encouragement. You are a true champion of poetry and a champion person to know!

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Lynn Dye

Tue 31st Aug 2010 10:54

Hi Jeff, thank you for your kind comment and really good suggestion on "The Mean Genie". Just about to change it, thanks. Lynn X

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 1st Aug 2010 10:23

Thank you Jeff for reading my poems and for your kind comment. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Lynn Dye

Sat 31st Jul 2010 14:04

Hi Jeff, thank you so much for kind comments on "Seduction". Glad you liked it. Lynn x

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Greg Freeman

Fri 9th Jul 2010 07:58

Thanks for commenting on the Woolies poems, Jeff. But don't worry about binge drinking and the Broken Society: that nice Mr Cameron and his friend Mr Clegg will fix all that.

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 7th Jul 2010 12:46



Hi Jeffo

I still have nights like that... and being sober and stayin on soft drinks don't help...in fact it's worse ... least ways when ur pissed you think you sound like Casanova... when you're sober you realise you don't even speak Italian.....??? what am I goin on about..

Thanks again C U soon!!

Gus

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winston plowes

Wed 7th Jul 2010 10:26

Jeff, thanks for commenting on Whitehaven. glad you liked it. win x

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Lynn Dye

Sun 4th Jul 2010 17:47

Hi Jeff,
Thank you for your kind comments on "Flesh".
Just been reading your samples and latest blogs, all good stuff, especially like "Glastonbury - no more". Cheers, Lynn x

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Thu 10th Jun 2010 23:36

there's only one Jeffarama! :)

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Tue 23rd Mar 2010 14:44

Darkly is a very special Lady... she lives in my head...and slips out of me at night .. then lays with me in the dark...

Augusta
xx

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garside

Sun 28th Feb 2010 12:35

Hi Jeff

thanks for reading and making comment

steve x

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<Deleted User> (6292)

Wed 17th Feb 2010 11:08

Hello Jeff
Many thanks you so much for your continuing support and critique of my work, I refer to your comments on the 'Loney Edge Of Time' Iam so very lucky to have such a devoted fan.
Augusta xx

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Rachel McGladdery

Sun 24th Jan 2010 15:49

Thanks for the comments Jeff...I know what you mean about the choppy lines in Stockings, I've been doing much shorter lines of late so it might get a revision at some point.....or I could start wearing ankle socks! :)
Cheers
Rachel
x

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winston plowes

Sun 27th Dec 2009 23:03

Hi Jeff - Posted on Chris' 'Nearly Love' poem -
Well 'Serial' can be 2 syllables, or rather emphasised parts (Can't remember the technical term) Yes I also like the extra HAS for the reason Jeff says and you could have this and keep the sylable count in my version (just). Win

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Chris Dawson

Sun 27th Dec 2009 04:22

Thanks for your comments Jeff, glad you liked it.
I've had a very good Christmas thanks, hope you have too.
All the best,
Cx

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Sat 26th Dec 2009 13:41

Cheers Jeff and all the best for you and yours next year!

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Greg Freeman

Sun 20th Dec 2009 09:38

Jeff, thanks very much for liking Don't Look Away. It's one of what I would call my postcard poems, ones I work away on in the hotel room in the early morning when my wife is still asleep. I think it has a lot in common with your atmospheric poem Napoli, particuarly looking at the picture. I also like The Journey of Your Life, because I'm a sucker for trains and stations. They just provide moments of such great drama, of life-changing movements, of reunion and separation. Best wishes, Greg

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steve mellor

Sat 19th Dec 2009 15:15

Hi Jeff
Had been intending coming over for Sunday, but having seen the early start; the guest spot; the quiz; the music, and thinking there'll be a large turnout, with open-mic in first half only, I'll be staying at home.
Have a good time

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kealan coady

Sat 19th Dec 2009 12:51

Thanks for the comment Jeff, not sure if it would get into the octagon but sure all I can do is try. Yeah I think I might keep goin with it and see what happens.

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kealan coady

Mon 14th Dec 2009 13:18

Thanks man i wrote 'at least we tried' when i was about 15, some of my worst work but i thought i'd just put it up anyway because it was harrassing me.

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Thu 10th Dec 2009 19:05

Good Evening Jeff
I do hope you are warmer now after reading Voyeur.

it seemed to make quite a few of the older geration a little hot under the collar, but hopefully no trouble for you.

Thank you once again for your encouragement and comment
Augusta x

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winston plowes

Wed 9th Dec 2009 11:24

Hi Jeff
Thanks for your comments on Ghazal (her dad).
Snap! Mine is also 9. Win x

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jane wilcock

Tue 8th Dec 2009 21:12

Ah, yes, very romantic. Thanks for taking the time to read my verse. I know that mood in yours, waiting in a busy station and yet really theres only two people there, wonderfully atmospheric. Best, Jane

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Fri 4th Dec 2009 18:10

Good evening Jeff

I would just like to say how inspiring I found your 3 sample poems. I have to confess to sharing the views in the Glastonbury one particularly. At the point when freedom from the machine became a weekend going TO the machine, like you, I chose the radio. Some great truths in your poems.

not perturbed at all!


Joseph

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Isobel

Sun 29th Nov 2009 21:21

Thanks for your comment on my poem Jeff - the voice is tuning itself up for Christmas and so looking forward to the next Tudor!

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garside

Tue 17th Nov 2009 05:46

Hi Jeff,

thanks for the comment on 'incoming'

steve x

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Sat 14th Nov 2009 07:01

Hi Geoff - Thanks for your kind comments on 'Love Passes' - much appreciated. Hopefully next year I will be mobile again and get along to some of your events. Best wishes

Dave

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Gus Jonsson

Thu 12th Nov 2009 18:26

Thanks as ever Jeff re your remarks re Shirley's Bedroom...


Your a star... but ya know that already!

Gus

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Thu 12th Nov 2009 09:09

Hi Jeff,
sorry again I wasn't in Hebden for your fundraiser gig, I hope it went well. Lately I have to keep going back north to keep some appointments. deb x

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Andy Williamson

Wed 11th Nov 2009 22:24

Hi Jeff
Thanks for your comments.

I live where the Glastonbury Festival takes place, and so I understand what you mean by the vivid picture you paint of the festival site. Maybe you're just 'trench' weary. Hope you decide to make it next year.

Take care

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Dave Carr

Tue 10th Nov 2009 22:08

Hi Jeff,
Thanks for comment on my stuff. I like your Glastonbury poem and Cemetary Gates. Also enjoyed your JCC recital last month at the Tudor.

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Rachel Bond

Fri 6th Nov 2009 13:15

Thanks for your comments on Crow's nest.
I think every poet's soul drowns somewhat in staring at the sea.
Good you felt the sense of yearning for gentler more expansive shores.
looking forward to see you do your stuff at hebden x

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Joshua Van-Cook

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 22:59

Yeah, I saw Control. It's quite hard to believe that someone so talented would be driven to such extremes. Thanks for your comment.

Cheers,

- Josh

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