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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th Sep 2020 15:35

Maybe misspent youth catching up? ?
(I'm reminded of a song from way back - was it "Shaking All Over"?).

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th Sep 2020 15:19

Stimulating stuff! The reality/imagination scenario has relevance.
Without the reality of existence there would be no existence of an
imagination.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th Sep 2020 15:15

The use of words is something of an art, written or spoken. The
pleasure is two-fold: giving and receiving. But as for friendship and
sharing - I recall some lines put in my childhood autograph book
(source long forgotten) -
Never let your friends your secrets know;
For if your friend becomes your foe...
Around the world your secrets go!

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Faith Olajuyigbe

Mon 7th Sep 2020 14:57

Beautifully expressed. "The sound of silence/ Is echoing" my favourite line!!

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julie callaghan

Mon 7th Sep 2020 14:04

Thank goodness it was a happy ending ?

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Tom

Mon 7th Sep 2020 13:55

Thank you to Neressa and Flavia for your recent comments! So pleased you found and enjoyed this one ?

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keith jeffries

Mon 7th Sep 2020 13:28

d.k.,

Thank you for this interesting poem. Do you really believe that all imagination has to have a basis in reality? I think I would question that.

Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 7th Sep 2020 13:25

Patrick,

This poem has an appeal for me which I find quite inexplicable. It conjures up some interesting images. I like the line, "Dr. Night cried under the clouds."

Thank you for this
Keith

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Hugh

Mon 7th Sep 2020 12:28

"Looked destined to sweep roads,
And now he's worth loads !"

An enjoyable read with a happy ending.Ambition wins.Well done .

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Hugh

Mon 7th Sep 2020 12:09

A great Liverotic poem.A brilliant poetic tickle of the past.Well done.

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Hugh

Mon 7th Sep 2020 11:56

Short,sensuous and effective.Well done !

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kane man

Mon 7th Sep 2020 10:07

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kane man

Mon 7th Sep 2020 10:07

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kane man

Mon 7th Sep 2020 10:06

Brilliant
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curiousdud3

Mon 7th Sep 2020 09:35

Silence definitely gives you time to think, even if the words don't come.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Sep 2020 09:29

I have revealed my dearth of anatomical knowledge. The cushion aims to keep your femurs parallel; your tub and fib are always parallel (to each other!).

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Mon 7th Sep 2020 07:36

Rage soon calms, I have friends who are Painters and musicians, sometimrs they put my words to songs, I'm very passionate and I make no excuses for being me or the way I am, some may love me sole may hate or criticise but I look for the love and the light now always....... Blessings

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d.knape

Mon 7th Sep 2020 01:15

thanks for dipping in.
Are you kin to
Bob Hope?

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Mon 7th Sep 2020 00:11

I know the feeling x try cbd oil Ian works wonders x Nic

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Greg Freeman

Sun 6th Sep 2020 23:02

Also features poets Steve Pottinger, Heather Wastie, and the late Dave Reeves. Cheery and charming presentation by Emma includes her poem 'Flamingos in Dudley Zoo'. Well worth a listen.

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julie callaghan

Sun 6th Sep 2020 20:43

Thanks Stephen, I should be used to them by now, sadly a regular occurrence. Just not used to having the mask to hide behind! Coming in very handy?

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Sun 6th Sep 2020 18:29

Hugh, your usual comedy but with a cutting edge.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 6th Sep 2020 18:08

Revenge indeed. You cross pensioners at your peril.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 6th Sep 2020 18:04

Good one, Julie. Sorry about the cold sore though!

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Trevor Alexander

Sun 6th Sep 2020 17:56

Ain't it the truth!

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 6th Sep 2020 17:26

thanx for the 'likes' I appreciate it ?

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Flavia Gordon

Sun 6th Sep 2020 17:22

And no one could ever call him a liar...?
I enjoy your rhymes.

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Mike Bartram

Sun 6th Sep 2020 16:14

Funny, because I often think about that, and a young friend asked that very question this morning, before I wrote the poem. I would stay, that is the honest truth. There are some beautiful and very expensive properties in the likes of Childwall, Allerton and Woolton, so I would move there and lower the tone in the process obviously!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 6th Sep 2020 16:07

That means a lot coming from the Poetry King formerly known as Poemagraphic! Thanks Paul. You are a blessing. ?

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Sun 6th Sep 2020 15:48

The acid test is always the question 'if you won £10 million on the lottery would you move out of Liverpool?" If not then you speak the truth. But others before you moved well away...Beatles, Cilla, Tarbuck, O'Grady etc.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 6th Sep 2020 15:23

Paul - well, you have to keep smiling, don't you?
Hugh - thanks, but you're well ahead of me in that respect.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 6th Sep 2020 15:19

An intriguing reversal of the usual view of teacher/pupil relationships
beyond the classroom whereby it is assumed that the word "victim"
is an essential and reprehensible part of the older/younger process.

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Flavia Gordon

Sun 6th Sep 2020 14:26

You have my gratitude Paul.
Thanking the universe for allowing our souls to cross paths.x

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Mike Bartram

Sun 6th Sep 2020 12:12

Thanks for the likes and nice comment, I took early retirement at 60 , there are days I miss work, but I keep myself busy, too busy at times being everybody's taxi! Hence the Lazy Day!

My main focal point now is writing a new tribute book dedicated to Sir Ken Dodd, this will be my 2nd book in the great mans honour!

I will check that song out, most things are on YouTube these days!

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Hugh

Sun 6th Sep 2020 12:00

Well done,keep writing funny.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 6th Sep 2020 11:51

Thanks to Flavia, Paul, Abdul, Julie and Brian for the likes and kind comments.

Mike Ashley? My nephew worked for his firm some years ago, so who knows.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 6th Sep 2020 11:32

Thanks so much for your kind words, Isobel, which I have shared among the hard-working competition team. They mean a lot.

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 6th Sep 2020 10:20

Keith thank you for your remarks. Your input is always encouraging and appreciated. Ta for the like, too.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 6th Sep 2020 09:44

'Whatever we may think of him we can't argue with democracy' ... I fear Trump plans to, if the result goes against him.

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Steve Bewick

Sun 6th Sep 2020 09:35

I believe that oppositions to Trump tried to play him far to quick. There was a rush to get him investigated and/or impeached prior to the election as they fear he might just win again. Which he may well do as he builds up a frightening picture to the electorate of life under his opponents. The evidence against him in both these instances was more perceived than real I think. Poetically I was trying to portray these attempts to undermine Trump and the shambolic outcomes of both.
The starting point for his critics and I would include myself as one of those. Is that it starts from the premise of guilty as charged and unravels from there as the evidence is never found to support it. Good luck, or innocent to the charge I'm not sure. As you have said, the jury will be the final arbiter in due course. For better, or for worse.

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julie callaghan

Sun 6th Sep 2020 09:28

Thanks for the like Hugh

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Rich

Sun 6th Sep 2020 07:58

No worries, it's a great poem.
I've been on WoL for a few years now, but I don't post that many comments or likes. I dip in and out a bit, too. I love this forum, though, loads of great poems.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 6th Sep 2020 04:23

Welcome Dan! Thanks for sharing your gift with us. You are among friends. Write on!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 6th Sep 2020 03:38

For Dylan, I would change the second stanza to “His heart is full of Diamonds and Rust”... He is for sure a Poetry King, but I would rather Leonard Cohen won the Pulitzer.

Thanks for stopping by! Welcome to WOL. ?

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Flavia Gordon

Sun 6th Sep 2020 02:25

One of my favourites so far. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
Thank you so much for sharing. I feel enriched by it.

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Dan Holtan

Sun 6th Sep 2020 00:35

Thanks for your perception and kindness.
I am not obsessed with this topic, but rather interested. As you say, we are all subject to the realities of aging. What we think about it matters.

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Isobel

Sat 5th Sep 2020 23:39

Well I got my books today and I must say that I'm stunned by the quality of the poetry. So many could have easily made it through to the shortlisted poems - it must've been a very tough call.

Hats off the Writeoutloud team. Organising this competition and producing this book has been an amazing accomplishment! Thank you to every one of you!

Amongst my poetry books this is certainly one that I'll treasure and re-read because it contains so much shared history and emotions that I can truly empathise with.

It also warms my heart to think that a very deserving charity will benefit from this.

Let's all look forward now to a time when this will all just seem like a bad dream, with the occasional moments of warmth and camaraderie engendered by projects such as this.

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th Sep 2020 23:24

Abdul,

Another poem which takes the reader straight to the flower. A poem which automatically triggers the imagination.

Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th Sep 2020 23:03

How richly blessed you are.

Keith

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d.knape

Sat 5th Sep 2020 21:42

Every once in a while
I get a note from Keith,
and every once in a while
I get something right.
?

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