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Andy N

Sun 21st Mar 2021 15:40

Thanks Jeff. Glad you like the piece. I'll have to watch a bit of Grace then to see if Kemptown is how I remember it.

Thanks also to Nicola for the like (:

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 21st Mar 2021 12:14

Nice little story mate, I'm too old for some of the references, but remember Bagpuss! I see Kemp town was on the TV last week in the 'Grace' thriller, read the book and others, Tracy read em all ?

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Greg Freeman

Sun 21st Mar 2021 11:57

Enjoyed this, Jeff. And you're in good company. Ted Hughes was a very keen fisherman, wasn't he?

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keith jeffries

Sun 21st Mar 2021 11:57

I am with you all the way.
A poem which speaks the truth
Thank you for this

Keith

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Sun 21st Mar 2021 11:35

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julie callaghan

Sun 21st Mar 2021 09:24

Happy poetry day to you too.

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julie callaghan

Sun 21st Mar 2021 09:22

Thanks Nigel for the like and great comment. Thanks also to black rose and Branwell for the likes to my silly write.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 21st Mar 2021 01:37

Luck can help
make the change
to make you right.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 21st Mar 2021 01:27

They call you Jabbercocky
soon to be mask free
then taking flight for
a long awaited holiday.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 20th Mar 2021 23:12

Thank you Nigel for your comment, I agree ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 20th Mar 2021 23:09

Thank you Keith for commenting, I get far too many things wrong to ever think of myself as wise, but I suppose that doesn't rule out that one or two of the things I think, by some sort of luck, might be right. Please don't ask me which thoughts of mine got that lucky, I won't know.

Thanks also to everyone who clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

It is the last of the meditations (so far, but I'm bound to write some more eventually).

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Andy N

Sat 20th Mar 2021 22:38

Phew, thats some going Nick. Well done buddy. As above with what Janey says, sorry to read of your bereavement also.

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keith jeffries

Sat 20th Mar 2021 14:44

Poetry as wisdom. I like this
Thanks
Keith

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julie callaghan

Sat 20th Mar 2021 10:58

Thank you for the likes Aviva and Nigel

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julie callaghan

Sat 20th Mar 2021 10:57

Thank you for the likes, Nazi, Holden and Nigel

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julie callaghan

Sat 20th Mar 2021 10:56

Thank you for the like and comment Nigel

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d.knape

Sat 20th Mar 2021 10:55

we will be wearing masks
or another 10 years.
A measure of control
for the Great Reset!

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Nigel Astell

Sat 20th Mar 2021 00:52

In your
tangerine skyline
I drift.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 20th Mar 2021 00:29

Strength comes from within
belief is the ladder
you have to climb
from the lowest low.

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keith jeffries

Fri 19th Mar 2021 23:20

John,
A powerful poem borne out of Lent when reflection of life comes to the surface and we ponder our mortality. There is no grey area when it comes to God, or so I believe. We submit to him and trust or we enter an incomprehensible void. I love the line "Of a wise man who never catches up with me". The story of my life, I'm afraid.

Thank you for this

Keith

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 19th Mar 2021 20:23

It was a really nice surprise to see that this was so popular.

An extra thank you for everyone who has clicked 'Like', now that it has reached TWO FLOWERS ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 19th Mar 2021 20:19

Thank you to Michael Kwack and Holden Moncrieff for the likes.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 19th Mar 2021 20:17

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 19th Mar 2021 20:16

Thank you Nicola, the feeling is mutual xx

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David Lindsay

Fri 19th Mar 2021 19:37

Thanks for likes and comments. Very kind ?

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Fri 19th Mar 2021 18:41

Or bad poetry or boffin poetry that has too many long words in it that makes my brain hurt lol x

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Fri 19th Mar 2021 18:26

Are you saying my tats make me an idiot? I want another food fight with you. I challenge you to a food fight where I can throw cake at you lol ?

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Mar 2021 17:19

Annie and Erika

You are both most welcome. It's great that there is so much poetry to enjoy!

Steve

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Mar 2021 17:15

A big thankyou to everyone who liked this poem. I wrote it some time ago but I now find it very topical, since it implies that if you repeat something often enough people will start to believe it, and all you have to do is to tell someone that something happened, not provide any evidence. This is a tactic which has been followed recently with fraud claims in the US election.

Also, there is a time shift aspect. When I say:

'Come back tomorrow and

I will tell you

That last night

I did it again.'

I mean that tonight I did it again. But, of course, by tomorrow tonight will be last night. So nothing lasts forever, or at all.

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Fri 19th Mar 2021 11:28

And I for one am glad you are still here xx

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 19th Mar 2021 11:07

Thank you Nigel for your comment, they did.

Words fly
on to and off of the pages,
travelling all around the world.

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julie callaghan

Fri 19th Mar 2021 09:32

Thank you for the likes Holden and Stephen A.

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kimberly

Fri 19th Mar 2021 02:20

Thank you so much, Stephen! So glad you enjoyed it. ??

Poetry is part of us and sometimes it gets overwhelming but it’s always there when you need it.

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d.knape

Fri 19th Mar 2021 01:51

Love your "add verse" reactions.

I've always been very "verse-a-tile"!

?

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Nigel Astell

Fri 19th Mar 2021 00:36

Wings of poetry
fly these words
onto pages of
write out loud.

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Holden Moncrieff

Thu 18th Mar 2021 21:51

Thank you very much, Keith, I'm glad you enjoyed it ?

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Your Royal Poetess

Thu 18th Mar 2021 20:26

Artwork by: Denny OW ?

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Tom Doolan

Thu 18th Mar 2021 20:06

Thanks for likes - Stephen & Holden ☘??

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julie callaghan

Thu 18th Mar 2021 17:40

Thank you Stephen G and Dean.

I posted it yesterday in its raw form. When I read it over I wanted to change bits. I removed the last verse that said I had written in in quick time, because in the end I didn't?

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 18th Mar 2021 17:13

I love this poem. No one can argue with the last line!

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John Coopey

Thu 18th Mar 2021 16:49

I rely on Our Gert, MC. She is every bit as sadistic as the Turkish barber.
Thanks for the Likes, Stephen G and Stephen A.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 18th Mar 2021 16:49

Ther first time I've seen it, Julie. A nice story and so glad that everything worked out well in the end.

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John Coopey

Thu 18th Mar 2021 16:45

Nice work, Simon. You paint a cracking picture of Tony.

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keith jeffries

Thu 18th Mar 2021 16:20

I remember well Classical literature at school and all those fantastic voyages and stories. Thank you for a poem which brings to light these journeys and exploits.
A poem which stimulates the imagination.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Kevin T.S. Tan

Thu 18th Mar 2021 16:05

Marvellous!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 18th Mar 2021 15:34

Maybe he was so caught up in rhyme he couldn't find a reason?

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 18th Mar 2021 15:31

Hey - this grows on you. I've often wondered why men of a certain
vintage don't seem to have heard of scissors. Do they enjoy the
sight of the uncontrolled sprouting of grey gap-filling grouting when
looking into the mirror? ?

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 18th Mar 2021 15:19

A sad but involving tale - "hair today and gone tomorrow"?
Tony is captured so well - an amalgam of all those barbers of another day with their big leather chairs that could be pumped up and
down with a foot pedal and were the inviting rest places for many a
male backside.

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julie callaghan

Thu 18th Mar 2021 15:05

Thanks to those who clicked like and commented on the previous post, I messed around with it and decided to repost. I checked the date and it must have been 19 March 1994.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 18th Mar 2021 13:54

Quite right, we don't want any more 'add verse' reactions!

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