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Nigel Astell

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 10:50

Who is that sexy girl next to me?

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John Coopey

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 10:47

Absolutely, Brian. It was there for Remainers to lose. And we did. It doesn’t alter the fact that Leavers can’t explain what their plan to leave is. And still can’t.
(I’ve never been too worried about being told what to do, Brian).

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 10:37

I enjoyed this.
I like the subject about witches. A culture we hear little about now.
At this time of the Equinox we look deeper in.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 10:34

The answer you're looking for John...yes you are right...most of us wanted out without knowing exactly what it might mean, but trusting our gut instincts that the British people would rise to the challenge.

The remainers on the other hand were the majority but let EU membership slip through their fingers. So perhaps you need to look at your side and ask questions.

Anyway, in what seems to have become a forum for just three of us (perhaps reflecting the general interest on here) I suggest we call a halt to this before we're told to.

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Sun 23rd Sep 2018 09:33

some great lines Damon - it's not often eggnog gets a mention in a poem - but really, a Christmas poem in September? - a bit early surely ? But I'll forgive you because you're way cooler and more unique than any snowflake ? Merry Christmas!

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Sun 23rd Sep 2018 09:26

you do these little cinematic vignettes so well Ray - a touch of the Ealings perhaps?

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John Coopey

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 09:22

No doubt, Brian. But I’m still at a loss to understand what you thought you’d voted for. Other than “Brexit Means Brexit”. You seem to keep proving my point.

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Sun 23rd Sep 2018 07:25

John - unfortunately a large number of potential remain voters - mostly younger people I believe - couldn't be arsed to get out of bed and get down to the polling station. Had they done so I think the result could have been different. I wonder how many left-leaning WOLers reading this fall into this category?

In my own family, me, my wife and son were first in the queue to vote leave. My two daughters had better things to do and one of them in particular has constantly whinged about the outcome ever since...accusing me of ruining her life.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 07:16

Hi Peter, this poem brought me back to my own childhood..the challenges..I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing..?

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Sun 23rd Sep 2018 06:30

Where brilliance. I felt like clapping. ?

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<Deleted User> (19913)

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 06:30

Where brilliance. I felt like clapping. ?

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Big Sal

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 02:32

The imagery fits together like a tesseract. Well done.?

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Big Sal

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 02:31

Welcome and enjoy.?

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John Coopey

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 23:39

MC - This is the stuff of good stump oratory. High ideals and visions with no substance. It reminds me of prospective Miss Worlds embracing world peace and the end to hunger as their greatest wishes. So, at the risk of repeating my repetition, how? What is the plan?
Brian - It is indeed the honest answer to admit that you do not know what the plan is. It does beg the question, however, why on Earth you would vote for something when you don’t know what you are getting. In contrast, every Remainer knew what they were voting for.

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Janey Colbourne

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 22:00

Thanks Andy, yes I will certainly be doing it at Word Central sometime soon.

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keith jeffries

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 19:57

Profoundly interesting and well composed. Thank you.
Keith

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lynn hahn

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 19:39

Yeah he's really cute. He's a Norfolk terrier. He has me wrapped around his little paw! Such a funny goofy guy.

His tongue is too long for his mouth lol. It hangs out a bit most of the time and has since he broke out of his mommy's belly. He was an irresistible puppy.

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keith jeffries

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 19:30

Words with feeling that can come only from the heart. Thank you
Keith

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<Deleted User> (19836)

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 19:00

Excellent poem. Something to think about!

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<Deleted User> (19836)

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 18:55

Delightful! Who wouldn't want to wait on him...he's adorable!?? Woof! Woof!

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Ian Whiteley

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 18:36

this topic is of particular interest to me - in 2014 I released an album of work - both poetry and song - using poems I had written in the previous year and published on WOL. The whole album covers the period from Declaration to Armistice (there are also a couple of cover versions).
The Wilfred Owen society was good enough to promote this work through their website - and via a convoluted route I was asked to perform the whole piece at The Wilfred Owen festival in Oswestry on Wednesday 7th November (the centenary of the armistice and of Wilfred Owen's death). I will be supported by Jeff Dawson (Jeffarama!) on the night. We are also doing a further 6 or 7 gigs during the week of the commemoration.
If anyone is interested in a listen (or a purchase :-) they can be accessed on the following link (you can listen for free).
I would recommend 'Home By Christmas', 'Death Of A Poet', 'Canary Girl' and 'Passchedndaelle' to get a taster of the material. If you like what you hear then please listen on. The pieces are in chronological order- so it really is a story book. - there are a number of musical styles as well as varied poetry forms in use - and a descriptive introduction to each topic.
Thanks for the article Keith - I look forward to reading the rest :-)
https://thecrowsofalbion.bandcamp.com/album/still-in-the-war-boys

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 16:56

To borrow again -
You ask what is our plan?
To break free of the shackles that hold us captive and
ignores our own historical right of self-determination.
You ask what is our aim?
Success - for the future, despite all the misgivings, all the
nay-sayers and doom-mongers. Conviction of purpose and courage in its continuance will see us through...as it has so
often against all the odds in our proud story. We stand on
the shoulders of giants so let's not fall to our knees for the
convenience of easy travel and a cosy "do as you're told"
diktat from a stealthily laid control from beyond these shores.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 16:35

The conditions and frustrations of being subject of the age
definitions are readily understood in a fast moving world.
The term "minor" is relevant to a particular country and
its society and the age it defines varies accordingly.
Here in the UK, age 16 sees defined personal rights.
The law says - "child/young person/adult - with ages
defined according to what is relevant at 14/16/17/18 plus for driving, drinking and voting etc.
A child is below 14 years of age...perhaps the most
logical age application for the term "minor".

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Sat 22nd Sep 2018 16:31

You're like a dog with a bone John. MC and I and others have made it clear that yes, things are not ideal, but the important thing is that the UK is leaving. And before you ask again...we don't know what the plan is as at present we are not masters of our own destiny...which is exactly the reason why the majority voted to leave.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 16:20

I believe that the current UKIP leader has the courage of
his convictions and can defend them with panache in an age
that sees such things fall prey to political "flexibility" and
the desperate desire to be all things to all people. It is
indicative of the suspect values of the age that taking a
moral position that defends the vulnerable and seeks to
pin down the proselytizers who would deprive us of proper
free speech is so readily condemned in one of the "ism"
categories of choice.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 16:11

Brief - but no grief -
Using words like a thief
Ensures we enjoy
Your poetical ploy!

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 16:06

Very good Ray as a fan of old black and white movies it struck exactly the right cord..thank you ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 16:04

What a beauty...dog and poem..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 16:03

Yes DK. I do too liked it very much, very relevant.
I am lucky enough to live in rural Ireland so do see traditional farming..it is so sad when progress is harming our health rather than improving it.

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keith jeffries

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 15:08

Superb. I really like this poem. Thanks,
Keith?

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Big Sal

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 14:23

There is an entire generation in Argentina called 'Asociacion Madres de Plaza de Mayo' in which they are all mothers with children lost to state terrorism (generously backed up by US doctrine and war dollars), and the same is being replayed in other South American countries, and even in Mexico today. Entire generations left looking for loved ones most likely dissolved in acid or buried in shallow graves. The unanswered questions remain in the shadows of these organizations and histories, and I think you may have inspired a new poem from my way Ray.

Excellent piece by the way. Truly transcending in power.?

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 14:08

Extraordinary writing.
Through the grief stricken mothers we see the human cost, the tragedy.
The causes, misguided or worthy, this poem gives us an inner glimpse.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 14:01

Read it twice, then saw it in sort of black and white, a real scene.
Real positivity 'I'll be out in a day'.
Original work that I really enjoyed.

Hannah

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lynn hahn

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 13:17

So this is canine day? All I can say is...there sure are a lot of dog poems going around. Is it contagious? ?

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lynn hahn

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 13:08

I enjoyed your poem. I love dogs but their need to protect their homes can get trying.

My little Norfolk terrier acts like anything that passes our home is bad news. I am quick to assure him all is well. Sorry your neighbors do not do the same with their best friends.

I am afraid of aggressive dogs too. I always hope the fences holding back their reactions to me are well tended to. I have been bitten and it is not fun.

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keith jeffries

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 12:45

Thank to all who have commented on this poem. It raises many issues regarding retirement and how best to use one´s time when that day comes. For many it is difficult to adjust from a life of routine and stress to one of free time and savouring the rewards of a long working life. It took me some time to deal with this but hobbies, writing, reading and pursuing other interests have keep my mind active. I would also advocate some form of charity work.
Thank you again,
Keith

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<Deleted User> (19836)

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 12:44

Agreed! Very clever!?

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keith jeffries

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 12:37

MC.,
Thank you for this. I too belong to a generation whose parents fought in the Second World War and whose Grandparents fought in the Great War. I well remember listening to them and their experiences. Their memories have stayed with me.
This particular article is an introduction to others which I hope to complete prior to 11 November. I trust you will find them both interesting and illuminating.
Keith

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raypool

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 11:42

I think the meat of your poem is in the last verse Rachel, holding the key to how people are easily controlled by repetitive experiences. They adapt so well: traffic, political claims, advertising overdoses, meaningless marriages, and yet we still have privacy in the toilet. I mean, how civilized can we really be?
MacDonalds please take note.
A real change from your more esoteric work if I may say.


Ray

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Sat 22nd Sep 2018 11:40

Good morning lovely lady. Thank's for another beaut!







Rose ?

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Don Matthews

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 10:51

I like this Becky. Nice rhyming. Particularly liked the line 'A canine chain reaction ends all hope of being discreet' ?

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Andy N

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 10:33

well done Janey. A powerful write. Hope to see you read that sometime soon (:

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Sat 22nd Sep 2018 09:14

Becky this is very well written! I myself am a dog lover. I have four dogs but they are family members. They are properly trained, cared for and do not bother people as they sleep at night in the house. I can relate to your poem because here in Greece many people keep stray dogs on their property by day and let them loose by night...this is extremely dangerous! I myself have been attacked twice and I no longer go for long hikes. And the endless night- time barking could drive anyone crazy!

You've really told a truthful tale with great rhyme! Bravo!

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Hugh

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 09:14

A great tale,
Prefer a dog that wags its tail.

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<Deleted User> (19836)

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 09:05

Love it Don! I have 4 dogs and a cat...if you're not into animals don't come to my house!!!?

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John Coopey

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 08:46

If only Leave was as simple as they told you it would be.
So what’s the plan, MC?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 08:29

Hi Becky. I was a postman for five years so your poem resonates well with me.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 08:28

Thanks M.C. enjoyed this. ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 08:26

Excellent

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 22nd Sep 2018 08:25

Hi Wendy I echo Rose's comments lovely. ?

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