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d.knape

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 03:17

Even if
the blinds are drawn
what good the reaction
if only a yawn!
?

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Wed 3rd Mar 2021 02:28

This resonates with my soul in a way I cannot even begin to describe.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 3rd Mar 2021 02:06

When restrictions start to get lifted
added verse makes this poem even better.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 22:36

Thank you for commenting Rudyard, Though there are many sources of light the universe between those lights is a dark place, and this poem certainly touches on some dark concepts. However sometimes by accepting the darkness we can relax in it. I'm sorry that you found it difficult but I am very happy that you shared your opinion. I'm glad that you survived the poem as I wouldn't want to be responsible for ending your life and preventing all the poems you haven't written yet from reaching the world. ?

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Tue 2nd Mar 2021 21:57

Nice at the beginning but towards the end i tend to kill myself. It does something to me and i hate it. Maybe its okay. Maybe more.

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John Coopey

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 21:19

Thanks for the Likes, Stephen A, Stephen G, Kristian and Julie. Branwell and Holden.

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 21:18

Only three sentences but containing so much...

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 20:40

Thank you for your comment Stephen. I've no idea how life as we know it and life forms as we know them came to be and function, nor do I know how death as we think of it or even as anybody thinks of it could be and function - it is all far beyond my ken. But, I do think there's a very good chance that it might not be exactly what anyone expects and so I suppose I should just hope that it will be 'as good or better than expected' for everyone, whatever they believe in.

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 19:58

I felt the original from this morning was missing a verse. ?

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 19:37

Thank you Keith, A Girl and Stephen G for the likes and kind comments. Thanks to everyone else for the likes. I wasn't sure about this one, I wrote it quickly this morning and thought it should have another verse. Perhaps I will leave it as it is.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 18:35

Thanks for the like & comment ' a girl'. Much appreciated. ( & If you're out for a nice walk, just sample some from the path side. You'll either be full, absolutely ill, or try to fly home! - or possibly all three?)

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 18:26

Thank you very much for your kind comment about my poems. Glad you like them! ?
And welcome to WOL & I look forward to reading more of your stuff! ?

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 18:16

What does it truly mean to be free, and when are we really ready...

Love this masterpiece!

AG

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 18:04

Long time no see Abdul. It was good hearing from you. Wonderful work?

Ak

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:35

A very interesting poem. All the same, I want to cling to the hope that something remains. Perhaps I expect too much.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:26

This poem has weight, Brian. One can feel the cares of a bad day getting heavier. Good one.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:19

A beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:08

Yes, I like the optimism

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 17:05

Sofa so good

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 16:16

Thank you Nigel for your comment ?

Thanks also to all those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 16:09

So, you just need that printed on a t-shirt
problem solved.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 16:03

something must have cushioned the fall. ?

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 15:57

Phew! Now, that’s a poem.

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 15:54

Stephen where did you find those mushrooms?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 14:10

A timely alternative to the views usually found on WOL.
There is comfort in doing one's own thing.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 14:01

Reminds me of the time some years ago now, when I returned home
to discover that my trouser fly/zip had slid down throughout a
ride and back on the underground rail line. Mortification was the
feeling and I hoped the fit of my pants had managed to keep "the
blind drawn" on my travels. ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 13:20

It's the final curtain call ?

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Nigel Astell

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 12:12

Fear without despair
smile with laughter
as both in disarray.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 11:52

Thanks for all your likes
Julie
Aviva
Your Royal Poetess
Hope Ray
Nazia
Holden
and
Deb.

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Emer Ni Chorra

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 11:49

Ah hello there, new shoes. Curtains for him??hope you're well.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 11:47

Waking up at four a m
March window was ablaze
never ever seen Mr Moon
so whiter than white.

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 11:18

A poem which poses an important question concerning our real selves and those forces which try to sublimate our very own identity. A poem to ponder on.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Your Royal Poetess

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 10:16

Artwork by: Tony Sandoval ?

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 09:55

Reminds me of the Coldplay song „Everything’s not lost” . One of my favourites.

Thanks for the injection of positivity.

AG

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 09:49

It can’t be that bad !

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A Girl

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 09:44

How about a director.

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 09:24

Julie,
Thank you for this poem of optimism which is sorely needed at this time as we all long for better days and a return to normality.
Thanks
Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 09:22

Stephen A & Stephen G, thank you for your comments. Binte, Julie, Aviva, Holden, Scattered Sun and Your Royal Princess thank you all for liking this poem. I appreciative that you all took the time to read this poem and express your comments.
Thank you one and all.

Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 08:09

A wonderfully speculative poem. I enjoyed this.
Thank you
Keith

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Kristian Deidre Brown

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 06:37

So beautiful, Erika. Thank you ?

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New Shoes

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 04:58

I think there is a saying "It's curtains for you kid"

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Holden Moncrieff

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 04:29

?

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diana kaunis

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 02:13

WOW! Just read your poems, and they are amazing!

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 01:55

This made me smile.?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 2nd Mar 2021 01:49

"metaphysico-theologo-cosmologo-noodleology." LOL

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keith jeffries

Mon 1st Mar 2021 21:53

Thank you so very much for expressing your appreciation for a number of my poems. It is both kind of you and encouraging for me personally
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 1st Mar 2021 21:51

Jennifer,
Thank you for your very kind comments recently posted. I appreciate your words which are for me personally very encouraging.

Keith

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d.knape

Mon 1st Mar 2021 21:13

by now there should be a long list of my poems.
I post everyday....good, bad or indifferent.
?

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A Girl

Mon 1st Mar 2021 19:11

You touched a place within me Erika I thought was long forgotten. Very real.

Thank you.

AG

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Greg Freeman

Mon 1st Mar 2021 19:03

Lovely details in this, Erika. Your poems contain melancholy and have real strength, too. Thank you for sharing them here

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