Fri 25th Sep 2020 11:17
Government by its nature is corrupt
the politicians and bureaucrats get the gravy
the taxpayers get the shaft!
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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I thoroughly enjoyed this thank you. ?
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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Dear Tommy
Thanks for the message. It was a real treat to read the poem, and to come back and read it again.
Steve
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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Welcome to WOL Michael. I’m looking forward to reading your poetry. Nice debut poem for the hopeless romantics among us. Write on! ❤️
Comment is about michael scott applewhite (poet profile)
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Thank you Julie for your kind comments regarding Her Last Dance, much appreciated !
Comment is about julie callaghan (poet profile)
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Cheers Stephen for your like of "Broken Masonry"
Tommy ?
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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Hello Salfordman,
Welcome to WOL. I enjoyed your poems and look forward to more. I am also 72 and started to write poetry about ten years ago. This site is a good place to post your poems and receive comments. I wish you well.
Keith
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Tue 22nd Sep 2020 02:23
If you need replacement parts
go online
Livers are on sale this week!
?
Comment is about Tim Ellis (poet profile)
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Tue 22nd Sep 2020 02:22
Holy Terrors
is an old expression here
now we have terrorists
who are not holy.
Comment is about Tom (poet profile)
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Hello Shehariah,
After reading through your poems I felt compelled to leave a comment here. I would just like to say that there are only two other pieces of work that has touched me the way they have...Tracy Chapman's "Remember the Tinman" and Andrew Solomon's description of depression in the "Noonday Demon".
They are eloquent and has such clarity. It is as though you have unknotted my every thought and emotion and rolled the yarn into a perfectly formed sphere. I feel and relate to every word.
Thank you!?
(I am sorry for all you have had to endure)
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Sun 20th Sep 2020 00:25
"LOO ROLL ON ICE"
I thought that was a Chinese dish.
hahaha
(now I get it.)
?
Comment is about Trevor Alexander (poet profile)
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Hi, just like to thank you for liking my poems & welcoming me to the wonderful world of WOL! Encouragement is only given by those with a selfless heart, so thanks x
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
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It's a Brit concept. The loo roll (toilet paper) on ice is for the inevitable outcome of eating lashings of chillies...
"with lashings of chillies
and loo roll on ice"...
what does this mean?
Is it a Brit expression
or something you took
from a highway billboard
or a recipe book?
?
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
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Sat 19th Sep 2020 08:48
"with lashings of chillies
and loo roll on ice"...
what does this mean?
Is it a Brit expression
or something you took
from a highway billboard
or a recipe book?
?
Comment is about Trevor Alexander (poet profile)
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Thank you Vautaw. Looking forward to reading your stuff too!
Comment is about Stephen W Atkinson (poet profile)
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Welcome to WOL Stephen. I’m looking forward to reading your poetry. Write on!
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Kevin T.S. Tan
Thu 17th Sep 2020 22:54
Hey! I just finished reading all your poems (except for the Hindi ones). It's really worthwhile. Wish I could write about women like that. Or maybe I can, I'm just too afraid to post it. Anyway, nice to have you around here at Write Out Loud (WOL). Cheers
Comment is about Neilkanth (poet profile)
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Wed 16th Sep 2020 23:15
good for your mom.
i am glad she did so well.
also glad...
you shared her story!
?
Comment is about julie callaghan (poet profile)
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Wed 16th Sep 2020 07:54
Guys just sharing, I've found this interesting! Check it out! http://twolinespoetry.com/
Comment is about Mirza Sharafat Hussain Beigh (poet profile)
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Tue 15th Sep 2020 17:52
At this stage
our talents fade-
what's left is me
and my old age.
?
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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Tue 15th Sep 2020 17:50
thanks for your comment
on my poem.
one leads to another
there is no end to them.?
Comment is about Emer Ní Chorra (poet profile)
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Not really complaining but I've just scrolled down past several million other comments or reviews of your work. If you are able to answer, you are a genius. To write is a gift.
To engage takes work.
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
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Mon 14th Sep 2020 08:23
Breathing is optional.
I choose it because
I want to see what
the next poem will be.
?
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
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Sun 13th Sep 2020 01:53
check your mail every day
there may be something important
like this news or
a summons for jury duty!
?
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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Sun 13th Sep 2020 01:51
thank you julie callaghan for wishing me well.
well...that's about it.
Nothing more can be said.
Comment is about julie callaghan (poet profile)
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Sun 13th Sep 2020 01:49
doing fine, now that I'm home
the hospital was a death trap.
haha
Comment is about Tom (poet profile)
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Too modest to put a link to the wonderful interview you did with Write Out Loud recently, Shaun? Then I'll just put it here https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=104638
Comment is about Shaun Fallows (poet profile)
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It was my pleasure, Robert. I really enjoyed it.
Steve
Comment is about Stephen Gospage (poet profile)
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When my other sister returned from hospital care I sent her my
tune "Home Again Rag" - an upbeat "welcome back home".
Just a thought to keep your spirits up in the fight against the invader!
.
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
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Sat 12th Sep 2020 11:10
finally back home.
feeling better.
will write more
as I progress.
thanks for your concern.
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Robert Haigh
Fri 11th Sep 2020 20:57
Thank you, Stephen, for reading and liking my poem, "The Man Inside My Head." Much appreciated.
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Robert Haigh
Fri 11th Sep 2020 08:45
Thank you, Vautaw, for your welcome to WOL message. I've read your sample poem, which I find inventive and engaging. I'll be back soon to read more of your work.
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
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HI there dk - just found your note of Tuesday 8th September about
"surgery tomorrow" (today) - so I hope this finds you having returned
safe and sound from the procedure and a suitable rest thereafter.
Onwards and upwards! ???
MC
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
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Trevor, sorry for splattering so many comments across your poems this morning. Well, actually, I'm not sorry. It was great to read them all, and I kept looking for the next one! Please keep writing with such skill and empathy. Your heart's in so many of the right places.
Comment is about trevor homer (poet profile)
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Wed 9th Sep 2020 09:35
what do you do with your songs when you have written them
Salfordman.
Comment is about Redhood (poet profile)
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Tue 8th Sep 2020 23:27
Surgery tomorrow.
Not sure when I'll be back.
but then again,
you may need a break!
haha
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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Kevin T.S. Tan
Tue 8th Sep 2020 22:19
you have a very gentle soul. glad you're here
Comment is about Eric Berard (poet profile)
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Mon 7th Sep 2020 23:12
I imagined that poem.
imagine that!
Comment is about Trevor Alexander (poet profile)
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Mon 7th Sep 2020 23:11
well said.
In fact you said it
better than I.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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Mon 7th Sep 2020 23:10
something real
sparks imagination
it is not created out of thin air
and history cannot be invented
or changed as it is today.
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
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Mon 7th Sep 2020 01:15
thanks for dipping in.
Are you kin to
Bob Hope?
Comment is about Rich (poet profile)
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Welcome Dan! Thanks for sharing your gift with us. You are among friends. Write on!
Comment is about Dan Holtan (poet profile)
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One of my favourites so far. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
Thank you so much for sharing. I feel enriched by it.
Comment is about Rose Condo (poet profile)
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Hello Vautaw, thanks for welcoming me to WOL. I am really enjoying the experience as well as reading your poems so far.
I appreciate your encouragement to write on and welcome any other comments/advice you may have to give in future.
So glad you can relate to my poems...I kind of get transfixed on a theme until I have exhausted its resources.
It is my fear that as a result my poems could get monotonous/mundane...but such is my style
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
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Welcome to Write Out Loud, Sally. Glad that you managed to find your way in!
Comment is about Sally Clearwater (poet profile)
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Thanks so much for your lovely comment Flavia and welcome to WriteOutLoud. "The pot of my emotions are stirred / And you are the culprit..." I love that. ?
I'll have a read through the rest of your stuff shortly! Tom.
Comment is about Flavia Gordon (poet profile)
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Thank you for liking my poem " A client's Woe" Vautaw and adding me to your favourites.
I am sincerely flattered and dare to assume that it's no easy feat.
I look forward to reading your poems.
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
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Fri 4th Sep 2020 03:21
They want us to become nameless and subservient
so they can control us-
we shut down
we wear masks
we give up our jobs and businesses
Baa Baa Bah
we are now complacent sheep.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
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Welcome the WOL family Flavia! I’m looking forward to reading more of your poetry. I can already relate. ? Love, passion, desire... our undressed vulnerabilities, makes the most compelling poems. Write on!
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Greg Freeman
Sat 26th Sep 2020 08:40
Welcome, Dee. Great to hear your work at Write Out Loud Wigan recently. All the best, Greg
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