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Tue 31st Dec 2019 17:04

Tommy, this made more sense to me than most of the other twaddle posted on WOL these days.

Hopie Nang Yoff!

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 31st Dec 2019 15:58

Thanks for the like, Robert.

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 31st Dec 2019 15:58

All the best for 2020, Po.

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 31st Dec 2019 15:58

I will look out for you Brian ?

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 31st Dec 2019 15:57

Thanks for the comment, Kevin.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 31st Dec 2019 14:29

As you may pass by my little ol' page
This poetical digital stage
May our New Year bring
Your best role yet
And
Leave behind
All of
Last decade's
Regrets!

Wishing Everyone on WOL a Very Happy New Year! I've really enjoyed taking part on this site that I've just discovered this year. It was a nice alternative to the usual social media platforms!?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 31st Dec 2019 10:06

Where do time travelling bees live? In archives... Just made that up...a Christmas cracker writer sideline beckons ?

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Cait Abbott

Tue 31st Dec 2019 08:50

Thank you all ?

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<Deleted User> (23388)

Tue 31st Dec 2019 08:22

? sample

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kJ Walker

Tue 31st Dec 2019 08:05

Jon .... I also read this a few times (enjoyed of course)

I don't know the circumstances behind this, but it would appear that some loud-mouthed fool thinks he's got the better of you.
I doubt that his victory will be long lived.
Bring on that wrath and let him have it

Cheers Kevin

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 31st Dec 2019 07:07

Thanks Dorothy, thanks Adam it means a lot that you like it.

J. x

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kimberly

Mon 30th Dec 2019 23:51

Thanks Don, Do, Derbee, and Tom for the comment and Likes.

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d.knape

Mon 30th Dec 2019 23:37

Here in the States
there are always news stories about
people finding babies in dumpsters
it is not common but on the other hand
it is not rare.
People are too stupid to use birth control!

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Do.RoThy

Mon 30th Dec 2019 23:24

Ah! Losing your phone is more tragic than losing the love of your life in today's time....i can feel your pain although now broken into million pieces, but somehow it can still feel your feel again.

Buy a new one Donny dear, latest and new that can serve you life long. Really well.

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Don Matthews

Mon 30th Dec 2019 22:21

Toilet poet recommends
Sitting on the toot
Ridding all the shitty stuff
In the bowl it put

Push the shit-flush button
Shit! there goes my phone
Dropped in in the toilet bowl
Moan moan moan

?

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Don Matthews

Mon 30th Dec 2019 22:10

I like this.....

And the line:

'Fleeting chemistry pulls us together only for a moment'........

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Don Matthews

Mon 30th Dec 2019 22:06

John

My friend Bert (who only went as far as kindy, where he learnt to count to 5 on his fingers) informs me that after many hours of hard finger-work lazing on his lounger he came up with an answer for (2p) of 2. Is this correct? At one stage he got in such a tizz as his calculations took him beyond 5.....a quick nap seemed to re-boot his brain.....

?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 30th Dec 2019 19:19

Jon

If you see two blokes on bikes, last week of June, that'll be us!

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 30th Dec 2019 18:07

Thanks, Dorothy.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 30th Dec 2019 18:06

Hi Brian, I hope 3 times enjoyed. ?

Sounds great. That's near where I work now - Hilversum. Although moving to Amsterdam next April. Enjoy the cycling.

Hope 2020 is good to you.

Jon.

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Mon 30th Dec 2019 17:20

Jon...I read this three times, something I rarely do.

BTW - going to Amerongen next year and cycling around the Betuwe area.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 30th Dec 2019 16:08

Thanks Ruth same to you

Christmas time is always fun
lots of beer lots of wine
but then all is gone
with the bottle bank full of empties
and money all spent up
on the positive side
a clear head is good
to write some more poetry
with the new year coming up!

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Nigel Astell

Mon 30th Dec 2019 15:48

Eyes to the right
eyes to the left

it's that Don looking
what does he see?

might need bigger specs
but not quite sure

he is looking at
someone so special

so I have to say
his eyes seem o.k!

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Don Matthews

Mon 30th Dec 2019 13:28

Thankyou Nigel for your considering my eyes. You could have said stuff your eyes and commented thus:

Nigel!!!! Thalia here. WOL techs will not allow Don to zig-zag below as he was hoping. Seems the mods think he's taking too many liberties and putting a leash on him. We both know this will only have limited effect. So read on and apply a bit of LMS imagination

Thanks
Tom
Po
Do.RoTHy
Ruth
for your likes


but Like-Minders would never do that to each other.


Thankyou once

again. Thalia Lucy Ethel

Bert all thank you as

well......


blip.....blip Janet calling Nigel

... are you receiving me?..... ......if your eyes are

going all zig-zag wizzy-like you need to see

an eye doctor.......no Don is not playing tricks on you Nigel. This is for real. You're not playing around with Nigel's eyes are you Don?......

?

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Adam

Mon 30th Dec 2019 13:09

Absolutely fantastic

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Don Matthews

Mon 30th Dec 2019 12:59

That's the trouble with you Poms
You grump and grump and grizzle
You need your bit of gloomy doomy
Need some fizzle drizzle

Being in a gloomy clime
I guess you needs it tho
I guess it makes you feel off-kilter
Let's all sing ho ho ho

What's that?.....

Don, Don! Ho ho ho? ...Christmas's come and gone.....

Sheesh. gimme a break....

?

You didn't fire me? You were just joking? There's hope for you yet.....

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Adam

Mon 30th Dec 2019 12:44

I like the intensity. What was the drive behind this piece, if you don't mind me asking ?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 30th Dec 2019 12:19

Bravo!!!

This man has been a boy who fought the fear and dark shadows and is brave enough to stand eye to eye.....this is it!!
This man is unlike the ugly dark shadows, holding no grudge, but fearless and strong.....don't mess, just don't mess with him, you ugly human shadows.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 30th Dec 2019 12:06

Angel dust to fall
upon these brave firefighters
to help them save
those in the path
man and beast alike
intense burning nature eater
fire of all fires.

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d.knape

Mon 30th Dec 2019 12:03


Birth is the ultimate Miracle.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 30th Dec 2019 11:34

Thanks
Tom
Po
Do.RoTHy
Ruth
plus Adam
for your likes

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 30th Dec 2019 11:18

Don, Don! We do like a laugh but we also like a break from it too

Signed.........Grumpy Pom!

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Do.RoThy

Mon 30th Dec 2019 11:09

I liked the line that Don has mentioned.... The poem is beautiful Cait....you have great words to serve on poetic plate.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 30th Dec 2019 10:30

Thanks Adam for your likes for Raiman and Civilian's Perspective.

Hope you're a sensible Aussie...we've already got a silly one!

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Don Matthews

Mon 30th Dec 2019 09:09

Between you and 'tween me
A day has come and gone
Nothing's happened, don't get excited
Your Foreign Correspondent Don

?

Hello? Trumpy's just gone twittered
He's gonna launch a bomb
Wipe North Korea off the map
With great Trumpy aplomb

Just joking....sorry

What? I'm fired?

Have you Brits got no sense of humour?

Lucy says don't come knockin' on our LMS door....

?

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Don Matthews

Mon 30th Dec 2019 07:40

The Like-Minders Society (LMS) is about to begin it's 10th Meeting.

This time the Rollercoaster will take the group around its Theme Park to the following stops of offbeat poetical interest:

Traditional Poets Stamping Ground
Writers Corners
The Interview Studio
Propper Spelling Centre
Toilet Stop (essential to any self-respecting Theme Park)

As many of our invited poets do not belong to WOL they are grateful for the exposure LMS offers them

Should you wish to join and book a Roller seat with our group it's very simple. Just email our leader. We're also free. How many other Theme Parks offer free rides?

Lucy L (LMS Head of Publicity)

No riff-raff or doomy gloomers please. We run a tight ship.

Don is a safe driver and our wheels don't fall off.....

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Do.RoThy

Mon 30th Dec 2019 07:36

Heart beats faster
Anxiousness rising
This coaster ride
Creates whirlpools
In my stomach n mind
Am all buckled up
Tightly holding on
To my teddy ? Po
All this thrill gives me chills
Slowly slipping down
From my spine to left toe down
Hey Don, drive slow and safe
Flights about to off take
Am all excited and nervous
LMS theme park addiction
Growing stronger and thrilling
All these years been wasted
Sitting hatching nothing
Now this fun filled journey
Opens up excellent avenues
Wherefrom i'll make journeys adventurous and new

Thank you Donny dear!! There are millions of butterflies in my stomach already....and many more still growing within me.

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Do.RoThy

Mon 30th Dec 2019 06:09

Hope you have a wonderful time here!!

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Do.RoThy

Mon 30th Dec 2019 06:07

Thank you Adam. ?

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Adam

Mon 30th Dec 2019 04:25

Your imagery makes me smile and gives me a feeling of hopefulness.

I especially enjoy the phrase 'Twin eyes dreaming and weaving silently their wishful lives' - the image in my mind of eyes weaving dreams is beautiful; one I won't forget.

There are many parts to this that I enjoy. Thank-you Do.RoThy.

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Adam

Mon 30th Dec 2019 04:12

To Don, Ethel and Bert: Thank you all for your comments and for taking the time to read what I've written. I look forward to hearing from you and reading your work in the future.

'An online drink in a pub' – I like that; it's nice to meet a fellow Aussie here. I hope you're all safe during this season of extreme weather.

I take Bert's comment in stride; I understand that a good piece should be easy to interpret by the audience and seeing as I'm posting in a public space, this is an effort I should make.

You lot are hilarious and you've made my day.
Thanks for the encouragement. I look forward to hearing from you all again in the future. A place like this is a blessing.


And to Brian: You're right, I just wanted to be sure to not upset anyone with my attempt at graphic imagery. Thank-you for your comment.

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Zoë

Mon 30th Dec 2019 03:59

This is heavy these sentences have weight

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Tom

Sun 29th Dec 2019 23:50

Some brave and bold lines in this one that genuinely took me by surprise. Fantastic write Cait!

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Do.RoThy

Sun 29th Dec 2019 23:31

Orbit Do......loved it!!.this is beautiful.....?

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Do.RoThy

Sun 29th Dec 2019 23:28

Donny Dear, i can see you fast keeping with me. A writing marathon ? hehehe
Thnx Don!!

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Do.RoThy

Sun 29th Dec 2019 23:26

I'm glad you adore the write.....n yes!!my love is more lovely n handsome n beautiful than the moon....n he's my only moon....one n only...Po
Thnx dear!!!

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 29th Dec 2019 23:20

Ands, buts, ifs, thens and whens I always think of as dead words. Brevity makes more impact than wordy words. I'd love to 'pm' you with an edit if you want one. Keep posting!

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John Marks

Sun 29th Dec 2019 23:08

Thanks Cathy and Don. Means a lot. John

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Don Matthews

Sun 29th Dec 2019 21:05

Adam

You need to get to know me to know the right way to take me. Being a newbie you do not yet have that advantage. But fear not cos I live downunder like you. See? I have established an immediate bond between us already. Bit like an online drink in a pub.

Ethel and Bert (friends of mine) often read poet's work and feel the urge to comment. Bert is a little miffed at all the big words you have used. He's feeling a bit uncomfortable and suggests an appendix of meanings would help. (He only went as far as kindy and can only count to 5 on his fingers). However they both feel there is deep meaning in your piece and encourage you to continue.

We basically write for ourselves Adam even if others have difficulty understanding us. Write and archive away. You'll gradually get to know which way to take me.....

?

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Don Matthews

Sun 29th Dec 2019 20:43

Argumentative? You'll make a good lawyer. And you wear your heart on your sleeve?. I'll remember to call you when I need a lawyer.....

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