Wed 30th Dec 2020 02:29
thanks for your comment on the "Stumpy" poem.
It is very kind of you.
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Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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Philipos
Tue 29th Dec 2020 11:33
Hi Aisha and thanks for commenting on the Rusting Barge.
It gave me an opportunity of visiting your site and I enjoyed the sincerity detailed in your work.
I hope we will be seeing much more from your electronic pen.
Blessings.
P
Comment is about Aisha Suleman (poet profile)
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Trevor,
Thanks for your comments on 28 December. They are always a source of encouragement when it comes from a poet such as yourself.
Happy New Year
Keith
Comment is about trevor homer (poet profile)
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Happy holidays Kimberly! Thanks for stopping by. I wish you a year of abundant energy and prolific writing! ?
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
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Mon 28th Dec 2020 17:36
that's me all right.
signed,
Troublesome Lump
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (28781)
Sun 27th Dec 2020 11:47
I like the way you write. A brief documentation of experiences.?
Comment is about Trev the Road Poet (poet profile)
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Sun 27th Dec 2020 10:52
thank you Graham-
(reduced now to a Roschart Blot.)
Comment is about Graham Sherwood (poet profile)
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? Thankyou so much Mark! I am going to head on over to your page and enjoy your work!
Comment is about Erin Nicole (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13740)
Sat 26th Dec 2020 07:54
Merry Christmas and thanks for dropping by and the messages your poetry is beautiful, just like you, lovely lady x
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
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Happy holidays to you, V. Hope you are doing well and staying safe. ?
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
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Thu 24th Dec 2020 12:42
where oh where
has M.C. gone?
Merry Christmas!!
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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Tue 22nd Dec 2020 04:16
great response!
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Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
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@Suspended.
The suspense is killing me
And it seems to be killing you
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
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Mon 21st Dec 2020 02:15
Come back often
I "love" your comment.
wink..
Comment is about julie callaghan (poet profile)
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Mon 21st Dec 2020 02:09
Where there are squirrels
there are nuts & seeds,
Squirrels drive you nuts
most would agree,
They invade your attic
your property
soon squirreled away
they never leave!
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Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
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Sun 20th Dec 2020 01:14
Viva Aviva!
(also a paper towel)
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Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
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Sun 20th Dec 2020 01:12
hardly brilliant-
more like
dull.
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Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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Welcome to WOL, where lots word nerds and outcasts huddle to share poetic stories of despair and triumph. Write on! ~ V
Comment is about Salemrising666 (poet profile)
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Fri 18th Dec 2020 03:28
If calories are your concern
then do not overeat
it's best to have a poem instead
their norishment can't be beat,
and while a steady diet of
may leave you feeling draineed
a daily poem is never a loss
and always yours to gain.
?
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
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Welcome to WOL Agam from one hopeless romantic to another! I’m looking forward to reading your poetry. You’re off to a great start with Fireflies. Write on!
Comment is about agam rawat (poet profile)
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Philipos
Wed 16th Dec 2020 13:10
Hugely funny in a droll sort of way and that was only the first part of the read.
Must catch up on the rest later as I have to head into town.
Am still chuckling.
Reminded me of the Stanley Holloway Monologues, which, if you haven't re-read recently, you ought to.
Good luck with the writing.
P.
Comment is about kJ Walker (poet profile)
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Woahhhh! Your first submission was fiyah(fire)! It was deep, intellectual, & a well put together life story that many can relate to. Keep up the good work & may the Universe bless.
Comment is about Erin Nicole (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13740)
Mon 14th Dec 2020 18:53
Tangoed is not a local expression. Its from the advert 'you've been Tangoed' tango is a fizzy drink.
As you well know, when you've wrestled with someone whose fake tanned it can get all over you too. Also when meeting certain men one feels as if one is in the advert and one has been Tangoed. I'm sure very posh women from Poshland do not know what such things are as being good at counting ones money from Daddies bank they have never known what it is like to be Tangoed or to drink Tango. There endeth the lesson on being Tangoed.
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
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Thank you for your comment!! I really appreciated it : )
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<Deleted User> (13740)
Sun 13th Dec 2020 04:44
I wish I was an elfen queen , spreading light across the world and speaking in magical tongues and hiding hobbits in my kingdom xx
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
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Tatted Heart is amazing and I feel like Black Bodies needs to see the world. You are a beautiful writer and your work is definitely special ?
Comment is about M3RK (poet profile)
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Sat 12th Dec 2020 12:10
Marijuana huh?
I thought it was a maple leaf.
haha
what do I know?
?
(I enjoy reading my poetry as well.)
Comment is about J.D. Bardo (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (13740)
Sat 12th Dec 2020 10:14
I don't know if they have ornaments in the orient , you are funny.
I have lots of ornaments , too many .
I've never been to the orient but I want to go to Paris but I need a pair of strong shoulders to take me , not a pair of socks.
Hope you are well.
I still think you need a hat as well.
Hats are very useful for keeping your ears warm xxx
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
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I enjoy your poetry D. thanks for reading mine. I am from Toledo Ohio, that is a photo of a marijuana leaf, if you are wondering.
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
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Fri 11th Dec 2020 21:10
thanks for reading "Christmas Ornaments".
Are you Canadian?
Comment is about J.D. Bardo (poet profile)
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Fri 11th Dec 2020 21:09
A family of 10???
Wow.
Did she survive?
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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Michael,
As a regular contributor to WOL this is the first time I have encountered your profile and examples of your work. I should be more attentive. Please let us see more of your work as the two examples posted display the work of a talented poet.
Thank you
Keith
Comment is about 'Michael Martinez' (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (23732)
Fri 11th Dec 2020 05:41
Your very Welcome and Yes!!!! What A Blessing We Have. To God be the Glory ?
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
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Hi Paul.
Thank you for the warm welcome. Dope is a cooler way of saying "cool" lol
Comment is about Alexia Supreme (poet profile)
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Thank you Tom, yes I did listen to the audio and I thoroughly enjoyed it, I haven't been posting regularly here but certainly glad to be back, i will be looking out for your audios!
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<Deleted User> (17799)
Thu 10th Dec 2020 22:02
A profound poet, I enjoy reading your entries and would like to share my gratitude for all the likes and comments you have made on my poems.
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Welcome to the virtual world of poets Jezzalee! I’m looking forward to reading your poetry. ?
Comment is about jezzalee (poet profile)
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Thu 10th Dec 2020 13:10
This chaotic world we live in
Oh beautiful chaotic world
Do you have a plan?
Do you hear us scream?
Because you're all over the place
Do you ever slow down the pace?
That might be the best you can do
Is everything I hear about you true?
Your reputation ain't good in the millenial minds
Can you blame em?
We just don't understand you
Do this, do that, fuck us over after all those tries
We're trying to save you
At least
I am
That ain't a scam
I want the best for you remember that
Just be there for me, that's all I ask
Love you much, don't let that be in vein
Comment is about Anne Nieborg (poet profile)
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Thu 10th Dec 2020 13:04
I think I'm losing my mind
Constant anxiousness fucks me up
Not knowing what I want is what I find
When I look inside my mind
Like a library trying to find the chapter
Where this comes from
Where did it begin? where is the source?
Where did life take this course?
Is it me? Did I not foresee? How this came to be. How can I be free? I ask thee.
I think I'm losing my mind
Anxiety haunts me at night
But not only at night also during the day
To others I do not know what to say
I am faking my every move and laughter, love and happiness doesn't feel real
My brain is on fire, that's how I feel
Depression became my friend
Picked me up as happiness left
I felt sadness and lonelyness coming closer to me
At least I'm not really alons, that's what I see
My old friends came around, came back
But confidence I lack
Because what if I only make them up
Ah there's guilt, I'm in luck
I think I'm losing my mind
Comment is about Anne Nieborg (poet profile)
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Hi Xoanxo, thank you for reading Renee By A Thread. I'm pleased you enjoyed. Did you have a listen to the audio? I've been enjoying your work, I see you've been posting for a few years but somehow I've only just spotted you... Looking forward to reading (and hearing) more of your stuff. Tom.
Comment is about Xoanxo (poet profile)
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Wed 9th Dec 2020 20:44
loved your response
although it was not a response
but apropos for the poem
that had No subject.
Viva Aviva!
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
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Thank you very much Vautaw! Very glad to be back!
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<Deleted User> (14241)
Mon 7th Dec 2020 05:26
Thanks for the feedback! Your thoughts on the poem make it better than I could have ever intended.?
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
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I’m not sure how I missed your postings in prior years, but I’m happy to find you now. I will be enjoying reading and listening to you recite your poetry. What a gift. Thank you for sharing it here with your WOL family. Welcome home!
Comment is about Xoanxo (poet profile)
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Thank you Paul, good to be back, I have been writing lately in Spanish, hence my absence, but now with a with a new poetry project in English...
Comment is about Xoanxo (poet profile)
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Sun 6th Dec 2020 02:51
I had a hard time thinking of it myself! hahaha
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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Sun 6th Dec 2020 02:50
Father Christmas?
What country are you in?
Germany?
Comment is about julie callaghan (poet profile)
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<Deleted User> (28781)
Sat 5th Dec 2020 04:51
Thank you for your suggestion. I honestly write to get things off me. This blog kinda diary. I've made the necessary change. Thank you for reading.
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
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d.knape
Thu 31st Dec 2020 00:47
cute dog!
I am simple
and thus
the simple poem.
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