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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Sun 7th Mar 2021 20:37

❤ thankyou xxx

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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Sun 7th Mar 2021 19:56

Thankyou so much for the lovely comments and tulips xxx

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keith jeffries

Sun 7th Mar 2021 19:13

Well written with a special descriptive quality which speaks of a poet with a rich vocabulary and the ability to use it.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 7th Mar 2021 19:02

Thanks Stephen G!
'What else does flesh do?' well mine tends to wobble quite a bit at the moment ☺️

Something wobbles
Wobbles the flesh
Food is its king
Whether rotten, or fresh!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 7th Mar 2021 18:40

Thank you Nigel for your poetic response ?

Thanks M.C for your comment. Pasta is such a comfort food and so versatile.

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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Your Royal Poetess

Sun 7th Mar 2021 18:37

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clyde McCulley

Sun 7th Mar 2021 17:11

Stephen, thank you for your words. Greatly appreciated.

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clyde McCulley

Sun 7th Mar 2021 17:11

Keith thank you for a great critique. It is really appreciated. Yes, people do need to reread a poem several times to get the impact of what the poet is want to describe.
Thanks

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Mar 2021 17:10

Very sad to read this. Society has to change.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 7th Mar 2021 16:58

Thanks Nigel and MC for the kind comments and Rose for the like.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Mar 2021 16:46

Very true!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Mar 2021 16:43

Fine,effective poem. Makes the flesh creep (p.s. what else does flesh do?).

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 7th Mar 2021 16:26

Apropos the truth - if you're good at anything, you don't need to boast about it. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 7th Mar 2021 16:14

I endorse KJ's comment.
"Gather thee rosebuds while ye may..." as the poet wrote many centuries ago. On this subject more specifically, I think of the likes of Sophia Loren and Catherine Deneuve as examples of beauty in later years.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 7th Mar 2021 15:59

Spaghetti is a good analogy. Appetising enough to start and suck up
a strand to its end, with each leading the appetite towards more! ?

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Sun 7th Mar 2021 12:37

Pardon my convenient way of commenting hk, but as you can see Keith has said it all which I echo.

Very good poem indeed!

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keith jeffries

Sun 7th Mar 2021 10:10

This poem, beautifully crafted is open to interpretation as it could apply to so many aspects of life, yet it is a jacket which has become the symbol. It asks questions about value and worth. It speaks of being discarded when no longer of use or value. This cannot be read as merely a poem about a worn out jacket; it is rich in suggestions and causes the reader to ponder deeply.


Thank you for this
Keith

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Tim Ellis

Sun 7th Mar 2021 07:42

You’re right, M.C. But before jet aeroplanes were everywhere the noise was mainly birdsong, rushing waters and the wind, which is a much better sort of noise.

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d.knape

Sun 7th Mar 2021 05:11

thanks for your comments on two of my poems.
I hope I did not put you through too much.

who is that You behind that bush?

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Nigel Astell

Sun 7th Mar 2021 02:31

Youth is fun
when getting older
it means more
that's all.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 7th Mar 2021 02:21

Hunger strikes
curling words
twisting round
your mind
poetry simmering.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 7th Mar 2021 01:42

Thanks for your likes
Aviva
Jennifer
Stephen A
Julie
Jordyn
and
Deb.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 7th Mar 2021 01:38

Thanks Stephen instead of a turn on it becomes a switch off.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 7th Mar 2021 00:01

Thanks for the likes Keith, Holden and Nazia, and Keith for the comment. Glad you found something in it. Just common sense really! If you've bet a lot on looks you're bound to become a b nuisance apart from being ancient! at least you can avoid the first.

Jennifer

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John Marks

Sat 6th Mar 2021 22:43

Dear Keith. Never cynical, my friend, stoic maybe.

Faithful, I hope so; above all the beauty of innocence and the need to protect the innocent.

He who shall teach the child to doubt/ The rotting grave shall ne'er get out.
William Blake

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keith jeffries

Sat 6th Mar 2021 22:22

A poem that merits several readings. Do these words indicate a certain futile or incomprehensible reflection on life? Cynicism? If so, then it makes even more sense.
John, thank you for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 6th Mar 2021 22:15

Poetic wisdom at its best.
Thank you
Keith

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John Marks

Sat 6th Mar 2021 21:33

Thank you Stephen A, Stephen G and Holden for your continued support for the lonesome furrow I plough. I seek to accomplish the rhythmical creation of beauty through words. Often fruitlessly, your support is so very much appreciated.

“It is a test [that] genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.” — T. S. Eliot, from the essay "Dante."

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 21:09

Don't believe a word of it! If you were unscrewed (carpentry version) you wouldn't be so funny.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 21:05

Lovely! A real twist to this tail! jennifer

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keith jeffries

Sat 6th Mar 2021 20:39

Poetry at its best, sensitively described with an imagination that has nostalgic quality and takes the reader to the cottage with questions which cannot be answered but only pondered over. The illustration is perfect but not essential as the poem itself conjures up such a place without having to actually see it. It merits several readings to absorb its content as it has the ability to trigger other people's imaginations about similar places.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Brian Hodgkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 19:50

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 6th Mar 2021 19:47

I'm not leaving a comment
I'm just typing
pressing keys
don't read anything into it.

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julie callaghan

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:43

Thanks you for the likes, Hugh, A Girl, Aviva, Dean, Holden and Stephen A, Thank you for your kind comment.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:31

Thanks for the comments Nigel,
A.G. it only knibbled on the fat I've put on since lockdown, so, not too bad.☺️
Thank you Aviva?
And Jennifer, I only know simple language ?
(&, er...it's the mushrooms, as per my earlier poem, Strange Old Day ? say nothing)

And thanks for all the Likes everyone! ??

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:18

Lovely stuff Julie. ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:16

Triggers the imagination beautifully. Great stuff!

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 6th Mar 2021 18:08

If only the programme was as good as your poem...

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:51

Disquieting and intriguing! At least the perpretator felt it was worth it!
Jennifer























At least

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:25

Decidedly spooky! Very cleverly writtten in simple language with 'creeping, crawling, breathing, touching' used very effectively. (Between you and me, perhaps the stuff you're being sold isn't best Afghan?)
Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:20

Absolutely! My life has shrunk like an old jersey, and has holes in it too.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:14

Hope this isn't autobiographical? Presumably if it was, and you had had an ending amid plastic, you wouldn't have been able to produce this. Would think that unfortunately this is very well described.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:11

Lighthearted, but very well written, (in my humble opinion!) Sounds decidedly familiar too! Loved 'scrolled as wayward history, scars and might have beens, in the dank vault lurks fear.' To read several times.

jennifer

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John Coopey

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:10

Thanks, MC. I recollect watching an guy at Doncaster Racecourse selling sealed packets. His sales pitch was awesome. He drew in a crowd with seductive Irish brogue “proving” his provenance, supplemented with photos purporting to show him leading out Derby winners, in the company of trainers and stood alongside jockeys.
He did a roaring trade selling these packets which, he said, contained the name of his tip for the next race. His guarantee was that, in the unlikely event it didn’t win, he would give another ticket for free. The punters couldn’t wait to part with their money.
It was all about the telling.
Absolutely brilliant.
Jennifer - as we’re frequently told, if it’s too good to be true, it isn’t!

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 17:07

Nice stories! The important thing is to be able to laugh about it afterwards. My husband is usually excessively diffident, but once he bought a 'gold' bracelet from a shady character in a motorway carpark. Luckily at a very low cost! Served him right anyway, as it would have been stolen if genuine!!!!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 6th Mar 2021 16:59

Liked the soothsayer who never soothes! I live with someone for whom the first could have been written! Unusual. Jennifer

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 6th Mar 2021 16:46

Thank you for your comment Nigel ?

Thank you also to all those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Mar 2021 15:23

A security guard doing security. A "guardian" making news in The Guardian. What next?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Mar 2021 15:20

A stimulating theme with a wide range. However, I'm not sure that silence per se has ever existed on this Earth.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Mar 2021 15:12

JC - you can still find Smiths pocket watches sold on Ebay. Actually,
they acquired a certain "name" and were not necessarily the "here
today, gone tomorrow" cheapo that the brand seemed to mean for many folk.
As for your second example, I'm reminded of a certain well-known
racehorse trainer of yesteyear from up north who actually got into
print in a racing 'paper of the day boasting how he used to sell
fruit and mix crab apples with the rest selling eating apples to the
public. It used to be called "sharp practice" in my day and I made
a note of avoiding any possibility of backing any horse in his charge.
But I guess we all get "had over" at various stages of life...commonly placed under the collective heading termed "experience". ?

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