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Preeti Sinha

Mon 6th Apr 2015 17:48

Thank you ! Love your intro !!

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Preeti Sinha

Mon 6th Apr 2015 17:43

Yes...love teaches no lessons. Except love. Your emtions pour forth without any deception

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Preeti Sinha

Mon 6th Apr 2015 17:35

Thank you everyone ! So kind of you all.....I am feeling empowered !

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Mon 6th Apr 2015 13:41

thanks Rose.A nutshell is probably a good description of what this world may become if we continue listening to the 'blind men'

Patricia.xx

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Mon 6th Apr 2015 13:36

the absolute truth in a nutshell.x

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Lynn Hamilton

Mon 6th Apr 2015 13:32

Thank you for your comments Mikhail much appreciated. If I ever did, there would be no need to pay!

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Mon 6th Apr 2015 13:24

Steve,Rose,Preeti,Harry.We thank you all so much. xx

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Mon 6th Apr 2015 13:22

such a cool actor eh Preeti.Thank you.xx

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Lan

Mon 6th Apr 2015 09:54

Hi Nat, it is uncanny how I will be either thinking about something or write something and then read your latest stuff and it will feel like maybe you're in a similar place - I really like & appreciate it - kindred spirit type stuff, thanks :) x

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Lan

Mon 6th Apr 2015 09:51

Hi Nat, I really like the repetition in this one, and my favourite line: Snapshots snipe at your ankles
And the pace is great too, xx

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Lan

Mon 6th Apr 2015 08:41

Hi Jeremy, I have nothing intelligent to comment, but just want to let you know I enjoyed reading this, as with your others. It painted a very clear picture for me - and I am completely ignorant of what warham fort is, but googled it after reading this and was thrilled that I had 'gotten it'. Thanks :)

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sharyne

Mon 6th Apr 2015 05:04

im impressed!

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Mikhail Smith

Sun 5th Apr 2015 21:21

... please publish your diaries, I'll buy it ...

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Lan

Sun 5th Apr 2015 14:21

Preeti, you are stunning! And don't deserve to be left waiting by anyone - good for you! X

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Lan

Sun 5th Apr 2015 14:15

This is really powerful, Mitch, thanks for sharing x

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Lan

Sun 5th Apr 2015 14:13

I really enjoyed this Ann, thanks for including the audio - it's beautiful and haunting x

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Sun 5th Apr 2015 13:54

Love it

Great build up to an even greater finale

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Lynn Hamilton

Sun 5th Apr 2015 12:57

Brilliant and nice to put a face to the name!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 5th Apr 2015 12:55

Thank you, Tilly. I'm happy my lines gave you pleasure.

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Lynn Hamilton

Sun 5th Apr 2015 12:49

You're welcome Mr Bastard.

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Sun 5th Apr 2015 12:32

OMG! the poem is brilliant.The OMG! is my response to your STUNNING photograph.Of which I am NOT jealous one little bit.I am jealous one massive bit! x

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jack purvis

Sun 5th Apr 2015 09:24

Thank you for your comment a couple of weeks ago. Have been absent for a while
Jack

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Sun 5th Apr 2015 09:00

Just lovely :)

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Sun 5th Apr 2015 08:50

Fuck you indeed!! Nice one Preeti.

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John Bastard

Sun 5th Apr 2015 08:46

hahaha,
Surprisingly, I was perfectly sober when I wrote First Laugh, Last Laugh.

But I'm pretty cuckin' fut now, eh?

Cheers.

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Preeti Sinha

Sun 5th Apr 2015 07:04

I love such coming of age pieces !

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Preeti Sinha

Sun 5th Apr 2015 06:54

Love the way your brain works. Or runs

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Mitch.C

Sun 5th Apr 2015 05:08

You were drunk when you wrote this and it seemed to make sense at the time eh!

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John Coopey

Sat 4th Apr 2015 21:32

Yes indeed, Shirley. In our writing we can be who we want to be.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 4th Apr 2015 20:29

Welcome to Write Out Loud, Myriam. Enjoyed your striking example of a specular, 'mirror' poem.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 4th Apr 2015 18:38

Nice song-like rhythm and good rhyming in your message. One small caveat:
why not include "a" before choice to keep the rhythm in
line 7?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 4th Apr 2015 18:32

An intriguing mixture of the mundane and the mystical in
an off-kilter rhyme pattern. Who is calling - and why the
feeling of certain cessation in more than one respect?
We are left to ponder - like all good mysteries.
Alfred Hitchcock would get this!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 4th Apr 2015 18:26

Well done! As a Devonian who recalls a similar sort of
publication about my own county I can well understand
your personal satisfaction. Nice one.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 4th Apr 2015 18:14

Thanks JC - a favourite short poem is Housman's
"Loveliest of Trees" - and I stay with the belief that
for some things "less is more". Neither trees nor flowers are in need of flowery phraseology.

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John Bastard

Sat 4th Apr 2015 15:56

the cooling, damp leather of the couch, soaked in my history, always giving me back the scents of familiarity.

the dirt collecting in the microscopic cracks, stubble, and folds of books; the filth that lives in gypsum rock walls. I've never really been one for detail. I've never really sought to be 100% clean because of how much life is in the dirt. As far as we know, the afterlife is in the ground. Transcendence is not fighting the soil as you return what you owe to it.

blurred lines, like a kaleidoscope -- no matter how much closer you look, there are fractals upon fractals. the line is still blurry under a microscope, so it's better to accept that some things are a little bit right and a little bit wrong simultaneously. then you can believe that this is true for all things, equidistant from true and false at their ideological core. such is beauty; such is the crucial, human flaw that drives everything.

when things break just a little bit, but are still useful.

the green that returns every year, no matter how stubbornly I cling to the idea of being miserable forever. when the sun hits those leaves, you can almost breathe it in, saturating yourself in the fleeting desperate cycle of live that is living in this clime.

the feeling of pens on envelopes that will never be delivered.
the thrill of when they go missing -- maybe they will, then.

reading the velveteen rabbit in everything else.

laughing in that ugly, uncontrolled, unphotogenic way. The kind that makes you hurt and tear up and becomes increasingly precious. The weight of years may fold up our skin and steal our strength, but that laughter has an exponential potency.

going hungry, then eating a good meal, drinking a good drink.

the company of perfect strangers: rediscovering old friends.

all of this is important to me.

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John Bastard

Sat 4th Apr 2015 15:54

very nervous. now available with audio.

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Preeti Sinha

Sat 4th Apr 2015 15:28

Yes, let's. You have an intro I'd love to pinch, btw

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Preeti Sinha

Sat 4th Apr 2015 15:26

You have a way with words. Pseudo intellects don't. So impressive !

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Preeti Sinha

Sat 4th Apr 2015 15:23

Congealed. Half eaten. Brilliant, again, Lynne.

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Preeti Sinha

Sat 4th Apr 2015 15:21

Stunning.

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Lynn Hamilton

Sat 4th Apr 2015 14:14

Really, really enjoyed reading. Fantastic.

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Lynn Hamilton

Sat 4th Apr 2015 14:06

Thank you again, Mr Tommy Carroll, for your comments, which after reading your fantastic way with words is much appreciated. I can tell from your comment that you also see - there is a difference - maybe it's because we share the same Northern grit? x

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John Coopey

Fri 3rd Apr 2015 23:23

Simple rhythms for a simple flower. Very apt, MC. My prims and pollys are looking good.

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Tom Phillips

Fri 3rd Apr 2015 20:26

Thanks, Graham (somewhat belatedly). Nice to be here.

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David Subacchi

Fri 3rd Apr 2015 18:02

You can find more of my poetry including some videos by searching on line for SUBACCHI POET.

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 3rd Apr 2015 16:37

'can I afford to say whatever?' er..not to the bearded man in the white robe,thats for sure!

Another good 'un dude! x

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Roy Marshall

Fri 3rd Apr 2015 14:03

Greg, you are probably right. I just thought it rather strange that the judge used the fact he 'didn't quite grasp what it was about' as his main criteria. 'Most of all'.
Also, I've got a whole lot of questions to ask about this poem- for one, how does silence 'crackle'?
I didn't enter the comp so I'm not into sour grapes. I don't mean to be rude to the writer, just thought this poem needed so serious re-writing and am not sure how it won £5K. The judges report certainly does little to enlighten me.

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 3rd Apr 2015 12:18

Ms Hamilton hi. This is good. A clever, humorous -if dark- allegory (if?) done with an impatient " is that a fact" smile. Impressive turns in your phrasing with some delicious lines. Well wrought. Esq.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 3rd Apr 2015 08:47

Maybe I'm missing something, but I thought it was about an old lady going down to the pub to get her flagon refilled with cider. For some reason I thought of the novelist Jean Rhys in her later years.

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Trevor Maynard

Fri 3rd Apr 2015 03:16

PRESS RELEASE - KEEP ON KEEPIN’ ON, a new collection of poetry by Trevor Maynard

Release Date: November 28, 2012 (updated Feb 2015)
Contact: Trevor Maynard, poetry@trevormaynard.com
Website: www.trevormaynard.com

From a biscuit crumb on your lover’s lips, to the death of a Princess,
to the formation of galaxies far far away, human is our condition, life is our journey,
and come agony, joy, or even world-weariness, people, let’s just keep on keepin’ on

Introduction
What a person writes is universal, because they themselves are human, and this can be words of ecstasy, of profound happiness; or it can be the depths of depression, the loss of love; or it can social commentary – putting the world to rights; or merely shooting the breeze – accessing the lexicon to have fun; but all in all, one thing poetry is, is emotional truth.

Synopsis
The book consists of sixty-three poems divided into five chapters, written on or before 2012, with an appendix of author’s notes on thirteen of the poems, four articles on poetry craft, and notes on the authors work as editor of THE POETIC BOND.

The Chapters
BLACK DOG, exploring the dark corners of the soul, where our fears live, and where redemption is scant.
PANOPTICON, the all-pervasive watching eye of society, we are not alone, and Big Brother is out there and to be engaged in battle.
OBSVERVATION, the writer watching is not separate from his surroundings, they are also part of it, and the humanity of the writer gives their work its universality.
LOVING, what is mankind without love? These poems explore the deepest truth our existence, how we love and are loved, and the complication of human relations – as they are apt it say in the movies nowadays “it’ complicated”.
ANSWERS, yes, this is a poetry book that asks a lot of questions, that makes a lot of observations, but it is also a book of seeking answers. We are not just individuals in a pool of mud forever climbing ladders that sink deeper; we are the individuals, the ladders, and the mud.

The Articles
SMELL ME A POEM – Exploring poetry from the perspective of our sense of smell
POETRY AND THE WAR ON TERROR – is the purpose of poetry to do more than bear witness
INSTANT POETRY – an example of the process of creating a poem from stream of consciousness
MY PROSE IS MY POETRY – examining the difference (or not) between poetry and prose

The Poetic Bond
Trevor Maynard is editor of The Poetic Bond, an on-going series of poetry anthologies garnered from new media, social and professional networking, whose purpose is evolve organically a collection of poetry based on the emergent consensus of work submitted in a three month time window. To date, four anthologies have been published in paperback, with the fifth, open to submissions from 31 March until June 30, 2015.

Ten plays by Trevor Maynard have been performed on stage in London, Edinburgh and Touring
Trevor Maynard combines complicated thematic material and unites fractured images with a sure hand. (Review for The Stage, 1990)

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