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Tommy Carroll

Wed 5th Jun 2019 11:52

You tell it like it is Louise.
Tommy

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 5th Jun 2019 11:46

Try doing the maths

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afishamongmany

Wed 5th Jun 2019 11:32

Can anyone spell out for me -how- one actually gets to 'pin a poem' on the map?
Thanking you in advance.
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John Coopey

Wed 5th Jun 2019 11:13

It’s not weights I want to pump, Don.

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afishamongmany

Wed 5th Jun 2019 11:01

Thank you d.k. for a potently positive poem. May their smiles sustain them through all sorrows. ><>

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Robert C Gaulke

Wed 5th Jun 2019 10:53

Cheers. Don.

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afishamongmany

Wed 5th Jun 2019 10:49

Hi Chris - Good read. I've found something on Uchtryd's Summer Place (a part of Wales I once walked) but who is Mariamé?
Go well
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afishamongmany

Wed 5th Jun 2019 10:25

Beautifully done Chris. ><>

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Don Matthews

Wed 5th Jun 2019 10:21

Keep at it Louise. It takes courage to reveal personal struggles on a public stage to an audience of strangers

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Don Matthews

Wed 5th Jun 2019 10:12

John I'd like to offer my
Advice from aging years
(You gotta catch these poems quick)
(Before they disappear...)

Down to tin tacks.....

John I hate to tell you
The body does wear out
With too much hanky-panky
Too much gadabout

I know you don't believe me
Think you're still virile, strong
That you can still bed down a lass
I'm sorry John, you're wrong

Accept your fate that nature gave
There's nothing you can do
(You could perhaps try pumping weights?)
Or bid your youth adieu ?

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keith jeffries

Wed 5th Jun 2019 08:39

Kevin,

Another gem for the book?? Brilliant

Keith

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Wed 5th Jun 2019 08:33

I somehow missed this one - sorry.
it is such a brave poem, it has a ring of defiance about it - head high facing the world.
Dorothy

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Wed 5th Jun 2019 08:22

I love waking up to a giggle - although this one has provoked a belly laugh - it is brilliant.

Thank you

Dorothy.

PS.

I hope poor Fred doesn't get jealous

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Wed 5th Jun 2019 07:36

Is Lemons a deliberate mistake John?

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kJ Walker

Wed 5th Jun 2019 07:10

Thanks again Jason and Don.
I think I'd go running for the hills from some of them Australian spiders, but the ones we get are quite harmless.

Cheers Kevin

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kJ Walker

Wed 5th Jun 2019 07:05

Thanks Jason and John.
Yes John, I'm doing this on at Well spoken next week. I do have another new one too, but then I'll have to regurgitate some of my old crap.
Enjoy your holiday, hope to see you in July.
Cheers Kevin

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Don Matthews

Wed 5th Jun 2019 01:18

I like this

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Don Matthews

Wed 5th Jun 2019 01:16

He wouldn't want to come to Australia
We specialize in spiders down here
For me? I just laugh at their antics
I'm not scared,(I just drink up my beer) ?

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Lisa C Bassignani

Tue 4th Jun 2019 23:31

Congratulations Dorothy! I knew this was a winner for sure.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Tue 4th Jun 2019 23:26

Thanks
and
Thanks

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 4th Jun 2019 22:50

And so would my missus!?

J.

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 4th Jun 2019 22:48

Well I have to say it's about time,
You dropped in with some Aussie rhyme,
We all hope that you'll soon get well,
And recover from your falling spell.

J.?

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Martin Elder

Tue 4th Jun 2019 22:26

David you comments are always welcome. It is good to hear a point of view that has first hand experience of such situations. I cannot and would not pretend to be able to do so.
Thank you for you input in this and as you say if nothing else it may cause a talking point and therefore some further thoughts in the hearts and minds of others.
Thanks David

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Tue 4th Jun 2019 20:21

Ray and John

Thank you,
Your support and comments are important to me.

Thank you.
Dorothy

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John Marks

Tue 4th Jun 2019 19:38

What a delightful piece of whimsy - with all the nuts and bolts hidden away too and, as d.K so spiffingly declaims, a web spun by a webb!

Well done Dorothy awfully well-penned!

John

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elPintor

Tue 4th Jun 2019 19:25

Thanks Martin--much appreciated )

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John Coopey

Tue 4th Jun 2019 18:52

Thanks MC. In truth, I am rather enjoying these privileged years.

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raypool

Tue 4th Jun 2019 17:22

Nice work Dorothy. Finely drawn portrait . Congratulations!

Ray

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Martin Elder

Tue 4th Jun 2019 16:54

Thanks to Robert, Jon, Mona, a fishamongmany and Kim for liking.


Thanks Dorothy for commenting. I feel the whole situation is rather sad. However my take on it was the songs were more songs of joy than lament. But I totally get what you are saying with regard to affluence and the appalling inequalities that abound.

Your comments are much appreciated.
Thanks again

Martin

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 4th Jun 2019 16:49

These entries from Stateside are always worth having - and this
is no exception.

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Tue 4th Jun 2019 16:43

Rich and Jane.
Thank You both for commenting, such encouragement is heartwarming.

Dorothy

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 4th Jun 2019 16:43

Brian - thanks for the comment. There is some cause for wondering
about the "hows", the "whys" and the effects of this one-way situation.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 4th Jun 2019 16:28

Sober, thoughtful - a measured reflection on times past. Well read
and clearly well felt, but having reached my mid-70s I can't identify
too much with the pessimism of the last lines - indeed, in some respects things are better than before. And nature will always reward
the ability to adapt to changing circumstances - mental, physical and
financial. Hang in there and relish each day as a challenge as well
as its own reward. ?

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Tue 4th Jun 2019 15:44

Don
were you expecting room service, spoon feeding? Mmmmm.

Time to stand on your own two legs - even weight on both - and repair the ladder.

Dorothy

PS Nice to see the Aussie's on form.

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Tue 4th Jun 2019 13:58

Congratulations Dorothy! A creativity poem deserving of poem of the week??? This poem takes the reader through a tale from start to finish with rhythm & rhyme...a wonderful read!

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Rich

Tue 4th Jun 2019 13:35

Lovely poem Dorothy, well done.

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John Coopey

Tue 4th Jun 2019 09:33

Thanks Kev. I have to say that your poems are great but your eyesight’s poor.

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John Coopey

Tue 4th Jun 2019 09:32

Fabulous stuff and nonsense again, Kev. On offer at Well Spoken? I’d miss it though as we’re on holiwags.

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kJ Walker

Tue 4th Jun 2019 07:21

John (you handsome devil) you're still all those things, but now you have the experience to make sense of it.

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Tue 4th Jun 2019 06:45

"The night passes amid parents singing worship songs"
what a sad hopeless picture that sums up

compare that to the affluence of Trump Towers and other 'palaces'
it sickens.

Dorothy

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Tue 4th Jun 2019 06:17

Thank you, Martin
So many nice comments, i am overwhelmed, I shall have to go out and buy cake.


Dorothy

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Tue 4th Jun 2019 06:11

Thank you Jon.

Trevor
Thank you for your comment - however, I have a confession to make, The butterfly (shock, horror) was not a peacock, it was a cabbage white, so my imagination was more imaginative than you imagined.

Dorothy

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Tue 4th Jun 2019 06:04

OOH! - Fish
You've made me go all over wobbly.

Thank you
Dorothy

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Tue 4th Jun 2019 06:02

Peter and KJ.

Thank you for reading, commenting and supporting. I am grateful

Dorothy

PS.
KJ. give my love to Fred.

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Philipos

Mon 3rd Jun 2019 22:56

Well John I guess we all miss the youth and vigour our earlier selves but apart from health, there must be some positives in getting on a bit, the younger generation I suppose. Great to see you still posting. P.

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John Coopey

Mon 3rd Jun 2019 21:46

Thanks, Fish.

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Martin Elder

Mon 3rd Jun 2019 21:30

congratulations Dorothy well done

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 3rd Jun 2019 21:23

Love this Kevin, I think it's been said already but your style of writing is absolutely brilliant.

J.?

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afishamongmany

Mon 3rd Jun 2019 20:53

Well written;well read John C. 'Tis how 'tis ? ><>

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afishamongmany

Mon 3rd Jun 2019 20:40

Thank you Louise for this poem of yours. It's a flag of courage for the encouraging of us plodding pilgrims.
Go well, write more as and when you can.
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