I'm glad you dropped in David - you really are a like a dose of salts (in a good way). As ever, you have gone the extra mile; yes, there is that shall we say slightly predatory need at play here. I had a neighbour who was a carer, and her mind was like a gutter, full of venom and I had a shout up with her and told to fuck off and get an education. So that's all good. Life is rarely as we would like it to be.

Ray

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Fine and uplifting ; I like the idea that it's presented like one of those simple guide books and catches the flavour of small venturings Helen.

Ray

Comment is about How To Catch A Fish In The Solent (blog)

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I am a great fan of the moon. It's different shapes and powerful light is wonderful. I like the part in the poem about how it pours it's light equally on everyone.
Captivating.

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Dripping with irony and observation Suki. Like a sculpture ,
so much detail to ponder on and absolutely sublime.

I've missed you too - the stakes are rising.

Ray

Comment is about The Noise You Make (blog)

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I enjoyed reading this so much.

Comment is about The Swan Effect (blog)

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Hi Nigel
Thank you for the like on my blog
Andy C

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Thanks you kind Col. Funnily enough I was going to read this as Alan Bennett! Glad you liked it old chap. Yes, the rain came along later for us after soaking up more of the sea.
Hope life is good and interesting for you .

Also thanks for liking, Rich and Ferris much appreciated.

Ray

Comment is about MRS DROGUE (blog)

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I'm a stubborn Taurus but I love the moon and this poem.

Comment is about The Moon is a Thing (blog)

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so beautiful...

Comment is about The Swan Effect (blog)

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The imagery in this poem is excellent.

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Congratulations Hanna, a fine poem. A great POTW.

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This is lovely, really enjoyed it.?

Comment is about A Life in Colour (blog)

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Beautifully expressed...trees left undone....great line...great poem.

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Thank you Raj your comments are always appreciated.

Comment is about Something Real (blog)

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This is indeed a lovely sunny poem Helen in more ways than one. It bounces along at it's own pace and I love the last line. I also rather like Belgian buns !
I shall look forward to reading more in future
Cheers
Martin

Comment is about How To Catch A Fish In The Solent (blog)

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This is great. Some great truths here.
I especially like the piece about the children's grey uniforms, have often thought that.

Hannah

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I like this Helen. It made me smile.

Comment is about How To Catch A Fish In The Solent (blog)

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Ah, THAT Airedale, Colin. Airedale near Cas is an altogether different kettle o' fish. They eat their young there.

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One more Libran here. Now that should definitely tip the balance Cynthia. How about a "Moon Walk" just to whip our wanderlust.

Nice one.
Raj

Comment is about The Moon is a Thing (blog)

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Sorry we missed it. Sounds better than ever.

Dave

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Very enjoyable afternoon Greg and the perfect captive audience. WoL acquitted itself very well in the company of
those avid historians.Really had a good couple of days and in fact followed the 'milestone way' from Long Compton to Stratford clocking all six mileposts on Sunday. A genuine I Spy experience.

Dave

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Librans are all coming out the woodwork here CBT. I'm 66 on the 16th.
Beetling around our globe.........love it!

Comment is about The Moon is a Thing (blog)

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Hi Cynthia
Great poem,especially enjoying the last stanza, referencing the moon as 'a hunk of junk,hurtling around earth,tethered by our gravity,like walking the dog'.
Made me think ; and laugh.
(Libra also here)

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Delightful! In concept and execution! So easy and relaxed.

Comment is about How To Catch A Fish In The Solent (blog)

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Hi Cynthia and Col, thanks to both of you for reading and commenting ?

Cynthia, I don't mind suggestions at all - encourages me to really think about why I wrote what I did. I'm still thinking about the 'naked' and know I feel attached to it, but not sure why - so I'll keep thinking.

Col, I'll definitely have a look at Roger McGough.

Thanks again

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thanks guys. i like this one. great day (:

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To be born under 'Libra' and then called 'Cynthia' was really tempting 'Moon Influence'. I am a reasonably thinking person, and therefore, I mock nothing.

Should I call this 'Walking the Dog'?

Comment is about The Moon is a Thing (blog)

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Jon, Your poems are rich in nostagia and carefully and thoughtfully crafted. They immediately take me back years to a world long since forgotten. Thank you indeed. Keith

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Would that be Airedale, Cas, Colin? They have their own horrors there.

Comment is about VAMPIRES (blog)

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Jon, your poems and especially this one bring back to life the past with such clarity. I was almost there. Thank you for this. Keith

Comment is about The Day Of Her Leaving (blog)

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The title hooked me! And it's a lovely poem, too. Full of joy.

Comment is about How To Catch A Fish In The Solent (blog)

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And those who hold power in places like Iran continue to
insult the term "humanity" - abnegating their duty
to use that power for the best of all purposes...the benefit
of all of their people.

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Thanks Colin. There are times when I wonder why I bother
watching, let alone listening to some of its self-important
twaddle.

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Martin, this is a great poem. Really enjoyed your trip down memory lane.

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Lovely stuff. Beautifully descriptive with rich imagery. Enjoyed it a lot.

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excellent poem Lan which for me has echoes of Roger McGough which is all good and ticks my boxes.

I'm sure Cynthia won't mind me disagreeing with her but I rather like the 'naked' in the last line - when read slowly, the repeated n's and a's have a somewhat melodic and soporific feel as if the reader is being drawn down into that very same 'nape'. If that makes sense?

thanks for posting and with respect to both you and Cynthia.
Col.

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such a caring soul Ray - you'll be getting your very own Mary Shepherd living in a van in your driveway next. Lovely poem and reading as always - and yes, this mizzle has now turned into a proper pizzle if you get the flow.
cheers, Col.

Comment is about MRS DROGUE (blog)

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Short and sweet and you've said it all Wardah.
"Letting go" is therapeutic. It is a cleansing process.
Nice one.
Raj

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Thank you very much for the comments Keith, Raj and Nicola xxo

With the white thread of dawn comes beautiful sunlight ?

Comment is about Praying for an end to the Night (blog)

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A road unchanged in fifty years... poetry itself

Comment is about southdown road (blog)

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Thanks, MC. I do indeed remember "P-pick up a Penguin".
The truth of the matter, however, is that this time they rejected me. I'd had a cold so they wouldn't take a donation. This meant Our Gert is only one donation behind me now.

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THANKS!!

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well I did wonder Martin and I did also look on Google maps but there were quite a number of Southdown Roads. The name is particularly synonymous with Sussex especially the buses of course. But Portslade / Mile Oak were always just outside of my territory which seemed to end at Kingston Lane where I went to school at KM. And yes, it's all still very recognisable but a lot more congested and crowded. I like the poem even more now! Cheers, Col.

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Good luck, great to see you ideas and new verses AMC

Comment is about Justine Chapman (poet profile)

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If you're a donor, you deserve the best aftercare - nothing
less than Earl Grey and TWO penguins as a "pick...pick...
pick up (a Penguin)". Remember?
The sustained imagery here is of the writer's usual high
standard.

Comment is about VAMPIRES (blog)

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Hi Randy
Thank you for the comment on my poem and great to see you this week.
Andy

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Hi Jon, hope you're good mate, thanx for comment on 'In God we Trust' really enjoyed reading your caravan poem, some great images here I think we can all identify with at some stage, and a poignant personal thought at the end nice one, cheers Jeff

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Thank you so much to everyone who has commented on my poem The Traveller.
It is an enormous thrill to see my poem as Poem Of The Week.
Thank you everyone for all the encouragement, the comments are wonderful.
Thank you David for choosing my poem.

Comment is about 'The Traveller' by Hannah Collins is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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Awesome

Comment is about These questions my heart needs to know (blog)

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Very moving and honest. All the things we would like to say.
Keep posting.

Hannah

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