Hi Andy, thank you so much for kindly commenting on my last two blogs. Cheers, Lynn xx

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Hi Andy, Thanks for your kind words re my recent haiku posting. Whilst you are spot on with your comments on this one (In that the reader gets a snapshot and is left in suspense) I don't thik this is always the case with haikus. Win x

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Hi Andy... thanks for your comments on my Pakistan Ghazal. Its a massive subject isnt it. And one difficult to do justice to therefore. Win

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Thanks a lot for the comment on 'Self Indulgence' Andy, it was sincerely appreciated :)

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Thanks, I wrote it at night where I'm generally at a creative high but my spelling suffers. I'll take into account your advice about the first couple of lines. But it generally takes me a while to think of alternatives.

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X. Will correct the latest poem. Thanx!!! (BTW it's Helena's gallery launch in Chorlton on 10th)

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Hi Andy, thank you so much for comments on "Jimmy", much appreciated, glad you liked it. :)

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Thanks Andy for taking the time to comment on my poem Magic Fields :) Much appreciated

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Thanks for your comments on my poems - you are such a great supporter and reader of poetry on here - WOL is lucky to have you. Both the poems were fast writes - I have to be feeling angry or miserable to write like that so thankfully, I don't do many. Normally I agonise over poetry and there is tons of stuff I don't post. Good to see you at Salford - hope to have more time to chat next time - there's always too much poetry at these things LOL x

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Just wrote a really long comment which didn't update - how annoying is that? Will post this to see if it is working.

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Thank You so much Andy for your enthusiastic comments the plantif reprise at the end of the stanza is to replicate the echo of the plea carrying over the Ocean.

once more many thanks for your encouragement it is very much appreciated.

Augusta xx

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Thanx 4 comment on "Beauty in boots" :-). I know it's unpolished - I've written it the way it came :-) just was in the mood for a bit of writing after the event. X

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Thank you Andy for your comment, I did some changes as you recommended, Do you think it sounds better, now?

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Thanks Andy luv your work btw

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Hi Andy, Glad you liked the Picasso one. for a fuller explanation please revisit orig blog entry. Win x

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Hey Andy, appreiciate your comment,thx.

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Hi Andy! Socks - yes, it was the oe that i've read to you..just a little joke!

I'm rereading your Lighthouse poems now and trying to imagine sea and lighthouse! :-)

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Hi Andy! Thank you for comment on "Fish" - will remove "But", you are right! :-)

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Thanks for your comments on a few of my poems Andy. Glad that you liked them and I'll take your advice on board.

- Josh

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Thanks for your kind comments, Andy. I'm half tempted to add an audio, it might get me more used to reading my poems for an audience. I'll take another look at that line,
Heather xx

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Thank you Andy... For looking through the Stained Glass... and I am glad I found your poem: Perfect Place.

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Thanks Andy, I am always tempted to 'add'...

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Hi andy, thanks for commenting on Ghazal, yes i like the end best also :-) Win

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Thanks 4 commenting me! Who would think that workshops turns to be so useful!? waiting for you to post your Ireland stuff here.X

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Thank you, Andy, for reading and commenting on my poem
'The Berry Bridge'...
Yes... My inner child comes out to play often ; )

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Thanks Andy, for the comments. Hugely appreciated x

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Thanks Andy, for the comments. Hugely appreciated x

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Hi Andy. Loved your sample poems! Animals In Their Bags makes me think of my daughter and her friends (all around 14 months) - I found the poem very real and true to life, especially the last line - the adult who just has sandwiches in his / her bag (and if anything like me, now feels a little silly for not having an animal in their bag too!). Brief Encounters is hilarious with its unexpected ending and Perfect Place is simply beautiful - I've also been to this perfect place and I think you've captured it beautifully for anyone else who's been there too! You capture the scene in all your poems really well and I have no problems imagining I'm right there. Looking forward to reading more. Dianna

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Thanks Andy for your comment on ..PERFECT DAY..I'm glad you liked it and I will consider your advise on those two lines. Yes I did go to Steves group a few times and enjoyed it .he is a real nice guy, but due to personal reasons at the time I kind of dropped out of the cozy writers and wol. but I am back now with a bang ! and enthusiastic once more and it feels good ! x Bernadette

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Thanx 4 that Andy, I take it as praise indeed from a man that has stood against as many bars as you!!

Thanx again...C U soon!!

Gus

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Andy, thanks for looking at 'Whitehaven' You could not have paid a finer compliment. Thankyou. My goal is always brevity with clarity. Win

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Hi Andy, thank you kindly for your comments on Dr Who Could Save Us, glad you enjoyed :) Best wishes

Dave

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Hi Andy and thanks for taking the time to read Crixus story, much appreciated x

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Hi Andy - thanks for your comments on 'Dolphins Of The Cove', they are much appreciated :)

Best wishes, Dave

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Thanks for you comments Andy!

Hope to C U soon.

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Hi, thanks Andy ;-)

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Thanks for your comment on my latest Andy. By 'not serious' I meant that the poem was chopped up prose rather than classical poetry - with no startling imagery, assonance, alliteration, rhyme or anything you would associate with poetry.
Its strengths are its simplicity and the message which is very serious. I guess I'm looking at the props we all need to make life bearable, love being one and faith in something, the other. The unhappiest people I've met are those who believe absolutely in nothing.
I look forward to reading your poem on a taboo subject LOL xx

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Hi, Andy! Thank you so much for your comment on my poem "Spring meets summer". You know that English is not my mother tongue and I sometimes don't feel the exact meaning of this or that word as you do. May be it could be better if I finished the poem with the word "wisdom" without looking for the rhyming word and without that "winsome".
Your poem "Perfect place" is beautiful. I love it.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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Hi Andy glad you liked the poem and thanks for the comment.

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Hi Andy, thanks again for your wonderful comment on 'Summer's Eve.'
It wasn't really meant to be spooky but i love it when other people see something other than was intended. :-)

Janet.x

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Thanks Andy. Yes it is a Buddhist style poem. Much appreciated.

Janet.x

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HI Andy
I just wanted to thank you for making time to give your views on my Stalingrad poem. It means a lot especially as it resonated with your friend too who is more aware than most of the history.

Hopefully I'll be getting more time to return comments after this project I'm working on.

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Hi Andy, thanks for your lovely comment.
I thought it about time i started to write again. :-)

Janet.x

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re: Baby Jane. I just love this movie - very disturbing, it might be even on youtube. Talk soon! X

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Hi Andy

thanks for reading and making comment

steve x

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thanks Andy. I think living with 2 musicians probably has had an influence..and before that my parents were also..there's almost always music playing somewhere near me..and I love Palya's voice.. the woman singing on the you tube track.. thanks again, deb x

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Cheers for your comments on Waveney, Andy. The swallows did it for me. I could have watched them all afternoon ...

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Hi Andy, thank for your comments on River Mermaid. I know i'm int' wrong place to say this but i never think of performing when i write because as most ppl who've seen me will tell you, stanzas wouldn't make any difference cos i read too fast for anyone to notice the breaks. that's why i haven't done it for months. I should remember to breathe at least. thanks again, deb : )

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Further... Andy, In your comments on It only ends once. re the last word. It was once like that! I have changed it back on here. Thanks Win.

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Hi Andy. thanks for taking time to read and make comment on my last 2 blog entries. You have raised a very interesting point. In both cases you say. 'I bet this took you a long time to write'. Well, I think that both poems are a similar style. The frist (Coming home without you) was written pretty much instantly with only minor alterations whilst the second (It only ends once) did indeed take ages to write and has changed so much that only a few bits remein from the original. Win x

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