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David Taylor-Jones

Fri 11th Aug 2017 09:13

Thanks Colin, that feels like praise indeed.

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Paul Waring

Fri 11th Aug 2017 09:11

Very interesting article Steve. It sounds like you put a lot into making the show a success. Having thoroughly enjoyed your live performance in Liverpool with Laura Taylor in May I bet your Edinburgh gig was memorable too!

Paul

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Tom Doolan

Fri 11th Aug 2017 08:48

Well said Lynn - We are poets and we know it. T?

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Ruvi Galhena

Fri 11th Aug 2017 08:42

It just became one of my favourite from your collection ?
Keep it up ?

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Fri 11th Aug 2017 08:21

flows along quite nicely Dipta. Thanks for posting. Colin.

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Fri 11th Aug 2017 08:19

hope you don't mind me saying David but there are hints of The Beatles surreal imagery whirling around in this which I find quite delightful. Penny Lane is the obvious one to tag with its 'in my ears and in my eyes' line but there are other phrases and words which seem to trigger thoughts of other songs too. Whether intentional or not (it doesn't much matter) I think you have found an interesting almost song like way of expression here. Cheers, Col.

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Fri 11th Aug 2017 08:08

they are rather addictive. Just having them there, on the shelves, behind me, waiting, neatly ordered, is a comfort. All that weight of words from brilliant minds shared over centuries. Thanks for sharing your poem Martin. All the best, Col.

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David Taylor-Jones

Fri 11th Aug 2017 06:34

This feels so powerful. Maughan, it feels very easy to hear you when you speak so powerfully from your heart.

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Hannah Whitfield

Thu 10th Aug 2017 23:08

I'm always here friend, text me anytime if you need someone to vent to or just to talk to about random things if you're ever feeling down, I'm here for you..

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Thu 10th Aug 2017 22:54

British Trust for Ornithology is now taking on the promotion of #CurlewCalling which will boost the funds for conservation of curlew generated through sales ...

https://twitter.com/karenlloydwrite/status/895710952976338944

: )

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Hannah Whitfield

Thu 10th Aug 2017 22:49

I am actually at a loss for words

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Hannah Whitfield

Thu 10th Aug 2017 22:47

Wow.. this is... I wish I could write poetry like this, it takes a lot to write down and really capture feelings in words, to make them meaningful

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Jane C. Steele

Thu 10th Aug 2017 20:02

Thank you David, Tom and Wendy.
This was actually the first poem I ever wrote. I wrote it on my phone, in the hospital room. My family thought I was on facebook and told me off. They were slightly askance when I told them I was writing a poem. I didn't want to take photos, obviously not nice pics but I wanted to record it. The poem wrote itself and I haven't stopped writing since. Sounds terribly clichéd, but there you go.

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keith jeffries

Thu 10th Aug 2017 19:20

you are a poet. Keith

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keith jeffries

Thu 10th Aug 2017 19:16

I can relate well to this Rich but your words are far more eloquent than mine. Thank you for a beautiful and well written poem. Keith

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David Cooke

Thu 10th Aug 2017 17:39

Hi Keith Glad you liked my Antoinette poem!

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David Cooke

Thu 10th Aug 2017 17:38

Hi David Glad you liked my Antoinette poem!

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David Cooke

Thu 10th Aug 2017 17:38

Hi Tom Glad you liked my Antoinette poem!

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David Taylor-Jones

Thu 10th Aug 2017 17:02

To me this is about honesty and about resilience - also about having the courage to be seen. Thanks you for posting this one Keith.

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keith jeffries

Thu 10th Aug 2017 17:02

Beauty in simplicity. Thank you. Keith

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Rich

Thu 10th Aug 2017 16:57

Love heals. Thanks for sharing.

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Thu 10th Aug 2017 15:27

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keith jeffries

Thu 10th Aug 2017 15:12

David, Thank you. The world is weighed down heavily by deceit which is to be found at every level of society without exception. Keith

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Tom Doolan

Thu 10th Aug 2017 15:06

Hi David - An enchanting and beguiling piece. Wetherspoon's here I come. T :)

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Wendy

Thu 10th Aug 2017 13:24

Hi Kealan for your coment I have seen many a young person sleeping on the streets without an address you have nothing if you have a child you get help it's such an unfair world .we are so lucky to have a roof over our heads love Wendy .

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Wendy

Thu 10th Aug 2017 13:13

Hi just reading your poem Jane brought so many memories back my mum was 95 had dementure for 25 years when she died she was so small and watching her clinging on to life was very upsetting regards Wendy .

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 10th Aug 2017 12:56

Pubs, poems and the public...an unbeatable combination!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 10th Aug 2017 12:53

Thanks one and all for the kind comments and for taking
the trouble to "like" this poem.
MC

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David Taylor-Jones

Thu 10th Aug 2017 11:12

Lovely rhythm and very evocative - almost makes me want to go to a Wetherspoon's!

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keith jeffries

Thu 10th Aug 2017 11:01

A beautiful rhythm and highly descriptive. Thank you. Keith

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steve pottinger

Thu 10th Aug 2017 10:46

Recommended: in addition to A Car Load Of Poets (Black Market 1, 2.40pm each day, with a different guest poet each show) I'd also like to draw your attention to 'My Cloth-eared Heart' by Melanie Branton (Black Market 1, 1.30pm). Powerful, entertaining, candid and beautifully delivered spoken-word.

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Tom Doolan

Thu 10th Aug 2017 10:31

A lovely piece of work Jane. Very evocative and touching. T?

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John F Keane

Thu 10th Aug 2017 10:21

Isn't the curlew seen as an evil bird by the superstitious?

*Heard calling at night the cry of the Curlew foretells death*

http://www.psychicworld.net/johns-guide-to-superstitions/

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 10th Aug 2017 09:41

ooooohhh!! keep going keep going! We need to know more!

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 10th Aug 2017 09:39

and Cabernet Sauvignon of course!

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Jane C. Steele

Thu 10th Aug 2017 09:20

Thanks Patricia - I put it up because your poem left such a mark.
Jx

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Thu 10th Aug 2017 08:29

I love 'in the moment' writing and you had me entranced David. The shattering of the dream is a clever twist which I didn't entirely see coming and which part of me wishes hadn't. I find myself a little bit torn. A part of me would like to see the poem end with the 'but...' - but I recognise too the importance of those last four lines which tie the whole choreography / dancing and ultimately 'tumbling off the stage' theme together. All in all, lots to admire. Thanks for posting. Colin.

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Mark Mr T Thompson

Thu 10th Aug 2017 07:44

And here's a video...

https://youtu.be/5PmHlorbIgU

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Mark Mr T Thompson

Thu 10th Aug 2017 07:40

I'll be sharing this piece and others at "The Spirit of '77" an evening of Poetry and Song to commemorate these events tomorrow 11.08.17 at Goldsmiths (University of London).

https://www.gold.ac.uk/calendar/?id=10909

And just this one at the of official unveiling of a purple plaque on the site on Sunday.

https://www.gold.ac.uk/calendar/?id=10906

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lynn hahn

Thu 10th Aug 2017 04:26

Too funny Graham! Cutting edge for you?

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patricia Hughes

Thu 10th Aug 2017 00:40

Beautiful poem,the death of a loved one leaves a mark.

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Andy N

Wed 9th Aug 2017 23:32

Hi Martin. I went there about three years ago. Loved it and the story.. well, I'll tell you about it next time i see you (:

Glad you like this thou. it has took ages to write this one i must admit..

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Jane C. Steele

Wed 9th Aug 2017 22:24

Lovely poem, so naturally expressed. Jx

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Jane C. Steele

Wed 9th Aug 2017 22:11

Trevor and M.C - thank you both for commenting.
I'm pleased the poem found favour.
Cheers Jane

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Trevor Alexander

Wed 9th Aug 2017 20:44

That last line made me shiver! Great stuff!

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Tom Doolan

Wed 9th Aug 2017 19:48

Hi M.C. - A very evocative piece. T?

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Tom Doolan

Wed 9th Aug 2017 17:47

Hi Leon. He was definitely one of a kind. Thanks for your feedback. T ?

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patricia Hughes

Wed 9th Aug 2017 17:47

Beautiful with a fantastic ending.

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Tom Doolan

Wed 9th Aug 2017 17:41

Passion is an unquenchable fire. Nice work Joselin. T?

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 9th Aug 2017 17:25

The theme of "one upmanship" is always worth exploring,
especially in view of its relevance to times past when
even a slum street had its social divisions...check who
washes and polishes their doorstep regularly!
This is both entertaining and enlightening as a reminder
for some and an essay into the unknown for others more
recently born.

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