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Do.RoThy

Sun 8th Dec 2019 01:45

Po dear, your words are deep.if only my heart and soul behave themselves well and follow. They like two naughty kids keep bragging n i feel so exhausted n helpless to give them their love. I feel helpless n tired n exhausted n dying n not knowing what is n what will be n what i should do n whether or not...phew.....utter chaos n confusion my little mind has created in my skull....need to bring a mechanic to untangle all the curved wires that are creating short circuit in my head...reflected in my heart n felt by my gentle breaking soul.
I'm sure u r confused too after reading this..phew!!! Phew!!! Phew!!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 8th Dec 2019 01:08

Reads like an awesome blues song. I'm listening to "I'll Play the Blues for You" in the background as I read this poem and the rhythm fits perfectly. Music to the ears of all us survivors. Great title and verse. ❤

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 7th Dec 2019 18:31

Wonderful words, John.

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Andy N

Sat 7th Dec 2019 17:08

Looking forward to this as always too (:

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 7th Dec 2019 14:49

Thanks Philipos, Richard Have you been on the gin as well? More thieving there Nigel!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 7th Dec 2019 14:45

Sounds like you and Andy are partners in crime with this Krampus thing, never even heard of before he mentioned it! You'll be locking horns as to who has the best poem about it ?

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Nigel Astell

Sat 7th Dec 2019 14:39

Twas the night of too much Grinning

Cat says
I love your Santa suit mouse
Mouse says
How much gin have you had?
Cat says
Tooooo much
Mouse says
Great cause I can raid the fridge!

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Tom

Sat 7th Dec 2019 14:33

Another good one, DK. Got me thinking and renewed my hope somehow.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 7th Dec 2019 14:03

Thanks Ruth thanks Don

the computer shut down before I finished now for verse two - - -

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Tom

Sat 7th Dec 2019 13:55

Thank you for the comment regarding Why Poems. I also loved the intense outpouring in your If It's Love. You have a real talent and I'm looking forward to reading more.

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coyote

Sat 7th Dec 2019 12:45

a poem about the bicycle ditch troll...

the bycle ditch troll, was a woman on a bike,she took to the road, and did what she liked.stealth camping  she did for 45 days,
sleeping in ditches is wher she  would stay.testing her abiltiy to survive on the road,bicycle and sleeping bag wer her code.from north to south, and back again.she is the one that smiles  in the end...

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coyote

Sat 7th Dec 2019 12:42

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coyote

Sat 7th Dec 2019 12:40

- - thank you , and many blessing to you, Hazel ? ?

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DIY

Sat 7th Dec 2019 12:33

'Why Poems?' - Lovely work.

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Do.RoThy

Sat 7th Dec 2019 11:01

Happiness playing hide n seek, more hidden than seen....sun is brightly shinning on the yonder horizon.

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DIY

Sat 7th Dec 2019 00:32

Short, sweet and meaningful.
Yes, more of it please.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sat 7th Dec 2019 00:01

I have never found anyone that can sing about the dark side of love as well as the legendary Leonard Cohen. Happy discovery Lynn!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 6th Dec 2019 23:58

Thank you Dorothy❣️?

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Philipos

Fri 6th Dec 2019 21:56

Ho Ho Ho - Great last line. ?

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ZTK Space

Fri 6th Dec 2019 21:46



Thank you Do.RoThy.

I have lost tons of decent poetry on account of how my family and I have been treated.

I even swore I would not write anymore but, as you can guess, it is in all us poets. We struggle not to write.

Thank you again.

x

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 6th Dec 2019 21:26

Aww this is really sweet, you've given me an idea for a kids Christmas poem now.

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d.knape

Fri 6th Dec 2019 21:11

The calendars from the Funeral Home?

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 20:50

Oh so good Ashleigh. And so true to life.....

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 20:34

Snow, I am a good cat
I got no sins to hide
I not played with no mousies
I not made mousy died

So therefore snow, no need
To cover up, me cat
I sinless, pure, and purr-like
(that's where my rhyme is at)

Purrrrr....

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 20:21

Sheesh Nige! What's got into you? Chrissy Krampus beginning to get you?

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 20:12

Hey Eff?....

Wot luv?....

This Hugh's gettin' a bit scientific isn't 'e?.....

'e's high-trained luv;;;;

Must've got to the top of Brit-rail Eff.......

A learned observer is my Bert....

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afishamongmany

Fri 6th Dec 2019 19:58

Come on dk, some of those wall calendars are really cool. : ) ><>

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Hugh

Fri 6th Dec 2019 19:38

Spiders are present in every house,
Definitely more common than the mouse.
They rid our homes of insects and lice,
They do this free ,don't charge a price.
With its front legs it tastes its prey,
Injects it with chemicals and drinks it away.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 6th Dec 2019 19:34

Ouch just got a cramp in my ankle trying to run away from that thing!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 6th Dec 2019 18:58

Nigel Ah look I see your Soul there now all fully recharged No more I- Soulation! Just keep those bears under control we don't want them going mental screaming all over the place ?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 6th Dec 2019 18:54

Don it sounds like the only Christmas Jumpers in Australia are the Kangaroos!

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Nigel Astell

Fri 6th Dec 2019 17:22

Ruth
needing a recharge
soul has returned
talking to someone
finding without text
a meaningful conversation
mentally unbearably painful
hard to maintain
without screaming again.

Don
Orstralia sounds good

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Nigel Astell

Fri 6th Dec 2019 17:00

Thanks Ruth
working on the darker side of Christmas once again
with my gangland boss Krampos, he has got me filling up sacks with bad kids then getting other members of the gang to take them away.

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Candice Reineke

Fri 6th Dec 2019 16:55

‘If it makes you feel better, it wasn’t in vain, was it?’

Once again, Cynthia, you have used your talent to make me laugh. Thank you!

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John Coopey

Fri 6th Dec 2019 16:20

“Much to do about bugger all!”, Po and Don.?

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 15:01

Good golly gosh! the Bard, Macbeth?
Way too posh for me
And what's this high-falutin' thing
Hyperbole-bolee?

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Do.RoThy

Fri 6th Dec 2019 14:20

Don wherez Roze?? I'm worried too.

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Do.RoThy

Fri 6th Dec 2019 14:19

How intense!!! Romantically beautiful... ?

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Do.RoThy

Fri 6th Dec 2019 14:18

Oh yea Don!! How clever?? ?

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 12:12

It takes a lot of courage Alexandra to open your inner self on the open stage to strangers. As said I have written openly about my bipolarity for a while now. I know the problem. What will others think of me? I was told by family it's personal Don, keep it to yourself. I think opposite. How can anyone understand bipolars if no-one talks about it? You can't. To me it's now education. As well as cathartic.

Don

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 12:04

You've posed a deepish question Joe
Is God a he or her
Or her or he (vice versa)
Does it bark or purr?

I've heard no woofs from up above
Can any purrs you hear?
Not getting any sound effects
(Maybe you got blocked ear)

No sign from above Joe. Maybe a him/her hybrid?

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 11:49

Christmas Downunder

Our friends all send us Chrissy cards
Bedecked with snow and holly
And riding on his snowy sleigh
You guessed it, Santa jolly

Forget it's 40 degrees and everyone's sweltering
We all dance round, be jolly (make out)

We open Chrissy presents
In paper tree'd and snowy
You guessed it Santa stars again
All centre-put and showy

Forget it's 40 degrees and everyone's sweltering
We all dance round, be jolly (make out)

We sits ourselves down for our din
Roast turkey, chicken, duck
It's bloody hot, still 40 deg
All I can say is f......

Forget it's 40 degrees and everyone's sweltering
We all dance round, be jolly (make out)

I'm sure card/paper sellers
Must know some Chinese guy
With piles of cast-off Chrissy stuff
Us suckers always buy

Looksee Aussie Aussie Plenty Santa. Going cheap......

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Fri 6th Dec 2019 10:34

Very true, Don. It can take a lot out of a writer to be open about themselves being the subject of a personal and/or delicate poem - well, that has been the case for me anyway. But it is definitely rewarding.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 6th Dec 2019 09:20

Welcome to WOL Joe! Thanks for reading my poem. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 6th Dec 2019 09:18

Or maybe men are just more likely to stand under trees or hold metal objects at the time. Be careful out there Joe! ?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 6th Dec 2019 09:11

Thanks Don, sounds like a Christmas book is a callin' you to be written! I always wonder what it's like having Christmas in hot weather like you do.

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 07:37

Clever Do.....

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 07:33

So good Ruth....

Here's my little Christmassy tap tap contribution

That tap you heard on window Ruth
Was really our friend Santa
You didn't hear red Rudolph
Doing little canter?

Of course you didn't Ruthy
He won't come tap tap tap
Until the eve of 25th
Till then there's quite a gap

He's gotta oil n grease the sleigh. Rudolph needs a nose refresh (fades to pale pink in 12 months). Elves gotta be rounded up and brought back from hollies in Bali (and an acceptable paying contract sorted. One year they went on strike over pay. Can you believe that Ruth?). He's then gotta send the team out to all the charity shops and collect gifts for the kiddies. I hope he don't leave you a secondhand trike in error.

As writer of this 'drivel' I get as much pleasure as you the reader. Maybe I could publish my own book 'Drivel According to Poet Don'

Followed up with 'More Drivel.....' 'A Whole Lot More.....

Who's this driveler Don Eth?......

Dunno pet. Some oddball from Orstralia.....

Isn't it Ostrailya Eth?.....

Not according to my cyclopedia pet.....

I told you Google is the latest update Eth.....

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 07:06

I am an offbeat poet
I writes so diffrently
I buggers up me grammar
Where are you Rosalie?

And Do says hehehe....

Thalia's giggling.....

Lucy, our LMS Head of Publicity, downs another double whiskey.....

Sheesh Rose I need some stabilization therapy....My women are getting out of control...where are you?

Go check your WOLer inbox girl
What's that? It's broken down?
You haven't told the WOLer techs?
No Rose, my mind's quite soun

Thale? She thinks I've gone off the rails.....

What's this all about Eth?....

Dunno pet......

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Don Matthews

Fri 6th Dec 2019 03:07

Hello? Ruthy's back on board
Spiders are her thing
Arachno...? What's she on about?
Ring a ding a ding

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