Many good lines here Cait. I like

'Each time I tried to cut myself from you
I would pick up the needle and thread, drawn by your silent promises, and sew us together again '......

Comment is about 46 (blog)

Original item by Cait Abbott

Couldn't find the offensive bit.

Comment is about Untitled - 2 (blog)

Original item by nightflower

Thank you very much, it's very nice to see someone so welcoming to new members. I've only been on here for a short time and already I've read many fantastic and inspiring pieces. Now wishing I'd looked for poetry blogs sooner. Thanks again.

Comment is about nightflower (poet profile)

Original item by nightflower

I can tell you all about the London smog - used to cycle from Brixton to the City in it - wearing white inner linen smog masks of the times of course - which when arriving at the end of the journey were blacker than the inside of a cavernous cave. There were various medical conditions attributed to these events but which everyone accepted as part of the London scene - I am sure the Coroner's reports of the time, would have the detail of damage caused to lungs and mental health - but I am talking about the 60s - when the second world war was still uppermost in most people's minds and bomb sites were lethargically awaiting redevelopment. Difficult to attribute the causation due to the times. But bronchitis was certainly amongst the many ailments I recall - plus heart attacks. Periodic illnesses of various kinds were rife. Don't get me going about the old fashioned ambulances that clanged their way along the fog fumed roads, the drivers - heroes everyone of them.

Comment is about London Smog and New Research (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Thank you Derby, Don, Mika, Jeff and Do for the comments and the likes. Not very festive this one but got to take each day as they come ?

Comment is about Small Victories (blog)

Original item by Tom

The unfiltered unedited draft.

Any suggestions for improvement welcome.?

Comment is about Forest Fire (blog)

Original item by Adam Whitworth

Gosh Do, your pen seems to go faster than a rollercoaster.... I gotta run to keep up with you..

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Comment is about Love you forever more!! ? (blog)

Po

I often wonder if I'm unconsciously using humour to soften the hard things.

There are two parts of me - Serious and Comic. I personify them as my two children. Comic is the young playful one. Serious is his older sibling. They often cause trouble with the neighbours if you get my drift.

Serious presents the real hard facts of life while Comic tries to counteract Serious and soften the blow.

Serious and Comic often play together in the same poem.

They seem to enjoy doing this.........and I encourage it

Comment is about London Smog and New Research (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

As well as can be expected, considering the election result, Jeff! Thanks for your positive and defiant optimism. We will need plenty of that in the months and years ahead.

Comment is about The carriage in the forest (blog)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Good stuff Greg, very interesting thanks for posting. Glad you enjoyed Rise Again, yes slow rebuilding process starting on our own doorsteps, hope you're good, all the best for 2020, cheers Jeff ?

Comment is about The carriage in the forest (blog)

Original item by Greg Freeman

A valid question, doubt the answer is good, poignant thoughts Don. Thanks for reading Rise Again, glad you liked it, thanks Jeff ?

Comment is about London Smog and New Research (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Really like this Tom and read those on your profile, good stuff, sometimes those small victories get you through ? thanks for your comment on Rise Again, best wishes thanks for reading, Jeff ?

Comment is about Small Victories (blog)

Original item by Tom

Welcome to WOL!! Hope you have a good time here with other poets. Would be a pleasure reading more of your works.

Comment is about nightflower (poet profile)

Original item by nightflower

Pollution adds to mental illness and so also watching television and addictive social media.

Today's life style has led to many psycho -physiological illnesses.

The cure is at a switch off button!!

These awareness writes from you and Po needs much larger readership.

Thanks Don!!

Comment is about London Smog and New Research (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

I agree with you bint-e-Afroz!! ?

Hopefulness is a mark of a believer and prayers are the weapons!!

Comment is about Humanity Washed Ashore (blog)

Original item by Binte Afroz

Thanks for commenting favourably. Yes, it's a bitter reality that humanity is rare in humans now-a-days. But let's not lose hope for a better tomorrow, a peaceful tomorrow ?.

Comment is about Humanity Washed Ashore (blog)

Original item by Binte Afroz

Life consists of learning from mistakes ....may hurt to begin but you eventually grow int a better stronger person Cait.....

This is so good Cait. So poetic.

I am broken
But I have all of my pieces
I need not replace parts of myself with those carved from another
I am in the process of glueing myself back together
Bear with me, while I take my time ....

Comment is about The Greenhouse (blog)

Original item by Cait Abbott

Danny

'love and compassion are the weapons that will relinquish the darkness and when there is no fear evil can't breed'

Us poets can wax lyrical Danny but we won't change the world. My opinion? Things will only be changed by a mass movement of people led by a strong leader to force politicians in doing the will of the people. A la Martin Luther King

The root cause of all this is greed and greed rules the world. We seem to have been born with a greed gene.

Maybe the science techs can now cut this out?

What's that Donald? You gives heap of cash to greed-machine development?

Also to the gun lobby?

Gosh Danny, how silly of me. Seems I should forget this greed-gene-removal idea of mine. Everything might fall apart......

Trumpy tells me greed rules the world. And he should know hey?

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Keith - there I go again. Off on my hobbyhorse...Sorry...

Comment is about Integrity,Where is your sting? (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Just now discovering your poems and enjoying your art. I have added you to my favorites. Thanks for sharing your gifts. Write on!

Comment is about Danny Giesbrecht (poet profile)

Original item by Danny Giesbrecht

'Humanity debased
for flags and monarchs
What a fucking hell'


A well-said ending Keith....

Games played by generals sipping whiskeys in cosy comfort while young boy pawns get killed. Bring in the next wave of pawns folks. Plenty more from where they came from....Onward and upward.

I rarely swear in anger but what a fucking waste.....

However, defence from an agressor requires a different set of thinking. And not all generals are drinking whiskey while their troops are getting killed. Some are fighting alongside them.

Despite all this war is a futile waste.

Cause? Greed. Greed rules the world. I think humans are born with a greed gene.

Sadly......

Maybe science can now remove this gene?

Question? Do the powers that be want to?

I'm getting sidetracked here...sorry Keith

Do the rich (greedy?) want their greed gene removed from their future progeny? Would Trump?

Of course not Don. Who provides the money for gene research, politics, greed-machine research?.....

Sorry Keith....got sidetracked......

Comment is about The Front (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

It's really sad to think there's just scum running this world one day the populous will rise but peace will never be reached with guns and violence, love and compassion are the weapons that will relinquish the darkness and when there is no fear evil can't breed, it's coming really soon nothing will be the same in these coming years. Can't you feel it it's invigorating thank you fam my spirit has lifted each poem that I read

Comment is about Integrity,Where is your sting? (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Aussie volunteers they were
Risking limb and life
Fighting nature's fury, wrath
Licking flames were rife

Battling in the heat, the haze
Humans at their best
Sixty homes razed to the ground
Embers meant no rest

One person died from nature's wrath
Tried to save his home
Would you do likewise? stay? defend?
(Would you? would you? would you?.....)

Let's end on a lighter note:

I've had a peek at Sunday
While you were fast asleep
Nothing brilliant's happened
No need to even weep

Trumpy's still in power
Senate find no fault
Nothing seems to stop him
Nothing makes him halt

Maybe a assassin would do the trick Eth?.....

The poet is trying to end on a lighter note luv....

Sorry poet....


Boris still on holidays
Must be boring there
Boris/Donald twosome
What a boring pair

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Comment is about Christmas Angels (blog)

Original item by Ruth O'Reilly

I really like the intensity it is almost if I was there very good

Comment is about The Front (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Strength to you girl!! Brave one....keep going....pen down your emotions n grow as a mighty poet!! ?

Comment is about The Greenhouse (blog)

Original item by Cait Abbott

Hi pal,
Rollers should roll
Where are your folks
Flocks of LMSz
I'm awaiting to start
The ups n ups of ride
No falls to swing
Only great rising
Stop hoeing
Ho hum
Start the fun
Times running out
Vacations to end

Comment is about Chequered life game!! (blog)

Thanks Don. Well at the moment I'd say your Christmas Angels will be the firefighters who are keeping everything under control. Have you got a chance to sign that New Year's firework petition?

You'll have to tell us what 2020 is like because you're going to be seeing it first!?

Comment is about Christmas Angels (blog)

Original item by Ruth O'Reilly

Tick tock tick tock
Hands go round clock
Blink blink, digital
No hands, hi pal

Roller ready
Tick tock
Waiting for
Minder flock

Where's this silly
Ditty going?
Must to garden
Do some hoeing

Ho hum

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Comment is about Chequered life game!! (blog)

I met mine way back when Philipos brought a bunch of them on a Bus Tour of WOL looking for mates. We hit it off on first sight. Not sure if any of the others scored. The bus was heading back to Mt Olympus I'm told.

Oh? ...you're meaning the from-above variety?......I thought it was my little angel in the picture

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Hmmm.....

More truth to this than you realise.....

Reminding lost
Souls
That they are
Good enough

Comment is about Christmas Angels (blog)

Original item by Ruth O'Reilly

Oh, you cut deep here John.

I was brought up suddenly by the last line.

As long as we continue to distance ourselves from discussing mental health issues young people (mainly men as you say) will continue to suicide.....

A powerful, raw write as Vautaw says John.......

Comment is about The flowers of the forest (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Vautaw

Yes. Surely this is the purpose of poetry. To pull at the emotions. Tears, laughter, sadness and all our other varieties.....

Comment is about A winter blossoming (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Good to see you back on my screen Binte. This is a powerful write. True and sad. The lines

'where vultures and death-eaters sit expectant.

They are thankful

to the inventors of war'

are well crafted. To me......

Comment is about Humanity Washed Ashore (blog)

Original item by Binte Afroz

I liked everything about this....the line 'Together in simplicity' said a lot in just three words......

Comment is about Full Circle (blog)

Original item by Lisa C Bassignani

Heartbreaking truth!! Humanity at it's lowest. Such a huge world, but no place for humans.

Comment is about Humanity Washed Ashore (blog)

Original item by Binte Afroz

Have you ever read poetry so beautiful it makes you want to cry? That's what this poem does to me. From the first line to the last, I am in awe of your gift. I hope you keep writing until you draw your last breath. Thank you for sharing your poems with us John. ?

Comment is about A winter blossoming (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Wow John, you hit another one out of the park. Powerful. Raw. ❤

Comment is about The flowers of the forest (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Enjoyed this Do, Thanks. You've got a good imagination, I can see it as clearly as 2020 ? When we reach the land of Oz, I'll change my name to 'KangaRuthie' for the special occasion!

Comment is about Vacation time!! (blog)

Yippeee!!! ?

Yea Don!! Love bug ?

Comment is about Vacation time!! (blog)

Really enjoyed the pace of emotion & hopeful romance of this piece Lisa, showing us good timing in life is everything!

Comment is about Full Circle (blog)

Original item by Lisa C Bassignani

May you meet an Angel or two before Christmas ends....

Comment is about Christmas Angels (blog)

Original item by Ruth O'Reilly

I agree with Vautaw......beautifully expressed!!

I can relate so much to this, hope the end is beautiful for you Lisa n for me n us all....?

Comment is about Full Circle (blog)

Original item by Lisa C Bassignani

Good one Lisa. You should enter it in the "Vision" WoLF competition!

Comment is about Amidst & Beyond (blog)

Original item by Lisa C Bassignani

Wow Lisa, a most beautiful love story. I wish they could all end this way! ?

Comment is about Full Circle (blog)

Original item by Lisa C Bassignani

Hello Tom. wink.

Comment is about Tom (poet profile)

Original item by Tom

Golly gosh, Do's been bitten by the rollercoaster bug.

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Comment is about Vacation time!! (blog)

You didn't know Rowan Atkinson was a poet did you?.....

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Comment is about Abou Ben Adhem for Today's Poets (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Eth?...Is the LMS Theme Park and rollercoaster real?....

I see it over the fence with my own eyes. Do, Po and Ruth wave to me. Driver Don can't cos he driving and must have eyes to front.

Some people are saying it doesn't exist and I'm hallucinating.....

Gosh that's a big word luv....

Miss Bethel taught me it......she was a nice teacher...taught me to count to five on my fingers too.....

Now you mention it Bert some are saying you and I don't exist......

They got a nerve Eth........

We should complain.....where's our birth certificates Eth?.......

Don keeps them in the LMS safe......

(I take no responsibility for comments made by Ethel and Bert. They have a right to their opinions, as do we all)


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Comment is about Blessedness!! ? (blog)

Thank you Don for the free entry pass
Theme park is where i wish to belong
Roller coasters ready to drive me crazy
Hope the rides are thrilling and exciting
Journey would be safe With Donny Doc near
None apple I eat, Doc shall i near me keep
Enjoying the rides in futuristic theme park
Christmas pud was delicious, but didn't eat much
For i was preparing my stomach for a bigger meal
Where with buns we get doughnuts free
Lemme know the time when the coaster i need climb

Riff raffs are struggling bitter cold days
Their minds and body all completely frozen
No park cops required forever more
As safety starts at the theme parks door

Common Doc hold the door open for entry!!

Thale n bert n lucy....n alice, lilly, rose, joey n everyone..... Go on winter vacation!!

Donny Doc has some special patients to treat....hehehhe ?

Comment is about Blessedness!! ? (blog)

Let's go driving everyone crazy. Kindda lonesome longsome drive!!! Self driven not carr driven....zoom zip zap......vroom!!

Comment is about No Drive (blog)

Original item by Joe Marcello

Hahaha!!!! Hey Doc, hwz the walk? High!!!! ????

Comment is about Plink, Plink, Plink (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Do's made me now a Doctor
Good heavens golly gosh!
Roller driver, toilet rents
Dripping taps for wash

You will all be pleased to hear that as I have yet to create a tap-fixing janitor for the LMS Theme Park loo I have fixed the tap myself. No longer will plink plink annoy you Po.

Yes Thale/Lucy I am thinking of a she janitor.....

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Comment is about Plink, Plink, Plink (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews