Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:49
I really like this one! I love learning too x
Comment is about A Learning Love (blog)
Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:43
I really enjoyed this one too Travis, thanks :)
Comment is about UP FOM LONDON. (blog)
Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:41
Heh heh! Love this Louise, thanks :)
Comment is about Fannies (blog)
Original item by Louise Etheridge
Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:39
Jackie, this is so lovely - I can feel it, really sort of tactile, thanks :)
Comment is about BRAIN BUGS (blog)
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Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:28
Hi Jack, I really like this - have always been intrigued by those checky trousers chefs wear :)
Comment is about CHECKY TROUSERS (blog)
Original item by Jack purvis
Nice! I hope it is a true recollection.
Comment is about normal for boys (blog)
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Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:20
Hi Jack, thanks for your comments on my stuff. Am just having a read of yours and enjoying them - giving me a giggle, so thanks :)
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Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:12
Great answer! I like the idea that the afterlife might be in the ground - find that kinda reassuring.
Comment is about Let's Talk, WoL (blog)
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Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:07
I enjoyed reading this one, and then even more with the audio. Can relate to the nervousness, but I for one love hearing them in the poet's own voice. Favourite lines are 'a bog of wet denim on laundry day' and, well pretty much that whole second stanza.
Comment is about Late Night Acousma (blog)
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Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:03
Hey, thanks for your really lovely comment on Cool & Sad, I appreciate it :)
Comment is about Zach Dafoe (poet profile)
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Yes, Louise, I thoroughly enjoyed it too.
My own take:-
http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=40208
Comment is about Fannies (blog)
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Fri 10th Apr 2015 16:44
Indeed, Kenneth, well observed.
Comment is about Ted Hughes award goes to Andrew Motion's 'Coming Home' (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
holy smokes this is beautiful.
Comment is about BRAIN BUGS (blog)
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Fri 10th Apr 2015 11:10
love the submissive ending.Great poem.x
Comment is about 'til all my breath is you (blog)
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<Deleted User> (9882)
Fri 10th Apr 2015 10:54
Agree with Preeti.And such a great title.Well done Stef.x
Comment is about Running on empty (blog)
I truly enjoyed reading this poem. Your use of the ink stain metaphor is done really well and I particularly like the last line which adds that little element of surprise at the end. Thanks for sharing :-)
Comment is about 'til all my breath is you (blog)
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Thank you, it brings a big smile to my face when somebody enjoys what I have written. :-D
Comment is about BRAIN BUGS (blog)
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Hi Zach - Of the poems of yours that I have read so far, this I think is my favourite one yet. Your poetry seems to me, to be multifaceted and when I read it I find different meanings within it every time. It is sort of disjointed and yet flowing.
There are so many lines in this poem that I like but I think the one I like best is, 'WE RE MADE OUT OF FUCKING PEOPLE!' which of course is true in every respect.
Keep writing !!!
Comment is about Tiny Tim 0716 (blog)
Original item by Zach Dafoe
Kenneth Eaton-Dykes
Fri 10th Apr 2015 00:17
I do not know anything about the technicalities of poetry
but the Andrew Motion winning entry to me is an example of pushing credibility that bit too far. I've seen better descriptions of topical events in the free newspaper on the bus.
He,I think, has taken advantage of the Afghanistan tragedy to influence the judges with a meritless work that in my opinion, for such a highly estimable competition is a masterpiece in mediocrity.
There has GOT to be something more deserving among the other contestants.
Comment is about Ted Hughes award goes to Andrew Motion's 'Coming Home' (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Well, I understand your concern, but I don't think Grayson Perry can be accused of being part of the poetry establishment, can he?
Comment is about Ted Hughes award goes to Andrew Motion's 'Coming Home' (article)
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Glad I found you looking forward to more
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Preeti Sinha
Thu 9th Apr 2015 12:25
Stef, this is fabulous ! And so sad...
Comment is about Running on empty (blog)
<Deleted User> (4172)
Thu 9th Apr 2015 11:52
Amazing, a virtual unknown wins major poetry prize.
Comment is about Ted Hughes award goes to Andrew Motion's 'Coming Home' (article)
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Hi Thanks for the interesting comment on my kids poem.
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Oooh! I like this poem, you set the scene brilliantly and the words hold an icy tingle.
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Travis Brow
Thu 9th Apr 2015 06:41
Thank you Lynn.
Comment is about UP FOM LONDON. (blog)
i really liked how adventurous this felt. really good read for me personally. :)
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Lynn Hamilton
Wed 8th Apr 2015 11:03
Lynn Hamilton
Wed 8th Apr 2015 11:00
Really enjoyed reading - lovely
Comment is about UP FOM LONDON. (blog)
Love the idea Laura - but can you follow through?
Comment is about The Farty Party Manifesto (blog)
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Jeremy - thanks for the comments and the advice on The Crow. On this occasion I have amended the second half of the line altogether. I also hope you enjoy the additional stanza!
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Attending this launch was a real delight. Firstly in seeing so many members of the Manchester live poetry scene supporting these two popular poets, and Flapjack Press; secondly in witnessing this perhaps tardy acknowledgement of their page poetry credentials; even more in the joy of hearing the pair read their words to us. Though both have huge claims to theatrical skills, their renditions were grounded in themselves, in their own vernacular voices. Edward Hirsch reckons that poetry is "a means of exchange, a form of reciprocity, a magic to be shared, a gift". This reading reinforced that thesis. Get the book to receive your own poetic gifts.
See photos of the event in gallery Melanie Rees and Sarah Miller anthology launch 23r (3)
http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/galleries.php#_gallerypage1
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Thanks for your comment on Division Street. Cheers, T.
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Selkie Singing at the Passing Place is published by Flapjack Press, rrp £8.00. www.flapjackpress.co.uk
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Selkie Singing at the Passing Place is published by Flapjack Press, rrp £8.00. www.flapjackpress.co.uk
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Selkie Singing at the Passing Place is published by Flapjack Press, rrp £8.00. www.flapjackpress.co.uk
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Excellent thoughts .. I've certainly been there .. thank you for the reminder
Comment is about Somethings Wrong (blog)
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Hannah Granger
Mon 6th Apr 2015 23:08
Then there's the 'film'....
Comment is about Roger Philip Dennis wins National Poetry Competition (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Lynn Hamilton
Mon 6th Apr 2015 21:33
I was that impressed I commented twice!
Comment is about warham fort (blog)
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Lynn Hamilton
Mon 6th Apr 2015 21:32
Mr Young, I was mesmerised by the waves of your words, both the written and the visual. The tabulation was well worth the effect.
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Lynn Hamilton
Mon 6th Apr 2015 21:32
Mr Young, I was mesmerised by the waves of your words, both the written and the visual. The tabulation was well worth the effect.
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Preeti Sinha
Mon 6th Apr 2015 17:48
Thank you ! Love your intro !!
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jeremy young
Sat 11th Apr 2015 04:12
@lynn thank you
@marie-anne I suppose in part - but it is a response to a below the line comment in the guardian
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