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Thu 8th Sep 2011 22:55

valium does it for me - and waccy baccy, Ms Spindrift :)

nice poem

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Philipos

Thu 8th Sep 2011 22:21

You make an interesting comparison with the moth. Enjoyed this.

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Philipos

Thu 8th Sep 2011 22:19

This has my vote. As Win says you have an interesting perspective.

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 8th Sep 2011 21:06



Didn`t `get` a word of it!


(But the audio sounded impressive)

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 8th Sep 2011 20:59



Lynn,
Government assisted subsidised travel to Dignitas in Switzerland would alleviate this problem and reduce the pension bill greatly.

I am sure that Dignitas would also provide-and staff - a completely unbiased counselling service for the undecided (If the coalition would subsidise that body also)

I am sure such arrangements must exist elswhere.

Thanks for raising what is a very real problem.





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Ray Miller

Thu 8th Sep 2011 20:13

A lorra, lorra commas in there, Marianne. Great first verse, the 1st and 5th lines are beautiful. Not quite so taken by the rest, but - a moving antique orange is very fine.

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 8th Sep 2011 20:12



If only!

Lovely peaceful lines and picture

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Philipos

Thu 8th Sep 2011 18:37

Gosh powerfully thought-provoking. A blind lad where I live is always braving traffic in our busy streets. I hope his angels never have a day off. Enjoyed.

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Philipos

Thu 8th Sep 2011 18:32

Great rant Lynn and addresses the concerns many have especially in the present financial climate. As your last verse implies, is poverty or good health the ultimate choice? Pass.

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Philipos

Thu 8th Sep 2011 18:26

Very amusing and so typical of the real us underneath in spite of the face we try to mask things with. Enjoyed.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 8th Sep 2011 18:24

Thanks Philipos - I'm not religious at all, but just had this peaceful feeling this morning.

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Philipos

Thu 8th Sep 2011 18:24

Strange how certain things such as pictures trigger after-thoughts. There is much implied in this poem for the reader to pick out and explore which is what the muse is all about. I enjoyed reading this thanks.

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Philipos

Thu 8th Sep 2011 18:19

I'm pretty sure you're not alone in that belief Ann - nicely expressed too.

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 8th Sep 2011 16:21

Ty Stella- :o)

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Neil Fawcett

Thu 8th Sep 2011 12:15

Tender, touching a positive sadness.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 8th Sep 2011 11:23

There's lots of really good music on in the evenings too. To see what's on and book tickets you can go to their website www.stivesseptemberfestival.co.uk

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Lizzie

Thu 8th Sep 2011 10:49

Love it :)

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David Cooke

Thu 8th Sep 2011 10:16

Just caught up with this one Cynthia. A fascinating read. I like poetry that is 'scientific' in tone and full of facts.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 8th Sep 2011 08:01

I 'ope so too Harry! :)

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Thu 8th Sep 2011 00:52

Why do I revel in your stuff Harry? I suppose it's because, we're two of a kind.
And because we are scousers, we're in the same mind.

If It's allowable Harry I'd like to perform this piece at my folk club. Let me know if you approve.
In the meantime check out my recent ten worder.
" Mahdigras."

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 7th Sep 2011 23:30

Thank you dear Stefan! It's always pleasant to read your poems and your comments. And now it's even more pleasant as you are together with Patricia. My warmest wishes to her.

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John Coopey

Wed 7th Sep 2011 23:04

Audio added.

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Wed 7th Sep 2011 22:25


lovely poem
lovely Larisa.

Trish Wilde.x

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 7th Sep 2011 22:23

Thank you my dear Lynn for helping me. I would like to ask you: Please, always tell me your opinion on this or that stanza. It's much appreciated.
With love, Larisa

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 7th Sep 2011 22:21

As I've said to Ann, my first suit for eleven years. Yes we had a lovely day and the weather was stunning too. That's them all gone now, all four!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 7th Sep 2011 22:17

My daughter got married last Friday and I had to buy a suit to give her away, my first one for eleven years. Haven't got many decent pictures of myself, usually on holiday and with sunglasses on.

By the way absolutely loved the last poem Ann, the weight of sentiment was bang on the money and the last lines were wonderful. Great work.

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Wed 7th Sep 2011 21:10

evening Lynn.

re youtube-no not that one you mention
this is one where it really looks
like the dog is talking.

the guys voice is teasing him about food

'dont tease the dog'

logging off now to sort a poem out for later.

cheers

Stef/Trish.xxxx

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Lynn Dye

Wed 7th Sep 2011 20:43

Hi Larisa, there are some beautiful lines in this poem. I enjoyed it. (If you don't mind me saying, I think it should be "I am so daring and brave" or "I dare and am so brave") Lovely though, with love, Lynn xx

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Lynn Dye

Wed 7th Sep 2011 20:35

Very touching and thoughtful poem, Kealan. I enjoyed it.

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Wed 7th Sep 2011 20:08

Well I did your "Ghost of White Hart lane." John
and it went down well. It was something they never expected from me. Some Liverpool supporter at the back called out("You cannot be serious)well I was on this occasion; and it was received with a nice gentle clap; except for that bastard at the back whose megaphoned-Broderick Crawford-voice just mocked me with: "10 - 4."

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 7th Sep 2011 19:45

Thanks all - I think it's the time of year. xx

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Wed 7th Sep 2011 11:30



Yes! I think you are an altogether bad lad..ha ha ha ha...

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Wed 7th Sep 2011 11:11


Good stuff indeed, especially like that last verse..eye's to blink wet memories..yup good stuff. :)

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Wed 7th Sep 2011 11:04

Ouch!..'Prose chopped up!' ouch again sir..

Love the subject matter (yup it was on the discussion board sometime a while back)

;) no passion in poets anymore had me giggling..

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John Coopey

Wed 7th Sep 2011 09:39

Somebody put me out of my misery.
The story's not mine.
I've read/seen/dreamt this somewhere recently, but can I hell-as-like remember where.

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Philipos

Wed 7th Sep 2011 08:28

I've read many poems about special experiences when gardening and this is up there with the best of them - a really lovely piece.

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Chris Co

Wed 7th Sep 2011 04:30

Well written Neil.

My Best

Chris

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Chris Co

Wed 7th Sep 2011 04:29

Poles apart from how I think- I love your poem for that fact. A little thing that says something.

Excellent.

My Best

Chris

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melanie coady

Wed 7th Sep 2011 00:07

me and dave are still laughing!!

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Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:38

hey-angel eyes!
muchas gracias re-frustration.

have a peaceful night.

Stef&Trish

xx

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Greg Freeman

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:18

The last three lines are particularly fine.

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:10

ha ha ha brill xx

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:09

amazing hun xx another brilliant piece of writing xx

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:08

jeasus i loved it xxx brill xx

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:05

aw wow hun love it...flowers and killers..brill xx

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:04

unbelievable hun xx quite dark..love it so much

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:03

i have a strange want right now for a year in a room wit a red ball..hmmm...does it have 2 b a red ball..red means danger..or passion!! i would call my ball..harry xx

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 23:00

my eyes tried 2 fuck off in opposite directions wit this one lol alot of questions here lol xx

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 22:59

dark stuff kealan...hmmm what was on ur mind here!! xx

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 22:58

top notch ive read it 4 times..beautiful..a lovely calming warmth to this one kiddo xx

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