You are on top form, John. I used to watch Jeremy Kyle in the care home where my mum was - hard to avoid it as it the giant communal TV blasted it out at 200 decibels. I guess that the boy Boris could have been on it if things had turned out differently.
This poem made me laugh a lot.
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This made me laugh JC. I could picture every scene.
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Mon 4th Jul 2022 02:25
Thank you so much, John, I'm always deeply grateful for your encouraging comments! π
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Thank you for the encouragement π
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Thank you for the encouragement π
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Mon 4th Jul 2022 00:41
Ahoy! permission to come aboard and appraise Captain Clare π
RC π
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Thanks KJ, Stephen and Sarah for the likes. π
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 23:16
There's a gentleness within your words. A great poem!
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 23:14
A beautiful tapestry of words.
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Thanks Clare. I like this poem too. It has taken 5 years in its gestation.
βI never saw a wild thing sorry for itself" D H Lawrence
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Fantastic.. even better than the last one.
π
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Just when I thought I couldn't love your work anymore - you go one better!
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Thanks for your comment on 'Mountain', Mahira. I will get back to you on your poems.
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You make a very good point, Mahira. Thanks for your interest and support.
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Thank you, Mahira. That is much appreciated.
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Thanks for the likes and comments, guys. KJ Walker, I hadn't thought of that but watch this space! π
Comment is about Come Sit with Me (blog)
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I can relate to this poem, Holden. In the current state of the world many people have lost their moorings. Clever and profound π
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I can just about remember those occasions, Frederick. You took me back there with your po-et-ry! π
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A classic, Stephen. So positive!
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Great first poem here on WOL Nicole.
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 15:17
A beautiful, heart-warming poem, Stephen! π·
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 12:53
Mountain is a great poem. I love itππ€
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 12:51
Absolutely true! War brings nothing but destruction, not only that of property but destruction of peace of mind, of happy families and of the youth that can change the world for the better. Beautifully written.π
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 12:48
Such a generous compliment Rose, thank you.
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Bits of string round the door handle , ( as long as the door doesnβt open inwards ) π€£
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Thanks for the comments, very much appreciated π
Comment is about Summer EVE (blog)
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Thank you John it's based on a joke mi dad used to tell.
He'd say that the graveyard was the dead center of the village, and that people were dying to get in there.
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Loved this.
Any chance of a sequel... Perhaps the sailors response?
Comment is about Come Sit with Me (blog)
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Thanks Carol. Glad I included my flabber. I did wonder...
I really value your comment.
Thanks, too, Holden, Frederick, Julie and Rose for the likes. π
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 03:37
A wonderful poem with really unique descriptions, Pete! I loved the line "As fierce as the forge at the hands of creation"! π·
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 03:22
Thank you very much, Carol, I truly appreciate you taking the time! π
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 02:10
You never fail to please John. Thank you!
RC π
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 02:01
Another well worth reading and enjoying poem Frederick.
RC π
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Sun 3rd Jul 2022 00:03
Very interesting Holden! To let your words sink in, I read your poem through a few times. It all comes together in a narrative that hits the mark.
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Sat 2nd Jul 2022 23:57
Thought provoking in many ways John.
'βMy flabber is well and truly gasted, William,' ~ this line made me smile!
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Thank you Stephen. You are far too kind as usual.
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Thanks everyone for the likes and the kind comments. Your sense of humour is as groan worthy as mine, Rose! π
Carol and Julie - glad I made you both smile π
And,, yes, MC, it is a cunning ploy but I fall for it every time haha π
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Thank you for reading and the nice comments...just wrote a follow up now!
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Beautiful and flowing. A top notch poem, Clare, and strangely romantic.
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I love this, Adam. It is so ambitious and daring. Great piece.
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I can only echo other comments, John. This is special.
Comment is about Fear in a handful of dust (blog)
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A real chiller, Mike. Will there be a sequel?
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Creepy but with salvation! Great, Stephen.
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Brings back the old ploy I knew in pubs of the past that had free salted peanuts in dishes on the bar - slyly intended to increase
the sale of beer to assuage the thirst. π
Comment is about Alone, in a bar. (blog)
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Sat 2nd Jul 2022 15:07
Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Rose, it means a lot! π
Comment is about Ownership (blog)
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I personally think Larkin is a great introduction to English culture as it truly is - sexually repressed, hypocritical, agnostic/atheist, classist, sceptical and gloomy - for children from other cultures. That lesson cannot come some enough, IMHO.
Larkin was not just a great poet, he was also a great sociologist and cultural observer.
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kJ Walker
Mon 4th Jul 2022 06:51
An absolute belter John.
I only occasionally caught that show but can picture every scene.
Look forward to hearing it live.
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