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John Coopey

Fri 13th Dec 2019 07:31

If only someone had warned us he was unelectable, Brian!

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Fri 13th Dec 2019 07:15

He's gonna be gone. Solid gone.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 13th Dec 2019 02:44

I have fallen into the void myself a time or two. Heart-wrenching place to be. Writing helps bring rays of light to set our bound spirit free. Write on my friend. ❤

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Fri 13th Dec 2019 01:08

At least they'd probably have some empathy with their patients!

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Do.RoThy

Thu 12th Dec 2019 22:30

I can well relate these thoughts at this moment of time......well expressed!!! ?

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Don Matthews

Thu 12th Dec 2019 20:50

To me, bouncing off each other is an important part of being a poet.....enjoy the ride

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Don Matthews

Thu 12th Dec 2019 20:47

We in South Australia
Are known for elving cheek
What? you don't know what this is?
Takes lots of technique


They very silly down there luv.....

We at least have a good leader of state Eth....

The next one's gonna be better luv.......

Why's that Eth?.....

Cos we the people chose 'im.....

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 12th Dec 2019 20:31

Nice little poem there Nigel! Cheers for that. While everybody is busy hibernating I know you and your gang of cheeky elves will be busy up to some sort of mischief!

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Tom

Thu 12th Dec 2019 16:05

Don Don Don
thanks
for the inspiration
on this one

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Tui Dragonfly

Thu 12th Dec 2019 14:09

This is the full version of the example of my works. Written whilst visiting family in Northern Thailand.
The photo is of one of the many subjugated workers in Dubai who built that 'city of gold' and yet when trouble strikes, are still treated like chattels... devoid of human rights.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 12th Dec 2019 13:13

So glad you enjoyed it Dorothy. I agree, true love never fades. Poetry is one of the truest loves I have ever known. ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 12th Dec 2019 13:10

Thanks Ruth & Trevor. ?I am a big fan of Leonard Cohen. He is one of my favorite poets/musicians.

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Tui Dragonfly

Thu 12th Dec 2019 13:03

Thank you Jason? and... Sincere apologies for not replying/responding sooner!?!! :{ Nothing like the beginning of Lady-pause to test the theory!!

I wanted to let you know though that your reaction to the 'Awareness that was revealed to me' on my Uber trip to catch a plane, really jazzed me and has given me courage and fortitude to continue laying down what is sent my way!

I had initially joined this site (after almost a year of research and to-ing and fro-ing nervously trying to find a space in which to spill forth the froth that builds up in my never ceasing mind...) and, had never expected to be contacted, commented upon, let alone acquaint with a like minded soul!

Thank you for taking the time to share with me. I was much impressed and inspired upon reading your profile, blog and prose! Especially impressed at how you persisted and forged ahead. Inspiring ?

Your decision to reach out to me and give thought... let along 'Get it!!' has given me much needed faith that I am not alone in my thinking on this whirling ball of blue-green... (or perhaps... the proffered 'Flat Earth', Parallel universe, circular Haelo, giant Disc-world balanced on the back of four elephants who happen to be standing on a giant space tortoise as he swims through the universe...(thanks Terry)... or, my particular favorite... cornered in the cargo bay of a Vogon Destructor ship sent to remove Earth and make way for a super-universal bypass coming through our solar system... after our electronic hitch-hiking 'thumb' malfunctioned...) and that actually doing something with my thoughts and musings is actually making it out there and it is worth it.

A mind that once knew and retained so much, adept at recalling the most obscure point at a moments notice, my mind, is now in full stride in the race against time and the inevitable decay of the physical, the carefully tended pathways and the ease of flow of conversation and thought.

This site (thank you Write Out Loud) is my savior and is enabling me to keep firing the neurons, stimulating and testing my knowledge, feelings and emotions. Even if only reading, I feel alive and connected.

Ka Pai

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d.knape

Thu 12th Dec 2019 12:31

When you're out of stuff
to write about-
write about Rats.

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Do.RoThy

Thu 12th Dec 2019 12:23

Yes you can always play Donny dear!!

Hope u have more fun every day n every year ? party ?

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Don Matthews

Thu 12th Dec 2019 11:19

Up 'n' down
Stomach goes
All your fault
Ride you chose

Front or back
Makes no diff
You chose ride
Sorry, stiff

What's that you say?
Help let me off?
Cos in my tum's
Beef stroganoff

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Tom

Thu 12th Dec 2019 10:26

Thanks Victoria, it's all about those connections. ?

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Randy Horton

Thu 12th Dec 2019 06:35

Thanks. I hope that accepting that I cause harm helps me to have more humility.

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Don Matthews

Thu 12th Dec 2019 02:19

Thanks Do. We all have a little kid in us. Mine seems to be a little more playful than most.

Now behave yourself Comic.....

But i wanna play.....can I? can I?.....

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d.knape

Wed 11th Dec 2019 22:58

very good Tom.
You saved a book!
now leave another
for someone else...

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d.knape

Wed 11th Dec 2019 22:56

Thank you Vautaw. ?

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Do.RoThy

Wed 11th Dec 2019 22:11

This is beautiful.... Lyrical/poetical/love affair....Hahaha!! Something new n i loved it!!

Love never fades, if it's true!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 11th Dec 2019 21:57

Beautiful Randy. Reminds me of the mass awakening that is happening in the dark. Progress. ❤️

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Do.RoThy

Wed 11th Dec 2019 21:52

The child in us lives forever.

As a kid i loved these balloons. Even today they attract my sight. At times i buy them to satisfy my kiddish urge....Hahaha

Loved the poem so much. Thanx for balloon poem....keep the kid in u alive always!!!

Cheers ? Donny dear!!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 11th Dec 2019 21:51

Love this one D. ❤️

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Don Matthews

Wed 11th Dec 2019 21:40

Yes, 'but we can aspire'.......is the most important thing in all this......

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Philipos

Wed 11th Dec 2019 21:01

How cute is that - enjoyed. P.

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Tom

Wed 11th Dec 2019 17:30

I found a copy of 2001: A Space Odyssey on top of a parking meter in Oxford in 2003. Read it on the bus on the way home and it since became one of my favourites. So glad it was tossed and so glad I rescued it. ?

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Trevor Alexander

Wed 11th Dec 2019 13:47

Thanks guys. Yes, I know its a Utopian dream, but we can aspire, even as we put up with all the crap life throws at us.

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Trevor Alexander

Wed 11th Dec 2019 13:39

I'm glad to say I get it. And love Cohen's music.

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d.knape

Wed 11th Dec 2019 13:29

If wise we will not waste a book
but save it for another look,
a book is someone's heart and soul
we should take time to get to know.

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 11th Dec 2019 13:19

Thanks Po, Don and Tom, just been struggling with it a little lately.

J. x

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Nigel Astell

Wed 11th Dec 2019 12:46

Krampus sends out his worst wishes to all bad children who tend to stray from the merry Santa line of you must be good for Christmas!

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Nigel Astell

Wed 11th Dec 2019 12:32

Winter's hibernation
puts all but
slightest of light
to sleep
as both mind
and body react
Nature stirs slowly
to wake us up.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 11th Dec 2019 12:12

The Collage Club rocked
minds played poetic sounds
dancing non-stop spaced out
as poetry says goodbye to 2019 - - -

a Krampus Christmas to all!

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 11th Dec 2019 11:44

Thanks, Brian. Yes, a rarity for me. Certainly, more challenging but definitely satisfying.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 11th Dec 2019 11:15

Great poem and I really enjoyed your accompanying audio!

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Wed 11th Dec 2019 10:48

A rare rhyming piece from you Jon. Well done. It's a challenge isn't it?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 11th Dec 2019 07:36

“There’s an ocean of desire between your pen and my paper.” Love that line! Great poem Tom. Makes me think deeper about the connection between poetry and passion. ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 11th Dec 2019 03:15

Po, Don, Kimberly, Tom...Thank you for your twinkling star lights my beautiful poetic kindred spirits. Cha-Cha

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Tom

Tue 10th Dec 2019 22:47

I echo Po and Don too Jason. I don’t always get chance to comment or like on here but your work always impresses me. T

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Tom

Tue 10th Dec 2019 22:38

Victoria! Brilliant, I love every word. So true. We must thank one another for the dance, just as he did ?

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John Marks

Tue 10th Dec 2019 22:22

Thank you Vautaw and Tom. Sometimes we forget that poetry can take us on a journey - that leads us inside out. ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 10th Dec 2019 22:12

Po

I see BM has been backward in not coming forward with his elucidation.

Then again he'd have a nerve coming back to elucidate on my blog

What's that?......hens don't 'say' they 'cluck'

Gimme a break....haven't you heard of poetic license?

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Don Matthews

Tue 10th Dec 2019 21:58

Yes, it is a beautiful vision as Vautaw says Trevor. But a vision is all it is and will ever be.

We all know a prefect world will never exist. We can do things to improve it but that's about all........

Us poets can wax lyrical but we will not change a thing......

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 10th Dec 2019 21:32

Such a beautiful vision Trevor. ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 10th Dec 2019 21:30

'A lyrical love affair'......So true Vautaw. A perfect phrase......

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Don Matthews

Tue 10th Dec 2019 21:18

I echo Po Jason, you write good poetry. I enjoy it.......even though it's made me feel tired......

You've only just got up silly. 4 hrs sleep is just not enough.....

So it's not Jason?........

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 10th Dec 2019 21:01

Thanks Po, I really should apologise to everyone on here I've hardly been on and read anything. Genuinely though, I really am tired. Still mental note to self, need to make more effort. Sorry.

J. x

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Don Matthews

Tue 10th Dec 2019 20:59

Po

When you're young there's more at stake. You have a job and family to protect. When you retire no job needing protection. Also the older you get the less you worry about what others think. I think damnit how many more years have I got left here? I'm gonna do what I want.

Take me or leave me......

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Gosh Eff bit forthright innit?

We're Brits Bert we gotta wiffhold stiff upper lip 'an all that.....

Too rite Eff.....burp



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