Hey Brian - I trust she survived the shock!?
Comment is about A REMINDER TO BLM (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Ah thank you Neressa, Flavia, Stephen, Julie, Victoria and Jordyn for the likes. You've made my day. ?
And Jordyn and Victoria, thank you for the encouraging comments. I was in two minds about sharing this poem so it's doubly rewarding to hear that you enjoyed. ?
Comment is about Bury Me At Sea (blog)
Original item by Tom
Martin,
Thank you for this. It reminds me of those final moments as we drift into sleep, our last thoughts and the sense of awareness as we enter that blissful state.
Keith
Comment is about Remember (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
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Thu 10th Sep 2020 09:01
I helped an eldery, white, middle class, heterosexual woman across the road last week....anyone interested?
Comment is about A REMINDER TO BLM (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
As you say sadly all too often these stories are all to readily lost
Comment is about A REMINDER TO BLM (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
I love the line 'aimed at my thoughts' in particular.
Wonderful stuff
Comment is about Impulse (blog)
Original item by mentalelf. Philk.
Very very very nice. A wonderful exposition of love
love it
Comment is about Love (blog)
Original item by Destiny
Sea Green,
an interesting poem seeking reassurance in love. Are our feelings reciprocated? A familiar quest in most relationships. In this poem you have written from the heart and in so doing introduced the reader to the reality of a dilema faced by most us. Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about Do you? (blog)
Thu 10th Sep 2020 04:34
This is Beautiful ❤️ I enjoyed reading.
-J
Comment is about Bury Me At Sea (blog)
Original item by Tom
Ginger hair smart jacket
skinny legs lets his fingers run
silk black tights ruined.
Comment is about Underground Part 13 to 15 (blog)
Original item by Andy N
I hope that very soon the whole world will realise that every life matters.
Comment is about A REMINDER TO BLM (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thanks Greg for the like. yes unfortunately it will probably be Aldi and salad shopping due to the over spending and over eating. But what else are holidays for?
Comment is about Market Day (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
There’s definitely a few more verses to be added. Paul I think the NHS quote would fit in very well.
Comment is about The Hokey Cokey (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thanks very much Greg, Paul, Stephen and sea.green for the comments and likes. Wasn’t too sure about this post but pleased it raised a smile or two.
Comment is about The Hokey Cokey (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
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Wed 9th Sep 2020 18:09
Thank you dear Po. Not from you either??
Comment is about I, Me, Myself (blog)
In Manchester town centre 6 months ago a 3 year old Jamaican lad had wandered away from his family from a main street store.I saw him wandering around chased him and stayed with him,ten minutes later his family looking for him were relieved that he was safe and profusely thanked me.
Comment is about A REMINDER TO BLM (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Sorry, chaps, I should have said earlier. It IS a newspaper headline, from this morning ... not mine at all!
Comment is about The hoary and the gory (blog)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Nearly as good as Metro's this morning "SAFE SIX"
Comment is about The hoary and the gory (blog)
Original item by Greg Freeman
HI there dk - just found your note of Tuesday 8th September about
"surgery tomorrow" (today) - so I hope this finds you having returned
safe and sound from the procedure and a suitable rest thereafter.
Onwards and upwards! ???
MC
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Incomprehensible idiocy wasn't rare in other days, that's for sure.
The mindset was surely the result of the presumption of "the right
to rule" that existed among the aristocracy and well-to-do of the
times. Emigration from England itself was not rare - e.g. to the
Americas due to religious beliefs and social ostracism - and it was
surely arrogant idiocy & incompetence that saw Lord North preside
over the loss of British influence and control in the America of the
day even while the old enemy, France, was vying for control there.
On such turns of history's wheel does the fate of succeeding generations find its outcome.
On a lighter "emigrational" note (of sorts), there was a huge
exodus from other European lands to places like the USA (the promised land?) and the latter benefitted accordingly. Look at how
a certain I. Baline became the "Anglicised" Irving Berlin - and
one of the world's immortal songwriters. And wasn't a certain
JFK of Irish origin? The world can move in mysterious ways!
Comment is about Coffin ships (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
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Wed 9th Sep 2020 14:14
That waives the rules has got to be a newspaper headline...if it isn't it should be. Greg...you might have copyright!
Comment is about The hoary and the gory (blog)
Original item by Greg Freeman
This is certainly stimulating stuff. That's a good line GF, and raised
a smile here in London W1. I'm not au fait with the documentation
that Theresa May thought appropriate to sign in her version of
leaving the EU but wonder if that is now considered some sort of
appeasement item...apropos Chamberlain waving (!) his piece of
paper in other days . On the original discussion of Rule Britannia
and Land of Hope and Glory - I found myself watching a TV item
featuring Vanessa Feltz worrying over the empirical meaning of the
the latter's words "Wider still and wider may thy bounds be set..." etc.
This seemed to ignore the very real relevance of the words to the
beneficial aspects of law, medicine, social stability, inventions and military organisation that have served various countries well in the aftermath that is now the Commonwealth. In short, the "bounds"
can also be interpreted in this work as sought-after positive influences - and sung accordingly!
Comment is about The hoary and the gory (blog)
Original item by Greg Freeman
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Wed 9th Sep 2020 11:00
Rock music...a band with drumming....sounds funky ...hokey dokey...enjoyed it....better with music I guess ?
Comment is about The Hokey Cokey (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
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Wed 9th Sep 2020 10:56
Thank you Keith!!?
Comment is about Commitments (blog)
<Deleted User> (24283)
Wed 9th Sep 2020 10:55
Thanks Po!!?
Comment is about Commitments (blog)
<Deleted User> (24283)
Wed 9th Sep 2020 10:55
Yes Nicola...I agree!!
Comment is about Answerless (blog)
<Deleted User> (24283)
Wed 9th Sep 2020 10:54
Good one Po....as always....a witty note...ain't surprised at all.?
Comment is about Answerless (blog)
I agree, very difficult to learn the dance steps to this one. They seem to keep changing ... Nice work, Julie. Very skilful take on the latest bewildering development.
Comment is about The Hokey Cokey (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Lovely list poem, Julie! Back to Tesco or Asda next week?
Comment is about Market Day (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Trevor, sorry for splattering so many comments across your poems this morning. Well, actually, I'm not sorry. It was great to read them all, and I kept looking for the next one! Please keep writing with such skill and empathy. Your heart's in so many of the right places.
Comment is about trevor homer (poet profile)
Original item by trevor homer
There was a programme on Black Country dialect poetry on BBC Radio 4 last Sunday https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=106743
Comment is about A WENCH FROM THE BLACK COUNTRY (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
A poem written with great empathy.
Comment is about IT'S HARD TO BELIEVE (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
I remember when it was played on Juke Box Jury, and David Jacobs carefully enunciating the title. But I can't remember or find out whether they voted it a Hit, or a Miss. Anyway, it got to number 9.
Comment is about DECONSTRUCTED SUBTERRANEAN SOUFFLE (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
Very well said, Trevor.
Comment is about LETS ALL GO BACK TO THE 50's (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
Aren't grandchildren wonderful? And inspirational! Even if you can only see them from a distance during lockdown.
Comment is about IMOGEN - 10 months old (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
A kind of poetic 'American Pie', if I may so. So many lines to savour, including 'You can stand on a hill that looks out to the Urals, / Toward Tolstoy and Pasternak.' The last stanza, after the roll-call of literary giants that has gone before, could feel like bathos. But I don't think you intended it that way. Great work.
Comment is about THE POETRY CAFE [Café' Grande, Dudley] (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
Thanks for the kind comment, enjoy your breakfast.
Comment is about Market Day (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
I love this stanza: 'Whatever happened to the Angry Brigade? / Red Mole, and Black Dwarf? / The anthemic sham of Street Fighting Man/ has well and truly run its course." Good questions. The Stones have now opened a merchandise shop in London with their silly lips and tongue logo well to the fore. The song itself had a self-deprecating truth to it. 'The anthemic sham of Street Fighting Man.' That's a great line! And perfect iambic pentameter!
Comment is about LAST THOUGHTS ON FIDEL (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
Wed 9th Sep 2020 09:35
what do you do with your songs when you have written them
Salfordman.
Comment is about Redhood (poet profile)
Original item by Redhood
I am going through your oeuvre, Trevor, enjoying every one, and embarrassed that I hadn't discovered you before now. A shining light on Write Out Loud! You're so right about old poems that don't seem to quite work. Keep them! Years later you may find that missing last line that transforms the poem into something special.
Comment is about WHERE THE BEST OF POETRY EXISTS BETWEEN THE LINES (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
This is a wonderful poem, crafted, understated. There's so much here, if you care to look. 'Press-ganged onto a ship of fools as Old Blighty sets sail for uncertain future ... the sun sinks slowly in the west." Well, yes.
Comment is about OUT HERE ON THE COAST [revised and re-posted] (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
Excellent. Well crafted poem, Trevor. So interesting to read this a year on, with the climate changed so much for schools.
Comment is about AUTUMN TERM (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
Lovely poem, Trevor. Says it all. The best and worst of England. Very sorry I missed this first time around.
Comment is about NURSES HAVE FEELINGS TOO. (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
Pele? You must have been good. Excellent poem, Trevor, which I hadn't spotted at the time. Worth reminding us, amid all the glory of '66, how Pele was kicked out of it early on. Ironically, it was Portugal who did that to him. Eusebio subsequently won plaudits as 'the new Pele'. So good that functional old England disposed of them in the semi-final. I can be as patriotic as the next man when it comes to football! Going back to your poem, I like the way it portrays grassroots football, down at the rec, in fact. We played there every night for two months in the summer of 66.
Comment is about THE BEAUTIFUL GAME / 1966 (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
Thank you Paul.
Music too, being robbed. After several years of posting on youtube, and still the counter does not go up when a lot of works are more than passable compared to trax singing about pizza on Radio One are given airing, you get a real feel of the level, and depth of disgrace, and disgust, and fakery in our so called United Kingdom.
They have no right to do what they have done unto I and my family and Paul, it is still ongoing. It would be fair to say that if you know of a delegate from UN or Brussels, I have a case for human rights abuse to my family and I, and a look in, would definitely reveal my case and yes, I have documents that back up what I am saying.
Have a choon Paul, one to relax to. I have 82 entries on youtube. It would be interesting to know how many you see.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCHO1WwQ9RLnzFXSOC_9P8DQ/videos?view_as=subscriber
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6TKpL6P3mX8
Comment is about Who Would You Give The Library (blog)
Original item by ZTK Space
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Thu 10th Sep 2020 16:01
Like a song again.......
Comment is about STRANGER THAN FICTION (blog)
Original item by cindylee loucks