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Don Matthews

Mon 24th Sep 2018 09:50

Nice writing/artwork Chris ?

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Nicola Hulme

Mon 24th Sep 2018 09:49

Thanks Nigel, although I don't know why half of them have turned sideways? They are the right way up on my phone??? Nice shirt ? I'll add more pics... if anyone doesn't want their photo displayed, please let me know and I'll take it down (I should have asked first - sorry).

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Martin Elder

Mon 24th Sep 2018 08:27

Hi D
No I don't carry the sign a round with me. It was more about my presumption at calling myself a poet and leaving it to others to decide. It is probably getting a bit old now so I should perhaps change the profile picture.
Cheers
Martin

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kJ Walker

Mon 24th Sep 2018 07:31

Thanks Taylor & John. And Anya & David for the likes. This one was deliberately poignant as it was about my own childhood. "Sadness with fleeting glimpses of joy" just about sums that up.
Grimstone low is a more blinkered view of the place where I grew up, and I like to see the funny side when writing about there.

Cheers Kevin

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John Marks

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 23:04

Thank you Ray and Hannah. The witch is a potent symbol of female magic and power. That was why powerful men feared them and had them burnt alive as a warning to other women.

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d.knape

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:59

Yes, true story.
just turned it into a poem.

what about that "Poet" sign you are holding?
do you carry that around with you?

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raypool

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:39

Nice of you to say so, Martin. I know we both enjoy that delving back, and I do enjoy some aspects of the past. I try not to wear rose tined specs all the time though!

All the best Ray

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Big Sal

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:23

Excellent poem, terrible affliction.?

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Big Sal

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:19

Second to last stanza could suffice for a spaceship trip through the stars.

Great piece.?

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Big Sal

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:18

No problem, but do keep up the great work writing.?

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elPintor

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 20:44

Hey Ray, thanks for reading. I hope you enjoy what remains of the weekend.

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Damon Blackery

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 20:34

Thank's XD

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Ged the Poet

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 20:12

Thank you very much for your kind words on the 'The ship they call Alzheimer's' and your warm welcome back Martin. With poetry... sometimes life just gets in the way.? I look forward to catching up on your blog my friend. Much appreciated.

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 20:02

You always evoke sweet memories with your work. One of my favourites was the lavender hill mob.
Nice one Ray

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 20:00

Your poetry always excels and bringing all the right ingredients in what you write about and the way that you use words. This helps to draw the reader in as well as having a subtle amount of humour just to add the right amount of spice
Nice on Peter

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 19:54

Although it might be going off subject slightly passion does come in many guises not least in poetry, a lot of which I read on WOL. This poem being no exception Keith.
Nice one.

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keith jeffries

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 19:51

Martin,
This poem creates an image which I seem to be familiar with. Do they still drink Mild? A good poem.
Thank you
Keith

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 19:31

Why am I not surprised at this poem Nigel. You always did have a flair for the unexpected.
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 19:28

Welcome back Daniel. It's good to se you posting again. I see you haven't lost any of your flair
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 19:11

is this a true story. Either way it makes a good poem.
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 19:00

I love the line about looking into a blind mans eyes and seeing what he sees.
Nice one

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d.knape

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:46

Thanks Keith for your admiration.
I am glad someone recognizes brilliance
when they see it.


wink.

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d.knape

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:45

The Irish are known for poetry and
drinking.
where do you stand?


wink.

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Jon Stainsby

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:42

Thanks, Big Sal.

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d.knape

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:42

not sure what you meant by your last comment...
it's a pity things like this stay as a poem?

by the way, what is that round thing on your head?

wink.

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Big Sal

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:12

Like seeing synesthesia through a kaleidoscope all in itself. Nice one Jon.?

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Big Sal

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:08

Excellent piece of poetry you have here.?

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Big Sal

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:07

How have I not seen your profile yet? Great sample!?

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Sun 23rd Sep 2018 17:25

Compelling. I like your approach!?

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John Coopey

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 17:16

A far cry from Grimston Low. There again, perhaps it's other face.

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John Coopey

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 17:11

Missed this, MC. I'm not a dog person but thus is nice work.

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raypool

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 16:07

Thank you Hannah. If it has strength it is in the feeling, rather than necessarily the detail. Glad it worked for you.

Well Big Sal, there is always a bigger picture, and thanks for touching on that. Of course there must also be hostage taking in some societies, reminding us of security loopholes to be exploited. I suppose somewhere in a poem you might write would be the word Brigands, it seems to fit the picture. I m very pleased this has hit a spot. As a side issue, burial can be deeply respectful or just a place to hide evidence - a thought there perhaps.

Thanks for the likes, Col. Darren and Anya.
Ray

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raypool

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 16:01

Thanks Hannah. I do enjoy these opportunities to try conversational type stuff. Not traditional poetry, but as I said before try anything. Glad you like it! The positivity was a reflection on the ludicrous optimism of some of those early films.

Hi Taylor, lovely to have you reading - i'm glad you found it authentic. I love them too, especially the film noir variety.

Thanks Col. Too kind mate. Always good to see the Ealings, I watched Genevieve recently - not sure if that one was though. One of my faves is The Titfield Thunderbolt - I think that one is. Although my poem was obviously from across the pond.

Becky, thanks for looking in!

Ray

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Tapashree Roy

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 15:56

Dear Cynthia, Thank you for the warm welcoming words! I love your suggestion of being a giver to become a receiver.

My mother named me, and her love and thought is bonded with my name. Thank you liking it.

Tapashree has Sanskrit roots, and may be interpreted in a few ways. I prefer to believe it means "the soft glow of endurance".
Tapa means endurance.
Shree means Diffusing radiance, beauty, prosperity...

It may also be interpreted as the "beauty of heat" with Tapas (heat) and Shree.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 15:25

I was staring at my PC screen when these words -
written a long time ago by my sister in my boyhood
autograph book - suddenly, and without warning, came to mind. Being Sunday, a solemn day in so many ways, they
seemed to invite being posted to lighten the mood.

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 15:24

Could be a critique of life itself.
Loved it.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 15:22

Wonderful joyous poem.
Loved it.

Hannah

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John Coopey

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 15:08

Although I usually go with the wife, we remain at Loggerheads, MC.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 14:00

Poignant poem sadness interspersed with fleeting glimpses of joy. Thank you..

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 13:53

Hi M.C. reminds me of childhood rhyme..back to back they faced each other..etc..really enjoyed it..?

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keith jeffries

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 13:36

Janey,
This is a masterly piece of work in which you have expressed the thoughts of many. The final stanzas are filled with hope where we need to focus our efforts to stem the tide which you so eloquently portray in the main body of the poem. Well done and well earned. Congratulations
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 13:30

Thank you to all who have read and commented on this poem. Jane and MC you raise interesting ideas worthy of further consideration. Passion can be the instrument of lust which can so easily lead to something heartbreakingly hollow. MC you have hit it on the head.
Thank you again
Keith

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Don Matthews

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 12:46

It's a pity things like this stay as poems ?

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Sun 23rd Sep 2018 12:09

M.C. Newberry, what you have said here is extremely profound and thought provoking. I think we can all benefit from thinking carefully before we act on any given passionate moment because it can boomerang and be "heartbreakingly hollow" as you say.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 12:02

Ah - this brings back memories of the king of comedy.
There will never be another to equal his zany brilliance.
While Blackpool waves break
And the falling rain splashes,
We'll remember the man
Forever Knotty Ash(es).
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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 11:45

This is a powerful evocation of what I imagine was a
youthful encounter with all the power of the momentary
in action. I think we all carry memories of moments that
resonate with us - but wonder if
memories are better than
what may have been the eventual reality?

Is passion but a fashion
That the mind thinks it must follow,
With time gilding the memory
Of something heartbreakingly hollow?
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M.C. Newberry

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 11:34

I'll close my own contributions by saying that whilst younger
voters may have been in a majority to vote "remain" among themselves, I wonder just how much of that has been due to youthful passions for travel and ease rather
than proper teaching in schools about the history of this
country and the sacrifices made for the cause of freedom.
Where is that freedom when the primacy of our famous
Parliament takes orders from the likes of today's EU and
our courts have to bow down to foreign judgements?

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Sun 23rd Sep 2018 11:34

Keith this is beautiful, heartfelt and filled with deep emotion.
Life is nothing more than a collection of unforgettable moments in time, so hold on to them! ??

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raypool

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 10:57

An intriguing piece with a real inward looking compulsion to it John. Thought provoking and satisfying, leaving little to the imagination. The Wicca movement is supposed to be about nature and the power base of it, I suppose - but wherever human activity turns inwards, the possibilities are endless.

Ray

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Nigel Astell

Sun 23rd Sep 2018 10:55

Great photos Nicola thought you read your poetry so well

from the man in a black shirt!

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