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kJ Walker

Mon 4th Jul 2022 06:51

An absolute belter John.
I only occasionally caught that show but can picture every scene.
Look forward to hearing it live.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 4th Jul 2022 06:44

You are on top form, John. I used to watch Jeremy Kyle in the care home where my mum was - hard to avoid it as it the giant communal TV blasted it out at 200 decibels. I guess that the boy Boris could have been on it if things had turned out differently.

This poem made me laugh a lot.

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julie callaghan

Mon 4th Jul 2022 06:40

Thanks for the likes.

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julie callaghan

Mon 4th Jul 2022 06:36

This made me laugh JC. I could picture every scene.

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Holden Moncrieff

Mon 4th Jul 2022 02:25

Thank you so much, John, I'm always deeply grateful for your encouraging comments! 😎

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Nicole Macqueen-Jones

Mon 4th Jul 2022 01:58

Thank you for the encouragement πŸ˜ƒ

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Nicole Macqueen-Jones

Mon 4th Jul 2022 01:58

Thank you for the encouragement πŸ˜ƒ

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Mon 4th Jul 2022 00:41

Ahoy! permission to come aboard and appraise Captain Clare 😁






RC πŸ’‹

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John Botterill

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 23:40

Thanks KJ, Stephen and Sarah for the likes. πŸ˜€

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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 23:16

There's a gentleness within your words. A great poem!

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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 23:14

A beautiful tapestry of words.

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John Marks

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 23:10

Thanks Clare. I like this poem too. It has taken 5 years in its gestation.

β€œI never saw a wild thing sorry for itself" D H Lawrence

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kJ Walker

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 22:45

Fantastic.. even better than the last one.
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Clare

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 21:28

Just when I thought I couldn't love your work anymore - you go one better!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 20:50

Thanks for your comment on 'Mountain', Mahira. I will get back to you on your poems.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 20:48

You make a very good point, Mahira. Thanks for your interest and support.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 20:47

Thank you, Mahira. That is much appreciated.

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Clare

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 20:43

Thanks for the likes and comments, guys. KJ Walker, I hadn't thought of that but watch this space! πŸ˜€

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John Botterill

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 20:36

I can relate to this poem, Holden. In the current state of the world many people have lost their moorings. Clever and profound 😎

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John Botterill

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 20:27

I can just about remember those occasions, Frederick. You took me back there with your po-et-ry! 😎

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John Botterill

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 18:06

A classic, Stephen. So positive!

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 17:10

Great first poem here on WOL Nicole.

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 15:17

A beautiful, heart-warming poem, Stephen! 🌷

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Mahira Pamnani

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 12:53

Mountain is a great poem. I love itπŸ™ŒπŸ€

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Mahira Pamnani

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 12:51

Absolutely true! War brings nothing but destruction, not only that of property but destruction of peace of mind, of happy families and of the youth that can change the world for the better. Beautifully written.πŸ™Œ

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Mahira Pamnani

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 12:48

I love this poem🀍🀍

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John Marks

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 12:30

Such a generous compliment Rose, thank you.

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 10:32

Bits of string round the door handle , ( as long as the door doesn’t open inwards ) 🀣

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 10:03

Thanks for the comments, very much appreciated πŸ™

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kJ Walker

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 09:17

Thank you John it's based on a joke mi dad used to tell.
He'd say that the graveyard was the dead center of the village, and that people were dying to get in there.

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kJ Walker

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 09:11

Loved this.
Any chance of a sequel... Perhaps the sailors response?

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John Botterill

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 05:56

Thanks Carol. Glad I included my flabber. I did wonder...
I really value your comment.
Thanks, too, Holden, Frederick, Julie and Rose for the likes. πŸ˜€

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 03:37

A wonderful poem with really unique descriptions, Pete! I loved the line "As fierce as the forge at the hands of creation"! 🌷

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 3rd Jul 2022 03:22

Thank you very much, Carol, I truly appreciate you taking the time! 😊

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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 02:10

You never fail to please John. Thank you!







RC πŸ’‹

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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 02:01

Another well worth reading and enjoying poem Frederick.






RC πŸ’‹

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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 00:03

Very interesting Holden! To let your words sink in, I read your poem through a few times. It all comes together in a narrative that hits the mark.

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Sat 2nd Jul 2022 23:57

Thought provoking in many ways John.
'β€œMy flabber is well and truly gasted, William,' ~ this line made me smile!

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Adam Whitworth

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 22:56

Thank you Stephen. You are far too kind as usual.

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John Botterill

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 20:45

Thanks everyone for the likes and the kind comments. Your sense of humour is as groan worthy as mine, Rose! πŸ˜‚
Carol and Julie - glad I made you both smile 😊
And,, yes, MC, it is a cunning ploy but I fall for it every time haha 😁

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Mike Bartram

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 19:13

Thank you for reading and the nice comments...just wrote a follow up now!

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 17:50

Beautiful and flowing. A top notch poem, Clare, and strangely romantic.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 17:47

Thanks, Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 17:43

I love this, Adam. It is so ambitious and daring. Great piece.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 17:36

I can only echo other comments, John. This is special.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 17:31

A real chiller, Mike. Will there be a sequel?

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 17:28

Creepy but with salvation! Great, Stephen.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 15:32

Brings back the old ploy I knew in pubs of the past that had free salted peanuts in dishes on the bar - slyly intended to increase
the sale of beer to assuage the thirst. πŸ˜‹

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 15:07

Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Rose, it means a lot! 😊

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John F Keane

Sat 2nd Jul 2022 14:53

I personally think Larkin is a great introduction to English culture as it truly is - sexually repressed, hypocritical, agnostic/atheist, classist, sceptical and gloomy - for children from other cultures. That lesson cannot come some enough, IMHO.

Larkin was not just a great poet, he was also a great sociologist and cultural observer.

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