nice, i like it, reads very well. thanks

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HI Derek, these are very nice poem. thanks

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the pic fits the poem very well, my really long comment went to this poem and pic. I have this pic, good job

Comment is about Getting Old - A Poem (blog)

I went to KFC then back to me flat to watch Sky till me brain melted and I fell asleep! Haha! But strangley, whilst doing so I did stroke my chin (covering it in chip grease) and discuss the architecture of my living room 'mmm, what an interesting 1970's fire place...'

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Hi Gem

Welcome to the sane and sensible world of Malpoetry. On return from Bordelleaux, Pam and I went to an absurdly expensive and pretentious restaurant where we had about 8 courses of tiny pieces of food and froth, then we went to York to visit our granddaughter at Uni where we stayed in a smarty pants hotel with yet another restaurant meal. Drove through glorious English countryside to the Lake District and another flash Hotel, Dinner in a swanky restaurant and then drove home. Never stroked my chin once and hardly ever commented on the architecture and paintings.

Retired Chinny Winny.

Revolutionary working class poet.

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

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ah now doesn't it feel better to admit you're a chinny winny after all?!

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OK Dave... I need more poems of yours to read!!! takr care clarissa

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Dave, Go Jack Go is very funny, I enjoyed it very much and think I understand it. you have a sharp mind, would not want to debate you ever! thanks clarissa

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I think its a wonderful poem, seems you have been watching the same people that I have! great job wonderful poem keep up the fab work! thanks

Comment is about Shaun Fallows (poet profile)

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very nice ideas, I like the poem very much, its too bad the world is going to shit, all we can hope in is Gods love for humans. thanks

Comment is about Dr T. Ashok Chakravarthy, Litt.D (poet profile)

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Thanks Val, there's a update on my biog age, glad you enjoyed it.

Dave

Comment is about Hovis in Wonderland (blog)

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I enjoyed your poems very much, thanks

Comment is about Valerie Cook (poet profile)

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thats a very interesting way to write a poem, I enjoyed it. thanks

Comment is about Paul Harris RIP 1946 to 2010 (poet profile)

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theye are really very nice poems, thanks

Comment is about Carolina de la Cruz (poet profile)

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I love this, your so good!

Comment is about Kimberly Dark (poet profile)

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Peeeteerr,

Where will I find the lyrics to your poems ? Great night at Click Clack last night.

Christine aka Betty

Comment is about My life in the launderette (blog)

Thanks for your comments, what a nice suprise that was! :)
Deep Down is a beautiful (if tragic) song and I really enjoyed hearing you read it, but next time will you sing?!

Comment is about Darren Whitehead (poet profile)

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I love these.

Comment is about MzMIlly (poet profile)

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Especially like the first two. I like intense poetry - you are a writer after my own heart.

Comment is about Richard Britton (poet profile)

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Why thanks kind folk! It's great to be here!

I'll go and view your showcase profiles if I may...

Comment is about Stef Portersmith (poet profile)

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Hi Stef, great to see you on WOL. I really enjoyed it at Turton Tower. Great poems, by the way!

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Hi Malcolm

Many thanks for the Facebook add. I've not really sussed it properly yet - had to sign up to view something. As soon as I'm sorted I'll do the honours. Cheers

Tony

Comment is about Pleasure (blog)

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Love these poems. I heard you perform Dirty Normans and the "When I was five I wore dungarees" and I think they are brilliant.

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Congratulations, well done John!

Comment is about Many Years Ago (article)

I thought you did rather well at th'Octagon!
Well Done.
Paul

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Hi Val,

Good to see you are enjoying the scene. I look forward to hearing some more poems from you. Would liked to have attended Bolton Octagon to see everyone. You say you felt something wrong as you read a new poem, don't worry - you are not alone, I think we all go through it, you will find the words......Pete

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Hiya Darren.
I saw and heard you perform 'Deep Down' at the Howcroft. Under normal circumstances I tend to shy away from rhyming couplets, but the intensity is such that it's hard not to feel the emotion within your words.
If it's rhyme that you enjoy with your poetry, have you tried using enjambment as a technique? Sometimes it allows the author a little more room for manoeuvre with their choice of words. Instead of searching for a rhyme that isn't really appropriate, although that is not the case with what I've read above.
Enjoyable to read. Nice One.

Comment is about Darren Whitehead (poet profile)

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Hi Lisa
Hey, chill, Sis. You know the world is just perfect as it is. It doesn't need changing, and it doesn't need poetry; but, if it did, it would need yours.
The world just needs to... Bee.
Julian

Comment is about lisa b (poet profile)

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I love the idea of poetry bombs. Presumably with several megatons of TLC?
Great poetry Daniel. thaks for posting here.
Julian

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

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Possibly Shaun's best performance to date, word-perfect, sharply observed and confidently delivered. Arguably the best performance of the night.

Good luck on the creative writing course at Bolton University, Shaun.

Comment is about Shaun Fallows storms it at the Tudor House, Wigan September 2007 (photo)

Have a wonderful weekend at Turton Tower -- hope the weather stays dry and the people arrive in their hundreds and thousands (now they sound like cake sprinkles, don't they?). May the Friends of Turton Tower have their coffers loaded and their support boosted. Hooray! Good luck and a merry time to all the stellar poets and musicians you've assembled, too (of which you are an exemplary example, Stellar Stef).

Comment is about Stef Portersmith (poet profile)

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Hi mate, welcome to WOL, really enjoying the poems, not got round to listening to the audio sample yet but its on my "To-do" list!
All the best

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

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yes indeed those fingers look spooooky! but i'm looking at the face! its the face!

Comment is about Peter Crompton gives it some wellie at the Thirsty Scholar, Manchester July 2007 (photo)

scary eyes, Darren!

Comment is about Darren Thomas makes a scintillating Debut at the Tudor House, Wigan September 2007 (photo)

Ditto Gordon! Your recent performance at Wigan that included the line, "prescribed a course of monologues instead..." absolutely brilliant.
Power to the pimple!

Comment is about Gordon Zola (poet profile)

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I am not partial to lower-case compositirtions, but in this case I make an exception. Alan is a poet of profoundity and takes his craft seriously. These samples are wonderful poems that desrve a wide audience that will understand what poetry is.

Comment is about Thommie Gillow (poet profile)

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I like this a lot. The stanza arrangement is lovely, allowing the poem to flow ceasellessly. The narration gives the poem its universiality allowing the arguement to remain understated.

Yes, the theme of loss of something precious, is inescapable and though Freda's empathy with the theme is a factor (the main?), I do feel that reading a poem should not require an 'understanding'. With the greatest respect to Freda and other readers, to chose a poem one 'relates' to diminishes that work by excluding all those readers who do not sdhare the expereience.

Whilst any topic can make a poem, including personal experience, then the poem, once in the public domain, should be there for everyone and not those who empathise with the poet.

One poerm, for example, that I find morally reprehensible, is 'Daddy' by Silvia Plath. That she uses the Holocaust to measure her own relationship with her fther is, for me, disgraceful. But 'Daddy' is one of the greatest poems ever written. It goes without saying that the form is so well adhered to and yet, no matter my objections, the theme is a universal one of human relations.

In that sense, irrespective of the theme of 'DARLINGTON: We Little Know You will Die….', this is a really wonderful poem. Both in form and its language use.

Comment is about DARLINGTON: We Little Know You will Die…. (article)

Thanks Moxy. They're unsorted now that I've been in them.

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

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Hi Steven, Welcome to the wonderful world of WOL, hope you feel at home here.
much love and laughter to you and yours.
xxx

Comment is about Steven Waling (poet profile)

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Have a superb holiday in France among the assorted vinyards. It is also my birthday tomorrow and I shall be having some sort of a treat, too. I hope. Bon Voyage!

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

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Hello Stef! Wonderful poems -- articulate with a beating heart, crystal zoom-lens observation, and witty playfulness. Welcome to WOL!

Comment is about Stef Portersmith (poet profile)

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What I decide tomorrow happens yesterday and I'm not a car bon, I'm a silly cone. I can hold a chewn until I am a swallow.

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

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Yves Klein blue skies over Accrington, the B of the Bandaged/Banged Heads -- both images repeated (or 'bothed") the blurt strange 'Careful' of your work: in between the do and the dids 'something hidden' pops out -- the marvellous!

Comment is about Steven Waling (poet profile)

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Hello, decent poems, I can almost forgive you been from Accrington!
All the best
Cayn

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"The All-purpose Stars". Very clever. Love it. Tell me, do you read palms too.

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Scott I really felt you were the person going through what you wrote your words were so graphic I could hear the noises all arounf as I read your work. You heard every word and felt what your grandfather endured and expressed it magnificently with drama and compassion for his plight. I am confounded by the limitations of the spoken word and would not want to sound phoney in trying to encompass or pretend to know completely your grandfather's world. I came across my uncles grave in Tunisia out of the blue in November 2005 and seeing his name carved in stone as fresh as it had been yesterday and walking amongst the graves of the 3,000 young men most under the age of 25 really brought home the meaning of the words 'There Name Liveth For Evermore'

Comment is about Blind Rage (article)

I would like to say that I believe in the continued existence of the human soul and that solcae love and benediction are present in the afterlife. I don't know where Paul's powerful deslolation originated but would like to say that beautiful flowers grow from our murky existence if we but recognise the fear that causes us pain. One cause of pain is the fear of being known for who we really are and sometimes that can not be a vision of perfection and we fear rejection. I personally believe we elect to live each lifetime to learn certain lessons and will not be judged for our failings. How can we know Love and wisdom if we have not experiences what these things are not.How can we show courage without overcoming obstacles that life sends us. I have had experiences of Western medicine if thats part of what the poem is about and believe it treats the symptoms and not the source of the problem which should be to seek an holistic approach of uniting mind body and spirit each of which are of equal importance. I pray you do not really suffer this agony in your soul. The Don Williams song 'Lay down beside me love me and hide me kiss all the hurting of this world away come to mind as to find a place of refuge is a great blessing in life. Do you know the work of Masaru Emoto and his work fascinating work with water crystals? Ask me sometime? Love and Light to you brother.

Comment is about Doctor Curio (article)

I went to Canal Street earlier this year with my daughter who wished to taste the atmosphere. We had a coffee and a man began a conversation with us and went on to show us the most disgusting text ever. He assumed my daughter and I were a couple. I think Julian has an extensive and powerful word power that he uses in a humourous and sometimes satirical way that gives his work great strengh. He is a good technican in in craft and I congratulate him. I look forward to reading hearing more of his work but actually find hearing work performed by the writer to be more enjoyable.

Comment is about Canal Street (article)

'Come back today,
Do you hear - Darlington!
Come back today
That mother may cry no more!' - Extremely poignant lines, Clarius and a very moving poem.
I also like to extend my word power - had to check the dictionary for 'harmattan'!

Comment is about DARLINGTON: We Little Know You will Die…. (article)

Yes I am an 11ft Iguana -- you and David Icke have spotted the roller-ball eyes within (no use for bifocul lens bras,then, as Marty Feldman would have said) and, basically, what I decide today happens tomorrow (okay, there's a time lapse between decision and implementation -- we haven't been able to ditch beauracracy yet. I am keeping watch -- people are illuminated silhouettes shifting beneath my nails which is the Illuminati equivalent of CCTV but without the carbon footprint. Besides, I am not a carbon-based life form and so can't hold a tune.

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