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Don Matthews

Thu 9th Jan 2020 04:08

It worked for me.....

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kimberly

Wed 8th Jan 2020 22:33

Thanks, Don, for the generous comment. This is an older poem I cleaned up and wasn’t sure if it worked. Glad you enjoyed it. ?

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Don Matthews

Wed 8th Jan 2020 22:13

Ruth

The 'problem' is that I read the paper every day and Boris keeps continually popping up. It is the most interesting ways he pops up that stimulates Thalia and I into poetic action. A serious leader being fodder for our WOL contributions..... Funny 'bout that. Trump also. Funny 'bout that also.....Like two Ronnies across the lake ...

I read headlines in one of your papers 'Boris will get Brexit done in a week'. I looked everywhere but couldn't see which year they were meaning.......

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Don Matthews

Wed 8th Jan 2020 21:55

Our rollercoaster and friends welcome you. We will not let you down. True friends never let you down.

And our wheels don't fall off......

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Don Matthews

Wed 8th Jan 2020 21:50

I was struck by the simplicity of language you used Mika to describe a simple everyday phenomenon.. Simple, but artistic language. Why should I think anything less? You are a poet.

'How lucky I am to be a witness'. How many are blind to this beauty? Yes indeed, we should count ourselves lucky. Maybe poets are more aware of surrounding beauty? And give thanks for this......

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Don Matthews

Wed 8th Jan 2020 21:22

Rich

'So, I respect all opinions. I just don't agree!'

I agree - with you....

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Don Matthews

Wed 8th Jan 2020 21:13

I'm pleased it works for you Tom:

' but I find trying to recall my poems line by line is a fast and effective way to fall back to sleep'

If I recycle round my rhymes
When I hop in my bed
My neurons go speed up lots more
Muck up my silly head

Or recall your lines
Maybe I'm reading the wrong poet?....


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John Marks

Wed 8th Jan 2020 20:01

Tiny victories! Heart beats/beasts - auto-piloted through the day. "My flippant will" is also a defence mechanism, I don't care but I do.

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John Marks

Wed 8th Jan 2020 19:56

watching winter’s tide sweep in
standing in the falling snow

Don't be too hard on your 15 yo self. We do what we can, given the circumstances. Yes, time is always of the essence, isn't it?

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John Marks

Wed 8th Jan 2020 19:52

It is a mystery how we can lead so much of our lives on auto-pilot. We never do forget to breath - until we do!

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John Marks

Wed 8th Jan 2020 19:47

Thanks for noticing and commenting Tom.


...Why do sinners’ ways prosper? and why must
Disappointment all I endeavour end?
.......
Them; birds build—but not I build; no, but strain,
Time’s eunuch, and not breed one work that wakes.
Mine, O thou lord of life, send my roots rain.

GMHopkins

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kJ Walker

Wed 8th Jan 2020 18:02

Thanks Po & Brian.
This is an old one which I thought I'd posted a while ago. I couldn't find it on any of the sites I use, so it may or may not be a repost
Glad you liked it

Cheers Kevin.

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Rich

Wed 8th Jan 2020 17:26

This debate fascinates me.

Some ecossystems are used to fires, they've evolved with them.

Just because a tree regenerates after a fire, doesn't mean that a really big fire is inocuous.

The scale, frequency and impact of events is getting, and will get, worse.

I, too, cannot understand the lack of concern and urgency I see in the world.

You cannot change it, it's too late already - this is happening to the world, now.

Just because we will be wiped from this planet in the end, does not mean we should all do what we can to hasten that end.

I acknowledge, though, that one of the great aspects of life is that we share opinions, and I know I don't agree with everyone, and vice versa.

So, I respect all opinions. I just don't agree!

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Tom

Wed 8th Jan 2020 14:55

Rich, you are spot on here!

So many people are in denial about our negative impact on the planet (and just in denial of basic observable science in general).

I have been working on something similar recently but it's not ready to share yet. Like you, I want to stick the irrefutable facts and not get caught up in the denier's game of semantics. We can't 'save the planet' from its ultimate fate - but we can certainly curb the impact of mankind which is accelerating the planet's poisoning. I honestly don't understand anyone who is still in denial about this.

As Don says; It's not too late to care. And it's not too late to try.

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Do.RoThy

Wed 8th Jan 2020 14:48

Thank you all!!?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 8th Jan 2020 13:36

If we could only get our hands on that coin with initial leave date it would be worth a pretty penny! I must say I'm impressed with how you are keeping up with our current affairs Don!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 8th Jan 2020 13:36

Although this latest load of fires have been far greater than the annual forest fire season that Australia usually experiences, few appreciate that the trees do regenerate. I was astonished to see the effects on wild land close to my son's house in 2003 fully regenerated in 2008.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 8th Jan 2020 13:00

And remember how nature produces new sprouts from the scorched
earth -reminding me of lines from a memorable Binyon poem about
rot and corruption going to the fire....to be born anew.
Fire has alway been synonymous with nature's ultimate cleansing power. .

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 8th Jan 2020 12:49

A little "proof reading" to get things rights shouldn't be confined to poetry or politics.
I have just acquired a DVD of a film starring, among other bright
names of Hollywood's past, Donald O'Connor. Remember his great
turn in "Singing in the Rain"? Well, on the cover, his name above the
title is "Donald O'Connel"!. If he were alive now, he would be justifiably miffed! ?

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d.knape

Wed 8th Jan 2020 12:08

we fear the darkness
not knowing what awaits
there in the shadows.

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Tom

Wed 8th Jan 2020 11:11

Really powerful John. For me; the second and fourth verses in particular hit hard.

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Wed 8th Jan 2020 10:21

Great stuff Kage.


"....absolutely nothing half so much worth doing as simply messing about in boats.” to quote Ratty/Kenneth Grahame

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Don Matthews

Wed 8th Jan 2020 09:33

You've given me a problem
Boris dear, oh dear
Get your act together boy
Get yourself in gear

Australians think you silly twits
You once did rule the waves
But now you can't get Brexit right
Come Boris behave

Rule Britannia.....Rule..Bri..Rul....

glug...glug....

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Tom

Wed 8th Jan 2020 08:17

Nice one Don ? Loved the image too.

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Don Matthews

Wed 8th Jan 2020 07:11

Thalia, my Muse just does Mirth. Easy simple stuff. She leaves the cosmic to others. Too heavy she says......

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 8th Jan 2020 03:16

I agree Po, trying to make sense of cosmic energy is a full time job for my muse!

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John Marks

Tue 7th Jan 2020 22:35

Tom. You make me less lonely than I was. WOL isn't the same since the 'clearing out' of the dissidents, as you remarked elsewhere. Thanks brother. John

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Tom

Tue 7th Jan 2020 22:21

Hi John, I’m with you. This though crosses my mind often. Nicely put.

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kJ Walker

Tue 7th Jan 2020 20:14

the first line says it all
more people should follow that mantra

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kimberly

Tue 7th Jan 2020 20:01

Lovely poem.

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Tom

Tue 7th Jan 2020 12:36

Haha, this made me smile. Nice one.

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d.knape

Tue 7th Jan 2020 12:34

Thanks for reading my Honking poem!
We need more Honking poems.T
there are just not enough Honking poets!

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d.knape

Tue 7th Jan 2020 12:27

A lighthearted look at Roots
and...beans!

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Dragan Bozilov

Tue 7th Jan 2020 11:01

Brilliant one!

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Don Matthews

Tue 7th Jan 2020 06:51

It's not too late to care.

Yes.......

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Don Matthews

Tue 7th Jan 2020 06:47

'For sending right people at the right time in my life'

And the rollercoaster.........

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kimberly

Tue 7th Jan 2020 02:43

Thanks, Do!! Needed to hear that! So easy to quit when things get uncomfortable.

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Do.RoThy

Tue 7th Jan 2020 02:19

Sure Donny dear.... I'm anxiously awaiting the call for the next ride....love them... ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 7th Jan 2020 02:08

Thanyou Do

Shakespeare said all the world's a stage. When you think about it LMS is just a stage for the imagination to play out on. Players being the ringmaster, Thalia, Lucy. Janet, Ethel, Bert, Miss Bethel, You, the Like-Minders. you the audience, are also players on this stage of imagination.

Join me on the journey...to who knows where?.....

Oh?......you've already joined me?

And you're enjoying the rollercoaster rides?

I'll pick you up when the next one's ready to roll....

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Do.RoThy

Tue 7th Jan 2020 02:06

Romantic piece!!

Nothing makes sense initially, but with time, all the pieces falls into right place.

Everything happens for a reason. Trust the process....i was advised by a close fren long back.

Your love will be with you, if you don't quit but continue!!! ?

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Do.RoThy

Tue 7th Jan 2020 01:45

Brilliantly written!!

Different roles in life one plays...as a son, brother, father, husband, grandfather....n socially.

Reminds me of William Shakespeare's all the worlds a stage

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Don Matthews

Mon 6th Jan 2020 23:09

My name is Don (our poet)
Comment-reading friends
All 10,000 miles away
This comment now I send

Ain't technology grand.?......


Po

What an upside-down world we live in. The Theme Park is the only place I feel like I'm on level ground......

Ruth

What a perfect line that is......almost like a line of poetry in itself...

Philipos

Thanks. Yes, I liked the variety and the bracketed word at end of first line.....


Tom and Randy

Thankyou for the likes...

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kimberly

Mon 6th Jan 2020 23:00

Thanks Po & Don.

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Don Matthews

Mon 6th Jan 2020 22:49

Po/Mika

Po has said:

'A poets job to remove those bandages to allow the air to speed up the healing process.

Those of others... as well as those of our own'


This is why I 'go on' so much about mental health issues and my own 'problem'

To let others know they are not alone. Sharing is an essential part of the healing process......

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Don Matthews

Mon 6th Jan 2020 22:43

'The roller coasters all ready to set in motion
Confusing minds and hearts with negative emotions'

The LMS rollercoaster works the opposite way. Clears the minds and hearts with positive emotions. Hop on board and enjoy the ride.

Oh?....You're already on board?....

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Don Matthews

Mon 6th Jan 2020 22:38

I've sung a song for sixpence
Have pocket full of cash
Spirits have been raised all round
Home for din now dash

Everyone is happy
Doom and gloom kicked out
Sing a song of sixpence
That's what's life's about


Eth?...Wot's a sixpence?.....

It's those little round silver things you collected in your piggy bank. Remember in kindy Miss Bethel taught you all about currency and the investment markets?........

She was a luvly teacher Eth...why did she have to die?.......

At Christmas we open piggy and put sixpences in the pudding.....

I thought they were threepences Eth?.......

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Randy Horton

Mon 6th Jan 2020 22:31

Thanks, Rich.

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John Coopey

Mon 6th Jan 2020 22:07

That is indeed a puzzler, MC. Why would so many traditional Labour voters vote for the Party which had supervised the mess we are in for the last 10 years.
For my answer, see the poem above.

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Jain Gawne

Mon 6th Jan 2020 21:33

Just a bit of a fun one :)

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Rich

Mon 6th Jan 2020 21:24

Top stuff. Positivity rocks.

It's easy to complain. Seeing a path through the darkness matters.

Stay positivie. You can be lifted.

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