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Stephen Gospage

Wed 3rd Jul 2024 08:36

A very fine poem, Daryn. The final couplet is particularly powerful. Good writing!

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Tom

Tue 2nd Jul 2024 22:40

Now with audio...

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John Marks

Tue 2nd Jul 2024 17:25

Thank you Tim, Aisha & Holden.

“History, Stephen said, is a nightmare from which I am trying to awake.”
― James Joyce, Ulysses

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Jul 2024 17:10

Thanks, Graham, John and MC. In truth, this has to be a silly, shallow poem because it is about silly, shallow people who are posing as the saviours (in a totally unfunded, bankrupting sort of way) of some cherished style of life which no longer exists and probably never did. They force themselves to smile and look cuddly, but nasty bigotry is only just below the surface.

Graham - Yes, when I was in public service the rule was never to apply for a job unless you were pretty certain to get it. Gambling is always a bad idea unless losing is not going to hurt you. I think Macron, with depressing arrogance, made that mistake.

And thanks to Manish, Aisha, Auracle and Holden for liking this.

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John Marks

Tue 2nd Jul 2024 17:05

Very funny JM. Sort of Carry On Easter spectacular!

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 2nd Jul 2024 14:05

Thank you very much, Tim. You are very kind and I fully agree with you that life is indeed an endurance test most of the times.🥀

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 2nd Jul 2024 13:59

Thank you very much, Stephen A.😊

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 2nd Jul 2024 09:20

When I had a proper job, it was always a rule that one didn't ask the public for their opinions unless one was prepared to listen and act positively on their replies.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 2nd Jul 2024 08:59

What a great introduction to Write Out Loud Laura. Very accomplished work. Well done!

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Tim Higbee

Mon 1st Jul 2024 22:54

Life is like an endurance test sometimes. We're challenged to see just how much we can take before collapsing. The situation in this poem would certainly be a test. 😱

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David RL Moore

Mon 1st Jul 2024 22:02


History that some forget and some don't even know.

If you still don't know this stuff, please inform yourself.

https://youtu.be/-XbMtJhvfZ0?si=lrr8SnzJJjCPNZ6q

https://youtu.be/CEIUrgADs8Q?si=3XsSYVKIMmUzACZY

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 1st Jul 2024 20:01

A beautifully conveyed piece 👏

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 1st Jul 2024 19:53

Thank you Helene! And Leon, indeed ... though not sure about wood pigeons, noisy buggers! 😆
And thanks for the likes! 🌷😊

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David RL Moore

Mon 1st Jul 2024 19:41

I think anyone who has to suffer the smell of crushed parsnips deserves to sleep for however long they wish.

David

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David RL Moore

Mon 1st Jul 2024 18:31

Many thanks for the early onset likes pop-pickers..

David

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Manish Singh Rajput

Mon 1st Jul 2024 18:08

Thanks a lot for your most generous comments, Graham and Tim, and to all those who liked this poem. It means a lot to me.

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John Coopey

Mon 1st Jul 2024 16:46

Hope lies in tactical voting, Stephen, and a centre-left coalition. Don’t bank on it though, the right may yet win outright.

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John Coopey

Mon 1st Jul 2024 16:46

Hope lies in tactical voting, Stephen, and a centre-left coalition. Don’t bank on it though, the right may yet win outright.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 1st Jul 2024 16:42

It was a good idea, Hélène! I've just read that Winston Churchill, at a particularly bleak moment in WW2, turned to one of his aides and said 'I would like to be a cat'.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 1st Jul 2024 16:42

If you push too much of one thing, you tend to get too much of the opposite. The wheel turns.

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John Coopey

Mon 1st Jul 2024 16:41

Quite, David. We should never take our freedoms for granted. They need constant defending.
It is a work-in-progress, Graham. I haven’t chopped it into little lines yet.
And thanks for the Likes, Stephen and Patricia.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 1st Jul 2024 16:39

The history of Europe is the history of man's inhumanity to man.
Ukraine itself had its share of such activities as allies of the Nazis
in WW2. There were also military bodies in occupied lands that strutted to the Nazi tune then and participated in such activity.
Vichy France was one glaring example, with the behaviour of its
Milice towards local French folk even causing comment in the Gestapo! Indeed, a notable Paris Gestapo chief was himself
a Frenchman.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 1st Jul 2024 15:44

Couldn't this be turned into poetry JC?

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Patricia Ziel

Mon 1st Jul 2024 15:41

Sweet words Tim, thank you!
Also thank you for the like!

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David RL Moore

Mon 1st Jul 2024 14:53

There were many persecuted groups in Hungary, not least thousands of Gypsies whose culture bled into the Hungarian Psyche...even so they were massacred and othered by their own and given up to the SS.

Never let it be said that this could not happen again, it too easily could...it is, and it will.

A worthwhile reminder John.

PS...far too many people have no idea such things ever occurred.

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John Coopey

Mon 1st Jul 2024 14:38

Murdered by their own people, Tim.

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Tim Higbee

Mon 1st Jul 2024 14:00

Inside the chambered heart lay thy will
A soul of peace to embrace when all is still

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David RL Moore

Mon 1st Jul 2024 13:47

Great poem Tim,

The fool poet could sometimes be likened to the fool in King Lear, wise words spoken seemingly unknowingly.

Or the Wisdom of Children...there is room for all I say. I temper that in the knowledge that there is also room for the dismisal of the obvious fool, if there be such a thing.

David

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Tim Higbee

Mon 1st Jul 2024 13:45

I love crazy dreams; I wish i could dream again, haven't dreamed a single night dream in thirty years. I miss it.
Fun poem.

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David RL Moore

Mon 1st Jul 2024 13:41

The awakening of women to the deep rooted inherant power they hold has been a burden to them throughout history. Indeed the persecution of women has often emerged from the fear of men as to their intuition and latent knowledge of things.

Of course such knowledege is not exclusive to women nor shared by that gender entire, that said it has been an achilles to many men of assumed power...so much so that they have utilised such terrors as accusations of witchery upon women merely to eradicate them from the landscape.

I am a true believer in equality, I also accept individual limitations and competencies...nothing should be awarded without merit, but respect should be given in every instance prior to evidence which suggests its award is unwarranted.

I trust your search continues unheeded and is fruitful.

An apt and worthwhile poem.

David

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Tim Higbee

Mon 1st Jul 2024 13:35

I hadn't heard of this one. Another example of the atrocities' humanity is capable of.
Thank you, John

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Tim Higbee

Mon 1st Jul 2024 13:20

Very powerful poem Patricia in multiple ways.

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leon stolgard

Mon 1st Jul 2024 11:02

Being an avid lover of all animals Helene this lovely poem has my approval-thank you

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John Marks

Sun 30th Jun 2024 20:53

Thank you Hélène and Holden. "Νίψον ἀνομήματα μὴ μόναν ὄψιν.":Attributed to Gregory of Nazianzus, and inscribed in the Hagia Sophia in holy Constantinople.

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Patricia Ziel

Sun 30th Jun 2024 18:43

Thank you for all the likes. Keith I feel very honored with your assessment since I am totally unschooled in 'letters'. I was a Beta girl who dismissed the humanities; found out in my 40's that I needed to write (very sparingly!).

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John Coopey

Sun 30th Jun 2024 17:54

I daren’t show it to her, fellas.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 30th Jun 2024 16:37

It's been nice virtually knowing you JC! Hide the kitchen knives.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 30th Jun 2024 16:33

I was going to say "That's the spirit..." but..........? 😊

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 30th Jun 2024 16:30

Even so, I bet you recorded this in your shed and not the house!

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Landi Cruz

Sun 30th Jun 2024 15:51

Thanks for your comment, John.

It is sad that we lose so many to deep sorrows--some are gone even before the grave...

And, I have to say that I agree with you about the trade off--I've read much from Marcus Aurelius that I've found quite useful.

I could say more, but I won't...

Thanks again.

PS
I'm sorry for your loss--the bonds we share in intimate friendships don't simply disappear with absence.

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Tim Higbee

Sun 30th Jun 2024 14:08

I agree with Manish. What a great two liner and nice word play.

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Patricia Ziel

Sun 30th Jun 2024 14:00

So relevant, I most definitely was subjected to "just accept".
Great work! I am going through some of your work posted, most of it very relatable, so most likely there will be more comments from me. No need to respond to me!

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Tim Higbee

Sun 30th Jun 2024 13:50

Thank you, Manish and Patricia, for your comments.
Helene and Holden, thank you for your likes.

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Patricia Ziel

Sun 30th Jun 2024 13:45

Really like this one as well!

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Patricia Ziel

Sun 30th Jun 2024 13:03

Wonderful! Your work also takes me on a journey, a revelatory one! Thank you!

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Patricia Ziel

Sun 30th Jun 2024 12:46

Another wonderful thought/feeling eloquently expressed. Love your work.

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Patricia Ziel

Sun 30th Jun 2024 12:42

Agree with Manish, I definitely resonated with: "My heart hammers out a warning, a threat of power
But these thoughts won't retreat, they scarcely cower.
Confused and chaotic images are colliding in my head
Their weight becomes a burden, heavier than lead."




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Patricia Ziel

Sun 30th Jun 2024 12:30

Just wonderful, first thought was 'I love this'; very eloquent. Looking forward to reading more of your thoughts.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sun 30th Jun 2024 09:56

Loved this one, Tim. I'm waiting for you to publish your book so that I can read all your spectacular poems whenever I want to!

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 30th Jun 2024 09:54

Nigel Astell, Stephen Gospage, Aisha Suleman, Manish, and Leon Stolgard, thank you so much for liking my poem. Leon thanks a lot for commenting.
With best wishes,
Larisa

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