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Philipos

Tue 13th Apr 2021 11:22


Quite an unusual 'draw you in' read, this.

Enjoyed the mysterious air of it.

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Nazia Khan

Tue 13th Apr 2021 05:33

Welcome ??? I hope you're fine

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 13th Apr 2021 02:39

A poem of spiritual elation. Well done.?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 13th Apr 2021 02:34

Thank you, Tom, Stephen, Ghazala, Aviva, and Holden for your likes.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 12th Apr 2021 22:29

Thank you for your comment Stephen ?

It turned out there would be many more words after all,
but at the time...

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?


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Greg Freeman

Mon 12th Apr 2021 18:50

Wonderful opening lines, Stephen. And the title, of course.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Apr 2021 18:05

Thanks, Phil. I was a bit too young to remember the day of the flight but your poem and description brought back my childhood fascination with space travel, which developed a few years later.

I always felt sorry for Laika.

I also posted a Gagarin poem this evening.

Thanks once again for stirring nice memories.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Apr 2021 17:59

This follows on from Phil Ireland's memories of Yuri Gagarin's space flight of April 1961. I was seven at the time and don't really remember the event, although I have become interested in it since.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Apr 2021 17:53

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Apr 2021 17:43

Thank you Tom, Adam, Aviva and Holden for the likes.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Apr 2021 17:31

Fine poem, Aviva. There must still be words.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Apr 2021 17:29

Thanks, Julie. Looks like us Belgians will have to wait until 1st May, or maybe later.....

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Apr 2021 17:28

I love carousels. They are a joy but also have a hint of menace or tragedy. Thank you for this poem.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 12th Apr 2021 17:06

P.S. The opening also brought back a near miss of my own
experience years ago, when walking near Old Street here in central
London, stepping off the kerb and seeing a blur of red pass
perilously close to my eyes as a bus moved through through the
one-way system in operation there. A moment's lack of concentration that left me blinking at my lucky escape.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 12th Apr 2021 16:53

Thanks for your likes
Aviva
and
Stephen G

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AP Grayson

Mon 12th Apr 2021 14:08

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Mike Bartram

Mon 12th Apr 2021 11:28

Thank you for the nice comment!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 12th Apr 2021 01:47

Thank you for the flowers, to all who've clicked 'Like' for this poem.
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Tom Doolan

Sun 11th Apr 2021 22:40

Hi M.C. - I had the opportunity to serve quite a few notable people when working there. Thanks for likes Hugh, Holden & Zina. ?

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 11th Apr 2021 21:15

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 11th Apr 2021 17:59

A neat enjoyable sample of "Be careful what you wish for" when
thinking about heaven.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 11th Apr 2021 17:56

Proudly declares that you've flown.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 11th Apr 2021 17:54

A long life that achieved so much for so many. Well said.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 11th Apr 2021 17:51

An entertaining vignette of a personal recollection that comes to life
even as its main character leaves it.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 11th Apr 2021 17:46

One from the heart that perfectly illustrates kinship of the mind.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Sun 11th Apr 2021 15:15

Thank you, Ghazali for your comment. Yes, sometimes the questions are more important than the answers.?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 11th Apr 2021 14:51

It doesn't work for troublesome people.
Neither the ziplock bag nor the kitchen bin are big enough.

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John Coopey

Sun 11th Apr 2021 14:02

Thank you, Julie and thanks for the Like, Tom and Kevin.

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Sun 11th Apr 2021 13:23

Thank you for the Emily Dickinson poem xx blessings to you

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 11th Apr 2021 11:38

Thank you Holden for the Like ?

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 11th Apr 2021 10:59

Hello,

I've enjoyed your blog entries immensely. You may have noticed that only the most recent one is still shown in its entirety in the blog section, the others having been archived for one month underneath it. After that they are permanently archived under your profile and the monthly listing. In order to garner more views it is best to space out ones output to give other readers more chance to see your work. I hope this is useful.

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julie callaghan

Sun 11th Apr 2021 09:27

Thanks for the likes, Hugh, Nigel and Ghazala.

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julie callaghan

Sun 11th Apr 2021 09:26

Thanks for all the likes folks. I am grateful for the supply of these great photos which provide much needed inspiration.

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julie callaghan

Sun 11th Apr 2021 09:25

Thanks for the likes, Stephen G, Hugh and Aviva

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julie callaghan

Sun 11th Apr 2021 09:19

Lovely

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julie callaghan

Sun 11th Apr 2021 09:18

It must be even stranger seeing the area without the usual excitement than just seeing the race on TV without spectators.

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julie callaghan

Sun 11th Apr 2021 09:07

A lovely tribute Hugh

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 11th Apr 2021 03:58

Thank you Brian for commenting ?

It is a bit like singing a popular song, I suppose. Everyone knows the tune, they've either sung it themselves or heard it often, so there's no room for a bad rendition to go un-noticed. I'm glad it sounded correct.

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 11th Apr 2021 03:02

Thank you Brian, I really appreciate it ?

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Ghazala lari

Sun 11th Apr 2021 03:01

Paths are obscured And so is the journey. Searching and waiting is never ending . Tangled and entangled mesh of thoughts, desires, emotions and feelings. Untying a knot one by one, still the knots remaining. Will there be a path ever, a destination and a soulmate to meet? Unanswered queries piercing through the brain.
I like the tanglewood?

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Nigel Astell

Sun 11th Apr 2021 01:43

1984
Playing football counts
being in the team matters
scoring goals means not liking
is their problem.

1985
Early morning call
faint cry a sign
someone close to you
has passed away.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Sun 11th Apr 2021 01:35

this is very smooth -- takes me on a journey. Very well composed.

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Sat 10th Apr 2021 23:57

Yes things can be too nice.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 10th Apr 2021 23:12

I have this mental image of him organising things upon high e.g. even
higher that his previous position down here! ?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Sat 10th Apr 2021 21:22

you captured what many feel at times --excellent

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 10th Apr 2021 21:09

Thank you Ghazala and Stephen for your lovely comments. ?

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

There's still quite a few poems to go in the 'unrequited love' theme before we reach the next theme - They each have their own unique features (for better or worse) so hopefully it won't be too boring. (I'll keep my fingers crossed (at least some of the time) ?)

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John Coopey

Sat 10th Apr 2021 19:50

But don’t let on, Stephen - I have a certain reputation to protect.
And thanks for the Likes, Nazia, Holden and Aviva.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 10th Apr 2021 17:46

A very profound, moving poem. Thank you, Aviva.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 10th Apr 2021 17:30

Thanks, Brian.

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