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Bindu Trigunayak

Tue 18th Dec 2018 04:49

Thankyou dear Big Sal. thanks for your appreciation?

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Tue 18th Dec 2018 04:06

I felt like I met him too. Could almost smell the nicotine on his fingers.

Loved it Rick, well done.

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Don Matthews

Tue 18th Dec 2018 02:44

Very good dk. Leads one from a negative to a positive..?

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Don Matthews

Tue 18th Dec 2018 02:41

Well done David ?

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Big Sal

Tue 18th Dec 2018 00:43

The darkest of seasons and the gloomiest of days. The title is great and the substance does not disappoint.?

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Big Sal

Tue 18th Dec 2018 00:38

I always find it ironic during the Christmas season when I see insurance companies and companies try and sell us the idea of a 'charitable capitalism', something from an Edward Bernays wet dream.

You see them sponsor the homeless, the beaten, the children, and then as soon as the holiday disperses so too does their funding and spotlight.

If it does not benefit a company to market it, they refuse to do it. Then you have the foolhardy, capitalist missionaries that like to remind you, "Well there's nothing wrong with that." and "That's the way of business."

Funny thing is, people have already learned how to do business without destroying the planet in the process and all the people living on it, but it is much more profitable to do it the dirty way. But oh there's nothing wrong with that!!! They paid their taxes. The homeless and immigrants had it coming.

Jesus, it IS easy to play the blame game when someone is sitting on a pile of cash pulling even a single string to their own quartet. That is why I enjoy your poetry, Eve, as it is more thought provoking than the vast majority that comes on here, and definitely more conversation worthy. It's just those that don't agree like to pick their poison, but they won't be the ones testing to see how bitter that pill is.?

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Big Sal

Tue 18th Dec 2018 00:28

The omnipresence is choking.

Well done, David.??

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Big Sal

Tue 18th Dec 2018 00:26

"throwing rocks at the sun" - superb.

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John Coopey

Tue 18th Dec 2018 00:02

Thanks, Po.
MC and myself disagree fundamentally over this issue but we remain respectful.

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AM Cash

Mon 17th Dec 2018 23:40

MC thank you for noting the squirrels

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AM Cash

Mon 17th Dec 2018 23:38

Hi MC thanks

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Dec 2018 23:06

For being so concise it had the feeling of a making of a rhythm.?

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Dec 2018 23:05

Great piece from start to finish.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 17th Dec 2018 19:20

Love and best wishes.

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Mon 17th Dec 2018 18:49

outstanding write..wish I knew all of the back stories to this..beautiful

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d.knape

Mon 17th Dec 2018 18:20

Texas! we still use horses and saddle bags!

wink.

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Mon 17th Dec 2018 18:15

Well done Hugh!!! Something to think about when passing a homeless soul on street. Lend a helping hand, not just this holiday season but always, because homelessness shows no mercy...it can strike anyone at anytime!?

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d.knape

Mon 17th Dec 2018 18:13

thanks Martin the Elder for your comments on "Mail".
That's about it. ?

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John Coopey

Mon 17th Dec 2018 18:07

I concur with everything that has been said, MC. How it is not POTW I'll never know.
Just a thought - fancy setting it to music?

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eve nortley

Mon 17th Dec 2018 17:43

Hi Brian, from what I have seen seeking asylum is a lottery, it often depends where your lorry stops,boat docks or your plane touches down first. I do know, however, that we used to be a country made great by our mongrel genes who were known for fair and humane treatment of those seeking asylum (often from wars and situations our Govts policies had a hand in creating). I know there is no magic wand we can wave to sort this situation fast but I do feel we can all reflect on the fact that if the Global North keeps pursuing financial activities that damage the climate and economies of the Global South this movement of people will continue and we may end up making half of our beautiful earth uninhabitable in the bargain. Thanks as always for reading what lots of others will find "indigestible".

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Brian Blanchard

Mon 17th Dec 2018 17:41

Lovely Mark. Having never been there, I can still picture it as I believe many have taken a similar stroll down their own lane, and hopefully reached as comforting a resolution! A nice message at this time of year.

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Martin Elder

Mon 17th Dec 2018 16:38

Brilliant Randy . Is this one you have read recently

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John Coopey

Mon 17th Dec 2018 16:09

MC- What we have now is a consequence of what we voted for. And Alan is quite right - there never was a plan on “Leave”. Self-publicists like Johnson, Rees-Mogg, Davies, even Gove have played you like a fiddle and all to position themselves for their own gain. I too would be angry if I were in your shoes. As it is, I have the luxury of being sanctimonious.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Dec 2018 15:45

The comments about being in hock to the USA leave me smiling -
with family over there following WW2 and who are only too ready
to support an England that has the nerve and commitment that
served us in braver times than now.
The EU loves to call itself "Europe". I suggest you check when
they last displayed any interest in the PEOPLES of the countries of Europe and their hopes and wishes, And have a look at the words
of a founding father of the "project" who set out how it would work
without the "peoples" being aware of what was intended. If that is
your idea of something worth being part of, then count me out and
point me towards the rest of the world while the "project" led by its
Franco-German aliiance seeks to keep its floundering ship - the SS Deceit - afloat.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 17th Dec 2018 15:16

Thanks you guys and thanks for making this night of poetry one to remember!

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 17th Dec 2018 15:14

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Mon 17th Dec 2018 14:54

Hi Eve - I live in a safe, free country and always feel sympathy for those that don't and seek safety elsewhere. Obviously I don't know anything about the man in question other than what you have said in your piece, but I would ask how many safe, free, Christian countries he crossed to get to the UK. I'm not being flippant...just questioning whether he wants safety or whether he wants the UK?

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Alan Travis Braddock

Mon 17th Dec 2018 14:15

Well said John. Trouble was that the people who wanted us out of Europe a) didn't think about the consequences and b) didn't want the job of deciding what to do next and slunk off to their sheds.
Now what we have is an almighty cock-up which will leave us in hock to the USA if we don't look out. How many years do you give it before the NHS is stolen from us, like the Post Office etc.etc.?

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Alan Travis Braddock

Mon 17th Dec 2018 14:00

Oh I like this one. A poem for all of us old has-beens, better than a never-was perhaps, but still sad. Not long now, the even older train will call for us, and this one will stop.
Cheers, Alan

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Dec 2018 13:35

A mantra well worth repeating.?

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Dec 2018 13:34

Excellent analogy, Randy.?

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Dec 2018 12:58

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Alan Travis Braddock

Mon 17th Dec 2018 12:51

Thank You people. I wrote this some time ago but nothing happened then - either.
The interesting thing is that nobody ever suggests that filling the oceans with plastic and using up the resources of the planet is a GOOD THING - they just go ahead letting it happen.
You can't blame the poor sods on the bread line, all they want is a decent living. The problem is the bastards who want the whole world for themselves and are quite happy to steal it and will kill anybody who gets in their way.

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raypool

Mon 17th Dec 2018 10:45

Ghazala, so pleased you looked back on this - mostly triggered by the armistice day. Thank you.

Ray

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raypool

Mon 17th Dec 2018 10:41

Ghazala, thanks for looking back to this - it is quite a sight to see a field of lavender, spectacular! All the best to you.

Ray

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 17th Dec 2018 10:38

Martin, Ray, David and Big Sal, thank you very much for your comments. Always much appreciated.

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Bindu Trigunayak

Mon 17th Dec 2018 10:27

Dear Brian, that is what i was trying to say..may be I was not able to interpret it fully..Money has controlled us in every means..yeah for sure it gives security..but we are scanty of it,we cant even enjoy the happy moments of life to the fullest..today the value of money is like anything..if we want to lead a happy life with every resources without compromising anything with our comfort..we have to have plenty of money in hand...

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 17th Dec 2018 09:47

Shades of Lionel Shriver...

...we need to talk about Don.

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John Coopey

Mon 17th Dec 2018 08:41

The government can’t be held to blame for 17m people telling them to build a submarine made of cheese. They can be held to blame for trying to build one rather than telling the people not to be so stupid.

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Poetikaly Anointed

Mon 17th Dec 2018 02:56

This is so true and wickedly written:

unless we have the things and the gadgets

we need for the things that need cleaning

With the other gadgets.

lol

We want...We NEED...We want some more...so we can need ever more...For a culture so bloated on consumption, we sure are underfed on morals and values.

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Poetikaly Anointed

Mon 17th Dec 2018 02:49

Dang...deep write. You had me going from the start...I was thinking somebody was dying of cancer or something. Never thought of that...

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Poetikaly Anointed

Mon 17th Dec 2018 02:46

This is so real and I relate on levels that I wish didn't even exist.

Beautiful, thought provoking and well-penned.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Dec 2018 00:23

The comments are appreciated - thank you. The Devon lane is a
real place from my past - in the South Hams between Dartmouth and Salcombe.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Dec 2018 00:18

Ask why the European Communities Act wasn't immediately repealed by Parliament when the result of the referendum was known, with the initiative with the government to put forward
proposals from the "people's power" point of view. Then ask if
the problem is actually Brexit OR those in Parliament who have led
us down the EU garden path and still want us there.
Remainers loath leaving
The EU - like grieving
For a mummy that guides them
But always over-rides them.
Brexit didn't suit
So they don't give a hoot
They're kids needing nannies
To wipe their little fannies
As long as they do
What the nannies tell them to..
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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 23:00

beautiful poem Jon. Thanks for posting

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:58

I assume that this is your song. I love the style of music and the video. I am a big fan of interpretive dance.
Love it Robert

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:53

I think that probably summed up the evening Nigel , but none the less a good night

Nice one mate

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:51

Ah terry nappies I remember them well soaking in buckets prior to going through the washing machine. what fun!. though a whole lot better than disposables

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John Marks

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:47

beauty can be found at any time

If you can stay clear headed

enough to find it

Which we can't....and avoid all the diversions and cul de sacs....which we also can't.

This interior monologue moves smoothly to dump us back at the beginning of a thought process.

Excellent poem

John

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Dec 2018 22:42

very very nice even with just these few words, but In would love to hear it put to music.

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