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Another Day

Another Day

 

Failing to hold onto the night,

We spiral toward another day.

Ageless sun directs its might,

Throwing dawn into the fray.

 

Chaotic animation spurred

From peaceful restoration.

Abandoned nests of man and bird,

Turn cold from separation.

 

Voices raised at dawn’s command,

Alert the world to rise.

A gradual warming of the land,

Commands we s...

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Stop the World

Stop the World

 

 

Sitting on the edge accelerates spin.

Rotations whip, growing nausea,

To an un-halting acid tsunami.

Throat burns in failed containment,

Nostrils the primary escape route.

Emerging fire constricts breathing,

Forcing involuntary gagging.

Escape route two is established.

Waves crash through open portal,

Propelled with violent intent,

Until su...

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School Reunion

School Reunion

 

You were the snot-nosed kid,

Out of uniform, in charity cast-offs.

Featureless pale face with retreating eyes,

Underscored with teary streaks.

 

You were the deep-thinking kid,

Masked by make-do and shut up.

Skin tattooed in black to yellow,

Inked by knuckles, spelling love and hate.

 

You were the corner-dwelling kid,

Wary of movement in sha...

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Little Hope

Little Hope

 

…and, of course, there’s Hope.

Running around in circles,

With her flag waving,

Like a child at a funeral.

She would never comprehend,

Not in her lifetime.

Classics, such as despair or tragedy,

Macabre in thought and tongue,

Hang in the air.

 

Recent character assassination,

Vocalised for popular consumption,

Served to push Hope into a corne...

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A Life Inevitable

A Life Inevitable

 

I think I want to die,

But thinking is overrated.

Age lends itself to darker thought,

Though time leaves us little choice.

 

History and time are not the same,

Memories are but photographs in the mind.

Dreams bring clarity in moving form,

In my dreams I fall and start again.

 

Wishing is for fools,

As fate is a script with no rewrites.

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In a Box

Today's composition 'Leaving Platform One' reminded me of a piece written a few years ago. I have re-edited it to accommodate my changes in writing style:

 

In a Box

 

In a box with rusty padlocks,

In a corner of my head,

Are broken toys of childhood,

Laid to rest in premature separation.

Drowned emotions and strangled feelings,

Together dressed in black,

Are shadows ...

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Leaving Platform One

Leaving Platform One

 

My mind - dishevelled, disorderly.

As unreliable as the damp cardboard,

Spilling a childhood treasure.

 

I unearthed it in my web-strewn attic –

The box, not my mind.

An old railway set, fondly remembered, thought lost.

 

Its strength gone; contents scattered.

Track and train departed - uncoupled

And bound for darker destinations.

 

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Owed to the Subtitles Righter

Owed to the Subtitles Righter

 

The BBC runs through the knight,

I’ve scene it for myself.

That doesn’t make it write,

As ewe and eye can tell.

There stile is baist on Principal,

Witch eye think mite bee a waist.

They cud edge bets oar gambol,

And set President in his plaice.

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New Tricks

New Tricks

 

God love a pretentious poet,

Who’s a stickler for written rules.

He will, no doubt, deny it,

But he takes us all for fools.

Sat within his ivory tower,

He gloats at his creations,

And will spend hour upon hour,

Bemoaning our aberrations.

 

He’ll inform us of which convention

We’ve clearly laid to waste.

No free-form prose escapes attention,

As...

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Insomnia Rules (Revised)

Insomnia Rules

 

The tether is overstretched,

I have reached the end of myself.

Nothing but a tortured wretch,

Chronically sick of lack of health.

Tired beyond despair,

No rest to speak of.

Mind and body beyond repair,

No cure, not even your love.

 

Oh, how I wish for soothing sleep,

That I might wake reborn.

My bones, in fatigue are steeped,

Mind overwork...

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Insomnia Rules

Insomnia Rules

 

The tether is overstretched,

I have reached the end of myself.

Nothing but a tortured wretch,

Chronically sick, deprived of health.

Tired beyond despair,

No rest to speak of.

Mind and body beyond repair,

No cure, not even your love.

Shadows, all that remain,

Of a hollowed shell.

No release from insanity,

I’m fast going to Hell.

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Poet's Prayer

Poet’s Prayer

 

Guide my hand to write it right,

That I need not regret.

Guide mind’s eye to see the light,

That evil ne’er beget.

 

Guide my feet to find the path,

That I might find my soul.

Guide my mind to suffer wrath,

‘til joy might make me whole.

 

Guide my conscience to fight the cause,

That I might justify.

Guide my love to see through flaws,

Th...

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Worse Things Happen at Sea

Worse Things Happen at Sea

 

I knew my love would grow and grow,

When I saw her on that pedalo.

Calves of steel and thighs so mighty,

She soon became my Aphrodite.

A bow wave heralded that craft,

Powered by an enormous aft.

Swimmers scrambled in disbelief,

As from her tsunami they sought relief.

The fast-approaching beach prepared for landing,

And then I started un...

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Signals Crossed

I apologise in advance for this one. Please don't be offended, as I mean no harm.

 

Signals Crossed

 

He asked me for direction,

As he wasn’t getting anywhere.

I could tell from his mid-section,

That he was comfortable being bare.

When I asked him what he wanted,

As all appeared just swell.

He looked at what he flaunted,

And said he couldn’t quell,

The feelings ...

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King Grumpy

King Grumpy

 

Blisters of youth, replaced by cynicism.

Graft and sweat neglected.

Potential replaced by criticism.

Passing time. Dejected.

Years spent in an easy chair,

Softened mind and sharpened tongue.

No regard, not self-aware,

Feelings hurt and insults flung.

Grumpy King sits on his throne,

Subjects flee to other lands.

Tomorrow finds him on his own,

He ...

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Memorabilia

Memorabilia

 

Cricket pitches and bowling greens,

Tennis courts and golfing dreams.

Close-cut grass and whitewashed lines,

Effort and energy in younger times.

Reclining in my riser chair,

Drifting back, I’m almost there.

 

Batting and bowling, serving and driving,

All so easy when health was thriving.

Halcyon days when heroes were made,

Adoring fans wherever we ...

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Phoenix

Phoenix

 

We were made before time was measured,

When worlds were forged by furious fire.

On bellowing breath of raging titans,

We rode unicorns, elemental and mystic,

Then tamed dragons, to rule forests and skies.

Serpents recoiled in reverence

And gryphons circled beneath us,

Never daring ascent to our heights.

 

Spiteful gods, having created us,

Grew jealous...

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Percival

Percival

 

Percival took pride in his appearance,

So he tolerated human interference.

He looked forward to his daily hosing,

After which, he enjoyed vainly posing.

Snout in the air to hide his chins,

Pride was always the proudest of his sins.

He would prance and strut around the sty,

With a devilish twinkle in his eye.

But he was in no hurry,

And mating made him wo...

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Hostage to Love

Hostage to Love

 

Please return my heart,

Without it I can’t leave.

I looked for it today,

But it wasn’t on my sleeve.

When I last took notice,

You were playing with it.

Now there’s a gap,

Only a broken heart can fit.

 

I’m sure it was damaged

By a previous user.

Scars may have healed,

But I’m still the loser.

It was vacant and empty,

As heard by the...

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Clang

Clang

 

A sombre bell tolled.

Unaccompanied, it sounded desolate.

The clang gave it away.

It was being controlled.

 

Alone, it would have said nothing.

Air would not have moved.

Not enough to resonate.

Sound meant another thing.

 

It implied interference.

A controlling hand, arm, shoulder.

Someone made an effort.

Pulled a rope with reverence.

 

Di...

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Who Are You?

Who Are You?

 

Who are you, and why are you here?

I am your security, your protector and your safety blanket.

We will start this age of discovery and wonderment together,

Pausing only to sleep and refuel our curiosity.

 

Who are you, and why are you with me?

I am your companion, here to hold your hand.

We will travel through gates and down paths into green meadow and dar...

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Bad Dream

Bad Dream

 

On an endless night a clock ticked,

Its hands unmoved, fighting time.

Darkness swelled to fill empty space,

As if to test light’s boundaries.

Aware of the battles materializing,

But incapable of taking sides,

I surrendered to a looming fate,

Knowing only my limited expectation.

 

Evil exhaled and darkness shuddered,

As if cowering to the greater powe...

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Harriet

Harriet

 

A hippo called Harriet

Arrived in her chariot,

Pulled by a jumbo-sized team.

She’d come to sing

At this charity thing,

Her voice, the latest hit on the scene.

 

She requested a rider,

A barrel of cider,

Made of cabbage and her own river water.

She informed all her crew

They could share her home brew,

But none of them thought that they oughtta.

...

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Sharp Edges

Sharp Edges

 

I need protection from life’s sharp edges.

A genuine bodyguard, not empty pledges,

They’ve left me an empty, pitiful soul.

Jagged edges pierced a hole,

Left a void where my heart should be.

Fill that hole and look after me.

Take me places I’ve never been.

Show me everything I’ve never seen.

Fight off their barbs and piercing spears.

Take me aside and ...

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Second Chances

Second Chances

 

Her smile set my mind adrift,

Fueling feelings, long ago held captive.

Released chains that held fate anchored.

Freedom, once a scary thought, now active.

 

Our eyes locked and passion kindled.

Flushing blood; yearnings to the fore.

Pupils, in full dilation, seldom lie.

Breathing quickened, pulses more.

 

Her voice, in melodic harmony,

Summon...

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Tick Tock

Tick Tock

 

She floated through a room.

Clocks stopped; their faces turned.

If hands could only reach,

Touching her would be glorious.

A worthy sacrifice of their existence.

 

She floated through a room.

Heart stopped; face turned.

My hands paralysed.

Touching her in my thoughts.

A glorious sacrifice of my existence.

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Pure Folly

Pure Folly

 

Elon Musk bought a planet,

With every Xtra that goes with it.

Today’s billionaires have bigger follies,

Than old mill bosses, or owners of a pit.

Their desires become immaterial,

As whims are dished on golden plate.

They dance around the rule of law,

With the Metaverse told their reign is great.

 

They wring our world of its resources,

Act ignorant ...

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Home Town

Inspired by Graham Sherwood's 'First Thursday' and the recent work of Red Brick Keshner. Thanks fellas.

 

Home Town

 

Where bookies are only outnumbered by charity shops,

The bag for life zigzags sarcastically down High Street.

Multi-lingual food stores offer a taste of home,

Wherever the sparse crowd originated.

Banks repurposed, pubs left high and dry,

Shuttered premis...

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Recall

Recall

 

Pinned to my mind’s toolbar,

Waiting to be put to good use.

Reliable in times of need,

Ever faithful, loyal friends.

 

Kept apart from those I dread,

Who will remain compartmentalized.

Padlocked away in rusty boxes,

Keys long since disappeared.

 

Helping me sleep at night,

Guiding the brain toward peace.

Fending off daylight’s doldrums,

An esca...

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Broken Heart

Broken Heart

 

She wore her heart on the outside.

Never easy to protect.

Such a fragile, exposed target.

Tears, always ready to reflect.

 

Bad boys were her youthful downfall.

Lessons she never learned.

Led astray by furtive lies,

Her fingers often burned.

 

She pulled deadweights behind her,

Broken promises too hard to bear.

Expectation turned to sunken h...

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Sharing Life

Sharing Life

 

She asked if we could share a dream,

But there were few left on my shelf.

She said she would grant me one of hers,

As she had enough of them herself.

 

I accepted her offer on certain condition

That it be returned if ever required.

When I inspected the gift she had given,

I realised the man that she desired.

 

He would be brave enough to receive h...

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Unconditional

Secrets (of a Happy Marriage)

Secrets (of a Happy Marriage)

 

I saw a man confronting a tree,

So I asked that fellow to confide in me.

Tell me sir, would you be having a drink?

To which he replied, no its not what you think.

I’ve been talking to trees for half of me life.

I can say things to them I can’t say to me wife!

She was fair and reasonable when we first met.

Now her tongue is so sharp I know ...

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Humour

Metaverse

Metaverse

 

Provocateurs demanding a response,

Through their very existence.

Misdirection and disinformation, their tools of choice,

And their work is disruption.

To comply or deny their wishes,

That is the question.

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What Next

What Next

 

Going forward a nothingness loomed.

Blank space, an empty, dark void.

Trepidation haunted the scene and

Cowardly spirit abandoned his body.

 

Crippled by an uncaring assailant.

Captivated by eternal anguish,

He paced his new cage.

Hopes of an escape plan extinguished.

 

Life limiting, an ill-fitting shroud.

Hostage to purgatory’s whims.

Suspend...

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Now and Forever

Now and Forever

 

Barely detectable to those in the vicinity.

A nudge to the conscience at most.

Perhaps it was a glitch in the matrix,

Or an insignificant memory lapse.

She was compassionate and vaguely familiar,

But her name escaped him for now.

 

She gazed into his pale blue eyes,

Recalling the moment they first met her own.

An instant connection she thought wou...

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Mirror Images

Mirror Images

 

This morning a crowd appeared in the mirror, but

As I went to investigate, they evaporated.

Taking station beyond the corners of my mind,

Leaving only me, as I am today.

Younger than the days ahead, but

Years older than yesterday.

Truth lines fracture darkening eye surrounds, and

Their larger cousins, ‘The Worries’ stack up,

Creating a furrowed field a...

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Full Benefits

Full Benefits

 

Far horizons disappear behind rising walls.

Dreams and destinations exiled to memories.

Spirits suffocating in a python grip,

Face unnerving truths as life becomes crushing.

Existing on cocktails of chemicals,

Masquerading as mystical elixirs.

Souls exist on Hippocratic promises,

Extending agony as hope diminishes.

Let it be known we were not consulte...

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Memento Mori

Memento Mori

 

Sun shone through the greying lace,

And highlighted her wrinkled face.

Dormant now, no signs of breath,

Not unexpected, a timely death.

Months of pain relieved by time,

Old age being nature’s ultimate crime.

A better place her soul now seeks,

Drying tears nestled on hollowed cheeks.

This disappearing woman faded from sight,

Unnoticed, she left us all...

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Scarborough Sleeps

Scarborough Sleeps

 

Distant church bells probe fretted air, where

Roof top gulls roost, wrapped in feathery cloaks.

Shivering clouds sob mournfully about everyone’s panes, and a

Hibernating town huddles under a grey blanket.

 

Shuttered shop fronts rattle their complaints,

Shared only by a spiteful wind that patrols dark doorways.

Customers long departed to foreign part...

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The View From Castle Hill, Almondbury

I stood on Castle Hill,

Gazing at the tide washing in.

Leaving no corner untouched,

It overwhelmed and engulfed,

Bullying the light away and

Filling the vacated space.

 

I knelt on Castle Hill,

Refocused my eyes

To search for signs of life.

Fireflies and glow-worms drifted

In the flow like departing flotsam,

Distancing themselves in hushed escape.

 

I clim...

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