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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 10th Feb 2023 16:47

Well done, John. I'll be downloading 'cause I've gone all modern ☺️

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 10th Feb 2023 16:43

Sums up the horror & the hope perfectly, Nigel.

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Hélène

Fri 10th Feb 2023 16:07

Great poem Cassandra! Thanks for the inspiration....one deep breath at a time.

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Hélène

Fri 10th Feb 2023 16:04

Strong powerful poem. Felt the emotions in every line. Thank you for a poem that carries us into the hearts of the suffering from this catastrophe.

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John Coopey

Thu 9th Feb 2023 23:30

Thankyou, Steve. And for the Like, Adam.

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Steve Higgins

Thu 9th Feb 2023 20:08

Topical stuff with a dash of humour! Thanks John

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Nigel Astell

Thu 9th Feb 2023 14:58

Uilleam love the title and it was - - -😄

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Jimakos

Thu 9th Feb 2023 14:01

Thank you Stephen

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 9th Feb 2023 13:16

......so he duly obliged-on a wing and a praaa>>>>>>>yer!

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Thu 9th Feb 2023 12:05

Thanks, Lee. It is really useful getting other participants' reports on reviewed events, embellishing the review itself. It sounds like one of those 'you had to have been there' gigs. And you were not only there, you helped create the electric atmosphere. Cheers.

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John Botterill

Thu 9th Feb 2023 10:17

Thanks Holden. It means a lot to have your support 😎👍

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John Coopey

Thu 9th Feb 2023 09:55

I'm afraid I find it all rather silly, Stephen.
Thanks for the Like, Red Brick.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 9th Feb 2023 08:51

A fine poem. Thanks.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 9th Feb 2023 08:45

A remarkable piece, Andy. I love the way that a poem like this can reduce vile pomposity to what it really is.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 9th Feb 2023 08:29

Keep 'em coming, John. It's a serious subject but there's no reason why it shouldn't be treated with humour.

'I think I'll take advice from Sturgeon
Before I go to see the surgeon'.

Or something like that.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 9th Feb 2023 08:22

So glad to hear that you came through this crisis, Clare. Very best wishes.

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 9th Feb 2023 04:47

Congratulations, John, I can't wait to read it! 😊

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Bindu Trigunayak

Thu 9th Feb 2023 01:27

Beautiful ❤

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John Coopey

Wed 8th Feb 2023 23:29

It was Hose, Ghost: he was a Spanish fireman!
And thanks for the Like, Stephen.

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Reggie's Ghost

Wed 8th Feb 2023 22:52

Muy bien Juan, pero esta Jose, no Hose!

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julie callaghan

Wed 8th Feb 2023 20:16

Thanks for the likes.

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John Marks

Wed 8th Feb 2023 17:56

Thank you Uilleam. I wrote this poem in 1993. I was inspired by Plath's majestic poem: 'Black Rook in Rainy Weather'.

I do not expect a miracle
Or an accident

To set the sight on fire
In my eye, nor seek
Any more in the desultory weather some design,
But let spotted leaves fall as they fall
Without ceremony, or portent.

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Chris Bunton

Wed 8th Feb 2023 12:59

Thank you!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 7th Feb 2023 21:59

You paint a very familiar picture John-love it.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 7th Feb 2023 21:43

💐

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 7th Feb 2023 21:33

Water carry on!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 7th Feb 2023 20:46

There used to be the old socialist saying, ‘Socialism or barbarism’. If you don’t achieve socialism the result will be barbarism of one kind or another; maybe a resurgence of fascism....it's happening.

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julie callaghan

Tue 7th Feb 2023 19:03

Thanks for the likes and kind comments.

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John Botterill

Tue 7th Feb 2023 17:35

Thanks for the likes K. Lynn and Red Brick Frederick 😀

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Feb 2023 17:34

Thanks very much, KJ, Greg and Uilleam. Perhaps the tone of this poem appeared a bit cynical and I certain would never overlook the wonderful work being done by those welcoming refugees, doing volunteer work or donating. It is all part of the war effort. It may be that I am finding the war such a horrible business that I have difficulty writing about it in a completely positive way. But that's my problem, the people of Ukraine need our continued support.

The militarised aspect of Eurovision hadn't occured to me, Greg. In the case of Abba, it must be a good omen, I think. And hasn't Sir Cliff been entertaining the troops somewhere? I think we should be told.

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Hélène

Tue 7th Feb 2023 16:11

Really sweet! Your aunty came alive in this poem.

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Hélène

Tue 7th Feb 2023 16:06

Powerful poem. The essence of life: love, not things. Even with loss of life, loss of shelter, the stupidity of war: love triumphs. Thanks for this poem, Adam.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 7th Feb 2023 14:35

Interesting to note that (in opposition to what you say in your biography) you have returned to this piece, a year on, what made you edit? I would be interested to know as my initial views on editing have changed tremendously over the years.

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Clare

Tue 7th Feb 2023 13:52

Stephen Gospage, I am glad you enjoyed this - thanks for taking the time to comment. I found myself in hospital over the Christmas/New Year period and it was touch and go for a minute there. Luckily I am still here to entertain in my own small way. Yes … the contrast between a hospital room and those brief visits from the outside world is what struck me in my time there. Thanks to everyone for the likes. I wish you all a happy and healthy 2023. 😌

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Hugh

Tue 7th Feb 2023 13:45

Excellent

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Tue 7th Feb 2023 12:38

Thank you Holden

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Tue 7th Feb 2023 12:38

It's a comment on society that I have related to personally, but trying to step out of that. Good to be back 😊

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 7th Feb 2023 12:22

A different offering from you this time. Less personally raw, more environmental perhaps. Good to see you back on.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 7th Feb 2023 10:44

The deep, deep lake,
where stolen bikes are never found.

I love that. There are lots of bodies (pardon the pun) of water, left-overs of our industrial past- around here that once looked like that.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 7th Feb 2023 10:35

An excellent cause, the RNLI.
I have been an avid watcher of Saving Lives at Sea.
Men and women who stare down death on a daily basis, on our behalf.
Whether we be at our work or our leisure, the likelihood of our needing them is all the greater because of the UK's geography.
BRAVO-BRAVA RNLI !

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 7th Feb 2023 10:02

The facilities in my local pub are excellent- What a loo!😕

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Greg Freeman

Tue 7th Feb 2023 09:54

Excellent poem, Steve. And then there is Abba ... their Eurovision hit, the one that brought them fame, named after a huge European battle.

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kJ Walker

Tue 7th Feb 2023 09:22

Excellent as usual.
Thank you for keeping this horrendous war in our thoughts.
As you say everyone has their part to play.
We are just observing from a safe distance, but we can and should do whatever we can.
So whether it's taking in refugees, attending fund raisers or just sharing on social media, we can all do our bit

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kJ Walker

Tue 7th Feb 2023 09:00

Thanks Keith.
We could do with a hard 'un to kill the bugs.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Feb 2023 08:51

Thank you, Keith. I can only echo your comments.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Feb 2023 08:47

It's a mad world, Keith, and the brutal invasion of Ukraine has just amplified all this madness. Thanks for this.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Feb 2023 08:42

A real poem of memory, Chris, unreliable or otherwise!

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keith jeffries

Tue 7th Feb 2023 08:41

Stephen,
This poem has a theme of madness running through it which exposes all that is taking place in the Ukraine at this time. We all feel a part of it but do not experience the reality of it. War is insane. Surely the time has come for humanity to realise the utter futility of it.
An excellent and very topical poem
Thank you for this
Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Feb 2023 08:30

It take your point, Uilleam. A great deal of this 'Total War' is being waged by people who have no risk of ever being bombed or shot, but feel that they have to do their bit. Like writing poems about it, I suppose.
Not there's anything wrong with that!


And my thanks to Nigel, Frederick; Graham, John, Chris, K Lynn and Rudyard for liking this.

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Holden Moncrieff

Tue 7th Feb 2023 04:49

A very powerful poem, Alexandra, profound and hopeful! I loved the lines
"I don't have to know who I am
But I must know that I am" 🌷

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