OMG that is hysterical! Love the broadcast. I got a good belly laugh out of your boob botheration.

Comment is about MAN BOOBS (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Well done MC. Greed and the dollar are behind most problems. Couple that with everyone wanting everyone else to think as they do. No wonder we're in a mess ?

Comment is about IN THIS WORLD (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

I liked this Mac ?

Comment is about Trump Era Cinquain (blog)

Original item by Mac

For anyone that does not know, President Harry Truman was both known to write and say the 'N' word during letters, public addresses, and other occasions he had a chance to. The same man who ordered the ultimate weapon of destruction to be used on Japan, was also a known racist. Except people back then I'm sure just wrote it off as 'one of those things'.

America has always been beset by racist presidents, and today is no different. The only difference today is that the big mouth is too stupid to keep anything to himself or his unsecured phone. If Trump ever were to drop a bomb, the other country would beat him to it because Twitter would already have been blown up with rants warning of 'fire and fury'.

Loving something that never will love you back is definitely only for the saints and angels among us. Where are you my America???

(Great poem by the way Mac! Sorry, had my own little rant there)?

Comment is about Trump Era Cinquain (blog)

Original item by Mac

That is just great how some of your stuff is posted with or put to music.

Excellent word choice too.

Comment is about Turbulence (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

I like this Ray ?

Comment is about PLAYING THE SAXOPHONE (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Great title, and reading it is like a riding out a storm on a ship: hopeful with a hint of gloom overshadowing the reader's shoulder. Like being on a crow's nest and having to signal the incoming storm but no one can hear you. . .

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Comment is about SLEEPLESS IN TACOMA (blog)

Original item by lynn hahn

Really, Martin, I can't imagine you as anything less than a gentleman--I have to think that your style of writing and commenting is a true reflection of who you are as a person. Thanks for your kind support.

Rachel

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

Original item by Martin Elder

I'll be sure to let you know as soon as I am done.

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Comment is about SERIES OF LIFE (blog)

Original item by lynn hahn

It's always good to hear from you, Martin. My WoL habits are a little sporadic, but you are always encouraging.

Rereading this always makes the wanderlust come back to life--I am in love with airplanes and flying.

Take care, Martin.

Rachel

Comment is about disconnect (regenesis in infrared) (blog)

Original item by nunya

Thanks, Martin and Mac.

There are special associations hidden in this one--I'm happy that it touched you.

Rachel

Comment is about hiding places (discernment) (blog)

Original item by nunya

what is with the mad face?

Comment is about Goodnight Firefly Never Forget That You're The Reason I'm Still Alive (blog)

Original item by Mikey V Kinsey

Thanks to all three of you for the positive comments. I'm pleased to be able to call up some similar memories for others. It seems that these sort of poems that evoke time or place are quite popular.

On the subject of submitting to magazines and the fear of rejection it's as well to remember that we are all rejected about 90% of the time so not worth worrying about. As each magazine aspires to have its own identity and voice you just have to try to balance your creative inspiration according what you judge they want to hear.

Comment is about BENT OVER GEOGRAPHY (blog)

Original item by john short

Beautiful Hugh! Brimming with positive energy!?

Comment is about Demonization,beware ! (blog)

Original item by hugh

Atmospheric enjoyed this. Thank you?

Comment is about Turbulence (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Nice Fred...?

Comment is about Those of Maturity (blog)

Original item by Rick Varden

Hugh I don't believe in God...do you have a Plan B please?

Comment is about Demonization,beware ! (blog)

Original item by hugh

Why help yourself Big Sal. I am sure you can do it great justice. Please let me know if you are so inspired. I want to hear that tune. ?

Comment is about SERIES OF LIFE (blog)

Original item by lynn hahn

I was listening to Chet Baker Almost Blue and this came to me during the first few minutes of the song...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4PKzz81m5c&list=PL6MP3z8uuNRIAHXx9jaXmhX7RVm1BYBW-&index=5

Comment is about When I’m remembering you (blog)

Original item by 220August

Thank you Taylor for noticing such things. John

Comment is about Incident in late November (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Thanks Ray, glad you liked it ?

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

Original item by ray pool

So true Hugh...x

Comment is about Demonization,beware ! (blog)

Original item by hugh

Thank you for all your warm welcomes and comments. So nice to be part of this great community!

Comment is about Mac (poet profile)

Original item by Mac

Thanks for the 'likes' and comments 'WOLers' - I appreciate them - apologies I've been slow in responding - I've been away on holiday. You may be interested to know that this poem is lined up to be set to music this week - I'll post more if it's worth hearing :-)
Ian

Comment is about Under August Skies (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

thanks so much for your kind comments on 'Under August Skies' Ray - apologies for the late response as I have been away on holiday - I'm really pleased you liked it
Ian

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

Original item by ray pool

thanks so much for your kind comments on 'Under August Skies' Mark - apologies for the late response as I have been away on holiday - I'm really pleased you liked it
Ian

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

thanks so much for your kind comments on 'Under August Skies' Taylor - apologies for the late response as I have been away on holiday - I'm really pleased you liked it
Ian

Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)

Original item by Taylor Crowshaw

thanks so much for your kind comments on 'Under August Skies' Keith - apologies for the late response as I have been away on holiday - I'm really pleased you liked it
Ian

Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)

Original item by keith jeffries

thanks so much for your kind comments on 'Under August Skies' Douglas - apologies for the late response as I have been away on holiday - I'm really pleased you liked it
Ian

Comment is about Douglas MacGowan (poet profile)

Original item by Douglas MacGowan

Reminds me of a Grimm's Fairy Tale..excellent thank you..?

Comment is about Incident in late November (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

I loved your piano poem from a while back, and this a treat too. The matter of factness of it is a real strength, and an additional poke at mindless authority. There is a sort of wry common sense to it. Nice, Joe.

Ray

Comment is about Aggie's Legacy (blog)

Original item by Joe Williams

What a brilliant and accurate way of expressing such greed and corruption which thrives in today's society. Interesting poem thank you M.C.?

Comment is about IN THIS WORLD (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

I love the simple honesty and drawn image Ian, it promotes deep thought and draws out much to be examined. The best poetry does this - allows room to breathe, and gently reminds us of the sort of special dedication this lady embodies. Judgments may follow, but we must respect the writing, whatever.


Ray

Comment is about Sister Magdalena (blog)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

Even a genuine case of a "sicky" had its compensations.
These lines bring back the memory of mother bringing me
meals in bed. Such a long time ago now, but suddenly
I can see the images from a fondly recalled 1950s Wiltshire home in my mind's eye.
Thanks for this chance to make the return trip!

Comment is about BENT OVER GEOGRAPHY (blog)

Original item by john short

@BigSal Thank you ! It really shocked and inspired me to witness that small bird dying :/

Comment is about Deadly Birdy (blog)

Original item by Daniel Kohnen

yes. yes it is

Comment is about Goodnight Firefly Never Forget That You're The Reason I'm Still Alive (blog)

Original item by Mikey V Kinsey

Thank you so much, Rose. Much appreciated

Comment is about I am the one ... (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Brian, they obviously had it in for you as the rules are adamant that only squashed tomatoes may be thrown to avoid whole tomato damage. I can only say hard luck mate. Perhaps you said the wrong Spanish to them? You need to brush up on that video I reckon ?

Comment is about Brian Jets Off To Tomatina (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Thank you, Big Sal.

Comment is about A lazy Sunday (blog)

Original item by Jon Stainsby

Chris this poem is beautifully worded..the imagery is superb. Thank you.?

Comment is about Early Autumn Lake (blog)

Original item by Chris Armstrong

I won't go again Don. The tomatoes they threw at me were in tins!

Comment is about Brian Jets Off To Tomatina (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

That's lovely - very touching. Perfect measured words

Comment is about JUST BEFORE SLEEP (blog)

Original item by Peter Taylor

If only..very enjoyable..?

Comment is about Eat Off The Floor (blog)

Original item by d.knape

Sundays are Heaven to a kid in school that hated their surroundings. Sundays are the kings of the days, and Sundays give them a reason to enjoy life one more day before the shit cycle starts over again.

Great poem Jon.?

Comment is about A lazy Sunday (blog)

Original item by Jon Stainsby

Top line of the last stanza would make a great song. . .I may borrow the line for a song title.?

Loved this piece, each stanza was like a self-contained poem in itself. Great job Lynn.?

Comment is about SERIES OF LIFE (blog)

Original item by lynn hahn

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mLm_8QH6s08

"Know Thy Self" by KRS-One aka, 'The Teacha'.


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Another great poem you have here Suban.?

Comment is about PRECIOUS PARENTS (blog)

Original item by Suban Limboo

Last line is so true.?

Comment is about You are not a writer... yet. (blog)

Original item by Mark Mr T Thompson

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_zk1XLQS3Zo

"Woman Tonight" by Felt.

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Brutally honest, funny to read, and true poetry in its form and our presence.?

Comment is about Would you pole dance for a friend? (blog)

Original item by Becky Who

I've been guilty of the 2nd stanza more times than I care to admit. However, every day is a new day to try a new leaf on the Tree of Life eh?

Lovely poem Taylor.❤

Comment is about A Kindness (blog)

Original item by Taylor Crowshaw

I can relate so much to this.

Thank you, Jon

Comment is about A Kindness (blog)

Original item by Taylor Crowshaw