A great poem, Martin. Vibrant and readable.
Comment is about The long Silence (blog)
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I enjoyed this, Mike. Powerful and profound.
Comment is about Liminal (blog)
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Thanks to Nigel Frederick Holden and Stephen for liking
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Thanks, Bethany. Much appreciated π Thanks for the likes, Tom and Frederick. π
Comment is about In the Shadow of St Leonard's (blog)
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Tue 14th Jun 2022 23:04
I enjoyed this wonderful poem John-thank you
Comment is about In the Shadow of St Leonard's (blog)
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Waiting in for people who never turn up! Agggh!
Nice one Julie
Comment is about What A Waste (blog)
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Well said Keith. It is hard to think that this still happens in a country that sees itself as so enlightened. Or perhaps not!
Thanks for posting
Comment is about Artists, Writers & Poets speak out (blog)
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Tue 14th Jun 2022 22:46
Thank you kindly for leaving a like on my last post, I appreciate it!
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Well said Jeff. We need to be reminded of such events.
Nice one mate
Comment is about Grenfell Falls Green (blog)
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Gripping and moving. Great poem, Stephen.
Comment is about At the Front (blog)
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This is so beautiful..God shines through your poetry xxx
Comment is about Perseverance (blog)
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Here you are, Jeff https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=68312
and thanks for your poem!
Comment is about Grenfell Falls Green (blog)
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Thanks Rose. Yep time marches on and my body reminds me that although I might still be nineteen it is not.
Darn!
Comment is about The long Silence (blog)
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Thanks for the like and for your reflections, KJ. As Larkin observed these thoughts are available at "every instant of our lives!" π Liife gets in the way, sometimes.
Comment is about In the Shadow of St Leonard's (blog)
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Thanks for the fab comments Stephen and Holden. Truly appreciated!
St Leonard's is in Malton, North Yorkshire, Greg.
As a youth I attended Mass there. Another poem?! Each street, I noticed, had a view of the church, especially Wentworth Street. This is a view from Wheelgate haha π
Comment is about In the Shadow of St Leonard's (blog)
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The end has a hilarious twist. Else it's a very romantic poem. π
Comment is about 'Nicey' (blog)
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Where is this church, John, may I ask?
Comment is about In the Shadow of St Leonard's (blog)
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A genuinely moving poem, John. 'Each grain of sand is a friend unmade' - marvellous.
Comment is about In the Shadow of St Leonard's (blog)
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I constantly think of what might have been had I played my cards differently.
The last sentence speaks volumes.
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Life is good leaving the doom and gloom far behindπ
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Love the lay out it works so well with this poem Moonlight.
Comment is about Life part 1 (blog)
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Tue 14th Jun 2022 01:13
This is genuinely powerful, John, you convey the pain of thinking about lives we never get to live, in a really moving way! π·
Comment is about In the Shadow of St Leonard's (blog)
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Turned on
means job done Roseπ
Comment is about Torpedoes of Love Explode on Fake Island (blog)
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Thanks, Holden. You are much appreciated. /Frederick.
Comment is about a poet's tears (blog)
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The business of "costing" the Royal Family is a ceaseless merry-go-round. The Crown Estates represent the business
of commercial interests of property vested in Royal ownership.
As for the total per annum paid from the public purse towards
the upkeep of the institution itself, that is accommodated by
the vast income generated by their prestigious presence in
international relations and the tourism industry, in all their
many forms. Politicians decide how that money finds its way
back to benefit the public at large and it is certainly the case
that this is often far from satisfactory, depending on one's
point of view.
Comment is about Jubilee (blog)
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You are very kind, Rose. I was revelling in self pity and got carried away!!! π
Comment is about In the Shadow of St Leonard's (blog)
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Thanks for the likes
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Mon 13th Jun 2022 20:45
Thank you for liking my recent effort Holden! π
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An excellent piece of urban history triple wrapped with all the goodness inside, a roller coaster ride Ralph!!
Ray
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<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 13th Jun 2022 20:37
According to the quality of this great poem, Martin, is,
that it goes to prove that you haven't lost any of your long held poetical skills, shame I can't say the same about our age's!
be nice to lose a few years or more eh what?
RC π
Comment is about The long Silence (blog)
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A compelling trip half disbelief and half relief with a great flavour. A mini marvel Stephen !!
Ray
Comment is about Le Plat Pays (blog)
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Mon 13th Jun 2022 20:30
Only to get more complex, cruel, and catastrophic, by the day.
Have we, without knowing, entered a time machine and been taken back to nineteen fourteen?
The thing we must not go on allowing is the possibility of our becoming nonchalantly hardened to the sufferings of others
as it seems we are doing and more so as these kind of terrible situations continue to mount in my opinion
God help us all.
Thank you Peter.
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Mon 13th Jun 2022 20:13
No shortage of great lines in this beauty John
well done matey!
RC π
Comment is about In the Shadow of St Leonard's (blog)
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This is a very thorough and well thought out poem. Excellent Peter and good to see you posting again.
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Mon 13th Jun 2022 18:20
COR! & PHEW! I'm getting 'ot under the collar
thanks to you!
RC π
Comment is about Torpedoes of Love Explode on Fake Island (blog)
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An absolutely inspiring story, involving two great and remarkable people.
Comment is about Death of Paula Rego recalls moment when poetry and art met (article)
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thanks for the kind comments and 'likes' I appreciate it.
MC - just for the record - the monarchy get 'cash taken from the tax-payers pockets' I would just like it to be used in a way that benefits people who need it - as a tax payer I think I have an equal right to say where I think those millions should go.
Graham - I'm not sure what that has to do with it - France did away with their monarchy and they're doing OK - or maybe you were just making an assumption that anyone with a social conscience is a communist - when, in fact more money comes from Russia into the Conservative party and the Brexit cause than to any socialist causes in the UK.
Or maybe you are supporting the state being worshipped by it's citizens without giving them the right to react and object if they don't agree with the people at the top - hey - maybe you're a communist π
Comment is about Jubilee (blog)
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Thank you, John, for the very kind comment. And thanks to Greg, KJ, Frederick, Bramwell, Stephen, Aisha, Rudyard, Holden and K Lynn.for liking this one.
A word of chronology: My European adventure ( a visit for medical tests and interviews in Brussels) began in March 1978. Sadly, Jacques Brel died later that year, before I had heard any of his music. Hopefully I have made up for it since.
Comment is about Le Plat Pays (blog)
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You're quite welcome! Nice, atmospheric writing.
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Mon 13th Jun 2022 16:03
A really beautiful poem, Frederick! π·
Comment is about a poet's tears (blog)
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Good one, Julian! Stick it to 'em!
Comment is about 'Incensed' Julian Jordon's video riposte to Dorries and Johnson (article)
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Mon 13th Jun 2022 13:46
Thank you very much for liking one of my latest efforts, I appreciate it very much. β‘
Comment is about Aisha Suleman (poet profile)
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Fabulous memoir Stephen. No one does it better!
Comment is about Le Plat Pays (blog)
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Thanks for the likes Julie, Frederick, Clare and Aisha π
Comment is about We Are Where We Are! (blog)
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Thank you Stephen, we can only hope! Russell π And K.J. it may have been quicker using an axe, but maybe that's why she used a hammer! π
And thanks for the likes! π·
Comment is about Hammer Time! (blog)
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Mon 13th Jun 2022 12:05
Thank you for leaving a like on one of my recent poems!
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Mon 13th Jun 2022 10:36
Thank you for liking my recent effort "Pretty Girls"!
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Reminds me of Lizzie Borden.(whose weapon of choice was an axe)
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My kind of poem is reminiscent of Lear in it's brevity
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Stephen Gospage
Wed 15th Jun 2022 09:25
The quality of the writing makes this entertaining, Mike. A pleasure to read.
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