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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 30th Jun 2024 09:54

Nigel Astell, Stephen Gospage, Aisha Suleman, Manish, and Leon Stolgard, thank you so much for liking my poem. Leon thanks a lot for commenting.
With best wishes,
Larisa

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David RL Moore

Sun 30th Jun 2024 09:14

Thanks so much for your comment Landi.

I was most pleased with the attachment as I'm a big Slavoj admirer.

His jokes are great, often due to his delivery rather than content, so thanks.

Much appreciated.

David

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sun 30th Jun 2024 08:51

This could be printed on a T-shirt. Bravo!

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Landi Cruz

Sun 30th Jun 2024 08:37

I don't have the luxury of expounding, but when I read this, I think of this...

"In an old joke from the defunct German Democratic Republic, a German worker gets a job in Siberia; aware of how all mail will be read by censors, he tells his friends: “Let’s establish a code: if a letter you will get from me is written in ordinary blue ink, it is true; if it is written in red ink, it is false.” After a month, his friends get the first letter, written in blue ink: “Everything is wonderful here: stores are full, food is abundant, apartments are large and properly heated, movie theaters show films from the West, there are many beautiful girls ready for an affair — the only thing unavailable is red ink.”

And is this not our situation till now? We have all the freedoms one wants — the only thing missing is the “red ink”: We “feel free” because we lack the very language to articulate our unfreedom...The task today is to give the protesters red ink."

https://thereader.mitpress.mit.edu/five-jokes-slavoj-zizek/

🌷

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David RL Moore

Sun 30th Jun 2024 08:12

30 Jun

Thanks for the latest overnight likes folks.

29 Jun,

Thanks for the overnight Likes.

Thanks for the early likes folks.

David

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leon stolgard

Sat 29th Jun 2024 19:45

Just what would we do without birds and wildlife in general eh Stephen? doesn't bear thinking about! Great poem-thanks!

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John Coopey

Sat 29th Jun 2024 19:10

Thankyou, Stephen. I confess I quite like Friends. And thanks for the Likes, Helene and Holden.

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Martin Peacock

Sat 29th Jun 2024 18:03

Thank you all for reading my poem. It's appreciated, honestly.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 29th Jun 2024 16:51

I think I'd draw the line at watching 'Friends', John.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 29th Jun 2024 16:42

Indeed, John. As a society, we should never be complacent.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 29th Jun 2024 16:41

Cheers, John. Benny Hill on Saturday Afternoons, really.

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R A Porter

Sat 29th Jun 2024 13:41

I wasn’t aware of Jackie Hagan until I read the article and looked her up on YouTube. What a brave, talented, funny and remarkable woman.

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Hélène

Sat 29th Jun 2024 13:26

Thank you for giving this old lady a peek into your spiritual practice, Ghazala. Really lovely.

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Hélène

Sat 29th Jun 2024 13:23

Superb, Stephen!

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R A Porter

Sat 29th Jun 2024 12:47

Thanks Stephen - your friend’s farewell sounds wonderful in a way. Some of my mother’s ashes were scattered into the Irish Sea off Bangor in Northern Ireland by her sister and I one beautiful spring morning - it was poignant and beautiful. A return to nature, and home.

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John Coopey

Sat 29th Jun 2024 09:55

Marvellous insight, Stephen, into what for we privileged is an otherworld. Lest we forget that our lifestyle and values are not a “given” and need constantly protecting.

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John Coopey

Sat 29th Jun 2024 09:50

Wonderful boobs and bobbies’ helmets. They went together like love and marriage.

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David RL Moore

Sat 29th Jun 2024 09:42

Lovely poem Helene.

Searching for dreams, there's a start point for another poem.

Searching for dreams whilst dreaming, I sense I do that when I'm dreaming sometimes...hoping to find the door I came in by.

Dreams are a great alternative to our waking lives, I am often more content in my dreams than in waking moments.

Maybe as our dreams are the creation of our subconsious and in our dream state we are in that other world we cannot be troubled by subconscious interventions as we are embedded deep within it/them.

Oh well, just a thought. Thanks for stirring my remaining grey matter.

David

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 29th Jun 2024 09:21

Definitely no shell suits, Leon, and easy on the mullets. And thanks for the funny memories, RA and MC.

My thanks to Aisha, Tom, Holden, Larisa, Stepheh and Rudyard for liking.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 29th Jun 2024 09:12

Thanks Graham, Leon and David. I can think of few things worse than being forced out of your home and suspecting that you may never be able to return, or that someone else will claim it as their own.
Larking said 'Home is so sad' but, for many, there is nowhere else.

And thanks to Keith, Holden, Manish and Landi for liking this.

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David RL Moore

Sat 29th Jun 2024 07:59

Home is where someone else now lives, for many.

David

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David RL Moore

Sat 29th Jun 2024 07:55

It would not be great if the truck didn't come, but it might just wake people up regarding the important things in life.

The reliance on convenience which one day just might dwindle away will set us back into survival mode. How many might survive, I wonder?

Great thought provoking piece Robert.

David.

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 28th Jun 2024 22:16

Thank you so much, Stephen, for your thoughtful comment! 😊

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 28th Jun 2024 22:09

Thank you Stephen for your kind comments.

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Tom Doolan

Fri 28th Jun 2024 19:23

Thanks for likes - Aisha, Leon & Holden. 👍

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leon stolgard

Fri 28th Jun 2024 17:23

Hi Larisa-anything whatsoever to do with birds is good enough for me-I absolutely love them all! Thank you for this great poem

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leon stolgard

Fri 28th Jun 2024 17:19

Yet another ( albeit sad ) gem to add to your worthy resident war poet reputation Stephen-thank you!

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 28th Jun 2024 17:18

That last stanza! Wow! And those last four words, harrowingly sad!
Write Out Loud’s ‘Laureate de Guerre’

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 28th Jun 2024 15:34

In the midst of Euro 24, this certainly makes a change from the surfeit of punditry and wild improbability!

Thanks, JD. Good one.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 28th Jun 2024 11:14

The last line seems to suggest that life, like politics, is the art of the possible. Interesting poem, Holden.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 28th Jun 2024 11:08

Thank you, RA. We recently helped to dispose of a deceased friend into the Schelde in Antwerp. Biodegradable and all that, but surprisingly moving.

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David RL Moore

Fri 28th Jun 2024 06:08

Thanks, Likes..XX

And did those feet in ancient time
walk upon England's mountains green?
And was the holy Lamb of God
on England's pleasant pastures seen?
And did the countenance divine
shine forth upon our clouded hills?
And was Jerusalem builded here
among those dark Satanic Mills?

Bring me my bow of burning gold!
Bring me my arrows of desire!
Bring me my spear! O clouds, unfold!
Bring me my chariot of fire!
I will not cease from mental fight,
nor shall my sword sleep in my hand,
till we have built Jerusalem
In England's green and pleasant Land.


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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 28th Jun 2024 01:01

Thank you, Keith, for your comment, I appreciate it!

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John Coopey

Thu 27th Jun 2024 21:25

It would almost certainly have been Union, MC. Bath is a top Union club and the West Country is also. League is a York’s/Lancs/Cumbria thing.

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keith jeffries

Thu 27th Jun 2024 21:04

A poem which speaks of today's society where people have lost the ability to communicate. People are now locked into their own world. People seldom strike up a conversation with a stranger which in years past was considered quite normal.
Thank you for this,
Keith

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keith jeffries

Thu 27th Jun 2024 20:59

I must agree with MC. This poem speaks of excuses and never the conclusive.
Thanks,
Keith

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Tom Doolan

Thu 27th Jun 2024 19:56

Thank you Stephen & Hélène for your positive feedback and comments. Much appreciated. 😊

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 27th Jun 2024 17:20

Thank you very much, M.C., for your comment, I find the connection you drew fascinating! 😎

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 27th Jun 2024 16:50

I recall a number of such incidents during my days at sporting venues. My fondest put down is from the ever urbane and witty
actor David Niven, who when interrupted during a stint speaking
at the Oscars by one such individual, remarked about irony of the
latter seeking fame by displaying his shortcomings.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 27th Jun 2024 16:35

Absobloominglutely! 😊

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 27th Jun 2024 16:32

Reminds me of my situation at the hands of successive medicos who are arch-exponents of the terms "might be", "could be"
and "may be". 😏

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 27th Jun 2024 16:27

I am reminded of a saying: Rugby is game for hooligans played by gentlemen. Soccer is a game for gentlemen played by hooligans. Our school had a rugby player (who played for Bath)
as a teacher so that was the school game. Never could get to
grips with its rules and can't recall whether it was "Union" or "League".

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John Coopey

Thu 27th Jun 2024 15:20

What could have been, eh, RAP? You might have been a bishop at the very least by now.
And thanks for the Likes, David and Larisa.

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John Coopey

Thu 27th Jun 2024 15:18

I seem to remember someone saying (it might have been Tommy Docherty) RAP, about that ‘78 team “They’ll be home before the postcards”.
Of course, it’s a brave man who knocks Scotland while England have been so abject.

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Hélène

Thu 27th Jun 2024 12:22

Well done, Tom!

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 27th Jun 2024 11:23

I like the way this works as pure verse and song lyrics, Tom. Not easy. In your audio you shift seamlessly between the two. Good blues theme, whichever way you look at it.

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R A Porter

Thu 27th Jun 2024 09:46

This is really beautiful - it flows like a clear, sparkling stream through the garden.

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R A Porter

Thu 27th Jun 2024 07:51

Thanks for pointing me to this Tom - I’ll see what I have under 60 seconds!

Andy

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R A Porter

Thu 27th Jun 2024 07:44

The Billy Beaumont team talk photograph that featured Erika was a masterpiece of sports photography! Unforgettable.

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R A Porter

Thu 27th Jun 2024 07:42

Still remember “Allie’s Tartan Army” in Argentina in 1978 - they were going going to win it I think? Some never got home at all, but Allie and the team were home earlier than most. As a Man Utd supporter in the late 70s I had the privilege of watching Martin Buchan, a Rolls Royce amongst defenders, and Denis wasn’t bad was he? Didn’t like England much, although like me he lived in Stockport.

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